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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
aweome...
wow sajan married..!!
cont soon..
thanx for d om
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

interesting intro

start soon

n thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Great Concept
upd soon
thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
heyy dear
nice part loved it
n thx for pm
luv dhuvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
nice cs I like that it's the whole gang
add me to your pm list
so continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

awesome part,

loved the romance between Sajan
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
hey
i really like ur FF
update soon!
and PM me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
part=3 v=tujhe manna parega mere bhai..tu kaam ke time koi compromise nahi karta.... m=ha.... v=tujhse kuch mangu to tu dega??? m=kya???? v=pehle vaada kar... m=accha kia... v=tu mere sath meri shadi keliye ladki dekhne marrige burue chalega... m=what????? vicky yaar.... tu bhi na... v=mujhe paata tha ke tu nahi manega isiliye m=accha thik ha..chalunga...kab jaana ha??? v=kaal ya parso.... m=ok....tere lie kuch bhi....... v=thanks dude... gunur...
gunjan and nupur r attending a client who has come to find a bride n who is also continuoslyy teasing nupur which gunur noticed...
client=cl
cl=to nupur ji mujhe bilkul apki jaisi ladki chahiye....jo apki tarah dikhti ho....apki tarah hasti ho....apki tarah chalti ho...
gunjan whispers into nupur's ears...
g=ye to tujhpe kabse line mare jarahaha....
n=janti hu....dekh ma kya karti hu...
cl=jo apki tarah bate karti ho...
n=aur jo meri tarah sandle se arti ho????
cl=ji????
saying nupur stands up...
n=abe ulluke patthe!!!! jabse aya ha..ladki dekhne aya ha ke mujhe line marne??????
cl=apko line marne...
n=kya bola be??????? abhi abhi ke nikaal warna sandle se tujhe mar bhagaungi!!!!
saying she picks her sandle....gunjan also stoods up..
g=nupur kya karrahiha??? sandle rakh....
n=abhi tujhe dikhati hu..ke ma aur kya kya kar sakti hu...
cl=jata hu..jata hu...
saying this the client runs away from there....
g=kya kia tune???? is tarahse koi pesh ata ha kya??? tu bhi na yaar....
n=kya tu bhi na??? tu dekh rahithi na kabse mujhepe line marraha tha!!! battamiz kahika
g=shant hoja...
n=kya shant hojau?????? tujhe pata ha na gunjan mujhe ye ladkoki chedkhani..battamizi bilkul sehen nahi hoti....isisliye ma kabhi kisi ladke par itni asanise vishwas nahi karti....inhe sirf humara fayda uthana ata ha....
g=accha abhi shant hoja....
n=tujhe to koi kuch nahi kahega...jo ussdin samrat ne kia tha..uske baad to koi paraya mard tujhe akh uthake dekhna to dur.....hi bhi nahi bolega....
flashback....
gunur n samrat r sitting in gunjan's cabin when a guy,gunjan's client comes in...
cl=hello gunjan ji...
g=oh hello...rahull kaise ana hua????
cl=bass esehi apse milneka maan kia to agaya....
samrat looked angrily at gunjan but gunjan told him to be calm..
g=betho na rahul....
ra=sure.....
g=so koi ladki pasand ayi jinse mane tumhe milaya tha????
ra=pasand to ayi..lekin kya karu koi tum jaisi jo nahi ha.....
samrat was boiling in anger...but nupur had controlled him...
n=sam....abhi chup raho...
s=isse to ma.....
g=rahul ma....
ra=tum bohot acchi ho gunjan..kash agar tum mujhe mil jati....
saying this he holds her hands...n samrat stands in anger..
s=get up.....
ra=kya hua???
