Hum ko tum se pyaar hai (Updated C pg 28) - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
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just read your whole fan fic loved it, please continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PLZ PLZ CONT..THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS LOL....GREAT WRITING....LOVED IT!!...CONT SOON!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!!!..THT WAS SOO GOOD!!.. I WAS LAUGHING MY HEAD OFF ON THE LAST PAT AND THE COMMENT THT U WROTE FOR THE IMAGE!!..PLZZZ CONTINUE!!I LOVE THIS FANFIC SOO FAR!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was sooo cute n sweet...pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Than you for the comments guys. It seems nobody liked at as less ppl r reading it 😭 😭 .

Anyway for the people who are reading here is the next part for you lots... (c my next post)

luv ya all
sanya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 6

As he enters he remembers about hs clothes and personal shower accessories.

K-R-I-PA, he shouts

'What'

'I need…'

She opens the door and he is standing there;

With a naughty smile; 'Do you want anything?'

'No, I thought you called'

'Me, I did call you but I did not tell you to open the door'

she blushed and knew what he was getting at

'Did you got to see what you wanted to' he asked coming closer to her.

'I I'

Angad moved closer but he then slipped forwardly making Kripa coming with him, he has arms around her and she too, They both fell on the Bath tub, that was filled with water and rose petals. Kripa was underneath Angad and he was on top.

They looked at each other,, he could see that she was nervous was struggling to get up. He mentioned her to stop.

He gets up and then forwards his hands to help her. She gets up but because of with a huge force on water she lost her standing force was going to gall back in the water, he grabbed her. He picked her in his strong arms and took her out of the bathroom.

He puts her down; they both were engrossed in each other. She was all wet and her brown curly hair was down. The make-up was messed up especially the mascara. He was amazed by her looks even though, she was messed up she still looked great and cute. The wet clothes made her transparent as the cold breeze from the window blew sending chills down their bodies.

Kripa was horrified as she looked down to see her clothes, most of her body was showing off. She was self-conscious, did not know what to do. Slowly she moves her glaze to the floor slightly hugging her self. Angad clearly knew what she was thinking, they were in the guest bedroom. He removes the red silk sheets from the bed, ties around her body. All the time he was gazing at her, he did not left her gaze any second. He circled around her tying the silky sheets. As he finished doing they both were opposite to each other.

Kripa heard her stomach rumbling when Angad was helping her. She had the funny feelings which she was confused at herself. She was stunned at what just Angad did, he did not took the advantage of this situation like other boys do. She knew it from her heart that Angad was not like this. And Now she was top of the world congratulating that her faith was indeed right. She looked at him for answers, all she could see the lovely affection of his eyes starring back.

They both came out of their world and realized what they were doing;

'Stupid, Kripa, why can't you leave it, he does not love you and will never love you' she was upset and sad at the sometime because when ever she was with Angad this thought always came on her mind.

On the other hand Angad was thinking, 'leave it Angad, no one can ever love you if your own mom does not have to spend with you, how will she love you'

Both were gloomy and sad at same time as they both stood there opposite to each other, with their eyes locked. They sadly departed their own ways.

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Edited by *Izzy* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg!!!!!! 👏
gr8 story..... really looking forward to the next part and the next and the next!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I think I will skip this fanfic because no one is reading and then after 2 or 3 months I will continue till them everyone has read it and give comments on it. 😉 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh plz don't do that i just read ur fanfiction and was about to comment on it but i just read ur post and which shocked me plzzzzzzzzzzzz do write more coz i love it 😛 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue for my sake
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Izzy*

I think I will skip this fanfic because no one is reading and then after 2 or 3 months I will continue till them everyone has read it and give comments on it. 😉 😃

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO😭

Edited by kuch kuch hota - 19 years ago

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