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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet

WOW

1st of all Congo on the OS gallary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome os sorry for the late reply!!!! Kaan pakard ke sorry, dill se soory duniya me jitne sorry hai voh sab sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep up the good work and cont soon

thanx for the pm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Thanks dear.

I am glad that u liked it.

Thabk you so much. No prob. You all commented that is important for me.

Welcome, dear. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
i am blushing hard after reading this

this was awesome!!!!!!!!

mind blowing!!!!!!

superb!!!!!!!

loved it shreya!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: pebolovesmayur

hey shreya di !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i know im very late!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


but u know the reason na.......................................


any way congo on new thread🥳


and your first os....................................................



tune kya nidzy ko competition dene ki sochi hai yaa..................................jk


it was utterly butterly awesome


shreya di


maara maate keva maate words nathi


hu tamhaaru og padhine


omg ive fallen in love with it


actually its love at first read you see😆😉


anyway


continue writting your os


nxt time mein itni late nahi hongi


thanks for the pm


of this mayurlicious update of yours


love

your lil sis pebo



Ok, Pebo... Sorry I am replying to ur comment so late.

Ya. dear, tum ghar pe nahi thi, I know.

Thanks dear...

Nahi, meri itni himmat nahi he ki me Nidzy ko competition du. I was just writing a romantic update for valentine. Actually, i wanted to write one, but when I saw the promo of Mayur sajda, I started writing.

Thank you sooo much, dear.

I am happy that u liked it.

Are, mari lil sis, tu mane chana na zad par chadavi rahi chhe. padi jaish to?

any ways, I will try to write good Mayur OS soon.

Luv,
Shreya di...
😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i am blushing hard after reading this

this was awesome!!!!!!!!

mind blowing!!!!!!

superb!!!!!!!

loved it shreya!!!!!!!!!!!!



Hey, Mahi...

I was blushing badly when I was writing, yaar. Sach me Nidzy is really great.

Thanks dear.

I am glad that u loved my OS.

Luv
Shreyu...
😊
Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55


Hi, Friends...... Here is the Mayur OS. actually, it will be a SS. Containing 2-3 parts. Please read and tell me your opinions. Read and comment.



Kismat ka Khel Part 1:
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Nupur was habitual to visit the city library regularly. She was a passionate reader. Reading meant a world to her. She loved to read novels, character stories, fictions, everything.
Nupur was getting ready to go to the livrary now. Then only she saw that a photo of a guy was still there in the library book. She hid that photo in her drawer.
Only some persons were valuable in her life. Her parents, her books and her boyfriend, Raj. Raj was her life. She could never imagine her life without Raj. She smiled adorably and went out of the room.

Her mother was sitting there and knitting something.
NM: Beta, library ja rahi ho?
N: Ha, maa. Me thodi der me books change karva ke ati hu. Aap ko bahar se kuchh kam he, kuchh lana he market se?
NM: Nahi, beta, bas jaldi aa jana. Aaj sham ko Vijay uncle ke yaha ek choota sa get to gather he, To 7:00 baje jana he. Tum aogi na?
N: Maa, me? Aap to janti ho na, ki muje parties pasand nahi he. Me bore ho jaugi.
NM: Beta, Aab to tumhari shadi ka sochna padega. Tum bahar kisi ko milogi, to koi tumhe dekhega, aur koi ladka suggest karega na? Aaj to tumhe aana hi hoga. Tumhare papa bhi ye hi chahte he.
Nupur sighs. She can't go over her father's wish.
N: ok. Me jaldi aa jaugi.

