Kahi to hogi woh:sajan FF. new thread on 150 - Page 52

Originally posted by: vital123

waiting 4 d nxt!

will update late.

Originally posted by: mariams

the update was really nice and really funny...

And happy birthday Zina(maryam)...may all your wishes and dreams come true on your bday😊

thanks for comment mari.

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeeeeeee updt..
luved it...
do cont soon..

thanks for commenting.

Originally posted by: kris97

Awesome!!!Great update please continue soon................

thanks for comments.

Originally posted by: Armi-Shilpa

Hey Avi!!!

U know what aapke FF ka link search karte karte meri to jaan hi nikal gayi...lolz..

Wow Man....76 pages in just 7 updates......

u really rocks yaar....

Hats off To You Mannn..!!!.

!!Congratulations!!

I just hope aap isi tarah aage badhte jao...

and never feel discouraged or demoralised because of others..

just believe in yourself....

And now i m sure you will not think of quiting IF or writing....hai na???

Just try to give ur best.....

Congratulations...once again,,,

Keep up the good Work...

I m sure one day u will be the SHINY BRIGHT STAR WRITTER of IF..

And i hope u will now continue writing and will have 4..no no 5...no no even more threads of this FF...

All The Very Best....

A small gift on this success for you friend...

With Lots of Love..

Ur Silly Frnd..

Ankita Raj

thanks a lot for this all thing anku....loved it alotttttttt.......thanks for supporting dear.........really very very happy to see this....and i share the chocolates with all the readers and u also...no worries.as it is bcs of all of u peoples........thanks again.

Originally posted by: armaankashridz

hi bhai

what a part?????????😲

yeh part tha!!!!

i mean seriously.....

i didnt like it for a bit

WELL

I LOVE IT

it was so gud

i love the sajan scene

it was just...wow...

i can only say this

and sorry for the late comment

i like the mayur too

but the sajan one was much better.....

plz continue soon and when u reply to my two comments

so do pm me as i dont come that much and will know

so plzzzzzzzzz

take care

kiddo😊

thanks for tht pic kiddo.i was some what tensed on how it will turn out to be and it turn out fine..........thanks for another big one from u...hope to see u soon on forums.........enjoy ur break and do well in studies.

This is short update as I have very less time to write the parts……so I written small part…….i introduced one guest couple in this part……will reveal them in next update…they r just guest for holi……so keep guessing who r those………and next update will be long…..hope u like this........thanks to all for of ur comments that my FF completed 75 pages.......hope to see good support from u readers.

Part 8:

(The performance has ended and all gang gone to change for the holi party……….all the students of excels college were enjoying the holi party……..everyone is running here and there…..throwing colors on everyone and enjoying the holi.)

(Benji and uday were the first to come to the scene…….benji is tensed and searching for someone in crowd of people there……uday sees that and ask.)

U: dude kisi ladki ko dhund raha hai kya?????????.............agar ha to muzhe bhi bata de.

B: nahi dude……….mai kisi aur ko dhund raha hu magar shayad wo abhi tak aya nahi hai.

(till that time gunjan and nupur also came…..they worn white salwar suit…nupur come in middle where colors were kept in plates and took the colors in her arms and was searching for someone.)

G: di tum kisse dhund rahi ho????????

N: mayank ko……malum nahi ye sadu kaha gaya hai??????

G: woh shayad abh tak aya nahi hai……magar aap unhe kyu dhund rahi ho?????

N: wo kya hai na gunjan…..hamesha har saal wo muzhe holi pe pehele rang lagata hai…magar iss bar mai puri tarah tayyar hu aur iss liye mai yaha colors leke kadi hu…...sirf wo dikhjaye de…uska pura chehra rang dungi……..aur waise bhi aaj jo usne subah kiya hai na………uski saja bhi to deni hai na usse.

(while nupur is blabbering about mayank……..mayank came from back and stand behind nupur with big bucket filled with color……gunjan noticed him but he told her to keep quiet.)

N: mai kehati hu gunjan tuzhe aaj to wo nahi bach payega.

G: wo di…tumhare piche…….wo wo…..may…..

N: aisi hadbada kyu rahi hai…...sidhe sidhe bol na.

G: wo di mayank.

N: kaha hai mayank??????

M: (coming close to nupur ear and says) tumhare piche?

Nupur gets shocked and turns and takes her hands out to color mayank but before that mayank pour whole bucket full of water on nupur…….making her completely wet.

M: kyu kaisa laga?????????...........aur iss baar bhi maine tumhe sab se pehele rang diya…………..(and starts smiling at nupur)

N: ( got very angry) tumhe to maiiiiiiii……urghhhhhhhhhhh…ruko abhi dikhati hu…(and takes the colors in her hands and starts running behind mayank….and mayank runs to save his life from dangerous nupur.)

Gunjan is left behind alone…….she is looking the people enjoying holi party…when someone taps on her shoulder…….she jerks by sudden touch and turns back just to see SAMRAT.

S: hi chashmish.

G: hi samrat….party bohot achi hai……..sab log kitne khush hai.

S: tum to khush ho na?????……..abhi bhi tumhe tumhare ghar ki yaad nahi aa rahi na?????

G: nahi samrat…aaj maine bohot hi maja kiya hai………yeh holi mai kabhi nahi bhulungi….thanks samrat..

S: ohhhhh chashmish……..abhi tum firse wo thanks ka mantra japne mat lagna….muzhe ek hi cheese baar baar batane ki aadat nahi hai.

G: oh sorry bhul gayi thi.

S: well ok………aaj tum bohot hi achi lag rahi ho………white tum pe jagta hai……….magar aaj muzhe tumhare iss white color ko rango se bhar na padega…and throws colors on her .

Gunjan shocked by this sudden attack but recovers and takes the colors from the nearby table and starts running behind sam to color him……….but sam knew this so he ran away very fast….but at last gunjan found him and colored him…..here mayur are also fighting in the small pool filled with colors and splashing water on each other's and have great time.

(scene changes to benji and uday)

Benji is talking with uday when one guy and a lady came to him and say.

Guy: hi benji.how r u????

Benji turns and after watching the guy becomes very happy and hugs him and says.

B: hiiiiiiiiiiii dude…..kitne din baad mil rahe ho…….mai to aap ka hi intezzar kar raha tha.

Guy: hi ben…….kaisa hai tu?????? Aur sam kaha hai?????

B: mai thik hu bhai…….sam yahi kahi hoga..usse jab pata chalega wo toh pagal ho jayega.aap ruko mai dhundke ata hu.

Guy: nahi nahi……….tu maje kar yaha…mai hi jata hu........(and says to the girl with him) chale??

And the girl nods and they start looking here and there for sam.

to be continued....

awesome updt...

Avi jii I still have to read part 5,6,7

But this was great!!!

lovely ud amy....pls cont soon

n congo on ur 75 pages😊