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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Rocking part...sab ko hila diya...
Naina does not want to marry Raj. He wants Navin to convince her parents but all of Naveen efforts fail. Raj is very angry and shocked to know that his wedding has been fixed with naina.
Both of them get married. On their first night..Raj is surprised to see naina speaking so much...but little does he know that she is acting like this because Naveen had asked her too. Untill both of them act normally with each other....more misunderstandings will crop up.
please continue soon. waiting to know what happens next.

hi dear,
thanks for loving this part.
really, wow,
yes, naina shaadi nehi karni chathi amd naveen also tryinghis best to stop the married but fails.
raj also angry to heard about his marrige with naina.
ha,yes, raj nehi janta ke sab kuch naveen ka plan hain and shocked to see this.
ha,let's see ,what'll happen next?
I'll update soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: esha143

wow yaar wonderful mujhe lagaa na jaane Naina ki shaadi kis gadhe se ho rahi hai?par uski shaadi toh apne Raj se hi hui.i'm very happy.haa yeh alag baat hai ki dono ne apni marzi ke khilaaf shaadi ki hai par hum jaanthe hai na they r made for each other.😉

and the game scene was really nice.accha hua Naina jeet gayi warnaa Raj roph jhaadtha usske saamne😆😆

and the first night scene,no,lets say first night fiasco.....😆😆aisi first night toh kaash hi kabhi hui hogi.ek taraf Raj ko Naina ANGEL lagthi hai aur phir bhi vo usse daraane ki koshish kar rahaa hai...very good😆😆😆ab hum isska kya kare?

now waiting to see what Naina did to Raj that he is raising such hell in the early morning.............continue soon.............

hi esha , haha tune kya socha, naina ki shaadi kisi aur se hogi.
ha, abhi dono ek dosre ko pasand nehi karta but bahut jald dono ek doosre ko pasand karega.yes, they made for each other.
ha re, aacha hua naina ne jeet lia ....
ha ha sahi kaha tune, oh first night kam tha aur first night fiasco jada tha,
ha, ek taraf raj usse dara ne ki koshish kar rahatha aur dossri taraf usko dekh ke froze hogaya.
ha, oh tujhe pata chalega, coming part mein.
I'll update soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Rakhi...

Nice concept and definitely different. Yaar Raj and Naina dont like each other. *unbelievable look*😲 😆 😆

And raj said "mar gayi kya?" 😲Arey Naina mar jayegi toh sabse jyada Raj hi royega... 😭huh!!! 😆And he is also surprised ki Naina se kaun shaadi kar raha hai? Kahin wo khud to nahi???😕 I mean its just a guess...

And Rakhi... we can never be tired of RN fics. So u can write as many as you can. We don't have any problem. 😉 We are a greedy lot where RN are concerned.😉

Cont soon...

Love
Guglu

Hi guglu,
thanks for loving this concept and character sketches.
raj and naina didn't like each other but kab tak dekhte hain.
sahi kaha naina ko kuch hoga toh rajko hi sab se jada dookh hoga.ha, sach mein oh suprised hain, kaun hain jisse ohshaadi kar rehi hain.humm ,chal tere guess ko dekhte hain.
kk jee,hum jinta chahe rn fics likhte rehenge.
I'll continue soon dear.
love
rakhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: guglu088

Great part Rakhi...

thanks guglu

Dekha maine sahi guess kiya tha... 😛RN ki shaadi hone wali thi. Bechari Naina...😭 wo Raj se shaadi nahi karna chahti aur naveen bhi apne parents ko mana nahi paya. Yaar ye parents itne force kyun karte hain? Khair unke force karne ki wajah se RN ki shaadi ho gayi... ye achi baat hai.👏 Aur Naina udas hokar kehti hai ki uski fikr nahi hai kisi ko.😭 Uska udaas hona bhi sahi hai.
ha, tu kuch guess kare aur oh naho,aisa kabhi ho sakta hain.ha ,bahcare dar gayi naina ,shaadi karne se raj se and naveen ko kaha.par naveen aapne parents ko mana nehi paya.ha,unke force karne se shaadi toh hogayi, kaun jane parents kyuon force karte,kabhi aapne b accho bhalai ke liye.ha, bechari bahut udas hogayi,

Raj ne pura ghar tod diya... 😲Well... bechara ab kar hi kya sakta hai.😆
ha, bechare kya kar sakta, gusse meinghar tod dia


