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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 2(just for all my friends sake) especially for my friend dreamer2304 who has made of list of pleases and for all the rest also.....
samrat came out of the car and holds gunjan's hand and says....
s-'thike chashmish tum gadi keh ander wait karo main abhi koi mechanic bula kar lata hoon aur ghabrana mat main bas yu gaya aur yu aya okey' he winks and goes from there.
gunjan sat inside the car just then her phone rang it was an unknown number.at first gunjan thought of not picking it up but after a while she picks up and says-'hello'
no sound
g-'hello kaun bol raha hai?'
no sound
g-'hello aap kaun bol rahe hain?'
(unknown=u)
u-'meri aawaz sunne keh liye itna taras rahi ho jaan'
gunjan got scared but then gathered all courage and spoke-'dekho tum jo koi bhi ho thik seh baat karo tumhe kisse baat karni hain?'
u-'baat toh tumhe seh karni hai jaan'
gunjan felt disguest when he says jaan but then she says-'apni bakwas band karo'and she cuts the phone
u to himself-'phone katke toh tumne aur jada utsuk kar diya mujhe tumahre paas aneke liye meri jaaneman' and he smiles evily.
gunjan was litteraly shivering with fright but just then she saw someone coming.she gets releived as she thought that samrat was coming from the front.she says-'thanks god tum agaye sam... '
but she stops as that person came close to her and unluckily that person was not samrat and her eyes grew wider with fear and shescreamed loudly- 'sssssssssaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmrrrrrrrrraaaaaaattttttttt'.
just then samrat felt that someone is calling him so he says-'mujhe abhi abhi asa laga jaise ki chashmish ne mujhe bulaya vo thik toh hain kahi use kuch....'saying this he rans towards his car and found gunjan nowhere in the car he gets disturbed and screams-'cccchhhhhaaasssssmmmiiiisssssshhh tum kaha ho?????'
end..................................................
okey so for now this much only i will end up my one shot in 2-3 more parts and i will take little bit longer time to update each and every part because my exams r starting so please guys i hope u all understand....please reply guys for my part as it means a lot for me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
reallyy glad dat u continued wid it...
awesomeeee part dear..!!
bt wat ws dis..?? omgggg.. m scared... soo much of suspense..?? i hope everything is f999...
pllzzzzzz try to cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

reallyy glad dat u continued wid it...
awesomeeee part dear..!!
bt wat ws dis..?? omgggg.. m scared... soo much of suspense..?? i hope everything is f999...
pllzzzzzz try to cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika

thanks jyotika and for the suspense it was just the beginning.....😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really very nice interesting part....continue soon...best of luck for ur exams buddy do well
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucario

Really very nice interesting part....continue soon...best of luck for ur exams buddy do well

thanks avi for the best wishes and for the part also!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii!!!! Thx sooooo much for continuing! I'm so happy that I managed to convince u!!! Love ya!!! PlZzZZzzzZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi jaldi update karna!!! Ur friend is waiting for it!! Part buhot buhot buhoooooot achcha tha!!! I hope ki Gunjan theek ho!!!!! Thx soo much once again! Me now eagerly waiting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG....
I loved it....
Please dont stop writing..... 😃
And Cont soon and PM me... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww awesome part
really cool
plz continue it son
n thanx for continueingggggggg
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamer2305

Hiii!!!! Thx sooooo much for continuing! I'm so happy that I managed to convince u!!! Love ya!!! PlZzZZzzzZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi jaldi update karna!!! Ur friend is waiting for it!! Part buhot buhot buhoooooot achcha tha!!! I hope ki Gunjan theek ho!!!!! Thx soo much once again! Me now eagerly waiting!

ur welcome and thanks a lot for liking this paart
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: boshaa

OMG....
I loved it....
Please dont stop writing..... 😃
And Cont soon and PM me... 😛

thanks and i will post 2-3 more parts okey.....😊

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