mayur ff: kyun ki...... - Page 3

loved the character sketch

heyy guys loved yur response ,,,,,,,,,, this is the first part........ i know its quite short but my exams are near and i hav to study,.,,, plz comment........ and press the lyk tab......

i m pari............ today will be the worst day of my life i suppose............ today i m going on business trip of 30 days with my two seniors of different companies......... and they are toooo akadu,,,,,,,,,,,,, sheah....... i wanted to spend these holidays watching movies........ serials............ etc................. bush........ i m so unlucky..........
i went to the airport where i met gunjan................. my frnd...
g: hey pari........ so r u ready for the most boring 30 days of yur life..
wen samrat enters...
s: yeh ek mahina tum kese kaatogi????????????
pari: plz guys tum to mujhe aise discourage kar rahe ho.....
g: dumbo.... discourage nahi kar rahe,,,,,,,, mayank aur nupur....... god poori dunia mein keval yeh do hi jane honge jo itna kam bolte hai aur gussa naak pe lekar ghoomte hai..........
pari: mujhe nahi jaaana hai.....
wen mr. sharma (mayank) and miss bhushan (nupur) come......
n: chalo.....
pari" yes miss bhushan............
and we leave......
i know how passed tose five hrs in the flight,,,,,,,, boring......
finally we reached our destination........ goa..........
we were supposed to live in mr. sharma (mayank) 's farm house.......
we reached there.......... it was a huge farm house...........
i settled my lugggage in my respective room.................
hush............... for past 7 hrs i have not even spoken a single word........ its so wierd.......
neither have miss bhushan and mr sharma.........
but i cud feel sumthing different was going on...... sumthing unusual/////////
yes sumthing unusual....
wen miss bhushan finally started a conversation..
n: so.... we can be frnds,,
finally she asked.......!!!
p : yes ofcourse,,,,,,,,,,
n: so tell me sumthing abt you....
p: me........ you have my biodata mam.........
n: (smiles) yes....
i was feeling bit awkward bcoz mr.sharma was also sitting there and i dont know but he was not saying a single word.....
mayank: hey pari....
p: yes sir........
m: we can be frnds.....
p: of course sir.......
hey look i and miss bhushan became frnds , i and mr.sharma bcame frnds and why not mr.sharma and miss bhushan becaame frnd??
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4th day..
we became quite good frnds........ i mean me and miss bhushan and me and mr, sharma.............
n: pari wat will you prefer in breakfast??
m: pari wat will you prefer in breakfsast??
pari: nupur i will prefer alloo paratha and mayank i will prefer cornflakes...........
and we three laughed,,,,,
pari: guys i m fed up with yur behavior........ no wen we will go back and people will ask me wat you did i will say i m now perfect in grammar ...... i always lost marks in indirect speech/reported speech and now i m perfect in it...... i transfer nupur's talks to mayank and vise versa.....
n: i gotta go.....
pari: no stop......... today i wanna know wats the problem>>>>
wen suddenly the glass rod kept on the table fell on nupur's leg and""""""""""SPLASH'''''''''''''''''''''''
m: nupur....... (he screamed and towards her)
i was lyk did he just say nupur,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. bcoz we never take the first name of any body until unless we know him/her...... and especially women............
but stop thinking tha pari nupur is hurt.....
mayank takes her in his arms and settles her on the sofa......
i go and bring the first aid............ mayank takes out the piece of glass from her leg........ she is crying by now
i start dressing her leg.... and nupur screams in pain.............
i notice her fingers were dug in mayank's arm........ and tears were forming in mayank's eyes.......... i was lost in my thots...
m: pari wat are you doing.??? its bleeding use cotton.....
pari: ab.. haan...
and i start my work again.....
n: mayank its paining............... (and she hid herself in mayank's chest)
i was observing all this..........
till evening nupur's foot was swollen.......... it was bleeding.....
we took her to the doctor................
doctor gives her proper aid.......
doc: yes plz..... she is with you??/
m: yes doctor...
doc: and she is yur???
m: she is my wife.....................
and my eyes widened,............. he said wat???? my jaw dropped at the same tym................. i was looking at mayank with disbelief...............
mayank noticed this and he was not able to meet my eyes where as nupur was looking at mayank in confusion............
doctor noticed this ......
doc: is he yur husband??
n: yes doctor..............
on reaching home........
pari: you are husband and wife........
they nodded in yes..............
and i sat on the couch in shock...........
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so guys this was the first shock........ in every part there will be one shock................ just wait and watch how the story changes its path............. love you all..... sorry for the short part............

one question:

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