Finally Shaadi ho gayi but as u said ki saari rasme tum flashback me dikhaogi to I'm adjusting with the cutting short of the rasms. And Naina won the game. Well... usne to dikha bhi diya ki wo dominate karegi...😆 😆 😆 she refused to be cowed down by Raj.👏 Good beginning.
ha finally shaadi hogayi,ha jee jarur hum dikhayenge saare rasam flashback pe,
yes, naina won the game.ha dikha dia but infuture kaun domin ate karegi iya karega,oh toh hum hi jante hain😉😆😛.yes, thanku


I'm waiting to know ki Naina ne kya shararat ki hai Raj ke saath. 😉Ab kya hoga???😕
bahut jald jaan jaogi guglu.thora saintejar and then u'll know

Cont soon Rakhi...
I'll update soon dear

Love
Guglu
love
rakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

absolutely njoyed dis part....👏

njoyed d cuteness of d recently married couple.....😳

updt was awesome👏

thanks dear for lov ing this part and loving raj and naina as married couple.yes they r too cute.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: danish1

beautifully written.

lovely start.

thanks dear for loving this update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

rakhi...just lovely...n cute...par thoda funny bhi laga mujhe...

bich bich me raj k reactions ko imagine karr k main hass rahi thi...!!! yeh surprise achha tha ki naina ki shaadi actual me raj se hi honewali thi...main thoda jyada xcited ho gayi...thi...!!!
apne hi room me raj ka confusion hona...maza aa gaya...!!! aur vahan par naina aur raj ka convo...main baht enjoy karr rahi thi...!!! naina raj ko dhamki de rahi thi...he he he...!!! phir bhi us ne bed nahi chodi...!!!
par mujhe koun sa part achha laga pata hai...jab raj ne naina ko dhamki diya...use apne kareeb khinch kar...!!!
ab jaldi se cont karo...
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

rakhi...just lovely...n cute...par thoda funny bhi laga mujhe...

thanks tujhe iye part accha laga aur funny oh toh for a change kya, bhaut tension h ain life mein so,thora comdey toh jarurat hain na
bich bich me raj k reactions ko imagine karr k main hass rahi thi...!!! yeh surprise achha tha ki naina ki shaadi actual me raj se hi honewali thi...main thoda jyada xcited ho gayi...thi...!!!
ha ha,mienbhi jab likh rehi thi iye part.ha, thora suprise dia, aremein toh soch bhi nehi sakti raj ko naina ko bina,kis aur ke sath so,shaadi kara dia dono ka.
apne hi room me raj ka confusion hona...maza aa gaya...!!! aur vahan par naina aur raj ka convo...main baht enjoy karr rahi thi...!!! naina raj ko dhamki de rahi thi...he he he...!!! phir bhi us ne bed nahi chodi...!!!
ha,he is confused ,actually naina ke sath shaadi hone ke baad he is to confused so aur bhi hogaya.thanks for loving the conversation between raj and naina.ha, nainaiye sab naveen ki baat se kiya .
par mujhe koun sa part achha laga pata hai...jab raj ne naina ko dhamki diya...use apne kareeb khinch kar...!!!
really,thanks alot priya for loving this part
ab jaldi se cont karo...
I'll update soon dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

Part 2:-

Raj ka face dekh ke every body laughing.Raj feels more irritated and straight goes to kitchen and saw naina is smiling and singing song in a very low voice. Raj goes and said what's this naina?

Naina turn and saw her husband and try to control her laugh but fails. Raj got irritated more and said naina,don't laugh.

Naina try to control.when raj's mother enter and said tu iha kya kar raha hain, jake jaldi, ready hole.Puja karni hogi tum dono ko ek sath.

Raj quickly thinks some evil thoughts and said ha, ma mein toh sirf, naina ko bula raha tha,mere ek kurta kaha hain,usse dhoond ne mein meri madat karne bolo.

Naina:-par,iye kheer.

Raj's mom:-Hogaya na, then tu ja,baas usse rehene de aur jake usska madat kar de ,nehi toh usse saara ghar ko sar pe uthna.

Raj:-mom, mein koi ghar sar mein nehi uthata.then to naina agar tumhe iha saare kaam ho agye toh mere sath abhi chalo.

Raj's mom:-ha tu kuch nehi karta, then to naina, chal bahu ja..

Naina jana nehi chathi par usse jana para. After entering the room she didn't find Raj but soon feel someone hold her waist tightly by one hand and another hand quickly turn her and cover her face with come color.

Naina try to screem but cannot.At first she shocked then understand and try to protest but raj hold her tightly.

She feels shy because her closeness and the way raj hold her tightly, his one hand on her waist and another hand on her face.After that raj saw and close his face and said bura na maano aaj holi hain.

Naina surprised but happy to soon raj said don't u think ke iye smile tumpe suit nehi karta,tum toh aacha oh kiase rote hue aachi lagti ho,aur iye sarmana , don't think mein tumhe holi ke liye de raha hoon.iye tumne jo subha mein kya uska answer hain, now move from here.

