EK PREM KAHANI!!!! Updated pg 110! Plz read!!! - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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brilliant update dear....i dint get d pm.... 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear...
caught ur this ff tooo
read all parts
all r awesome
u did an amazing job
love the part at pg.7
cant wait 2 readmore
pls continue soon
see yaaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys! Thx so much for replying! Here's the nxt part posted!! plz do read and comment!

EK PREM KAHANI!

A SaJan~MayUr Legacy

Before him, stood the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. She had dark black hair that reached down to her shoulders. She was dressed in a simple shorts and t-shirt. Her eyes…her eyes…he simply had no words to describe them. It made his heart thud loudly in his chest.

'Ch-Chashmish?'

He whispered. She grinned up at him.'Tho tumhe hamara secret place yaad hai? Not bad! Mujhe tumse itni umeed nahi thi!'

She giggled. His hands shook as he neared her. Gunjan was getting self conscious because of the intensity in his gaze. He seemed lost in a trance. He caressed her cheek lightly. Gunjan gave a light gasp and closed her eyes. It had been such a long time since she had felt him. It felt like an eternity. 'Chashmish…? Tum…tum sach much mere saat ho?'

He couldn't believe it that she was actually here. Gunjan rolled her eyes.

'Aur nahi tho kya?' Tears were running down his cheeks. 'Ch-Chashmish! Chashmish!' He couldn't get past saying her name. He pulled her close and wrapped her in a tight hug…something he had been wanting to do for more than 10 years. She hugged him back, trying not to cry. She couldn't possibly cry in front of him. What would he think?

'Arre! Tum tho buhot emotional duffer nikle! Now stop crying! Main aa gaayi hoon na? Aur mujhe tumhe rote hue dekhna bilkul pasand nahi hai. Samjhe?' He sobbed even louder. How he had longed to hear her voice... how he had wanted to hold her…be there for her. 'Chashmish? Tumhe andaaza bhi nahi laga sakti ho ke maine tumhe kitna miss kiya. Jab tum challi gayyi na, tho aisa lag raha tha ke waqt hi rukh gayya. Tumhaare bina main sirf ek laash tha-'

She looked up and put a finger over his lips.

'Aisa mat kaho. Plz?'

He wasn't ready to let go of her yet. He hugged her again. 'Ab promise karo ke tum kahin nahi jaogi? Promise karo ki zindagi bhar tum mere saath rahogi? Agar tum phirse challi gayyi na, tho meri zindagi phir se adhuri rehe jayegi.'

Gunjan was trying her best not to cry.

'Sam? Sam! Main aa gayyi hoon na? Aur main tumhe kabhi chod ke nahi jaongi. Promise.'

Samrat wiped his tears and finally let go. He held her hand and started to pull her over to their favourite log, when he noticed her wince.

'Kya hua Chashmish?'

'Kuch nahi Sam…bas paon me kuch chub raha hai.'

He frowned, very worried.

'Kya? Zara dekhoon tho sahi?'

He bent down and lifted her foot up. A small twig was stuck in her leg. He slowly pulled it out only to be met by Gunjan's wail.

'Ouch!'

Samrat immediately looked towards her.

'Buhot dard ho raha hai kya Chashmish?'

He gently placed her foot down and lifted her up in his arms. (which Gunjan was completely NOT expecting). 'Sam-'

'Shh.'

He gazed into her eyes, his heart melting. How could a girl look so simple yet so beautiful. His grip became tighter around her. He never wanted to let go. He just wanted time to stop. He made his way (Ultra slowly, trying to buy more time with gunjan) to the log and placed her down. She was blushing a bright shade of red.

'Sam…yeh kya tha?'

Samrat snapped out of it.

'Kya/ Main tho sirf ek dost ki madat kar raha tha. Maine kya kiya?'

He looked at her innocently. Gunjan blushed even harder. 'Umm. Tumne poocha nahi ke main yahan kyun ayi thi?'

Samrat grinned.

'Obviously! Tumne mujhe miss kiya iss liye milne aayi!'

