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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrachiluvsKSG

Hey ishika, hello prats


Am reallly really sholly for Late cmment..! no problem take ur own time

anyways..awesome Part...
and promo is makin me xcited..! 😆
ok he said Basket so m sure this bunty guy is ARMAAN nice guess prats
But i wanna read the Part..
please update soon.. ya most probably by today or 2mrw let more work to be done on the story so will take time

n do PM me. yup sure...

Love
Prats love u to




Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: candygurl_ksg

LOL...me confused...waiting for the part desperately..😉



lol.... will update by today or 2mrw
Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2 A

Armaan entered riddhima room un aware of wats gonna happen next moment.. he had lot of questions in his mind obsoivsly there were no answer's for those questions one thing was just revolving his mind his wat ankit said to him a few mts ago..

Armaan mein janta hoon u were not interested to this marriage.. lekin sooch yaar tu kintay din asa hi rahegay.. u should move on.. aur tujhe yaad hai' tunay chachu se promise kiya.u'll never let him down.. wahi promise todna jaa raha hai'.. said ankit keeping his hand on armaan's shoulder..

Tu jaanta hai na.. I cant accept any one in my life' my life is not mine'.

Armaan tu jab tak apni past mein jiya when will u get know wat is there for ur future.. shayad tujhe isa be zayaada pyaar karnay wali ladkhi milljayi' I mean may that girl will be ur wife too ..

Lekin yaar.. u should understand my state'

Armaan enuf is enuf.. I don't to here u anything about u from now'. Just go inside' give her some time to understand u know her more' give her some space'. Armaan I know its hard for u to bring a new girl in ur life.. lekin tu koshish toh karsaktha hai.. teri zindagi asa hi nahi guzaar jayai..

Dekh meri bhai.. now ur married' u have a responsibility.. which needs to ur cooperation to make it a one happy family'.

Listen armaan atleast not for u atleast for the girl inside sitting there expecting u anytime' atleast for her forget ur past n move on buddy'

From today I want it c a new armaan.. who's life will no more get messed up n will have a happy married life ankit just pushed armaan in n just closed the door

*bang* a sound came out'..



IN RIDDHIMA'S ROOM



riddhima was sitting in middle of he bed.. with her gunghat on n murmuring something on her mind n cursing her dad n friends for wat they have done to her' she felt very hurt' she cant back of now since its to late n she can t give her father n spoil his reputation' she felt help less.. but some where in her heart'.


riddhima's dress




Woh itna bi bura nahi lagrahi hai' i should give him some time . some time to our relation to' try karkany bina haar nahi nahi riddhima' koshish toh karsathay hoo na'. lekin mujhe aasa kyun lagrahi ki mein uss armaan malik ko kahi dekaa'

As she was in her own world thinking about wat gonna happen n where the hell she had seen armaan

Sound of the door made her to come out her thoughts'

I'm sorry about the door.. armaan whisper silently' just turned his face to towards riddhima.. while doing so checked around the room n was just bowled n he could not take his eyes out of that room..


Look at riddhima's room



and in mind he was thinking about how is room was ..



he just kept his mouth wide open''

armaan close ur mouth varna makhi chali jayegi andar' he said to him self' n went near the bed'.

Aap ko change karna chahiyaeh.. he said with out any reaction in his face.. u look so tired.. should change to ur casuals' he said in a very polite manner

With out taking her gunghat out riddhima.. shooked her head which was visible to him'

If u don't mind I'll wait out side u can change'. He said'

I've a habbit of changing in my bathroom itself.. ridhima said n was taken a back for wat she had uttered to him out of her mouth.. she slowly stood up. N went near the dressing table'.

Mean while armaan saw the door to balcony n went to relax their'

Riddhima lost in her thoughts' n was removing all her heavy jeweler

N cursed muskhan n anjee for making her wearing this dress'.

He was right this dress looks heavy on me n my sugahraat n just hit her head for what she had said' went to bathroom to have some hot shower'.