Naina feels very hurt and move from there. But Raj again said, aur ha, aaj jo kya so kya, next time se aise kuch nehi karna,aur karna toh dur sochna bhi nehi. Now go from here.

Naina:-mujhe bhi ko wish nehi hain aapke sath holi khelne..

Raj:-oh really jao na,.

N aina:-Ha ,jaungi,mein waise bhi mujhe tumse shaadi karni nehi chaiye thi,par mein kya ,choriye…Then she goes from there.

Raj got more furious and said kya mujhe se aise baat karke chali gayi,kaise,uska itni himmat.isko toh mein….

After the puja, naina pad phere ke liye uske ghar chali gayi,and raj's mom told Raj that in the evening raj ko lena hain usse..

Raj:-kyuon,mein kyuon jaun,jo gayi hainusse khud wapas aane bolo,miennehi jane wala,

Raj's mom:-behesh mat kar, aur shaam ko abhu ko lene jana.

Raj:-but mom.

At the evening. Naina ne uske ghar mein bahut enjoy kya then at the evening she told her brother nave en about Raj and tabhi Raj aaya aur kaha mere piche mere burai ka r rehe ho, oh bhi mere dost se.

Naveen:-nehi re,aise baat nehi hain,

Raj:-really,

Naina:- baat iye hain Capt. Rajveer Singh Sekhawat, ke mein aapke baarein meinhi bat kar rehi thi, aur mere bhai se meinkya baat karu iya na karu iye meri marji hain.

Raj;-oh really, tumhe sayad pata nehi shaadi kebat sari marji pati ka hota hain,

N aina;-nehi, dekha bhaiya, iye aise karte ahian,mein kitna,try karti hoon adjust karne ko but he is always behaving like that.and starts crying.

Naveen:-dekho raj ,iye sab kya hain.

Raj:-tu bhi iske baaton mein aagayi,are iye drama kar rehi hain.

Naveen:-thik hain main manta hoon oh drama kar rehi hain.par tu before he can complete naina said nehi,mein drama nehi karti,jo bhi drama karta hain iye karta hain.

Naveen:-Naina tu chup kar.

Naina:-aab mein chutki se naina ho gayi mein, and sit in the bed.

Naveen:dekh chutki,

Raj:-pehele mere baat suno,iska drama tum baad mein sunna aur dekhna.

Naina: mein drama nehi kar rehi hoon,oh tum karte ho.

Raj;-pehele toh tum mujeh tum nehi kahoge, sirf aap kahoge,

Naina;-kyuon mein aap kahu

Raj:-Because mein tumhar pati hoon.

Naina:-unfortunately mujhe tumhe aapna pati matlab aapko pati kehena par raha hain.

Raj:-really, but tumse shaadi karke sabse jada unfortunate toh mein hoon.

Naina:-toh kisne kaha shaadi karne ko.

Raj:-dekho tum jada bolo mat,jaise thi waise hi reho.

Naina:-dekha bhaiya kaisemujhe dant rehe hain,mujeh nehi rehena inke sath.

Naveen:-chup kar tu, kuch bhi bol rehi hain aur tum raj ,iye sab choro, both are mature age but still behaving like small child.

But raj and niana try to say something but naveen agains listen carefully both of u just go back to ur home and tomorrow u'll go to ur honeymoon.

Hearing this raj and naina shocked and said kya honeymoon, no way.

Naveen:-ok,then I have to tell that thing to our parents and they'll decide everything.oh forget to tell u raj and naina,ready ho jao,iha se hi, tum dono ka reception ka party aaj hain.

Raj:-aur kuch baki nehi hain .

Naveen try to control his laugh and said no,abhi ke liye itna hi.

Raj: - nehi tum sab mujhe ek sath hi sab de do,alag alag karke jhatka mat do.

Naveen: - thik hain,sochta hoon..naina tu ready ho ja jaldi ,tum dono ki cloths cupboard mein hain…

Then naveen goes from there but still naina and raj stand there.Suddenly naina said sorry.aap ready ho jaiye, meinuske bata ready hoti hoon.

Raj turns and try to say something but said kk,

Then both ready hoke bahar aaya,

Both look each other and think that kitne acche,khubsurat lag rehe ahianbut try to control their feelings.

Raj's mom thanks naveen for bring them to the reception party.

Then naveen told them to dance,

Unwillingly raj take naina's hand when raj's cousin sis said,bhaiya pehele puch toh lo.bhabi ko.

Raj :-kyuon, mere patni, mujhe chor ke kisi aur se kyuon dance karegi.Kyuon naina,

Unknowingly , naina blushed and said nehi,

Raj:-kya nehi, thora clear karo inhe.