Nupur leaves for the library. The library was at long distance from her home, and in the way, there was much distance that could be said as Sunsan Sadak.
As she was passing that lonely road on her scooty, her scooty got punctured.
She got down from the scooty, looking confused. How will she get help on this road?
Then only she heard the horn of the bike. She raised her hand to stop the person.
As the bike stopped, the person who was sitting there spoke.
P: Aap, yaha?
N: Ji. Aap to vohi ho na, jo roj library me hote he?
P: Ji. Mera naam Mayank Sharma he. Aur apni MBA ki entrance ki preparations ke liye me library ata hu.
N: I see. Vese aap meri help kar dege please? Mere scooty ka tire puncure ho gaya he.
M: Oh! But yaha par to kitni dur tak koi garage bhi nahi he, ki mechanic ko bula sake. Aap yaha rukiye, me mechanic ko bula ke ata hu.
N: Ji. Jaldi aayiega.
Mayank was about to start the bike, when some ruff bikers came from behind. As they came near Mayank and Nupur, they slowed down their speed.
Bikers: Oooooo…………… Sunsan sadak par ek ladka aur ek ladki.? Kya baat he?
Mayank tried to ignore them. Nupur felt as if she was being stabbed in her heart.
Then…
one biker: Chhodo na, guys, let them enjoy. Hum kabab me haddi kyu bante he?
Mayank was now getting angry. But before anything happens, the bikers speeded up their bikes. Mayank looked at Nupur. She was looking downwards. He controlled his anger.
M: Dekhiye, aap inki bato ka bura mat manna. Aur aap rukiye, me aata hu.
N: Mayank, Suniye. Muje yaha akele khada rehne me darr lagta he.
M: Ok. To phir aap chaliye. Me aap ko library chhod deta hu, phir mechanic ke sath akar scooty le jauga.
N: Ok, Thanks.
Then Mayank drops Nupur to the library. And goes to the garage to take the mechanic with him. He gets the mechanic, who fixes the other tire, and then takes the scooty to the library. After that finally, Mayank comes in the library. He looks here and there for Nupur. She was nowhere to be seen. He goes to the inner section, where he spent most of her time. He saw that she was trying to take a book from the cupboard, but she was falling short. She took the stool and limbed on. Mayank noticed that one leg of that stool was loose, but before he can warn her, she was falling.
Mayank quickly passed two steps and caught her. Nupur was now in Mayank's arms. They both shared an eyelock session. Then as the noise came from somewhere, they came to their senses. Mayank left Nupur. Then Mayank gave her the key of her scooty. He was going from there, while Nupur realized that she didn't even thank him.
N: Suniye, Mayank.
M (Turning): Ji?
N: Thanks for your help.
M: No problem. Is me koi badi baat nahi he. It was my duty.
Mayank leaves and sits in the outer room where he sat everyday to read.
Nupur came after some time an saw Mayank busy in reading. She felt that he was a good and responsible person.
Then Nupur goes to home and gets ready for the party.
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Mayank leaves after 6:00 for home. As he reached home, his mother Shilpa was already waiting for him.
S: Are, Mayu, beta tum aa gaye? Kab se wait kar rahi thi me.
M: Maa, me to roj isi time par ata hu.
S: Are haan, beta, magar aaj to jaldi aa jate, mene kaha to tha, ki Party me jana he.
M: Maa, me party me kisi ko janta tak nahi. Me kya karuga. Is se to behtar he ki me ghar me beth kar aram se padhai karu.
S: Kyu? Library me time kam pad gaya tha kya?
Mayank didn't reply to this. He knew if he will tell anything to her, she will just tease him. Finally.
M: Ok, maa, I surrender. I am going to get ready.



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Ok, guys,
That's it. Now please comment so that I can know your views. And hit the like button if you like it.

Luv,
Shreyu...
😊
Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
reserved =)


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Hi shreyu!!!
awsome part!!
mayank and nupur not fighting!! thats cool.. nd weird 😆
but i dun mind 😉
mayank was like the perfect gentleman in the part.. =P
lol..

anyways..
IM FIRST TO COMMENT 😃
lol.. =P
anyways.. do cont soon =)

HiNaL


😆
Edited by basket_101 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
very nice...plzz continue soon...thnxx 4 the pm...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Oh Shreyu awesum SS's 1st part
But Nupur's bf Raj, not sounds good, well anyways it was ice part
Mayank is so helpful, good guy..................😉
now they will meet in paty, great han
do cont sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.........itna lamba soon likha hai samaj lena ok........😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
shreya

nups and raaj??? but why?

dont mind akher me to mayur ko hi sath hona hai
mayank was so helpful.
that's why i loved him so much
cont soon
love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
i loved it yr toooo gud but why nups with raj cont soon thnx for pm luv sehrish

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