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Hi friends

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I will try to update next part as soon as possible....

Hi, friends

I am writing the update now...

Will post before 9:30 PM if I can write it...

Otherwise will update later...

And I made a pic for this FF... That I posted on page 1...

Have a look and tell me how it is...

loved it shreyu

Thanks Aru

I still need to learn it more, but basic sikhi iski mujhe khushi he...

Nice Pic .. Pls update soon ..

-Natasha

Hey friends…
Here is the update
I am glad that all of you liked last part… Hope same goes for this, too…

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Mayank woke up in the morning and went in room to check on nupur. She was still sleeping. He didn't wake her as he knew she must be in bad condition after drinking last night.

He freshened himself up in other washroom and went in kitchen.

M: Madam uth ke pehle pna sar pakdegi. Itna hangama jo raat ko usne kiya uska to use kuchh andaja hi nahi hoga.
He puts pot on the gas to prepare coffee for her.
M: I hope ye uske hangover pe kuchh effect kare. Aur ab mujhe bhukh bhi lag rahi he. Roj subah to Nupur nasta ready kar ke mujhe kitchen me bulati thi. Aaj vese bhi last day he. Aur Nupur soi hui he. To kyun na me uske liye kuchh special karu?
He starts rummaging the fridge and other drovers to see what is there in kitchen?
M: Oh God help me. Cooking is really not my cup of tea.
After sometime, he finally finds a packet of ready to eat noodles.
M: Noodles? Chinese to Nupur ka favorite he. Abhi is packet se kam chala leta hu. Bad me khud banana sikh jauga.

He carefully follows all the instructions and the noodles become ready in a few minutes. He takes the mugs of coffee. He goes and sets up the dining table.

M: Finally all set…
He stretches his collr… "Not bad Mayank Sharma. Ab jaa ke dekhta hu ki Nupur uthne ke mood me he ya nahi?"

He goes in his room and sees that she is still sleeping.

He goes near bed and bends down on his knee. She was looking so cute. A hair strand was coming repetitively on her face, disturbing her subtly. Mayank brushed his finger on her forehead and moved that hair strand. Nupur smiled in sleep.

