Committing A Sin-True Love AR,Mayur-Upd. Pt.2 Pg12 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Nicole... was lovely...
Am loving Mayur... looking forward 2 more.. :)
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wow...gr8 start..!!
as long as mayur are there i'm up for reading more yaar..!
do continue soon...plz add me to the PM list..!
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@sadiqsai....ur welcum...thnx
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@pagli thnx a lot....
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hi Nicole...nice story....update soon!😊
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hey nicole it beautiful
but nowday very difficult to read AR part and that with Mayur
icouple in love married and the other destroyed
but i love reading though it take time but do continue
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bt here no one will get married dat soon...i hope it turns out better den DMG...thnx
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its wonderful i loved the way they met continue soon
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nice one!!! do continue soon!! sorry i couldnt comment on the promo and characters but yeah i will comment frm now on bcoz my exams will get over tmr!! and a great job do continue as soon as possible
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hey plz add me to ur pm list!!!!
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Hiii!! m sry fr da delay xams were goin on nd i hardly had tym to breathe....ok soo here goes part 2
Part 2
Armaan-(in his cabin...)Hiiii Ms.Akdu....toh kya hum apna topic choose kare plzzz....
Ridhima-plzz stp callin me Akdu...wateva....yah(she sits down on her chair)soo topic...hume ek aisi topic likhni chahiye jo life ke har flavour ko chue....y dnt v write a column on...uhhh....
Armaan-lyf hw boringg.....
Riddhima-tumhe kuch interesting lagta bhi hai yaa nahi..?? ya so i was sayin y dont v write a column on Relationship-A Bliss.....
Armaan-wat???r u nuts...hw girly...
Riddhima-watt girly isnt a guy a part of a relationship????hw insane u r...
Armaan-ok fine...wat is it all abt???(disinterested)
Ridhhima-This will b all abt a relationship a guy nd girl can share be it siblings,friends,husband nd wifes,love nethin....
Armaan-How borin...
Riddhima-its nt borin....nt @ all borin....u'll will surely njoy it...i mean u rite abt guyz i'll rite abt girls nd den v can combine our work....it'll b...
Armaan-ohh plz...meri baat suno...c this is sooo sooo u know....
Riddhima-no i dnt...nd Relationship is our topic....y dunt u understand this is a youth oriented magazine...
Armaan-Ok fine bt iska poster main banaaoonga....ok???(demandingly in a loud voice)
Riddhima-chilla kyun rahe ho???
Armaan-oh m soo sry(soo sweetly) Ms.Akdu(wid full xageration)
Riddhima-wateva....
Knock..Knock...
A group of 4-5 ppl enter....
1 guy-hiii....hum log magazine ke editors or photographers hai....
They introduced them selves....
Armaan-Hiii
Riddhima-Hiii....
2nd Guy-uhhh ab lunch tym hai soo i was wonderin if u'll cud join us,...
1 girl-absolutely...it wud b nyc knowin u'll v called the uder uhh nupur nd mayank they agreed soo....
Armaan-yah sure....v vil join u in few minutes....
Riddhima-yeh log kitne sweet hai naa???
Armaan-chalo ek baat par toh hum agree karte hai....
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At the Cafeteria
Simran-Hiii guyzz....tell us sumthin abt u...
Nupur-main hu nupur aur yeh hai riddhima meri pyaari si badi behen...jo bohut chillati hai mujhpe par phir bhi duniya ki sweetest behen hai....
Ridhhima-isne mere baare mein to keh diya aur aap log toh jaan hi gaye honge ki yeh bohut zyaada bolti hai...hehe
Armaan-aise baat kar rahi ho jaise ke tum humesha chup hi rehti ho...
Mayank-chupkar armaan kya bol raha hai itni sweet toh hai...
Armaan-sweet?? aap jaante nahi.....
Mayank-mujhe jaanna bhi nahi...main mayank hu aur main apne baare mein kya bolu...
Armaan-bhaiyya mere baare mein bolenge coz i dont lyk boastin....
Mayank-haha...ek no. ka nalayak hai...he luvs girls....nd
Armaan-nt all....i hate this female(points @ riddhima)
Riddhima-ur tokin as if i lyk u...jerk...
Nupur-ohhh!!! ab band bhi karo yeh ladaai jhagda subah se yehi dekhne ko mil raha hai....
Riddhima-tum isse keh do....
Nupur-dii ladaako toh yeh mayank bhi hai.....mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahi deta....
Mayank-wat tum itna bolti ho aur ab bol rahi ho bolne ka mouka...tumhaara dimaag toh theek hai na....OMG tum iske saath rehti kaise ho riddhima....she is sooo annnoying...
Armaan-bhaiyya nupur sweet hai riddhima annoying hai she jst gets on my nerve....
The fyt goes on....
Then Rohith(Editor)-guyz guyz guyz!! band karo....hume maaf karo...v r nt used to fyts here.....ok soo if ull wanna cont. v will make a move....
Armaan-noo v r sry....
Simran-Dats k....
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In the Evening in Vinita's cabin.....
Armaan-Ma'm humaara topic hai....
Riddhima-Relationship-A Bliss
Nupur-humaara Fashion statement....
Mayank-Jii ma'am hum dono naye fashion ke baare mein likhenge....
Nupur-Dats understood
Armaan giggles...
Vinita-Ok aap dono Armaan nd Riddhima....aap logon ne relationship ke baare mein likhne kaa socha...
Riddhima-yes ma'am this nt unly focusses on a relationship a guy nd girl share.....as in luv.....
Armaan-its abt all kinds of relationship a guy nd girl share......
Vinita-interesting...ok soooo ull can carry on...sooo meet u'll tomorrow
All-thnk u maam....
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Precap-Very interesting...keep readin....
Edited by KaJenLicious - 15 years ago

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