Naina;-ha,mujhe sirf inke sath dance karna c hathi hoon.

Raj grining and said now everyone happy.

Raj's mom slappedinhis armsa nd said chup kar badmash ,dekh bahu kitna sarma rehi hain.

Raj:-humm, shall we dance now.

Raj's mom:-ja then dance start.

Raj place his hand on naina's waist and another hand hold naina's one hand and naina's another hand on raj 's shoulder.

When Raj touch naina's waist he feels tingle and naina's cheek got red and shivered after Raj touch her.

Music start:-

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Do Dill Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

Haan Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

Khabar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Saanson Mein Badi Bekaraari

Aankhon Mein Kai Rat Jage

Kahin Kabhi Lag Jaaye Dil To

Kahin Phir Dil Na Lage

Apne Dil Mein Zara Thaam Loon

Jaadu Ka Main Isay Naam Doon

Jaadu Kar Raha

Jaadu Kar Raha Hai Asar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Aise Bhole Bankar Hai Baithe

Jaise Koi Baat Nahin

Sab Kuchh Nazar Aa Raha Hai

Din Hai Ye Raat Nahin

Kya Hai Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hai Agar

Honthon Pe Hai Khaamoshi Magar

Baatein Kar Rahi Hain

Baatein Kar Rahi Hain Nazar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Kahin Aag Lagne Se Pehle

Uthta Hai Aisa Dhuaan

Jaisa Hai Idhar Ka Nazaara

Vaisa Hi Udhar Ka Samaa

Dil Mein Kaisi Kasak Si Jagi

Dono jaanib Barabar Lagi

Dekho To Idhar Se

Dekho To Idhar Se Udhar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

Haan Sabko Ho Rahi Hai

Khabar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Magar Chupke Chupke

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Magar Chupke Chupke

Ha Haan Chupke Chupke

After that, everyone clap them praise them and bless them and give them their well wishes. Many people said they are to perfect for each other.

Here after that ,they go back to home, in the way naina falls on to deep sleep.Raj try to wake her up but fails,then he take her in his arms and lay on the bed.

But when he try to move from there found naina hold her blazer tightly.He try to free himself but cannot.then he lay besides her and dose off too sleep.In the mid night, both hugged each other unknowingly and have cute smile on their face.

Here, next day morning, naina wake and find herself very close to raj, she shocked and surprised, shy and try to move but cannot.Raj hold her more tightly and said so jao,

Naina: raj, subha hogaya hain,

Raj open his eyes and found naina blushing but she looks too cute and sweet, Raj movie little and placed kissed on her cheeks and said good morning.

Naina's cheek burn and she lowered her eyes and then feel raj freed her and said jao, ready ho lo.

Naina quickly runs from there.

Raj also looks at the roof and smiling and again placed his head on the pillow.

Here in the washroom, naina smiling and feel the touch of raj's in her cheeks which are still burning.

Dil Ne Kaha Chupke Se

Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Kyon Naye Lag Rahe Hain Ye Dharti Gagan

Maina Poochha To Boli Ye Pagli Pawan

Pyaar Hua Chupke Se

Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Kyon Naye Lag Rahe Hain Ye Dharti Gagan

Maina Poochha To Boli Ye Pagli Pawan

Pyaar Hua Chupke Se

Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Titliyon Se Ye Suna

Titliyon Se Ye Suna

Maine Kissa Baagh Ka

Baagh Mein Thi Ek Kali

Sharmeeli Anchhui

Ek Din Manchala Bhanvra Aa Gaya

Khil Uthi Vo Kali Paaya Roop Naya

Poochhti Thi Kali Ki Mujhe Kya Hua

Phool Hanse Chupke Se

Pyaar Hua Chupke Se

Maine Baadal Se Kabhi

Ho Maine Baadal Se Kabhi

Ye Kahaani Thi Suni

Parvaton Ki Ek Nadi

Milne Saagar Se Chali

Jhoomti Ghoomti

Ho Naachti Dolti

Kho Gayi Apne Saagar Mein Jaake Nadi

Dekhle Pyaar Ki Aisi Jaadugari

Chaand Khila Chupke Se

Pyaar Hua Chupke Se

Kyon Naye Lag Rahe Hain Ye Dharti Gagan

Maina Poochha To Boli Ye Pagli Pawan

Pyaar Hua Chupke Se

Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Kyon Naye Lag Rahe Hain Ye Dharti Gagan

Maina Poochha To Boli Ye Pagli Pawan ...

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

updated next part ,pls read it and comment it.ur comemnts inspired me lots.

all my sleint readers pls press the liked button also.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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