~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136

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simi

@searchoffriends

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#411

heyaa hi ,

just read part 8 and 9 , wow yaar both parts were really cool loved reading them

mayur becamming friends ,and then kind of best friends , interesting , and mayank getting jeolous of nupur all time takng about samrat , cool hmm

now sam and gunjam going out of mumbai , and mayur to stay here together , wow , i m sure this is gonna be really interestng now

really waiting to read it ahead ,

update soon ,

till then take care

lots of love

simi

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#412

nice update......but juz loved the promo.....
cant wait 4 ur next update......continue soon

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

kya timing hai update ki......

maine jaise hi forums khula aur mujhe update mil gaya.....

agar tu raat ko bhi update karti toh bhi main abhi padti......

lagta hain khuda bhi chata tha ki tera update sabse phele main hi padu.....

aur sabse phele comment karu.......

kya update tha by god.......

mazza aa gaya.......

sanu scene bahut cute tha.....

infact rocking tha.......

aur update chota tha........

par chota hi sahi bahut accha tha.....

boring toh bilkul bhi nahi tha......

baas aab weekend ka intezaar hai.......

in short tere next update ka intezaar hai......

THNX YR

I AM SOO HAPPY THAT U LYKED MY PART

DO DIN SE ME BUHAT BUSY THI TO UPDATE NHE KARSAKI

WILL TRY TODAY K UPDATE KARU

BCOZ MJHE APNA NEW FF BI UDATE KARNA HAI

THNX FOR APPRECIATING MY WORK

LUV U

SEHRISH

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wind453

@wind453

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Posted: 15 years ago

#414

fabulous update

loved it to the core

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
plzzzzzzz update soon

thora busy hu yr

bt wuld cont soooon

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#416

sorry friendz
for not updating for a long tym
but i will update tommorow morning

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#417

part 10
recap:
sajan and other interns left for lonavla
mayur were alone in mumbai
mayank has to take care of nupur
they becum gud frndz

1 week passed
mayur frndship grew better
now they were best friends
but one thing always hurt mayank
that was nupur always talk about samrat
now
today doctors adviced nupur to walk

she stand and tried to walk
but she fell down but
two strong arms caught hier
it was none other than mayank
they both share a eyelock
suddenly nupur gain concious
n: thnks
m:oh it oks(came back to senses)
n: hmmm
m:waise tumhe kisne kaha k chalo wo bhi begair support k
n: dr ne to bola tha na k i can walk nw
m: ha bola tha but aisa nhe bola tha k direct chaln lago samjhi madam
n: jee sir samajh gaye
m: chalo me tumhari help karta hu
n: by god aj pehli baar samrat ki yaad kum arhe ha
m: acha wo kyun
n: kyunk tum mera us ki trah khayal jo rakhte
m: kaise
n: arey budhu jab me choti thi na tab mjhe ek baar fracture hua tha bro to india me the tab samrat ne mera khayal rakha tha
m: oh (in disappointed tone) tum us se buhat pyar kati ho na
n: ha wo to hai
m: gud so when u r getting engaged( he directly asked her)
while listening this nupur burst out in laugh
it makes mayank confused
n: by god mayank tum dunya k sabse bade idiot dufer stupid ho really tum tko to aqal hi nhe ha gade
m: kyn kia hogya
n: hey mister samrat aur mein bhai behen hai samjhe hum hamesha se bhai behen ki tarah rahe hai har saal me us ko rakh i bandhti hu waise bhi mujhe pehle bhaya phir saya bnane ka shoq nhe
listning to this he becum a lot more happy and hugged nupur
n: kia hua idiot
mayank gai senses
m: kuch nhe hua to tum samrat ki behen ho
n: sirf behen nhe best frndz bhi hai hum wo to meri jaan hai bechara meri tarah orphan hai bt hum dono saath hai to phir no gham
m: waise bhi hum sab hai na saath to tum lonely kyun feel karti ho
like this mayank confusion solved but ot gunjans

a week after
nupur got discharged and is now much better
and they are now going to lonavla
nupur came to sanjeevani with her bag and waited for mayank
mayank was late
nupur was fuming in anger
n:(mumbling) ye idiot badtameez mayank ko to aj me nhe chorne wali aj to pakka i ka murder karugi by god
thn mayank arrives and understood tat she is in anger
he aproaches to he and
m: hi
n: kia hi tum ko time pe ana ata ha k nhe use less insaan
m: sorrry (making a puppy face)
n: kia sorry kab se tumhara wait karhe hu aur thak bhi gaye hu
m: reallly sorry dil se sorry nxt tym kaabhi late nhe hoga
n: ok but nxt tym aisa hua na to u r gone
m: ok ab chale
n: maine kab mana kia
then they drove off to lonavla
but
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kia ye log aasani se paunchege lonavla
kia inki car puncture hojayegi
kia inko raat jungle mein guzarni padegi
kia hoga sajan ki story me
kia wo dost bange
jab nupur ayegi to gunjan kia karegi
nupur ko kaise hurt kadegi
for all this
read nxt part

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#418

great part dear

LOved it ........

Thankgod Mayank came to know about Samrat

Wow they are going to lonavla.......

I'm excited for the next part

do cont soon

Luv
Nidzy~