While armaam was loitering around her room. N was checking out the things.. Kept n how was the room neatly decorated , sceneries the view.. everything was perfect'. He just admired with the way the room was'

Suddenly his eyes felt on a huge red box. Which some kind of a old one'

But neatly decorated n maintained' he now becoming so curious about wat was ther in that' went in urge of opening it'. But stoped thing wat she would thing of him..,, no yaar ek baar deklathay hai'. These girls will take more time in dressing n bathing.. till the time I'll check out n keep it back as it was'.


So he just opened the box'. N saw those most precious thinks.. his heart skipped a beat' he was taken back,'


He saw many things in that


A damaged basket ball' some chocolate wrapper'. A cute puppy dog' he then saw a dress n suddenly said' yeh toh mein basket ko diya tha uski birthday gift.. how come is this dress with this girl,


riddhima's dress




Array cm'om armaan every girl will have this dress' made up his mind n stater to looking for more thing.. Rather than a surprise it was full of shock

There was silver ring n a box.. some pair of earrings' a picture' where a guy n girl are hugging their basket ball n giving each other a hi5. he suddenly saw a letter which had written



DEAR BASKET

basket mein jah rahoo hoon.. i cant take this any more, i cant imaging u with that dude abhi..

so i'm leaving basket..

hope so u'll forgive me.....

Tumara bunty'.


Armaan was just taken a back with that letter in his hand'. He doesn't know what to do. Either to laugh, cry r shout..

He was fulled with lot of emotions

One he was happy coz.. He got his friend back 8 years..

He felt sad coz' this letter of his separated them

He felt angry coz. He was not aware about who had done this to him'

While all this was running around his mind'

Ridhima came out of shower. In just a towel around her body'.

Armaan looked her cmg out e ran towards her n pulled her into a tight hug n cried like anything

Riddhima an aware of what happened Tried to pull him back after seeing him crying she could not cntrl her n hugged to just to pacify him

After few minutes'. Armaan parted his way from riddhima n took her face in his hands n slowly whispered while tears rolling down'

Kaisa hoo basket'

Ridhima was taken back by his word' thousand of thoughts running around her mind..

Basket' mein basket'. Yeh tu mujhe bunty bulatha tha'. Iska matlab' leki bunty toh chala gaya tha'. Humay toh 8 saal.. she could not find any answer's but some where in her heart said he was her friend her first crush' her childhood buddy' her bunty' lekin bunty aur yeh'' tears started rolling from her eyes'.

Basket tum teek toh ho' basket'

T'.u'.m' b'u..n..t'y . she struggled to find words

Han basket' tumara bunty'.



************to be continued**************



sorry for this half part will post the next two parts..soon .....






Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
awww
basket n bunty certainly beats babli n bunty
thanks for the pm
i loved the part
amazing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
great part
cant wait for the next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
OMG ish...
you are awsome..
u rock yaar..
mein toh soch rahi thi ki pata
nahi kab milenge yeh log n blah blah...
but tumne toh kamaal kar diya yaar..
awesome
thnk u soo much for the PM

love
Prats
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
OMG.....
Loved the part....
please cont soon and PM me meri Jaan... 😳 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
awesome part dear
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
hey sweety just readed out ur 2 parts nd thy wre just mindblowing awwwwww heheeh so funny he was not concetrating on his marriage nd what he had wear heheeh funny nd ridz too ws thinking her life destroyed but she doesn't knw what is store for her hm wow i am so happy thats why he ws totaly devdaas nd he ws to shockd that the girl whom he married was none othr than his basket wowwwwwwwwww it was mindblowing cnt wait fr d nxt prt
plz cont soooooooon
thnskf r dpm
luv yachna
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
awwwwww

that was so sweet

nice do bichde hue dil aakhir mil hi gayeeeeeeeeeeeeee

very nice and sweet part
just loved it😃


love my armaan riddhima
oppppppppps
basket and bunty😉

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