Mayank patted her cheek, "Nupur, jago."
Nupur opened her one eye. "Mayank?"
M: Ha, me. Chalo, jaldi se jago ab.
N: Sone do na Mayank. Mujhe sar me bahot dard he.
M: Isi liye keh raha hu, ki pehle chalk e coffee pi lo. Aur nasta kar lo, us se better feel hoga.
N: Coffee? Nasta? Kyun? Me bimar thodi na hu?
She checks her temperature by keeping hand on her forehead and neck. "Sachhi, Mayank, me bilkul thik hu."
Mayank gets up and sits on bed on the other end.
M: Ha ha… Tumne kal raat puri 1 bottle whisky pi lee thi, us ke alawa tum BILKUL thik ho, Nupur.
N: Aur nahi to kya? Mera sirf sir dard kar raha he, varna me Bilkul… (Suddenly realized what he actually spoke.) Kya? 1 BOTTLE WHISKY???
M: Relax Nupur. Chillao mat. Mere kaan 2 hi he.
Nupur got tensed and worried. "He bhagvan, kya hua tha mujhe? Mene 1 bottle whisky pi lee. Aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala? Mayank, tumne…
M: Mene? Mene kuhh nahi kiya, Nupur.
N: Tumne mujhe roka kyun nahi?
M: Arre, khud to controllable hi nahi thi. Me kya kar pata tha? Upar se ghar bhi aane ke liye mana kar diya tha tumne to… Kya keh rahi thi? Haan, Kala Bandar. Me is kale Bandar ke sath kahi nahi jaugi.
N: Kala Bandar? Kon kala Bandar?
M: (Angrily pointing towards himself) Me.
N: Kya? Tum?
M: I mean, tumne mujhe kala Bandar kaha tha.
N: Aur mene kya kya kh tha? Bolo na? (Teasing him)
M: Aur… aur bhi bahot sare natak kiye the. Baad me aram se batauga. Oh God! Mera o dimag bhi kaam nahi kar raha tha tumhe dekhne ke bad.
N: Esa to mene kya kiya tha? Umm… Mayank?
M: Bolo?
N: Kahi mene kuchh… ulta… sidha to… nahi kiya tha na?
M: Nahi, bilkul nahi, Nupur.
N: Thank God.
M: (Goes near her and shouts in her ear) Tumne sab ULTA hi kiya tha. Sidha kuchh bhi nahi. SAMJI?
N: Ouch… Ab tum bhi dheere bolo, Mayank. Mere bhi 2 hi kaan he. Extra kaan nahi he, jo tijori (locker of bank) me rakhe he.
M: Thik he. Ab chalo. Coffee already thandi ho gayi hogi. Tum freh ho ke aao, me coffee garam karta hu.
N:Ok.
They go and had coffee and noodles. After drinking water, Nupur was praising Mayank's cooking.
N: Hmm… Delicious tha , Mayank. Ye tumne banaya tha na?
M: Ha.
N: Aww… You are so sweet. Thank you so much.
M: Jyada khush mat ho. Mene ready to cook packet me se banaya he.
N: Kya? Me tumhe chhodugi nahi.
She stands up and goes to hit him.
Mayank also stands up and runs away from her. "Arre, baba, ab mene kya kiya he?"
N: Me itne dino se tumhe khud apne hathon se bana ke khilati rahi, Tum 1 baar mere liye ye nahi kar sakte the?
She also chases him.
Now both were in hall, running around sofa.
M: Lekin Nupur… Suno to… Me khud banata, to vo khane layak hota ya nahi vo me nahi janta.
N: Aha ha… Vese to bade multi talented ho. Khana banana nahi ikh sakte?
M: (Thinking) Ise hua kya he? Kal ki whisky abhi tak nahi utri kya?
N: Aur kal…
M: Vo hi to.. kal tumne jyada pee lit hi. Ab shant ho jao.
N: Me shant kyu ho jau? Mene jo kiya vo kiya. Magar tum kya kar rahe the? Vo to batao?
M: Me? Me kya kar raha tha? Me to tumhe ghar vapis lane ki koshish kar raha tha.
By now both were in garden. Running around a tree like 5 years old.
N: Nahi.. Usse pehle. Us Suhani ke sath kya kar rahe the?
M: Me to bas uske sath baat kar raha tha Nupur.
N: Ha ha… Mene dekha tha, bade gale mil rahe the usse.
M: Arre vo Adhiraj ki fianc he. Me bas use Congrats kar raha tha.
N: Really?
M: Haan. Nupur. Sach.
By now, Nupur gets hold of him. She snatches him by collar. "Congrat door se bhi wish kar sakte he, Mr. Mayank Sharma."
Mayank was horrified by her anger. "Arre, Nupur Sorry yaar."
Nupur leaves him and stands there pouting.
M: Of ho, Nupur. Don't behave like a child.
N: Achha, to ab me bachho jese behave karti hu? Jao, me tumse baat nahi karugi.
She goes in house and Mayank stands there watching at her going. He throws his hands in air. "Great. Gussa me us pe tha, because of Poorab, aur ab vo mujhe blame kar rahi he. Oh God, help me."
