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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

awesome start.........
simply love it.........
can't wait for you to update.........
mayur first takkar was so cute.........
the second one was even better............



Thank you so much, Mahima...

Aww... I am glad that u liked their takkar.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd

<font color="#990066">hye sherya amazing begining...........loved the MayUr mulaqat............</font>

<font color="#990066">Do Con Sooon with long part.........</font>


Thank you so much Sam,...
I will update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pebolovesmayur



again

kyuki im late here too

anyway fantastic first part

liked the way "armaan" and "basket "

were talkin

any way superb update

and



love pebo



It's okay, Pebo...

Meri lil sis late jaroor hoti he, par he hi itni sweet aur cute ki jab tak vo comment na kare, muje next part post karne ka man nahi karta he,.

Thank you, dear...

Love you too,
Shreya...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

<font color="#ff00ff" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hey Shreyu.......... Nice one dear!!!!!!!!!</font>


thanks Divya... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi, friends... thank you for all your love and comments. I am sorry, first part was short bcz I had less time and I wanted to update 2 FFs. So I posted short part in both. SORRYyyyyyyyy...

Ok, now here is the next part. i hope all of you will like it.

Nupur was sitting on the computer, chatting on the forum. Suddenly she found that AmmyRocks was online now. She started to chat with him.

RidzyDMG: Hey, Arman... How are u?

AmmyRocks: I am fine, Basket. How was your day?

R: Nice.

A: Hey, How was the interview?

R: Great. I think I will get a call by tomorrow for confirmation.

A: Cool, So watched DMG today?

R: Of course! I am soooooo much happy that Arman finally proposed Ridz.

A: Are, yaar! Tum to ese khush ho rahi ho jese Arman ne tumhe propose kiya ho.

R: Don't worry, mera prince charming, Mera Mr. Perfect, Mera Arman muje jald hi mil jayega. I am sure. Vese tumhari Ridhima kaha he?

A: Ab tak to sirf mere dreams me. I am really dying to meet my Ridhima now.

R: Don't worry, You will meet her soon. Aur kise pata he, shayad vo tum se mil chuki ho, par tumhe realize na hua ho, ki vo hi he tumhari Ridhima. Ye bhi to possible he na?


Mayank closed his eyes for a second and could watch the girl that met him on the road, while he was going to office. He jerked his head to clear his thoughts, but again he remembered the moment she bumped into him in the office and he held her from waist to save her from falling.

R: hello, koi reply nahi? Matlab koi he?

A: Ha, I mean... I don't know. May be you are right, basket.

R: So, tumhari hobbies kya he?

A: DMG, Basketball, Cricket, Music, Travelling. Aur tumhari?

R: DMG, dance, music, Reading.

A: Cool. Ok, listen, Now I will go. Have to wake up early. Will meet u tomorrow. I hope u have no any problem.

R: Are, no, yaar. I love chatting with you. I don't chat generally, but you seem to be a nice person. And I really like nice persons as my friends.

A: Hmm.. Thanks for the comlement, basket. Ok, Got to go now. Bye...

R: Bye, Arman. Sweet dreams of your Ridhima...

A: Sudhar jao, Basket.


Nupur went to bed. She went in deep sleep soon.

But what was the case with Mayank? Could he sleep? No. He just kept thinking about the girl he met twice today.

He thought she was somewhat introvert, she didn't even waited so that he could ask her name. "I hope, she gets a job in our company. Oh, God, I don't know her name, and I am already praying for her. Esa muje pehle to kabhi nahi hua."

Next Morning:

Nupur and Diya were sitting together in Nupur's room, while they were just telling each other about their day after they departed in the evening. They shared each and every thing with each other. Nupur thought to tell Diya about AmmyRocks, but then she felt that it was something she didn't want to share with anyone. So she didn't tell Diya anything about AmmyRocks.


Then only Nupur got a call from the company.

N: Hello.

Caller: Hello, Is that Miss Nupur Bhushan?

N: Yes. Who is that?

Caller: I am Mr. Vyas, remember, from HR dept.?

N: oh, yes, Mr. Vyas.

V: See, madam, you have been selected for the job.

N: Ok, Thanks sir.

