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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
hey very nice ff continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great concept, will be waiting for the update. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part-1 it was a beautiful morning in mumbai....sun is shining...then it shows a big banglow..n inside it are sleeping a beautiful girl with her husband.... then the alarm ringss....n the girl switches it off....she is gunjan....mrs gunjan shergilll...... gunjan's pov: hi!!! ma hu gunjan...mrs gunjan samrat shergill... the business tycon samrat shergill ki patni....well mere patike bareme kya batau??? woh bohot sweet ha....sabse accha ha...mujhse sabse zyada pyaar karta ha aur mujhpe marta ha!!!! gunjan is saying all this n wents to the kitchen foor making coffee... woh mumbai ka sabse bara business man ha.....har subhah usse ma apni pyaar bhari coffee se jagati hu....aur apne bareme ma kya batau??? hu to ek business man ki patni lekin khudka ek marrige burue ha jo apni closest frend nupurke sath chalati hu......well apne bareme ma abhi sirf itna bbata sati hu..kyuki abhi mujhe mere husband ko uthane jaana ha...so baki baate badme...
gunjan goes to her bedroom were samrat was sleeping peacfully...she keeps the coffee beside the bed n then sits beside him n carsess his hair with her hand...
g=samrat.......
s=hhmmmmmm
g=samrat utho.......8 baj raheha....office nahi jana ha kkya?????
s=nahi....
g=kya?????kyu???
s=ha...mujhe..sirf apni patnike saat rehna ha..
saying this he holds her by waist....
g=samrat kya karraheho??? chodo mujhe......
s=kya chashmish tum bhi....thorasa to romance karne do...
g=nahi...
s=thik ha..ma tumhe nahi chodne wala!!!
g=samrat..agar tum abhike abhi nahi uthe to tumhari morning kiss cancelll!!!!
hearing this samrat jumps out of the bedsheet...
s=esa maat karna...tumto janti hona ke tumhari morning kiss ke bina mera din kaisa jane wala ha...
g=to ek accha husband ki tarah meri baat mano aur coffee pike ready hojao!!!!
s=abhi aya.....
after sometime samrat comes down being ready were he finds gunjan making breakfast.then he hugs her from back..
g=ooouucchhhh!
s=ghabraio mat..ma hu baba...
g=dara hi dia.....
s=are mere hote hue tumhe daar lagta ha??? esa kabhi hosakta ha kya???
g=accha..ye saab chodo..nashta karlo....tumhe der horahiha na..
s=ha...
g=tumhara bag leke ati hu ma.....
s=ok...
after sometime...
s=ma chalta hu...
g=samrat ek minute...tumhara rumal....
s=thhanks..shamko tumhe pick karlunga,,,
g=ok....
s=ok bye...
g=kuch bhul rahe ho....
he takes a few steps back..n then gives her a tight hug n a small kiss on her cheek..
s=bye..
g=bye.....
then the scene shifts to gunjan's office...RISHTA.COM...
g=hi priya,......
p=hi ma'm...gud morning...
g=gud morning..nupur agayi????
p=ha nupur ma';m apka bohot derse intezaar karrahiha....
g=are bapre..phir to bohot gusseme hongi...
p=ha...
a girl is shown wearing a blue salwar kamiz n a ponitail....talking in the phone..with matching earings n 3 bangles on her hand......the back of the girl is shown....then gunjan comes..
g=nupur....
the girls's eyes r sshown...
n=i'll talk to u later...
n the girl turns n it is our nupur...
g=hi....
n=tu ab arahiha gunjan???? tere clients aur phone ccalls attend karkarke ma thak chuki hu..
g=sorry baba.....are wah aj to tu bari acchi lagrahiha???
n=thanks yaar...dekh mera dil behlaneki koshish mat karna samjhi....teri ye bate purani hochuki ha..
g=sorry yaar..kya karu samrat ko uthaneme late hogayi tu to janti ha na....
n=ha ha.....tere passs to accha bahana ha na har roz late aneka...
g=tujheto ma kehti rehti hu tu bhi ye bahana banale..par tu ha ke...
n=ma kisi ere gereko bahana nahi banane wali hu....
g=chup kar..samart koi era gera nahi ha!!!
n=ma samrat ke bareme nahi bolrahihu....samrat to core ro me ek ha....ma baki ladkoke bareme bolrahihu jinke dilme ladkioke liye koi izzat nahi ha...
g=tu esa kyu sochti ha????
n=kyu tu jaise nahi dekhti ke jo humare pass rishte dhundne ate ha..kase kase adkiya mangte ha..agar ma police hoti na to ma to by god!!!
g=accha shant hoja..tu bata tujhe kaisa ladka chahiye?????
n=mujhe...mujhe ek esa ladka chahiye jo mujhe samjhe..mera har mushkil sath de....har modh pe mera hath pakde...!!!! meri selfrespect ki respect kare.....meri kaam ke prati mujhe aur bhi hosla de.....ek esa insaan jo ladkioki kamyiyabi aur unke wajood ki izzat karta ho..inshort samrat ki tarah..!!!! mujhe samrat ke duplicate se shadi karni ha...
g=tu tension maat le....samrat ka duplicate tujeh ma aur khud samrat dhundke denge....
computer teaching class...
a boy=sir......zam ka papers kabtak milenge???
a guy=jitni jaldi tum saab submitt karoge..well ab class khatam hochuki ha..so kaal milte ha...
a boy=ok sir...
vicky=woh mayank!!! tu to ekdam best ha yaar...
m=vicky...sabko best banakeliye khud ko best banana parta ha....
yes..he is none other than mayank....................................
ok guys...it is the first part.......enjoy!!!! n plzzz do comment!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
awesomeeeeeee ud dear...
luved d sajan part.. wowwww.. sajan married... its reallyyy cute..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
sajan are so cute, lovely post. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
Heyyy maisha
Really nice cs
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Heyyyy maisha
First part is amazing
I liked gunjans character
Plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
superb part maisha
loved sajan
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Hi maisha,
part 1 was really vey nice.
too good.
keep updating
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
awesome update dear nice and lovely start

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