~ SaJan-one shot part 6 ~ romance inside the car

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000" size="2">hey guys....this is arushi as u all know me i am writing an one shot on sajan i hope u all will like it so here it goes.............................


it was 7:00 o'clock in the evening and gunjan was still in the college doing some library work and to her unexpectation samrat was also in the college doing his bb practice in the basketball court buthe was also anaware ofgunjan that she was also in the college.


s to himself-'dude,aaj keh liye itni practice kaafi hogi ab mujhe ghar chale jaana chahiye vaise bhi barish hone wali hain' saying this he starts going out of thebb courtjust then he saw lights on at the library so he thought that may be the guards have forgotten to off the lights so he goes there and switches offthe light just then gunjan screams-'aaaaaaaaaa...light...light kaise band ho gayi'


s-'chashmish' saying this he on the lights.

g-'samrat tum abhi tak ghar nahi gaye?'


s-'voh mein basketball practice kar raha tha aur tum?'

g-'main...mujhe library mein kuch kaam karna tha toh isliye main yaha kaam kar rahi thi'


s-'oh toh kaam ho gaya'

g-'haan bas main nikalne hi vali thi'


s-'toh main tumhe chod deta hoon vaise bhi aaj weather kuch thik nahi hai lagta hain baarish hone wali hain'

g-'lekin samrat...'


s-'lekin wakin chodo chashmish aur chalo'

g-'achha thike'


they both sat inside the car and samrat drove off just then the rain starts heavily


g-'dekho na samrat baarish kitni tez aa gayi jaldi chalao'

s-'thike toh shortcut seh chalte hain'saying this he takes a u-turn and went from a broken type of road and suddenly his car stops.


g-'kya hua samrat'

s-'chashmish lagta hain gaadi kharaab hogayi hai aur itni barish mein koi mechanic bhi nahi milega'

g-'toh ab?'asking innocently


s saying naughtily-'ab kya tum aur main is romantic seh mausam mein akele ek sunsaan seh road mein car ke ander hain'

g-'matlab'


s-'matlab....saying he comes near gunjan and slowely kisses on her lips and they both stayed their for 10 minutes then gunjan broke the kiss and started looking here and there then samrat removes the hair from her neck and kisses on her neck gunjan holds the car chair tightly then samrat kisses on her cheek and then forehead and kisses hard on her lips and then samrat removes her dupatta and kisses entirely on her neck and then suddenly gunjan realises that the rain has stopped so she shifts samrat a little and slowely says-'sam...samrat barish rukh gayi hai'and fixes her dupatta

s naughtily-'toh kya romance bhi rokh doo'


g-'lekin samrat ab mechanic mil sakta hain'saying this she starts smiling and goes out of the car

s to himself-'arae bhagwan thodi aur der keh liye baarish kar dete toh tumahra kya bigad jata'saying this he also started smiling.


end....................................................................


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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one shot..........but very little........still really good
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Aaawwwwwwsooommmmeeee!!!!! Loved it!!! I wish u would continue it!
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awesomeeeee os..
luved it...
thnxx for d pm..
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thanks guys although i thought that my one shot was not that nice but still thanks a bunch for appreciating!!
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if i get more responses to continue this one shot....then i will surely continue...😊
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wowowow i really love your OS of sajan
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I loved IT!!!!!
Soooo short but very nice.....
Romantic I will say..... 😳
Write more one shots like that.... 👍🏼
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AWWW that was a very cute little SHot!!
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Yaaay!!! PlzplzplPlPlPlzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzllzllzllplzplzllz continueeeeee!!!! For a friend who is eagerly waiting? (did I manage to convince u yet?)

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