MJHT FF: G.O.L . . A ❤️ Triangle (LastCh - Pg.107) - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
awesome update......
nupur is so nice......
wat to mayank jealous.....
naturally about the new guy......
but related to nupur....
can't wait for the next part.......
plzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
great part....dat new guy must be adiraj i guess....luved it kanky....
Edited by mayur.forever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

great part....dat new guy must be adiraj i guess....luved it kanky....



Nope, that's Samrat! And Nupur's not gonna be with him and make Mayank feel jealous! 😆 Thanks, btw!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
short update dear... but looking forward for the next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
awesome update Kanky..do update sooner:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Hey guys!! Here's the 4th update!! I'm not satisfied with the feed back! 😕 Ya toh main PM's kamm bhejti hun ya mera FF pakau hai! 😆 😕 Anyway, there you go! I need long long comments haan! 😛 Enjoy! 😳

Chapter - 4

The next day . . Gunjan came to college. She went for the cheer leading practice, came back . . changed her uniform and went to her class. The professor called her.

"Yes Ma'am?" she asked.

"There's a new admission in secon year, Nutrition, Samrat. You need to be his guide for the whole week." she commanded.

"Sure Ma'am." Gunjan replied.

"Here's his Bio Data."

"Thanks."

* * *
Gunjan went to the canteen with Mayank and there she saw Samrat! Samrat was the guy she bumped into a day before. She left Mayank aside and went up to him.

"Hey dude, Gunjan." she moved her hand worth.

"Hey, Samrat! You are my guide, right?" he asked.

And they shaked hands. 😳


* * *

It was Gunjan and her twin bro, Uday's birthday the next day. Mayank went to Nupur's place in order to pick her up.

Nupur came down the stair case, looking no less than an angel in a cute purple short dress. Mayank looked at her in awe. 😆 😳

"Kya hai?" she asked.

"Nupsie . . tune ITNI lambi dress kabse peheni chalu kardi?" 😉

"First time peheni hai, idiot."

"I know meri jaan, koi baat nhn . . isme bhi tu BAHUT hi zyada sundar lag rahi hai. As usual. Chal ab chalte hain." he said and made his way out.

Nupur blushed. 😳

* * *

At Gunjan and Uday's Place -

Mayank and Nupur had arrived and all the guests were there too. Gunjan was looking very pretty in her red dress with her hair left open. Mayank was dumbfounded. 😕 Nupur was standing next to him, sensing what he felt.

"Go ahead, tell how how beautiful she's looking." Nupur whispered in his ears in a cherishing tone though with a heavy heart.

"Ya . . " Mayank replied and without even looking at Nupur, left.

"It's her birthday today Nupur, never mind. Mayank use zyada attention de raha hai toh kya hua! She's his girl, anyway and is way more important." she thought. 🥺


* * *

Mayank and Gunjan went to the dance floor. All the couples in the party were dancing. Uday asked Nupur for a dance.

"Come let's dance Nupur." Uday offered his hand.

"Sure." Nupur held his hand and went to the dance floor along with him.

The song being played was "Mere Haath Mein" from the movie Fanaa. ❤️

Mere haath mein . . . tera haath ho . . saari jannatien . . mere saath hoo . . (Mayank twirled Gunjan around)

Tu jo paas ho, phir kya ye jahan . . (Uday and Nupur enjoyed dancing! Nupur's eyes were on Mayank though. Only Mayank ❤️)

Tere pyaar men ho jaun . . . . fanaa . . . (Gunjan and Mayank wre having quite a close dance now. Mayank kissed her on the forehead. Tears brimmed out of Nupur's eyes and she left, leaving Uday know it all. He follwed her. 😭 )

* * *

Nupur sat on one of the chairs placed in the lawn where no one was to be seen, she was really very upset.

"Why am I so madly in love him? Why? That to when I know he's not gonna be mine, anyway." she thought.

Uday had come by then, he sat next to her.

"Nupur . . ek baat bolun?"

"Arey Uday, tum? Chalo, andar chalte hain." she said and wiped off her tears.

"Nahi, ruko . ."

"Kya hua?"

"Ye toh tum bataogi!"

"Kuch nhn, chalo."

"I'm gonna give a FREE advice now. Sunlo. Em like your older brother. right? So listen to me."

"I'm listening."

"You can't stop loving him. Right? But at least you can stop this to yourself? He really does care for you and seeing you like this would by no means make him happy. And you NEED to be normal. Jab chaho, is baare mein mujhse baat kar sakti hun. Em always there." he said. 😊

"Thanks a lot Uday! I really do need someone." she said and hugged.

"I know!"

After a couple of more minutes, they joined the party again. 😊

* * *

Precap: ~ Nupur gets drunk
~ Mayank and Gunjan fight
~ Mayank takes Gunjan and Nupur out for dinner, planning to propose Gunjan.

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How's it guys? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment! And hit the like tab too! 😛

Love,
Jiah (Kanky) 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
hey kanky

haan

nups ko jyaada lamba dress nahi mila😉😉

then mayu ang gunji dance

kitna short tha

lamba hota toh aur likthi naa

chalo mein precap s khush

nahi hoon aur hoon

tum toh mayank aur gunjan ko mila rahi jabki tumhe mayur ko milaana chahiyr

he shud not propose gunji but nups

waiting for nups to get drunk

indirectly waiying for nxt update

love pebo
Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Hey Kanky..
really cool update..aww poor Nupur,
she is so upset :(
but yeah glad to know that Uday is such a sweetheart:)
and there for her...:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

hey kanky

haan

nups ko jyaada lamba dress nahi mila😉😉

then mayu ang gunji dance

kitna short tha

lamba hota toh aur likthi naa

chalo mein precap s khush

nahi hoon aur hoon

tum toh mayank aur gunjan ko mila rahi jabki tumhe mayur ko milaana chahiyr

he shud not propose gunji but nups

waiting for nups to get drunk

indirectly waiying for nxt update

love pebo



Bhagwan ne meri murad puri ki . . mujhe lambaaa comment mila! 😆 😛 Thanks!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: myownarea

Hey Kanky..
really cool update..aww poor Nupur,
she is so upset :(
but yeah glad to know that Uday is such a sweetheart:)
and there for her...:)



Thanks Di . . Uday will play the cupid too. 😉

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