MJHT FF: G.O.L . . A ❤️ Triangle (LastCh - Pg.107) - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part Jiah.👏..
read ur ff frm startin...
waitin 4 Nupsi 2 get drunk.😉..
pls update soon🤗...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

lovely part Jiah.👏..
read ur ff frm startin...
waitin 4 Nupsi 2 get drunk.😉..
pls update soon🤗...
-supriya



Thanks gal!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Kanky wow Uday is so sweet lovd him well, feel really sad for Nupur the part was very nice thanks for the pm do cont soon
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ur welcome😃
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Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

hey Kanky

</div>wow
Uday is so sweet
lovd him
well, feel really sad for Nupur
the part was very nice
thanks for the pm
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do cont soon



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Posted: 15 years ago
awww...uday can be so sweet at times....luved it when he consoled nupur...like a typical big bro....great one kanky..........
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Originally posted by: mayur.forever

awww...uday can be so sweet at times....luved it when he consoled nupur...like a typical big bro....great one kanky..........



Thanks!! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hola guys!! Here another chapater of G.O.L . . . I'm sorry . . I gotta omit the ManJan fight part! 😆 It doesn't go well with my story, I'm so sorry guys! 😊 Anyways, here's the UD . . enjoy! 😊


Chapter 5 -

"Chalien Nupur?" Mayank came to Nupur and asked her if they could leave the place.

"Na Mayank . . main UD k saath jaungi."

"Par!"

"Sorry yaar . . aaj main UD k saath hi jaungi, see ya at college tomorrow."

"Fine. Bye!! Ghar pahunch ke phone zarur karde na nahi toh raat ke 2:30 baje . . shehnai nahi . . tere ghar ki ghanti baj jayegi . . jo hum bajayenge!" he warned her 😆


"I love him . . .I love him . . I love him . . kitna pyaara hai ye!!" she thought!

"Nupur . . main yehi hun abhi . . abhi se mere sapne dekhne lagi tu!"

"Shut up and get out!" 😆

"Ya fine, bye!" Mayank kissed her on the cheek and left. 😃

😳😳

* * *

Nupur indeed was left heartbroken that day! 😕 Uday took her to the Juhu beach . . she took a deeeeeeep breath . . .

"Feeling better?" Uday asked.

"Ya bhai. Thanks!!' she said and hugged him.

"Par Mayank toh tumhari apni behen ke saath hai phir tum . . " she was a bit confused, though Uday knew what she meant to say! 😕

"Cause I very well no my sis, Gunjan. I'm not sure if she really loves Mayank but she still doesn't know that what she wants in life. From life. LIFE!! Matlab Mayank se bhi." Uday told her and smiled. 😃


* * *

Next morning, Mayank called up Nupur . . rather . . next afternoon but Nupur was still asleep! She was an insomaniac! Never slept on time and whenever did . . got up late the next day! 😆

"Jaago Mohan Pyaara" Mayank shouted on the phone.

Nupur finally picked up the phone.

"Yes Mayank!"

"College kab aa rahi hai?"

"Meri tabiyat kharab hai, main nahi aaungi aaj. Ab mujhe sone de. Bye!"

* * *

The moment Mayank heard "tabiyat kharaab", he rushed to Nupur's house. 😕

Nani opened the door.

"Hi Nani!!"

"Namaste Champ! Aa gayi yaad humaari?" 😕

"Sorry na Nani . . aajkal busy chal raha hun."

"Haan haan! Toh ab kyun aaya hai?"

"Nupur ki tabiyat kharab hai na!"

"Nahi toh . . wo toh abhi tak maze se so rahi hai! Pagal banaya usne tujhe!" 😆

"NUPUR!!" 😡


* * *

Mayank entered her room . . she was sleeping . . sleeping like a Lil baby. 😳 The blanket was on floor . .the pillow was about to fall down too . . she was sleeping peacefully . . 😳 Mayank who had come there with the intentions to scold her, instead . . sat down net to her . . plainly looking at her. He noticed that he eyes were moist, her eye lids were wet and the pillow was wet too.

"She doesn't even temme what bothers her so much!" 😕

Nupur still had a smile on her face, maybe cause of some dream! 😳 And unknowingly instead of the pillow, she caught hold of Mayank's hand and rested her head on his lap. 😳

"Nupur . . . uth!" Mayank slowly and lovingly said, playing with her hair. 😳

"Sone do!"

"Nupur!" 😲

She jerked and got up!!

"MAYANK! . . What are YOU doing here! I thought Nani hai." 😕 😳

"Oh wo . . tune jhuth kyun bola ki teri tabiyat kharab hai? Main ekdam se yahan aa gaya!" 😕

"I wasn't lying . . I'm having a terrible headache."

"Aww . . em sorry!" 😔

Mayank made her lie down and gave her the medicine.

"Go to sleep. I'll come in th evening again. Bye!" he said and left. 😃

Nupur had tears in her eyes.

* * *

"I could'nt tell her about my plans to propose Gunjan AGAIN! Aaj shaam ko bata hi dunga." he thought.


* * *

Precap: - Nupur helps Mayank in buying a ring for Gunjan.
- Samrat falls for Gunjan
- Uday and Nupur . . . Mayank misunderstand the entire thingy
- Mayank proposes Gunjan

I hope I wrote something well, well enough this time/ 😳 Please do comment and hit the like tab 😊

Love,
Kanky <3
Edited by Jiah.Angel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part Jiah..................so nice to see Mayank caring so much for Nupur..........and i like this sensible Uday 2.............
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice part Kanks :) really sweet part :)

love the way Mayank cares for her:)

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