*Believe In Love* ~RN Short Story~ Part 10 pg 34 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago

sare parts jyada bade nahi the...isi liye thoda thoda karr ke maine padh liya finally...n Thank god...RN mil gaye...

warna...pahle toh main hairan...pareshan thi ki...yeh raj ko pehle se hi kyoun maar diya...

par wo toh suspense tha na...n finally apne rajveer sir sahi salamat hai...aur Naina se bhi mil gaye...

cont soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful part
loved it
Thanks for long update


Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
so raj is making to plan with his gangs to catch the culprits
but somehow kashish came over there and gets to know that raj dont love her
she was hurt but when raj tells her baout his love naina and also about kashish's dad that how is ruining his own motherland kashish understands him
they both goes to the orplange where naian works
finally raj and naina met wow
its really great
plz cotn soon and pm me



Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

awesome bharti...too good...😊



Originally posted by: nisha1984

nice part

so finally Raj-Naina met once again
update soon



Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

arey ye toh 9th part update ho gaya hai...!!! aur maine abhi tak first part bhi nahi padha...

ruko...main sare uds read karr ke comments karrti hun...


Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Bharti

Thanx for the pm..😊
I never came across this RN fiction before.read it for the first time today..😃
The prologue reminded me of a movie called Sainik starring Akshay..I have seen it recently on Zee-Cinema..😃
well all the parts were written well.RN scenes were really gud..chalo jahan tak maine pada RN mil hi gaye hain..😃 baaki readers ki tarah mujhe suspense mein nahin rehna pada..😆😆
Pls continue soon
Bye



Thnx for reading n commenting guyz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

HI BHARTI🤗


NICE UD😛

FINALLY RN MILL GAYE 😳...CHALO LAMBA INTAZAR NAHI KARNA PADA 😆

FEELS SAD FOR KASHISH😒

THANXX FOR PM😃
AYUSHI..⭐️



Originally posted by: raheelu


thanx
i read 2 parts of this fic really nice


Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

helo di😊

nice update 👏
finally rn met eachother after a very long period of time😊👏
waiting for the next part 😳
continue soon😊
shreya😊


Originally posted by: -purnima-

Read 9 parts in one go 😆😆... must say a wonderful job 👏👏..thanx to index...reading.got easier 😃😃😃...

i was abt to faint after reading intro 😆😆... Captain ko pehle hi dead kardiya 😭😭...but it was good to have him in first part itself 😍😳
😳
captain was quite fast in confessing i thot he will take ages before he confesses 😆😆😆...& wedding too 😳😳 ...

Good to see everything getting well in end 😳😳😃... Captain finally getting his love 😃😃

Loved reading it throughout 😃😃😃👏👏




Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

nice part

Raj wants to make sure that his planning is perfect so that their mission can be executed perfectly.
Kashish finds out the truth about Raj and naina. Although she is hurt, she agress to help Raj in his mission
Raj and naina finally meet each other after such a long time. They are both lost in each other.
please continue soon


Originally posted by: prachimishra85

Beautiful update Khushi... I somewhat had a crying feeling in the end

Thanks for the PM
❤️ Prachi


Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

sare parts jyada bade nahi the...isi liye thoda thoda karr ke maine padh liya finally...n Thank god...RN mil gaye...

warna...pahle toh main hairan...pareshan thi ki...yeh raj ko pehle se hi kyoun maar diya...

par wo toh suspense tha na...n finally apne rajveer sir sahi salamat hai...aur Naina se bhi mil gaye...

cont soon.


Thnx for reading n comment guyz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10




The gang reached the venue , naina wear a bhurka so that no one recognize her , thy enter the party venue n kashish introduce naina as her frnd. All were enjoying the party but the gang knew thr plan thy hv to stop n arrest eagle as he was planning for another blast in the city to create terror, so thr main aim is to stop him first.

They go towards a Secret locked room when main Guard stops them and says that thy are not allow to enter kashish tries to force him but he dnt, raj while returning gave a look to that guard.

Guard tells his men to keep an eye on him and asks him to keep an eye on Raj's friends as well and to kill the one who comes in thr way as per the orders.
As thy get to know that raj is alive n his coming thr to destroy thr plan.

Eagle was also there in the party n disguised himself as an old man.

Alekh n huda meet naina and eagle comes and asks about sujal/raj so they tells that he was njoying the party with kashish.

