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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Hi bhavz

u updated it after long time

yaar it was wonderful shot

too good
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it was so sweet, simple and nice.

good job.

keep it up.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Loved it was fab

Humsafar 😆😆😆

Mayu ki hindi sahi mein gandi thi😆😆

Liked it

Write sum more

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

awesome one shot bhavana,
chooooooo chweet,
mayu ki hindi to baap re baap....haha...😆
awwwww....he proposed her,
so cutie,
keep writing more...

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago

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Hina

@samratrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#104

awesome update bhavana!!!😊😊

luved it to da core

do continue.....

thanks for da pm....

Edited by samratrocks - 15 years ago

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Radhika

@Contradiction01

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

wow bhavi...!!

it was an awesome shwesome one...!!

it was reaaly cuuute n sweet 2...!!

luved mayu in dis...!!

do write more...!!

--radz--

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439538

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

hey bhavv

omgshh yes i wana throw chappals at u

par its okay because u wrote such a wonderful OS

i will let it go this time!😆

ayway wowwwwwwwwwwww such a sweet OS
mayur just rock

and love the last line this would a night she would alwaysssss remeber

sooo sweetttt

do write more

kkk

-sanam-

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Heyyyy bhavna
Amazing os yaar
Mayu bad at hindi...lolzzzz
Thanx for pm

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Saadia

@Rozain

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Hi Bhavna superb sweet

update it was a treat for all of yours friends

yaar mindblowing you always steal the show huny

u r really so talented huny

love ya and do continue

awesome OS

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Oh but i have only heels bhavi😆 so i can use my heels for you..........😆

Well back to OS, its was just so simple and so beautiful, i just loved it. Mayank prposed her in so amazing way and Nupur who was waiting for him only.

I loved it yaar so no heels for yet baad ka kuch nahi keh sakti......😆