V: Fine. You have to come to the company by tomorrow to complete the formalities of the offer letter.

N: Ok, Sir. I will come tomorrow at 11:00 Is that alright?

V: Ya. Sure. And bring the ID proof and other documents with you. Any doubt?

N: No Sir. Thank you.

V: ok, bye.

N: bye.

She literally jumps on the bed.

N: Hey, Diya, I am so much happy. I got the job.

Diya smiles. She had got an idea from the one-sided conversation she heard.

D: yes, dear. Congrats. I am really happy for you.

Diya gave her a cute hug and just then her cell phone buzzed. She picked up her phone and after few minutes they were sharing another tight hug as Diya also got a job in the same company. They informed their parents about this and they planned a party that night. As Nupur didn't want to miss DMG, they decided that they will go early and bring the parcels at Nupur's home only. All the friends will come to Nupur's place after 9:00.


In the office:

Mayank was working while his friends came.

Rishabh: Hey, dude. Where is the party?

M: Party? For what?

R: I will kill you, mayank. You have to give us party on your birthday, yaar.

Mayank himself had forgotten his birthday.

M: Oh! Today is my birthday?

R: oye! Mr. Majnoo, Aap ko kya apni laila mil gayi he jo apna birthday bhool gaye he? Dekh, Pranav, ye kitna chhupa rustam he.

P: Ha, yaar. I noticed a change in him since yesterday.

M: Now, shut up both of you. I will give you a treat. But you can't get it outside. I will give a treat at my place only. Mom-dad are not there, so we can enjoy. But strictly after 9:00.

P & R: Ha, Mr. Mayank Sharma ko DMG bhi to dekhna he.

M: Right, Now go and let me finish my work.

Pranav and Rishabh leaves him alone.

M: Strange, Me life me first time khud ka birthday bhul gaya. Great going Mr. Mayank Sharma! Aab pata nahi uss Miss Anamika ke chakkar me me aur kya kya karuga. Where are you, Anamika?

(I hope u understand ki Mayank calls Nupur Anamika as he doesn't know her name.)

At Nupur's place:

N: Me yaha hu, My prince. Jaldi aao, meri life me. I am desperately waiting for you. Pata nahi, ankhen bandh karti hu to ek hi sapna dikhta he, ki mera prince ghode pe beth ke ayega, aur muje sab se chura ke le jayega. Vo bilkul Arman jesa hoga. Are, me to bhul hi gayi... Arman, Aaj to party he, us se baat bhi nahi ho payegi. Ab kya karu? Koi baat nahi. Kal baat kar lugi.

Then only her cell phone buzzed. It was Diya.

D: Hey, Nupur, I won't be able to come with you toorder the parcel. I am so sorry, Mom wants me to go with her. I will definitely come to your place at 9:00 ok?

N: Ok, Diya, no problem. Bye, Take care, and come soon.

D: ya, bye.

Nupur takes a short afternoon nap and then gets up to go to the restaurant. She was thinking on the way what to order. She decided to order Chinese food as she liked it most.

Meanwhile,

Mayank was on the phone.

M: Are, but Aaj to kam se kam meri pasand ka food order karne do.

P: No, Aaj to hum jesa chahege vo hi karna hoga. Order Punjabi food or we won't come.

M: Are yaar! Itna emotional blackmailing kyu karte ho? Ok, jesa aap log kahoge, vesa hi hoga. He disconnects the phone and turns towards the reception counter.

Nupur was standing there and she was ordering food. He kept staring at her. Just then a waiter came and asked him to sit.

M: No, I want to order. Make the parcel as soon as possible.

And he ordered punjabi food. Both Nupur and Mayank were waiting for their parcels to be ready. Mayank went to where Nupur was sitting.

M: Hi...

Nupur looked at him and recognised instantly.

N: hello...

M: Hmmm.. I met you yesterday, Do you remember?

N: Ha, I remember.

M: So, did you get the job?

N: Yes. I got.

M: Wow. Congrats.

N: Thanks.

M: What's your name?

N: Nu...

Waiter arrived. "Ye lo, Bhai shab, aap ka parcel, Aur ye lo madam ji aap ka parcel."

Before Mayank could say anything else, Nupur thanked the waiter, bade Mayank a good-bye and left.