Gunjan sighed.

'Sam…main U.S se Mumbai tak sirf tumse milne aaongi kya?'

They both knew that she would…but this was no friendly visit!

Samrat pouted and asked.

'Achcha? Tho phir all of a sudden main kaise yaad aa gayya?'

Gunjan didn't laugh.

' Pichle saal…mere Dad guzar gayye the.'

She gulped, trying to push back the tears.

'My Step mother…she wants me to get married…now.'

Samrat was shocked. Stepmother? She could see the questioning look in his eyes.

'Haan Sam. My mom didn't die. Papa ne mujhse jhoot kaha tha. Mamma aur papa ki ek baddi argument hui. They got separated. Aur…aur phir…papa ne kisi aur se shaadi kar li. Shalini. My stepmother.'

He couldn't believe what she was saying. She continued.

' Unke rishtedaar se shaadi karwaana chahti hai. Neil Oberoi.'

Samrat was about to interrupt but he decided that this wasn't the best time.

' Who mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai Sam! Aur meri zindagi hai! Main shaadi sirf ussi se karoonga jo mujhe pasand ho! Who Neil nahi hai! … iss liye main ghar se bhaag ke challi aa gaayi. Tab pata challa ki tum bhi isi sheher me rehte ho…tho main milne aa gayyi.'

Samrat couldn't believe what he was hearing. Gunjan was sitting stone still. Samrat put a hand on her shoulder.

'Tum mere saamne ro sakti ho Chashmish…'

He said. She was sitting in silence…until one drop of water dripped down her cheeks. Before he knew it, she was sobbing in loud gasps and clinging to him. He was rocking her back and forth, trying to calm her. All the emotions that she had kept pressed into her heart had pushed their way out at once. And right now, the only thing Gunjan needed was Samrat to be by her side.

END

Precap: Kya ab hogi ek prem kahani ki shuruwaat? Jaane ke liye, continue to read…….

EK PREM KAHANI….. A SaJan~MayUr legacy……

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy!!
it feels so gud to be the first one to comment.. =P
yu didnt even send a pm abt the part.. but i randomly opened it..
and wow.. =P
lucky me// 😆
anyways..
sammy is shoo shweet!!
and poor gunji =(
wil be waiting for the nxt update =)
HiNaL

Edited by basket_101 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket_101

reserved

*edited

heyy!!
it feels so gud to be the first one to comment.. =P
yu didnt even send a pm abt the part.. but i randomly opened it..
and wow.. =P
lucky me// 😆
anyways..
sammy is shoo shweet!!
and poor gunji =(
wil be waiting for the nxt update =)
HiNaL

Lolz! Hinal, it was only like 5 min ago that I finished writing! And then I went to edit the 1st page and everything! but u had already read and replied! I promise! main abhi abhi Pm's shuru hi karne waali thi!! But thx so much for ur cute comments! me really like reading it! And will update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Great touchy update.Plz update next part soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kris97

Great touchy update.Plz update next part soon.

Hi! thx so much or replying! I will update new part very soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TOTALLY AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!
I was really looking forwards to sajan meeting!!!!!
Awwwwww samrat was crying while he was saying her name that was just sooooo sweet and sad!!!!!
Ugh I'm starting to hate gunjans dad right now and also that Neil Oberoi!!!!!!!
Loved ur update sooooooo much plz update soooooon plz plz plz!!!!
Thank u for the PM!!!
Mira
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TOTALLY AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!
I was really looking forwards to sajan meeting!!!!!
Awwwwww samrat was crying while he was saying her name that was just sooooo sweet and sad!!!!!
Ugh I'm starting to hate gunjans dad right now and also that Neil Oberoi!!!!!!!
Loved ur update sooooooo much plz update soooooon plz plz plz!!!!
Thank u for the PM!!!
Mira

Hi Mira!! No probs for the PM! Glad u lyked the update! And Neil Oberoi is a guy worth hating! Trust me!! Will update soon! Thx for reading!

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