FF(MJHT)With U 4Ever-Updt 5 pg-32 Hide n Seek - Page 4

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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

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Originally posted by: brindamarfatia

hey is it mayur reincarnation ff then only pm me ok...:)

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

Concept is rili intersting...u write gud yar dun underestimate urself......plz continue nd pm me when updated..............

Originally posted by: --Pari--

re................will edit on friday night sim!!! muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet

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And if you don't continue then i will also keep you at gun point.😆

Plz plz plz update the 1st part sooooooooooooooooon

and add me to ur pm list!!!!

Mira

Ok guys me finally giving you first update !!!!! Pls guys bear with the as the update is loonnnnnnngg one !!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

With you Forever ............

( By Gunjan )

The night outside was still , cool and pleasant but it still terrified me . Night was that part of time which I didn't want to face at all . I laid across my bed scared of closing my eyes , scared that if I closed my eyes those nightmares would return to me .

" Stop it Gunjan ! Just stop it ! " .

I told myself . " They are just dreams and nothing else . Tu jitna inke bare main sochegi utna hi ghabraegi . isliye sochna band kar aur so ja ! "

I walked away from my bed towards my cupboard in order to find my old headphones and player . I plugged it on and adjusted the headphones ( thankfully it was my favourite instrumental CD playing ) . As the thought struck me , I smiled to myself and rolled my eyes and said aloud ,

" Obvious hai idiot !!!! Tu hamesha yeh hi CD sunti hai aur tere ilawa kaun hai jo tere player mein CD change karega ??? Tu bhi na Gunjan !!!!! "

I now laid across my bed with the sweet music of Guitar , Flute and various other musical instruments . Its always had been strange for me , out of any known musical instruments , I could easily pick out the tunes of a Guitar or of a Flute but for others I may not be even knowing their names . Strange but true , as my only connection to music was my instrumental CD and apart from it I didn't even knew the " A-B-C " of music still I could pick out any tune of Guitar & Flute ( Thanks to my strange senses ) .

The wind blew softly but it made me shiver , not because of cold but because of fear . I curled up into a ball on my bed , turned up the volume so that I can drown the sound of wind and closed my eyes tightly . The melody overpowered any other emotion now but still I could feel that this was not ' my melody ' . There was something incomplete to this instrumental ( though both guitar & flute tunes in the current instrumental were marvelous , may be I had problems with my brain cells & that was for sure ) .

I was all in melody but suddenly the picture changed in my dreams . I was always scared to face this dream but it did follow me every night . The picture was not clear but I can swear on just ' anything ' that it was horrific and above all it was painful , very painful .

I found myself in the same horrified state in which I had always seen myself in that dream and then I found ' them ' . They all were there where they always had been . I saw myself sitting in the corner of an old rickety room horrifically listening to the growls of the killers & their increasing steps towards ' us ' . Yes , its always had been ' us ' rather than just ' me ' in the dream . I saw myself terrified & crying bitterly , sitting in the corner while listening to the killers and then there were ' they ' beside me . I am never able to see ' their ' faces yet I knew ' that ' they were people who cared for me , people whom I loved , who were an important part of my existence .

Two boys came near me & one of them hugged tightly me tightly as if he was the " Heartbeat of my heart " , he was my " Angel " . Till date I have never heard their voices & what they were saying but I could figure it out from their gestures that the other boy was pleading us to leave from the scene but we both couldn't let him be there and leave .

Then a stone came crashing through the window pane just above me , splattering the glass on the floor & all three of us & then I could hear my shriek of horror anda terrified scream of another girl besides me . She stood away in the farthest corner of the room ( though I could never see her face but I was sure she was as horrified as I was ) . Her scream told that she was not scared for herself alone but for all three of us . It seemed that all four of us didn't have much time together.

Just then I saw the killers with their guns and big knives in their hands approaching our rickety room through the front window of the room . They didn't enter the room but they openly started firing towards the room where all four of us were hiding . I snuggled closer to ' My Angel ' and hid my face in his chest so that I could drown the voice of the bullets in his sped up and tensed heartbeats . Even at that moment I could hear nothing else but just my inner conscience shouting at me to hold ' My Angel ' tighter to myself , to save him but my weak hands & senses didn't knew how to do it . . . .

Just then a bullet was fired & I saw the other boy sitting besides us rushing towards the girl standing in the other corner of the room as if he wanted to save her . But then through my tear filled eyes I realized the entire scene and along with me ' My Angel ' also realized what has just happened before our eyes .

The boy who has rushed from besides us was hit by the bullet in his chest . It was then that we both realised ,that he was trying to save her . The bullet that was meant to hit her couldn't reach her as he had came between her & death . I could hear her painful cry & could feel her pain too . It felt like her pain tore through my chest but why ???? He was there writhing in pain in front of her . It seemed like he was her core of her existence just the way my angle was my core of existence.The bullet though had hit the other boy but I know that my angel could feel his pain too .

The girl just couldn't control herself on seeing him bleeding right there in front of her . She ran to reach towards him but then there were another two bullet fires , one aimed at her heart and other at her waist ( I never knew that how in that blurry scene I came to know where bullets had hit her ) that stopped her midway and through all the other sharp noises I could hear her gasp .

The boy saw the bullets hitting her & though he himself was injured , it took him a second to forget about his pain and catch her before she hit the ground . At that time I could tell that we ( me & my angel ) both were screaming her name ( though I couldn't recall her name now ) . Our control gave up & we rushed towards both of them .