Later in party raj and kashish were talking n kashish shares his experience and kashish enjoys the experience and fights with raj when he doesn't respond well but later apologises for it and explains that she is excited as she has never been to a fair, so raj praises her nicelyand she becomes happy.

Later raj's friends come and they all talk, but in a way that no one can say they are talking naina gives raj the map of secret room(as thy supposed that the planning is going on in that room n bomb was there only) but doesn't tell where she got it from and raj leaves after a while and his friends catch on ajinkya(kashish's brother n right hand of eagle),
they all throw chilli in his eyes (in a friendly way).

Raj and naina secretly reaches the secret room but guards doens't allow them again n thy hv to return.

There is a dance show, in which Raj and Naina manages to get the msg to ali abt a place where Raj will wait for him they both (Raj and ali leave) while kashish engages ajinkya.

They met and then discusses if anything happened which indicates the plan of Eagle.

They realise that Mr. Singh(kashish's father) will go first so Raj sends a letter through a waiter and calls Singh there, whe he comes there and sees Raj he gets shocked and all Raj's friends surround him
so Singh says that he did all this to save his Daughter's life, when kashish comes and says "i m ready to do anything for my country" and tells Raj" i m with u".

Singh says that "i don't know how they'll plant the bomb" but knows that they'll do it when he (singh) will annonce abt thr success in the buisness n all get busy cheering him.

Raj says till "i m here they won't be able to do so" and assures singh that if he has eagle in front then don't forget that a soldier who loves his motherland is with him.

Kashish n Singh walk away and Rajveer's friends walk up to him and Rajveer says that he wants to search eagle's room and his friends say that you have people keeping an eye on you and Rajveer nodds his head and they all look to where everyone is dancing and alekh is dressed up as Rajveer adn dancing with kashish and they all are happy and then all the friends go there and dance while Rajveer searches eagle's room and finds a proofs against him.

Ali ask raj to not go alone n there comes his better half naina n ask to accompany him , thy both goes n search the room n finds sum confidential documents there , on the other side all were busy in dancing n thy think that alekh is raj so was relaxed that he's dancing n other gang was also there.All his friends are in the room and raj puts down the documents.

Raj calls the army chief to surround the venue as thy are abt to start the mission, slowly the army starts entering the venue.

Raj then says that this is eagle's plan to destroy all and huda and alekh say that we cant let this happen and alekh says lets kill eagle before he execute his plan. Raj says that let eagle do whatever he has too and then Raj says that he will not let him succeed this time.


Raj and all smile and Raj says though i need the key which is with the main pandit and kashish says that i will get the key for you and Raj says that okay you go and then alekh says that Raj i really dont think that we should trust kashish that much. Raj just looks on.

Scene changes to Ali asking naina to eat and she says that no i am not hungry and Ali says are you for serious and she says that actually i have kept a manat and Ali is like what?? Why?? naina tells her the whole deal and Ali is like so this is all for raj? naina says that for his Win!

Scene changes with raj following kashish and kashish goes to some different guard and the guard gives him a key and kashish smiles while raj thinks whether kashish is good or bad.

Alekh then comes and sits next to naina dressed as raj and naina asks about raj then ...

Raj back in the party and kashish comes and raj asks him whether he got the key and kashish says i go to do something and not accomplish it is not possible and then gives raj the key and then raj says that is this the right key or something like that and kashish is like what do you mean and then raj take out his gun and kashish is like what are you doing and then raj says that i dont trust you anymore and kashish is shocked and after that he both tie kashish up and then raj tells ali that he is about to go and steal the bomb and until then don't let kashish move from here. Then ali and raj hug and raj leaves...

Alekh and huda sitting with naina and they talk about where raj is and naina wonders why he isnt here.

Raj enters the room and there are guards in front of him but he goes in and a guard turns and goes into the room also and then raj stops and the guard just going in as to raj blends in and then moves on.



Ajinkya and Eagle are also walking around and ajinkya goes somewhere when huda gets up and starts asking him what is gonna happen tommarow and starts interrogating him and eagle comes there and he is like what happened huda and huda asks again while on other side naina asks alekh about why ajinkya went there and alekh is like dont worry huda will take care of him and raj on the otherside is planning on getting inside is about to get in.

