~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136 - Page 40

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Posted: 15 years ago

part 8

Mayank enters the ward

His guilt was reflecting by his face gestures

He was really guilty and wanted to apologize her for his mistake

Nupur unndrstood his guilt

Mayank approaches to her and

M: hi kaisi ho tum

N:Much better now

M: ( hesitating) wo main……. Tummm…. Se…kuch….kehna …chaaata hu

N: kuch kehna hai bolo

M: wo main……

N: ha bolo

Finally he gained courage and spoke

M: I am really sorry nupur

N; tum kyun sorry bol rhe ho

M: plz mjhe bolne do

Nupur nodded

M: I am really sorry pehle bhi meri waja se tumhara accident hua tha ab is baar meri waja se tum is haal me ho I know me buhat stupid hut um thil kehti hu I am a biggest idiot . mein kisi ki feelings ko nhe samajhta I deserve a punishment

N: mayank me kuch bolu

Mayank just nodded his head

N: dekho tum plz aisi shakal bnake khare mat rho tum pe suit nhe karta aur jahan tak baat rhe accident ki to us me hum dono ki galti thi aur I thnk hum dono us baat pea chi tarah se lar chuke hai and is baar meri haalat ke zimmedar tum nhe ho

M: kaise nhe hu main agar mein files exchange nhe kata to aisa kabhi nhe hota aj meri silly stupid harkat ki waja se tum kitni badi mushily me agaye

N: yr tumne ye isiliye kiya kyunki hum ne tumhare khilaaf plan bnaya tha warna tum aisa nhe karte to scores are level

M: not yet bcoz meri galti badi hai mjhe aisa nhe karma chaye tha

N: plz is baat ko yahe khatam karo is mein kisi ki koi galti nhe thi ab plz is baat ko repeat nhe karma

M: ok soooo can we be friendz

N: sure friendz forever

Then they share a hug

Just a bear hug

No feelings yet

M: so ms nupur malik ye banda aj apki khidmat me hazir hai

N: so cute to ap humare liye kia karsakte hai

N: jo ap chaye

( frndz I knw I am using tough lang plz excusem e for it)

N: well chalo hum kuch baatein karte hai

M: thik hai but is se pehle take ur medicine

N: tum kitne boring ho humesha boring baatein hi karte ho

M: acha me aur boring chalo maan liye but pehle medicines

N: plz mayank mjhe nhe pasand( makig a puppy face)

M: nupur ye to zaruri hai na

M: ok( making a annyed face)

She ate medicine

N: ab dr idiot kya hum kuch baatein kare

M: jap ka hokum sar ankhon pe

N: kool to ab apne bare me kuch btao ke kaha se aye ho etc etc

Thn they share all their likes dislikes everything but nupur every talk starts with samrat and ends eith samrat

Mayank was feeling somewhat jealous but ignored it

After it they become best friendz

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Posted: 15 years ago

main first aaa gayi........ yay

mayur ki finally friendship ho gayi....... it was so cute......
the language you used was awesome......
glad to see mayank jealous......
by the way thank you for updating......
abhi toh 1 hour ke baad ek aur update bakki hai...... horray
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
cute update!!!
loved mayur convo
waiting 4 ur next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part dear

I'm glad they are friends now

waiting for the next one

do update soon

luv
Nidzy~
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sehru!!!!!!!!!!

vvvv cute update

finally they are frnds now

continue

love pebo
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

main first aaa gayi........ yay

mayur ki finally friendship ho gayi....... it was so cute......
the language you used was awesome......
glad to see mayank jealous......
by the way thank you for updating......
abhi toh 1 hour ke baad ek aur update bakki hai...... horray

thnx a lot for liking it dear
well i am thinking to give u promo not an update
wht you think
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear
lovely part
wonderful
so mayur frnds now.
and they share their liking and disliking
lovely part
waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

thnx a lot for liking it dear
well i am thinking to give u promo not an update
wht you think



But i want update.
bcoz this part was too small
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70



But i want update.
bcoz this part was too small

ok i will give u update
til 12 am
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Posted: 15 years ago
Liked it Mayu is jealous that nice
Loved teh whole

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