Mayur OS and SS: $hrey@'s gallery

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi, friends... I am Shreya.



I wrote one OS on Mayur. I am opening this gallery, so that I can post my Mayur OS on this gallery.

I am posting the first part now. 😊 😊 😊


Page 1: Mayur valentine OS
Page 8: SS: Mayur Kismat ka khel part 1
Page 14: SS: Mayur Kismat ka khel part 2
Page 20: Promo of SS: Mayur Kismat ka khel part 3
Page 26: SS: Mayur Kismat ka khel part 3
Page 33: SS: Mayur Kismat ka khel part 4
Page 38: SS: Mayur Kismat ka khel part 5
Page 43: SS: Mayur Kismat ka khel part 6 (Last)
Page 46: GunUr OS: Missing You
Page 50: Mayur SS Adhure Sapne Part 1
Page 55: Mayur SS Adhure Sapne Part 2
Page 60 : Mayur SS Adhure Sapne Part 3 (LAST part)
Page 66: Mayur OS Dreams come true (For Nidzy's birthday)
Page 71: Mayur OS Unsaid feelings
Page 77: Mayur OS untitled
Page 82: Mayur OS Copyrights on Love??
Page 94: Mayur OS Unseen future
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi, friends...
This is my first OS. It's Mayur of course! The Os starts where yesterday episode ended. I thought of writing this after watching the damn hot and nice promo of today. I know, it is not that nice, but couldn't resist myself from writing it.


M: Nupur, muje bahot kaam he.
N: Ha, to jao, na, muje bhi bahot kam he.
M: Achha, vo kya?
N: Muje nahana he. Garmi lag rahi he.
M (Angry): Itna kam mat karo, thak jaogi. (And started to walk towards bed-room)
Nupur was untieing the dori of her dress and she got hurt.
N: Ouch…
Mayank looks back, his book drops from his han and he runs to Nupur.
M: Nupur, kya hua? (He comes close and holds her hand to see)
N: Mayank,… vo..
She looks up and sees that Mayank was so close to her. His face was so close to her. She feels uneasiness. All her thoughts of seducing Mayank vanished from her mind. (Mayur tune playing in background)
Mayank was holding her hand and he looked up. Nupur was just staring at him. He lost in her eyes and her beauty. He pulled her towards him. Her hands now rested on his shoulder.
He left her hand and slid his hands around her waist slowly. She felt numb as she felt his touch. Mayank tightened his grip and firmly brought her more close to him.
She was just staring into his eyes. Shivers passed through her spine as Mayank started caressing her back. He just wanted to feel her love now. Nupur was still between his arms. Her hands were resting at his chest now.
Suddenly doorbell rings…………
Nupur and Mayank both come to their senses. Mayank leaves Nupur.
M: Nupur, tum dekho kaun he.. Me nahane ja raha hu.
N: Ok. (Not able to meet his eyes)
Nupur goes at the door and finds Uday smiling.
N: Uday bhaiya? Aap is waqt yaha? Kuchh kam tha kya?
U: Are, Nupur… Suno to… ye tum apna library card college me bhul gayi thi to vo hi dene aya tha.
N: Oh, ok. Thank you.
U: No problem, meri most favorite sister. Actually, I know, tumhe bura lagega.. Par muje sach me jana hoga.
N: Matlab? (She wonders what he was talking about)
U: I mean, me janta hu kit um muje dinner ke liye invite karogi. (Nupur sighs) But mere pas time nahi he, Nupur.
N: Koi bat nahi, Uday bhaiya, me kal invite kar lugi.
U: (With a sad face): To me jau?
N: Ha, jaiye…
Uday leaves and Nupur comes inside. Mayank was wearing his jeans and his chest was bare now. He was drying his hair with towel. It looked like he was lost in his thoughts.
Nupur sees him and keeps staring at his muscular body. Mayank notices her after 2 minutes. He stops drying hair. He unconsciously takes steps towards Nupur. Nupur keeps staring at him. He reaches upto her and leans to her face. His lips reaches to her ears and he whispers.
M: Nupur…
N: Hmm…
Nupur was trembling now. She could feel his breath on her face.
M: Tum har vaqt itni beautiful kese lagti ho?
Nupur blushed. Now Mayank's hands were around her waist, His lips caressing her ears, then he brushed his lips with her collarbone. Nupur put her hands around his neck for support and bent her head back. He nuzzled his head in her neck. She could feel the water drops on her neck. Suddenly she felt that his hands were around her neck. He was opening up the dori of her dress. She felt her knees going week. She held him tightly and rested her head on his chest. Mayank raised her face by her chin and kissed her passionately on forehead. She closed her eyes and just gave in to him. He went behind her, moved her hair aside, and passionately kissed her back. Nupur was in the undescribable condition. Butterflies were flying in her stomach. Mayank caressed her stomach and then made her turn towards him. Nupur was in Mayank's arms now. He looked passionately in her eyes and moved his face towards her face. He slightly kissed her on cheek and then advanced to her rosy lips. Nupur felt a wet kiss on her cheek. But even before she can blush, she felt his lips near hers. He gave a light peck on her lips and then brought her more close. Nupur was so close to him now. They could hear each other's heartbeats. He just brushed his lips on her lower lips for permission. She clutched his hair tightly; bringing him more close if that was possible. She responded back to the kiss. They were lost in their first heavenly kiss, which was so marvelous. After some time, they were out of breath and they broke their kiss. Mayank took her into his arms and made his way towards bed. She didn't protest. He gently placed her on the bed and then he too sat on the bed. He leaned on her face, and kissed her eyes. Now he was on top of her. His hands went around her waist feeling her curves and then …


Ok, now I can't write more. Lights off ho gayi.


I don't know how is it? But pls... muje romantic likhna itna thik se nahi ata. Do comment and hit the like button if you like it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congo on os gallery
and i am first one to comment on first os
great os
it was romantic
do write more
Edited by fanofmjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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SOOOOOOOOOO romantic jaan
Loved it to cores
BTW May I know your name please? :P
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Forgot to say Congrats on your gallery!
Keep writing
x x
Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome
it was so romantic
loved it
do keep writing more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Shreya

mujhe romance expert kehte ho tum log

tum tou badi chuppi rustam nikli

OMG I just loved this shot

When Uday came I was like hamesha kabab mein haddi ban jata hai

but then thank god he went

Nupur sees Mayank bare chest Uff...I can imagine that scene

you know how hard I was blushing while reading it

Awwwwsome yaar

And congrats for the gallery

keep writing more N more

love ya

Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was too romnantic😳
I dnt thk itna serial mein hoga😉
Liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sherya My Face is like this.....................☺️and yours tooo hai na?

Awesome Adroable Magical Passionate Fabulous Marvellous OS hope we see this kidna of Scene on MayUr Tod.............😳😳😳
and I too felt butterfiles on My stomach Marvellous Yaaar keeep rocking😳😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congo on the os gallery
awesome update continue soon

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