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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
so true
ksg is my only armaan
he is the one
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
awesome os
plz write some more of it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Tera dard.....Mera dard


She got up with a jerk'as she felt something'but what was that'she put an hand on her heart to feel something'she felt that some one had wrenched her heart in his fist'.she gasped'.the pain was immense but why still'.why still she could feel it'why'she had thought that things had changed now between both of them'but some things never changed even if u want them to be'she sighed and pulled back blanket from herself and stand up''..her thinking senses were not functioning at that time''..all she was listening and obeying was her heart''..which lead her to some where at 1.30 in night.


It was raining heavily and her car was broken down since past two days'.so walked on the silent roads'getting wet from head to toe'but who cares'bcz the storm in her heart was more powerful than outside.


After twenty minutes she found herself in front of the closed door all wet'''..all she was thinking at that moment was that what made her came here'''.what was the force behind it''.what was that''.may be she knew that very well but did not want accept it''..she pushed the door lightly''.it was open''.she took a step forward and sneaked peak inside.


She saw the lounge all upside down'every thing was being replaced from it original place'cushions on the floor'glass table was shattered on the floor'all the glass material was spread all around the floor'no space to move even'.then her eyes stopped on a figure sitting on the floor mid of al this mess'hiding his face among his folded legs'shivering body'she felt poked a needle in her heart again'.then voices noised in her mind:


" mere shadi ho chuke hai armaan'."


"mere shadi ho chuke hai armaan'".


" mere shadi ho chukka hai armaan'".


Her voice of today's incident was crying loud in her heart

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She looked at him'and a tear scrolled down on her cheek'she sighed'.


" mai ne kitna khud sejhot bola kay sab kuch badal gea hai'.par nahe'kuch bhi to nahe badla'sivae mere naam kay'ajj bhi mai apne dil mai us ka dard mehsoos kar sakte hon'aj bhi jab vo takleef mai tha'mera dil ro raha tha'us ki ankh se gira ek ek anso..mere dil pe gir raha tha'.or us kay bina guzarta ek ek lamha'.meri zindge pe bojh banta ja raha hai'.kitna smjhaya khud ko'kitna'par kiun ye dil nahe smjhta kay zindge ne hum dono kay lie kuch or te kia hai'or hmai hmesh kay ek dosre kay lie ajnabi kar dia hai'".


Suddenly wind blew and passed through his hairs, made them spread on his forehead'.this was used to be the sigh of some ones presence who was his life'butnow he could not believe on that sigh as it was the cruel life had snatched his life from his blood'but he did not know what had made to look above'.his wet and swollen eyes found her in front of him'.both wet painful eyes met each other'both broken heart met each other'


" ridhimaa'..". an unbelievable low sound echoed in the room'this word passed distant from his lips towards her ears'as nothing was between them.


"Armaan'." Replied with assurance.


He stood up and moved to her bare footed on the broken glasses''.on the other side she also moved to him, hurting her feet,making them blood'..both were taking slow steps to remove distance between them'.looking in each other's eyes'their feet bleeding but who was feeling anything but the presence of other.


They shorten the distance between them'.his eyes were complaining something to hers''her eyes were showing the loss of her life time'.tears were rushing down on both faces.


She raised her hand and wiped his tears'.her touch made him on his knees.


" tum jao yahan se''.

he turned his back to her.


She made him face her and the next moment she was hugging him......her hands around his neck.....her face sobbing on his shoulder.


Armaan " kiun ridhima.....kiun.....tum ne.....mujh se.....kiun".


He just broke in her embrace.


" armaan'.......plz....'..plz'.".

patting his back to make him calm.


Armaan " tumhai pta hai na kay mai tumhare bina nahe jee sakta.....phir".


Ridhima " tumhare bina mai kahan jee rahe hon armaan'.......agar sirf saans lene ko jena kehte hain to mai jee rahe hon".

she hugged him even tighter as she felt that he was getting calm in her arms.


Armaan " aisa kiun hua ridhima.........'.aisa hmare sath kaise ho sakta hai'.........humara pyar itna kamzor kaise parh gea ridhima.......'kiun'?".


Ridhima " shayad hmare pyar ko kise ki nazar lag gea armaan'..........zindge ne jo mzak hmare sath kia hai'..........vo hum dono ko sare zindge dukh kay siwa kuch nahe de ga.........'.hum kabhi khush nahe ho pae ge".


Armaan " aisa mat kaho ridhima'.........tum jante ho na kay tumhare khushi se barh kay mere lie kuch nahe hai..........'.promise me kay tum khush raho ge'........promise me'".


Ridhima " mere khushi to tum ho armaan'...........tumhare bina mai kaise khush reh sakte hon'..".


He rested his head on hr shoulder and hugged her back'......getting the warmth of her wet body.


Ridhima " armaan.......plz sambhalo apne app ko.......'mai tumhai aise nahe dekh sakte'..".


Armaan " ye tum keh rahe ho ridhima'..........kis se us ki sansain chen kar use zinda rehne kay lie kaise keh sakte hain".


Ridhima " jante hon armaan.........'par tum kiun nahe smajhte kay tumhare dil ka dard mai apne dil mai mehsos karte hon'..........tumhare ankh se gira har anso mere dil mai sue ban kay chubta hai'".


Armaan "kitne ajeb baat hai na ridhima'........hum dono mai se kise ki ghalti nahe hai...............'phir bhi sza hum dono ko sari zindge jhelne parhe ge'..".


Ridhima " kash ye vakt yehe tham jae'..........or dunya ki koi rasam'koi rivaj.............'mujhy tumhare bahon se dor jane pe majbor na kre'".


Armaan " kaashhh'''.". he sighed.


It looked that eyes of both of them had been dry or the tears had found some other way'the way through their hearts'.


All the words'all the explanations'all the complains had just finished'in each other's embrace'.it looked like they were living the moment of their life which may be never gonna come back or may be come back'.who knows what destiny had in its bucket for them'.may be this was the last time they were feeling each other bodies'.consoling each other souls'smelling their fragrance'.but it was also possible that time would bring them back at the same place in the same position with the same teary eyes but those could had been tears of happiness rather than sorrow.


May be this was also some of their exam of their love once again and after passing it successfully they would have been allowed to spend whole of their lives in each other's arms''like this''..forever and ever and ever and ever.

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Edited by zara-KSG-malik - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
yay i m the first one to comment
truly the one shot is fantastic...
seriously waqt ne dono ko dhoka de diya...😭
i loved it completely
update more One shots soon

love
debadrita
Edited by choco_pie92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: choco_pie92

yay i m the first one to comment
truly the one shot is fantastic...
seriously waqt ne dono ko dhoka de diya...😭
i loved it completely
update more One shots soon

love
debadrita

Hey...i was just editing it and u finished it.......cool...😆

thanks a lot.....😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: zara-KSG-malik

Hey...i was just editing it and u finished it.......cool...😆

thanks a lot.....😊



too fast....right?......kya karu kuch bhi AR update hota hai toh jaldi jaldi parne ka mann karta hai....
write more OS n yun hota toh kya hota....thats too good......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
This ws so Touching .. 😭 .. I jus luved it .. Zara dis 1 is superbbbbbb .. No words yaar .. Its simply fantastic .. 😊


Luv,
Mahnaz

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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Thank you very much....
for writing this OS
absolutly loved it...

Love
Sana... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Awesome shot

It was so touching

good job zara

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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
wow Zara i so loved it i felt like crying thinking abt Armaan here
it was jst beautiful
thanks for the pm

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