On another side Ali standing and kashish say that wait you guys are making a big mistake. ali says let us decide what we are doing and then kashish sees a gun on the floor and scene switches to raj..
raj gets to the place and he prays to god and he prays for a while and then they show raj taking out his bag and taking everything out to switch the bomb and he does and on other side ali i guess unconsious and he is all tied up and kashish takes gun and leaves.

There is a guard that comes and looks everywhere and raj does manage to escape but right when he is about to leave kashish points the gun at him and says that stop raj! raj stops

In the room
Kashish asks Raj to stop.. and then walks up to raj and they have a lil talk..
R: tum..
K: we'll talk about that later..
R: but how'd you come in??
K: juKt aK i will go outKide.. letK go.. and they run..
The guards heard sumthing and decide to go in and chekc it out..but dnt found any1
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In the party..
Huda is dancing and is blocking Ajinkya's way out.. but Ajinkya leaves either way.. Ajinkya is on his way to the tent..

A guard came n informs ajinkya

G: somebody tried to enter the room..
A: what?? how did you know..
G: one of the soldier is hurt..
A: what? oh god.. (he immidiately enters the room n checks in box) n was shock to see that the bomb was not there.. im sure it was raj's friends.. tell guards to kill everyone one by one..
G: yes.. and leaves.
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Party..
N: Raj hasnt come yet.. and ajinka has gone back to the room also.. we should do something..
Alekh: no.. Raj said that he will come back here..
N: and he also said that until he comes dont let ajinkya move.. what if something happens to Raj??
ali comes running..
Ali: alekh,huda.. that kashish.. ran away to raj after tying me up.. umm i mean he is behind Raj..
Huda: i knew it..
N: if you dont move.. i will go and help him..

Huda and ali decides to go.. but a guard was listening to all this.. and he fires a shot at them.. and just then Kashish comes and saves them.. but Huda and other dont know that..
Huda: good that you came.. we were looking for you..
Kashish: you are mistaken..
Naina: where is Raj
Kashish: why would i kill Raj.. infact.. i saved you guys..
Naina: (holds her tightly) i wont what will you do.. huh??
They all start fighting.. raj come and stops them..
Raj: hwat are you guys doing??
Ali: this is the one who followed you..
Raj: no ali.. she saved me infact.. you are mistaken..
Kashish: and that guard is trying to kill them now..
Raj: i know and I (his eyes stop at guard.. and guard runs.. but raj shot him.. and he falls.. no one will come in my way now..
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Eagle: now I can destroy everything easily.. hahahaha.. we must leave before everyone finds out about bomb..
Ajinkya enters: sir...sir...the bomb is not there..

Eagle goes to the room immidiately n checks the box himself n was shocked to see that ...

Raj enters: i told you lalaji(to eagle).. no one can stop me now from destroying u..
he takes off his fake mustache.. and everything else..

Eagle:Captain Rajveer singh shekhawat??????

They both start fighting...

Ajinka runs out but the gang get him back...

Raj grabs him tightly .. n he asks him for mercy..

Raj: i wont leave to but i will punish you so that no one else will dare to do such again.. you have killed everyone's trust.. now Law will decide ur fate.. i wont kill you at one condition..surrender urself to the army n the army enters to arrest him n take him away...

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Time to return back..

Raj n Naina walking towards each other...

Naina: you won..
Raj: only cuz of your mannat.. thanx.. did you eat??

Naina: no.. that..
Raj: we'll talk later.. first lets go eat.. (they start walking.. rest stop) are you not planning to come and eat?? (they all start walking).

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They return back to their home, their was a huge welcome party for raj n naina n thr successful Love.

THE END..

Note : Sorry For the Late Updates Guyz n Pardon Me For any Mistake.
Waiting for comments
Love
Khushi

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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant awesome love your story
Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful story👏
awesome part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ending...
the story was so nice and I enjoyed reading every part of it...
do pm me if you are planning to write any other RN story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very beautiful update Khushi...
So Raj succeeded in trapping Lala and RN got back together...
Beautiful part and nice ending...
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Posted: 13 years ago
chalo...finally sab set ho gaya...
Lala ko Raj ne akhir fasa hi diya...
n RN bhi mil gaye...
HAPPY ENDING...
vaise bhi happy ending mujhe jyada achhi lagti hai...
Nice part n Awesome fic...
Thank you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is good
lala got trapped by raj and the best part is raj and naina are together
the story is really beautifully carried away and it end also with a nice note
plz cont with more RN ffs and pm me

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