Hum ko tum se pyaar hai (Updated C pg 28) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
AWSOME PART 👏
I LOVED IT
CONTINUE AS SOON AS U GET TIME

PLZ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Pooja922

plzzz cont!!!!...that was soooo goood!!!

Thank you pooja, u may call urself lucky today as i had bit time to continue 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Mini786

AWSOME PART 👏
I LOVED IT
CONTINUE AS SOON AS U GET TIME

PLZ

Thanks Mini, I am glad u liked it. yeah i had bit time to today and posted a part.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#44

heya,

thank you soo much. BTW i like your siggy picture. Angad/Zaib looks sp cute and hot 😳 aww bless him. he's mine!

i have posted the part.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45

last ended part:

She stood there nervous, does not know what to do, staring back to his brown eyes. Unable to resist the feelings she have she thought he is so cute and hot, I wish he was mine. His eyes shows sparkle of love towards her.
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Part 4

He moved closer and closer and she moved back, suddenly she stopped as she came to the end of the kitchen. She can feel his hot breath on her, she was nervous, his and her lips were few inches away to each other.

She stood there nervous, does not know what to do, staring back to his brown eyes. Unable to resist the feelings she have she thought he is so cute and hot, I wish he was mine. His eyes shows sparkle of love towards her.


He moved closer and closer, there lips touched. They were drowned into each other kiss. She formed her arms around him and so did he. They were so warm that they did not felt it was cold.

A joy of happiness filled her heart as she continued to kiss him; she ruffles her hand to his smooth hair.


On the other hand, Angad never felt that close to the person, he felt that all the burden in his heart was taken out that was done by a single girl. He has never kissed a girl but went out on a date but never kissed a girl. There was something unusual about that led the kiss to take between both. He has sudden urge to know more about her, a confidence that was filled in him. He was popular indeed though that there was one thing he is incomplete with that every other boy has. However he never showed it to anyone and was never going to.

Out of the blue she pulled him away and stared at his eyes. He wants more. Angad was completely confused then thought; 'what a jerk' he has been'. He kissed her out of now where and he has not even gone out with her or dated her. Somehow he felt strange that he knew something about her.

'I... I m sorry' he mumbled out quietly unable to meet her eyes.

She stood there, she was about to cry but stopped herself. There was no point of her showing emotions to anyone, no one would care. She has been living like this since she was born. Only one person cared and that was her maid. She was unable to look at his eyes as well, what he would think that she also acted like a jerk! She even responded back to his kiss.

'I guess I might be going now as the rain has stopped'. He looked to her eyes.

Yeah. She said, disappointed.

She followed him to the door.

Thank you, he said. He meant that, he never has felt that close to anyone. He was confused why he felt so close to her.

She watched him disappeared into his car. She then closed the door and enter her home of silence again.

Why did he said 'Thank you' she wondered, is it because she kissed him back or what? But he also said 'sorry'. What did he mean exactly? She was confused; she brushed away the feeling quickly knowing that no one would actually love her.

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she locked the huge doors of her house as she made her way to the college. She walked down the path making her to the car. Her long circle earrings made a sound as they were dangling. She had her hair down and was wearing a denim jeans, green tip and white designer jacket. As she walked down the path, she finds a car parked near her car. She wonders who that could be in.
She goes closer to see the person and is shocked.

Edited by *Izzy* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
nice!!!...romance at first sight after a long time lol...plz connt
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47

thnx for the comp about mie siggy.....nd lovely part plss continue soon!!!
nice part 👏 👏 👏

sonia
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
WOW!!THT WAS JUST AMAZING!!!I JUST FINISHED READING ALL THE PARTS!!!LOVE AND ROMANCE AT FIRST SIGHT..LOL..!!!PLZZ CONTINUE!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
heya guys,
I apologize for not continuing this fanfic after 5 december because my deadline was delayed. I did have a lot free time and visited I.F but because I am lazy i did not prefer it. I will post the next part today.
promise.
Thank u for ur lovely comments. keep it up!
luv ya
sanya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50

Part 5

Recap of last part ended:

She locked the huge doors of her house as she made her way to the college. She walked down the path making her to the car. Her long circle earrings made a sound as they were dangling. She had her hair down and was wearing a denim jeans, green top and white designer jacket. As she walked down the path, she finds a car parked near her car. She wonders that that could be in.
she goes closer to see the person and is shocked.

