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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vruls

great part
cant wait for the next



thanks dear...





Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: arman_karan

awwwwww

that was so sweet

nice do bichde hue dil aakhir mil hi gayeeeeeeeeeeeeee aagay agya dekho hota hai kya

very nice and sweet part thank u sweet heart.. for liking it
just loved it😃


love my armaan riddhima
oppppppppps
basket and buntyšŸ˜‰
picture abi bakhi hai mera dost......................









Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey sweety just readed out ur 2 parts nd thy wre just mindblowing awwwwww heheeh so funny he was not concentration on his marriage nd what he had wear heheeh funny nd ridz too ws thinking her life destroyed but she doesn't knw what is store for her hm wow i am so happy thats why he ws totaly devdaas nd he ws to shockd that the girl whom he married was none othr than his basket wowwwwwwwwww that was only the half truth dear

it was mindblowing cnt wait fr d nxt prt
plz cont soooooooon
thnskf r dpm
luv yachna





thank u so much.. dear.. hope my FF made u laugh ... baut hai yaar u'll c in up cmg parts............





Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: boshaa

OMG.....
Loved the part....
please cont soon and PM me meri Jaan... 😳 šŸ˜›



ya sure darling............................


Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45


yup so sure..................





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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
heyy ishwariya nice part
loved it
cont soon
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

heyy ishwariya nice part

loved it
cont soon
luv dhruvika




sure dear



Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

hey ppl.. thanks for those wonderful comments it was like winning 100 oscar awards


PART 2B

b..u..n..t..y.. aur tum.. kahi yeh meri saath mazaak toh nahi kar rahi hoo' she thought in her mind..

bunty

I mean bunty toh baut mota than a' lekin tum

Hot , aur dashing hoon bilku ek rockstar ki tara' this is wat ur trying to say na..

Hmmmmmm she slightly nodded her head'

Aur tum bi kuch kam nahi hoo.. hmmmm hot n sexy in this white towel

She just hit his shoulder'.

Armaan shouted mummy bachow aunty mujhe mar rah hai'

Ridhima was shocked for a sec to here from him

She suddenly hugged armaan tightly n said' bunty tum .y the hell u left me u stupid idiot' duffo , aur who kya tha..

DEAR BASKET

basket mein jah rahoo hoon.. i cant take this any more, i cant imaging u with that dude abhi..

so i'm leaving basket..

hope so u'll forgive me.....

Tumar bunty'.'''waha kya dialogues mare tum nay'.

Tum nay ek baar bi nahi socha bunty

Agar tum chali jowagay toh tumari iss dost ka kya hoga'. N hugged him even more tighter n jut hit him n his chest

Kya hoga pata nahi lekin mujhe kuch kuch hora hai basket'.

Ridhima realized in wat state she was as she was hugging armaan tightly.. the grip of her towel was loosed n it was about to fall of'.

N just separated her from him soon she grabbed the ends of the towel n run inside her bathroom with a shot's n a short top'.

While armaan was just student with the closeness he had with riddhima hugging her back when she was almost gonna be naked'.. he just brushed the thoughts n took his suit case n took n pyajma n s shot sleeve t- shirts n went to balcony n sat on the floor folding his hands on his thighs

She came out after changing her dress n went in search of armaan n found him sitting in balcony'.

The things few minutes happened b4 her. N her mind denied to accept that he was bunty her first love . but her heart said that he was bunty'.

Days spent with him started flashing in her mind'..

Kya yeh sach mein mera bunty hai'.. lekin bunty toh bulldozer

She remembered how the boys in their flat use to tease bunty calling him bulldozer n making fun of his weight n avoiding him ' she always felt sad for him' n how bunty used to return home after those insults n how he used to stay alone'.


May be because that she felt as she needed to help this guy.. that how their friendship started' how they become so close'. All those 8 years of their shared with each other'.

How bunty used help her with doing math's home work n how he helped her in doing her assignment all those memories floweded in her mind.. how bunty.. n his sis sanju used to fight, how she used to take care of his things how sanju fought with her for separating buntyfrom her. Saying that tumay meri ammy bhai ko mujhse se cheen liya'


How bunty thought her dance.. her first date with abhi.. the date was actually planed by bunty.. abhi was bunty's cousin brother' the day she n abhi met' it was in summer holiday's that abhi had come to bunty's place as his parents were gonna settle in states' riddhima n abhi was in same class' they were just 10th passed out students n armaan was already in his 11th ...


how riddhima started getting attracted to abhi' his love for his family and his support his brother bunty.. when some one used to tease bunty calling him bulldozer.. abhi 's was the first one to punch the guy second would be riddhima n sanja'..


he never let his bro down n always pampered him a lot.. how she n abhi managed to convince bunty to reduce his wait.. how they helped him to make sure he reude his wait atlest this time n all their had work went in vain when sanju used to bring bunty's fav aloo ke parate.