He goes inside and finds Nupur's room locked. He goes in his room and starts his laptop. He wanted to chat with old friends.
He found all of his friends online except Nupur.
He started chatting.
Ammyrocks: Hi all. How are you?
(Okay, this is for you Faru… You complained na, ki me tum sab ko Mayur se nahi milwati apne FF me… So here you go… I have included all my friends and tried to include all who read this FF… Sorry if I missed you name.)
Faru: Hi, Ammy, how are you?
Nidzy: Oh, look who is here? Aaj kafi dino ke baad sab ki yaad ayi?
Aruna: Long time, Ammy… Everything okay?
Ammyrocks: Yup guys. Fine.
Sam: Lagta to nahi he. Otherwise you are not this slow in replying, man.
Nivi: Yes, Sam, I agree yar.
Ruchi: Ab bol bhi do, Ammy, what's wrong?
AmmyRocks: Kuchh nahi yaar. Meri girlfriend cum best friend mujh se naraj ho gayi.
Neetu: To mana lo na?
Achoose: Haan. What you are waiting for?
Zarfishan: Why are you spending time chatting with us?
AmmyRocks: Lekin galti uski he.
Gopi: To kya use baat nahi karoge kabhi?
Alini: Of ho, Ammy… Love is about that only. Even if you are not wrong, you have to go to your loved one making her understand that.
Rakhi: I agree, all of you. Ammy, jaldi jao, aur use mana ke vapis aao. Phir hum sab se baat karna. Okay?
AmmyRocks: Please guys. I need my friends right now.
Anjus: We understand Ammy, but you will have to go to her, na?
Daniella: Haan. Chalo jao ab.
AngelArti: Or call her. And try to talk to her.
AmmyRocks: Hum 1 ghar me he, aur vo apna karma bandh kar ke beth gayi he.
Samira: Budhdhu, ladki jab karma bandh karti he, to uska matlab hota he, "Open the door by any means, I am waiting for you to manaofy me."
Divya (myownarea): Haan. Ye Newton's fourth law of love he, Ammy.
Sariska: Aur agar tum dhe ghante ke andar uske paas nahi hoge, to uske bad…..
Ridds: You are in danger, Ammy.
AmmyRocks: Kya?
Sharma.nat: Haan. Mere ek dost ko uski galti ki vajah se bahot pachhtan pada tha.
Jasmeet: Be serious Ammy, go immediately.
AmmyRocks: Tum sab mujhe console kar rahe ho ya dara rahe ho?
Senny: Aur ek kaam karna, Ammy, uske paas khali hath mat jana. Roses, ya hocolate kuchh le ke jana. Ok?
Bhavna: Oh wow…. Aur Red Roses le ke jana, Ammy.
Chelsi: Aur chocolate kon si le jaoge? Let me think…
Tasnim: Tobleron.
AmmyRocks: She doesn't like Tobleron much.
Shruti: Really? But I love Tobleron. Ok, Does she like Bounty?
Shafoo: Haa, I love Bounty… Aur use bhi jyada, mujhe Munch paand he.
Maloo: Or may be, Kitkat.
Pebo: Yummy… mujhe koi chocolates do na jaldi… Varna me rougi.
AmmyRocks: She likes Bounty and Dairymilk.
Sehrish: Great. Even me. Now go.
Divya (Divya_KalDivya): Aur dekho, use manane ke liye koi gana bhi gana. She will be impressed.
Divya (Dbr_Kimchi): Haan. Aur konsa gana gaoge? Ummm….
Kirti: Stop it, yaar. Ammy, get going. Jaldi….
Auroni: Tell her hi from our side. Though we don't know who she is.
Leena: Haan. Would love to talk to her too.
AmmyRocks: Well, I will surely pass the message.
Radhika: Aur tum aaj kal dikhai kyun nahi dete. You are back after a MONTH, yar.
Shweta (Cool_Shwets): We all missed you, yar, And we all are missing Ridzy too.
Mahima: Any ways, Got to go now. Have to read for exam of tomorrow.
AmmyRocks: Best of luck Mahima.
Dua: Aur tumko bhi Best of Luck, Ammy…
Pallavi: Haan. Tumhari to sab se tough exam he abhi!
Natasha: Aur agar is me Pappu pass nahi hua to kabhi nahi hoga… 😆
Mayur-Arti.4eva: Let him breathe, friends.
$hrey@: Ya, Ammy, all the best. Ab jaldi jao. Bye.
AmmyRocks: Bye, all of you. I am thankful to you for your tips. Will try my best to manaofy her.
Mayank puts down his laptop… "Of ho! Ye puri Girls team ne to mujhe aur bhi dara diya! Ja ke dekhta hu, Nupur ne darwaja khola bhi ya nahi?"
He goes to her room and sees the door was just stopped, nor locked. He pushes the door slightly and sees Nupur talking on phone. "Lekin maa."