M: Are, suno to. Iska nam kya he? But muje kya fark padta he? Vo meri Ridzy thodi he? Ya phir vo hi meri Ridzy he?

Very badly confused Mayank reaches home.


Finally It's 9:00. The party begins.

Mayank and Nupur both are opening the parcels and all friends were also there.

At Mayank's place:

As they open,

P: Are, Mayank, I will not talk to you now, I told you strictly that I want Punjabi food today.

R: ha, mayank, This is not fair. You promised that you will order Punjabi and still...

M: Are, I ordered Punjabi food only, I don't know how this happened.

P: ha, ha jadoo hua na?

At Nupur's place:

Nupur was very angry.

N: What jadoo? Diya, poora mood kharab kar ke rakh diya. I wanted to eat Chinese today, And now, I will eat this Paneer Tikka.

D: Of ho, Diya, Koi baat nahi. Tumhe Paneer Tikka bhi to utna hi pasand he na.

Sanjana: Ha, Nupur, and I love Paneer, yaar. Let's start.

At Mayank's place:

P: What, Start? Ye Manchurian muje pasand hi nahi he. And noodles log kese kha lete he?

M: Enough, Chinese food ko kuchh bhi mat bolna. You know, I lose my temper.

Finally, Both groups ate what they had got. All friends left and now Mayank-Nupur were alone at their respective homes.

Nupur was angry because of this. She remembered Mayank and burst out.

At Nupur's place:

N: Pata nahi, kaha se vo a jata he? Kahi par bhi mil jata he, aur aaj uski vajah se... Jarur mera chinese kha ke vo aram se so raha hoga vo.

At Mayank's Place:

M: "you know, Anamika, aaj tumhari vajah se me apni pasand ka khana kha paya. Otherwise, Paneer tikka and all kha ke me thak chuka tha. When ever all friends are together, only I like chinese, So we had to order Punjabi only. Finally, kal me tum se baat karuga. In the office, I will definitely wait for you.


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Ok... That's it.
Now tell me how it was. Pls comment and hit the like button if u like it.
And If I need to make changes in my writing or style, then also tell me.
Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sreyu

Awwwsome update dear

loved it to the core

I'm so happy Nupur got the job

Mayu baar baar anamika ke baare mein soch raha hai

Nupur also searching for her prince charming

Ab jaldi se dono ko mila dou

Your writing style is Perfect dear

do continue soon

Luv
Nidzy


Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Sresh

At first a big thanx 4 ur long update.

it was minblowing yaar.

Lovely.

fantastic

Nups looking 4 her dream boy and Mayank also 4 his dream girl.

heheheehe unintentionally Nupur was right that may be he already met the his girl .

Wow Mayank closes his eyes and saw nupur

Awwwwww he don't her name and already praying 4 her to get the job

Mayu tou gaya-abhi se shuru hogaya bacchuu!!!!!!!!!

So both Nupur and dia got the job.

hehehe ye kya- Nupur ki chakkar main mayu ne apna b.day bhul gaya?

Mr. Mayu jut wait and watch- abhitak tou bahut kuch hona baki hai- right Sresh???

Oh so they met 3rd time at restaurant.

Poor Mayank- couldn't hear her name .

Yes maine pehlei guess kya the ki parcel exchange hogaya.

So Mayurs choice r same- both loves Chinese food.

Very nice update.

Keep updating

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome update.loved it. loved eacha nd every part of this update.

nupur looking for her dream boy. on the other hand mayank also looking for his dream girl.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
shreya

its a mind blowing update
so nice
loved it

mayank per lagta hai nups ne kuch jayada hi asar kardiya hai
bechara usske chakkar me bday bhool gaya
mayu or mera pasand bilkul ek jaisa hai
mujhe bhi Chinese bohot pasand hai

nups or diya ko job milgayi
ohooooo ab ayega maza
hope ke ab hume office me bohot hi interesting kuch milega
pls update soon yaar
love u
Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yeah Shreyu.. even I waiting for the bomb blast convo between Mayur.. after the exchange of foods happened.. and i srsly hope tht u r not intending to make this FF into a love triangle with Dia also in the same co. as Mayur..
Awesome update.. and beautifully written..👏
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago

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