s=i said get up!!
g=samrat shant hojao....
ra=ye kaun ha??? dusra client????
s=ji ha..gunjan ka lifetime ka client...naam ha samrat shergill...aur gunjan ka pura naam ha mrs gunjan samrat shergil...!!!! got it????
ra=mrs gunjan?????
s=ji ha..she's my wife....aur tum mere samnehi mere wife pe line marraheho???
g=samrat plzzz shant hojao..
s=iski ma esi halat banaunga ke zindagi bhar yaad rakkhega!!!
n saying he starts beating him...but gunjan stopped him after sometime.....
flashback ends
g=ha yaar...esi pitai ki thi ke aur kisine himmat nahi ki...
n=mujhe bhi samrat jaisa ek esa insaan chahiye khudkeliye jo meri esehi respect kare...
g=tu tension maat le..zarur milega......
n=hope so.....
samrat......
s=benji...isse le ja aur aur woh dusri fiel le aa..
b=ok....
s=bohot derse chashmish se baat nahi hua...phone karta hu....
gunur..
n=chal cofffee pete ha..
g=tu cafe chal....ma washroom hoke aati hu....
n=ok..
g=mera phone leja...
n=ok jaldi ana...
then samrat calls..
n=samrat...
before knowing who it was samrat starts talking...
s=hi jaan..kaisi ho??? kya karrahiho??
n=samrat...ma nupss hu..gunjan nahi.....
s=oh sorry..nupss.mujhe laga ke..
n=jaan ha?????
s=sorry yaar..
n=just joking......gunjan washroom gayi ha..abhi break ha hum cafe me aye ha..tum bhi ajao...
s=nahi nupur...busy hu...nahi asakta...isiliye to break me chashmish ko phone kia....
n=oh....ek minute ye lo agayi....
g=kaun ha????
n=apke patidev...samrat ji....
g=oh...ab woh.....
n=ha ma jati hu..coffee leke ati hu....
g=jaldi jaa!!!!
nupur goes to bring coffee...
mayank n vicky....
v=accha..sun tu zara is number pe phone karke ms nupur ya mrs gunjan se appointment lelena...
m=ma kyu?????
v=are yaar...mujhe ghar phone karna ha..plzzz karna....mera naam batadena.....
m=accha la...
mayank diales the number of rishta.com.nupur was paasing from there,by the reception....when the phone rings...
n=hello??? rishta.com....can i help u???
m=ji...this is mayank speaking....kya ma ms nupur ya mrs gunjan se baat karsakta hu????
n=this is nupur speaking...kahiye ma apki kaise madat kar sakti hu????oh i'm sorry mujhe pata ha..ke yaha jo phone karta ha woh kis wajase karta ha..
m=ha..par...
n=par apko uske lie yaha par ana hoga kyuki rishte to phone pe fix nahi hote...
m=are app....
n=app bass yaha ajayiye aur ladkiki tension bilkul maat lijiye...
m=are app mujhekuch bolne dengi????? khudhi bole jarhiha
n=sorry....
m=dekhiye mujhe ladki nahi dekhni ha.....
n=kya???? to yaha phone kyu kia??? khamakha ma kabse baat karrahihu...
m=ap kuch bolne degi tab to ma bolunga...
n=boliye...
m=ek appointement chahiye mere frend vicky ke naamse....
n=welll......2 din baad ajayiye...
m=ok...thanks...
n=nice to hear u...
m(smiles)=same....
n=bye...
sajan..
g=hello???
s=tum bhi na...nupur ke hath apna phone dediya...aur ma usse tum samajh raha tha
g=sorry....kya karraheho????
s=kuch nahi...bohot busy hu...isiliye socha ke tumse thora baate karllu to accha lagega
g=ok...accha suno..ma ghar aj jaldi jane wali hu...isiliye mujhe laneki koi zarura nahi ha..
s=cool see u at night jaan...
g=shut up!!!!
s=love u...
g=love u too.....bye
s=bye......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

very cute update

loved the bubbly nupur
continue soon
thanx for the pm
Edited by ---ishita--- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
awesome!!!!!!!!!continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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