Mayank senses that something is wrong. He silently goes and stands beside her. Nupur looks at him. She had pain in her eyes.
Mayank signaled her to ask what was wrong.
She just continued talking on phone. "Nahi, maa esi koi baat nahi he. Magar aap suno to sahi."
N: Maa, me nahi janti kisi Chinmay ko. Aur na hi janna chahti hu.
N: Maa. Sorry, me aap pe gussa nahi ho rahi hu. Magar…
N: Maa…. Maa…
Her mom had cut the phone.
She puts her cell and sits on bed. She covers her face by her palms. Mayank goes and stands there, with his hand on her shoulder, "Kya baat he, Nupur? Kya kaha aunty ne?"
N: Hume maa se pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha ki hum dono ek duje se pyar karte he.
M: Unhe kisi aur ne bataya?
N: Nahi, unhe abhi tak to kuchh nahi pata he. Kash hota.
M: Kyun? Aur abhi kya baat kar rahe the tum dono? Ye… kya naam tha?
N: Chinmay.
She takes her hands from her face. Wrinkles were visible beneath her eyes and on her forehead.
M: Kaun he vo?
N: Mom-dad ne mere liye rishta tay kiya he. Uske yaha se rishta aya he. Aur mom-dad ko major he. Vo log chahte he ki me us se shadi karu.
M: Haa, magar vo log tumhe puchhege to sahi na? Agar vo tumhe pasand nahi aye to mana kar dena.
N: Haan. What a fool I am. Vo to mene socha hi nahi.
She gets all cheery. She hugs him, "I love you Mayank."
M: I love you too, and I am sorry, Nupur.
He broke the hug.
N: Sorry kis liye?
M: Abhi tum naraj ho gayi thi us ke liye.
N: By God! You enjoyed on Forum na? Maja aaya hoga he na?
She started laughing. Mayank was confused by this.
M: Tumhe kese pata chala ki me abhi net pe forum pe tha?
N: Mujhe pata that um vo hi karoge. To mene sabhi friends ko message kar diya tha, ki abhi AmmyRocks ayega, usko sab milke tang karege. And everyone was immediately ready.
M: Nupur, tum…
N: you know, Girls' unity?
M: Ab tumhe me nahi chhoduga.
He started chasing her around the bed. After running for a few minutes, Nupur was tired and she fell on bed… "Hm…. Bas… May… ank… me thak gayi."
Mayank also fell beside her. "Me bhi…"
Both stayed like that for some time.
After some time, Mayank got up. "Nupur, hamara plane kal subah ka he. Aaj kya kare? Ghumne chale?"
N: Haan. Chalo chalte he. Aur mujhe movie bhi dekhna he.
M: Ok. Kaun sa movie dekhna he?
N: Koi bhi. Bas dekhna he.
M: Thik he, tum taiyar ho jao. Phir hum dono chalte he. Me bhi ja ke taiyar ho jata hu.
N: Ok.
Mayank goes in his room to get ready.
He sees that his laptop is still switched on. As he goes to switch it off, he sees message… It was from Faru.
"Hey, Ammy… kesa laga? Maja aya na? Hum sab ne tumhe achha maja chakhaya, he na? Tumne Ridzy ko tang kyu kiya? Pata he, vo kitna gussa thi? Ab dobara esa mat karna! Got it? This is my warning."
He replied her… "Ok, Faru. I am really Sorry. Ab to maaf kar do mujhe. Dubara esa nahi hoga. Sach. Now got to go. Ridzy is waiting. Bye."
Whole day they enjoy a lot. They watched the movie, which Nupur simply liked, And Mayank liked that time, as he watched Nupur more than movie. After that both had lunch in a Punjabi dhaba. Later they just passed time in market buying little things. Nupur and Mayank both reached home at 10:00.

M: Ab jaldi so jana. Hume subah bhi jaldi uthna padega na.
N: Jo hukum, mere aka.
M: Good night.
N: Good night.
They went in their respective rooms and after changing clothes, went to bed.

Next day, morning, both woke up, got ready and reached air port on time. To their luck, flight was right on time. So the sat in plane and relaxed.

Nupur was asleep within minutes. And Mayank kept reading magazine which was kept there by air-hostess.

Finally, they reached Mumbai.

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Pre-cap:
Entry of a new character CHINMAY…
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Love,
Shreyu

hey very very nice one

plz updte ur FF sresh
i/ll comment later.