How bunty made him realized that she was attracted to abhi.. bunty's gift on her 15th birthday, n how je forced her to were it on her first date with abhi' may be that was the last day bunty would have helped her in anything..


n he was never seen un her life again'.. she felt as if a part of her vanished from her body.. she had no clue y he left her'.

As riddhima was in her own world thinking about her past

Armaan turned around to his surprise riddhima was standing there lost in her own thoughts'

He slowly went near her n whispered her name..

She did not her still was in her own world'.

Ammy bhaiya' this is wat sanju used to call bunty'. Oh god how could I forget bunty's full name it was armaan malik'..


tears started roling out of her eye's but still she had a smile on her lips.. it was a matter of joy for her' she had met him finally.. n could express her feeling for him.


All those 8 years with out him was like a hell for her'.

Armaan glued in to her face as he saw her expression changes with seconds'

Ridhima he called her back but she did not here him'. So he thought a better way .. he gently hold riddhima's shoulder n shook her out till she was out of her dream

Ar'. Maa'n she suddenly come out of her thoughts saw armaan shaking her in and out'

Basket kya huwa.. kis soch mein dobay hoo'. He asked while holding he sholders..

She suddenly felt in his arms' n hugged him very tightly as she never wanted him to let her go out his life'.

Tum kyun mujhe chod kay chalagay armaan tumay pata mein kitni akhel pad gaythi thumra bina'

Basketmujhe maf kartho mein nahi janta who letter tumara paas kaisa aaya'. Mein tumay chod kar nahi jana chatatha basket'. It all happened in a matter of hour's after ur date with abhi'.

Mujhe laaga ki tum aur abhi ek doosara kay liay perfect ho' aur mein tumdo no ki beach nahi ana chata tha'

Hugging her even tightly' agar sanju ne mujhe yeh realize nahi karvatha shayad mein tumay aur abhi ki kabhi mill ne detha basket''' tum janthi hoo Ijab tum nay kahan kit um abhi ko pasan karnay laga hoo aur tum dono ki nasdeegi ko dekh kar mujhe baut jalan hota thai.. I felt like killing abhi for taking u frm me.. tum toh sirf meri thi na basket phir mein tumsay kaisa janae detha'..

Now riddhima was shocked to here from him actually more shocked to her that sanju was responsible for their spilt''..

Armaan tum''

Mujhe bol nay de basket''. Tum jante ho usss' b**** ki waja se mein tumay ko diya tha'. Sh just pushed riddhima away from him..

B**** now she was more shocked to her from armaan calling his own sis like that rather than his push

Armaan woh tuamri behan hai armaan

She was not my sister n never can be my sister'''. Armaan shouted at top of his voice''

Armaan paar who'..

Enough is enough riddhima I don't want to talk about her now'' aur please never remember me that she was my sister'..

Ridhima realized the situation n armaan's state of mind' she holder he ear's with her handa n made a puppy face.. I'm sorry armaan.. mein aaj key baut usak nam tak apni zuban pe nahi looingi..

You know the most thing I missed was the way u make me calm when I'm angry

That the moment he just pulled ridhima into a another hug'. I missed u riddhima missed u badly.. aab tum meri zinda mein wapa agay toh mein tumay kahi nahi jane dooinga''..

Sachi armaan.. tum mujhe chod kart oh naho jowagay na'..

No way basket.. after all ur my wife now'''. Tumse kasia mein door retha''

n kissed her cheeks '..

arrrrrrrrr armaan tumari beard its itching me''.šŸ˜†

Kya'. šŸ˜•

Ur beard his hitching me armaan''''. Jawo jakar shave karkay awo''..

This time riddhima look at the time its almost 12

Mein nahi janthi agar tumari meri paas ana hai toh u should ho n have a shave right now'' she said while keeping her on hand in her waist n other hand showing him way to the bathroom

Riddhima'''.. armaan shouted from the bathroom

Kya itna shor kyun macharahi hoo. Kya huwa'

Who meri shaving cream lena boolgaya. Can u get me that thing'.

Oh fo armaan tu bi nahi abi tak nahi sudhara wait I'll get'. By the by ur shaving cream is in ur suit case right'..

He nodded his head with a slight yes'.šŸ˜†

Armaan' now riddhima shouted at top of her voice

Mujhe bilk ay gayi chillow math aur kudhi chilla rahi hai'. Armaan said in his mind as he walked out of the bathroom

Kya hai'šŸ˜•'

Yeh kya armaan'😔''''''.



********to be continued********



well part 2B is done guy's well this part would be prety much boring.. but this was needed


ishu

Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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simply loved this part
finally they r together
thanks for the pm n update
love sanam
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow Ishu
awesome part
wondering wht did riddhima see?
thanks for the pm
cont soon

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