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The person was none other than Angad.

She leaned closer to the mirror and awed by a simple smile on his face. She noticed him hugging himself as if he was cold. It was indeed cold outside. She knocked on the mirror.

He woke up the first thing he saw was a innocent face. He was taken back by the beauty, she looked indeed angelic. She was wearing pink choridar and had a light touch of make-up. The brown hair down, with eyes all looked perfect. As if she came from heaven.

"Gorgeous" he muttered to himself.

Then he was back to earth, he was not dreaming. What is he doing here and who that girl is. It took few seconds as the realization dawns upon on him.

'K-R-I-P-A', he said

He was embarrassed not only had that she found him earlier but in this state. His hair was messed up and what more he did not even had a touch to fresh himself.

He had actually planned to wake up before Kripa and go to college and arrange a transport by one of his friend.

He got up and pressed a button, the window automatically rolled down.

'Who main……'

What do I have to say, she does not know what to do because she was confused of what happened yesterday

She must be thinking that I am complete looser and jerk, oh why have I taken the step at the first move. He then realized that he have never kissed a girl before. He did not know how sudden it happened and why it happened. It was like as both materials are getting were pull toward each other. Something that attracts you closer and the other Person can't help it but get closer.

'woh.. tum kya karehay ho' she managed to say

He was embarrassed and tried to avoid the eye-contact but still looked at her.

She was indeed different from the other girls he have ever me.

"Kripa.. I I…" he was out of words but did not know what to say. But instead he continued looking at her to search for answers which even he did not know.

She blushed as he stared at her.

She was feeling nervous and uncomfortable as he keeps continued looking at her. She tried not to look him back.

He realized her uneasiness, felt bit sad. Why was he feeling sad, he does not even know her?

'Angad…you slept here in ur car' she said

What a stupid question she thought, duh... Kripa you can see he slept in the car.

'Woh… actually, Kripa I…I thought you did not want me' he said

'I did not even said anything about you and the guest room and you did not ask me'

'I thought you want me to go after what happened yesterday..' , with that his voice cut off

she blushed and he saw that.

'she looked like a innocent girl as her cheeks turn red'

she realized he saw it, she was embarrassed again' this time she was pissed off, 'doesn't he know anything else instead to embarrass girls'. She changed the subject,

'How will you go to college?' she inquired

'Actually my car break down so I..'

'I can drop you off to the college if you want'

'Thanks Kripa but you don't have to'

'Angad, you are at my house' she said

she would not want to let this opportunity to go away from her hands, the guy she loved was with her, talking with her and moreover he was going to go college with her, she was on the top of the world. IF she wished, IF ONLY HE DID NOT SAID SORRY, IF'

He open the passenger door and came out, his hair were still messy, his eyes and overall appearance was not tidy and neat.

'Shall we go' he said as he came close to her

She moved back and quickly brought her hand to her nose as if something smells bad. She made a face of disgust and was like 'ewww'

It was his time to be embarrassed as he realized he had not brushed his teeth. (LOL)

'Can I use your bathroom' he asked

'Sure' she replied trying not to laugh

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he followed her to the bathroom and soon she opened the door all he could say was

(Kripa's bathroom 😉) it was important to post an image because in this fanfic there are romances linked to this room!

Waooooooo he said, his mouth was half open

She noticed it and was again trying not to laugh.

As she went out, he closed the door. He heard her giggling. He smiled to himself.

"I love her"

Preview: BATHROOM ROMANCE

Edited by *Izzy* - 19 years ago

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