Both theirs breathing were heavy & laboured . Though I couldn't see the boy clearly I could tell the pain & fear that were on his features was of losing her . Through blurry images I could see him persuading us to leave the dreadful place . He was still holding her tightly to his chest & I could hear her laboured but nearly last breaths and it seemed like my chest would explode from the pain of her approaching death . He wanted us to leave , he wanted us to live and not die here like both of them .

Then I saw her , she was panting & she held the hand of ' My Angel ' . ' My Angel ' had tears in his eyes , he held back her hand and kissed it as if he didn't want to leave her there dying . Then is seemed that she pleaded us to leave , to save ourselves as if this was her last and only wish left . Then her eyes began close though she tried hard fighting through it .

She managed to meet the eyes of the boy who was still holding her cradled along his chest and then her eyes became as dead as stone . It seemed to me like she wanted to carry the memory of his face with her through her last breath . I didn't understand what he understood and what he saw in her dead eyes . He closed her eyes and hugged her tightly . Even through the loudest noises of firing I could hear his silent sobs . Then it seemed like he made his last promise to her , he said that he would take us ( me & My Angel ) out of that place safely , not let us die like she had though he himself had few breaths left to him . The gunshots rose suddenly & I hugged ' My Angel ' who was still holding the dead girls hand and was crying for her . . . .

I saw the other boy loosening his hold on her . He wiped away her hair and sweat from her face & then kissed her forehead and her hand . His pain was too much for me to handle . At that moment it seemed like both their hearts were tied by her single last heart beat . He laid her carefully on the floor & though at that time he himself struggled for the breaths , I don't know how but he managed to push us out from the scene . ' My Angel ' was not ready to leave , he wanted to save him atleast but the other boy seemed to be determined to move us out of that room safely . I didn't understood which power had her closing eyes given him but whatever it was , it was quite powerful . We couldn't fight him back & started moving out of the room with the pain of seeing her dead and leaving him there to die .

We were almost at the back door of the rickety room ,when we heard two more gunshots and saw that both the bullets had hit him . The boy who has acted as our saviour just a moment ago was now on his knees falling towards the ground . We rushed to save him but he pleaded with his closing eyes for us to leave , to run from there . The power that radiated from his was gone and his eyes only contained his pain & death . We saw the prayer in his eyes and then his eyes closed for forever in front of us . The site of his death froze us to our places . But we had to move , because consciencously or sub – consciencously we had somehow promised them both that we both will live ………

We ran from the place . the scene changed. I knew I was at a different place now. I saw myself running in a forest scared & horrified searching for ' My Angel ' . We had parted and this was beyond all the pain . Considering the pain & death that I have witnessed few moments ago , it was like I would combust even with the slightest jab of another new pain & I couldn't handle losing ' My Angel ' now . I ran here and there shouting his name to search him ( Strange as it seems , but I am never able to recall his name after the dream gets over ) . I just ran & ran and then I reached in middle of a round field & then I saw ' My Angel ' there .

He was trying to find me too . He appeared from the opposite side of the field and on seeing him in front of me I forgot everything . I just saw him and felt like my life had come back to me . He too was much more than relieved to see me . We both started moving towards each other but abruptly the picture turned ugly . There were sounds of bullets firing and then in the next second I saw ' My Angel ' bleeding and dieing right there few feet away from me . I saw myself screaming and running towards ' My Angel ' but I never reached him …………………

I woke up then with my same horrified scream of pain and agony . From years this point has been the culmination piont of my dream but today I felt more scared and more frightened then ever before though the dream had barely changed ( but suddenly it felt more horrific to me ) . I was gasping for the air with tears filled in my eyes and fear filled in my heart when I suddenly realised someone was saying my name . I lifted my tearful eyelashes to look up but I knew beforehand only about who was calling my name ………………………

I didn't care for hiding my pain & tears from him because he was the only person in the universe who knew and understood my condition completely , who never shied away from me due to my bizarre behavior unlike all the other people who probably thought I had lost my brains . I hugged him tightly and cried hard on his shoulder knowing that if I broke down in his arms he would help me fight my way out through my pain and tears rather than making statements about my ' Mental Health ' . He hugged me back tightly and safely to his chest calming me down and he has always been successful in that . His mere presence calms down all my anxieties & fears . I knew I was safe with him beside me . He was one person in my life whom I truly loved & trusted blindly :- My Brother MAYANK ……………………

Every day when I felt scared he had led me through the way holding my hand and each night when I woke up screaming he would be there beside me holding me to his chest so that I can let go off all my fears . If he had not been in my life , I swear , today I would have been in any one of those ' Mental Asylums ' . He was the only one who not only listened but also believed in my terrific dream & I could see my pain in his eyes . He has been my best friend , best brother since our mom and dad died . But since last two years , when our Bui too passed away he had been my mentor , my guide & my protector as well . Though we are twins , but in a way he is much older and mature than me . He has always been my big brother rather than my twin and of course the best person my life had till now ……………………………………

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Ok guys this was the first update !!!!! I hope you all will survive my writing piece hehehehehehehehe 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 !!!!!!!

Pls guys I am waiting for your comments !!!!! I will bw updating the FF weekly ( hopefully 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕) . Anyways thanx a lot guys for supporting a first time writer like me and Dolly , Pari And Mallu dear thanx for your huge support & patience !!!! You are my rockstars !!!!!! And mallu I loved the poster and I am waiting for the next one !!!!