SaJan FF:The'Un'Friends[PART 13 PG 16] - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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read ur ff, a good one . I love sajan, plz continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@sajanroxx20 : hey thanks a ton ya! will continue.. ill update the next today itself...n then dunno when .... but ill pm u fr sure.... :)
@aamirkhanfan : hey thanks..will surely continue.. :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 3 : THE "UN"FRIENDS
Diya and Samrat were lately getting to her.. From "hit on each other" , their current status was "can't stand each other".. After getting into a MAJOR fight at Gunjan's place on New Year's Eve, they were always bickering... And what was most irritating about it was, that they always called upon Gunjan to mediate.
One afternoon, Samrat and Mayank kept whispering to each other in the bus... On reaching home, she received a call from Mayank.. "Gunjan , call Samrat. Now." " But whats wrong?" "Its Diya. Him and Diya.. Again.. Theyve had problem.. A major one this time.."
Infuriated, she dialled Samrat's number.. "NOW WHAT!? " She exclaimed as soon as she heard his husky baritone... Which made her think about his eyes... His lips... Until... "I like Diya ." brought her bang down to reality....
Fighting the tears that seemed to have suddenly sprung in her eyes, and ignoring the sinking feeling in her stomach, she concentrated on what he was saying..
"Did you hear me Gunjan?" "Yea...Yeah...Tell me Samrat... What can I do in this? " "I want you to ask her out... For me.. Look... your one of my closest friends...And you are Diya's best friend.. I really need you now ya... Please help me..." And she agreed..
Twenty minutes and a heavy discussion with Diya later, she called Samrat back.. "Cut the excess and come to the point Gunjan.." His eager tone, which sounded slightly harsh, hurt her more than what he said...
"Congratulations Samrat.." was all she could muster, hoping he would keep the phone down and spare her the sorrow of now "sharing his joy" like the "true friend" she was.. But she should have known better.. It was her life, after all..
In between excited whoops of joy and "Isnt it greats" , he seemed to have forgotten that the girl he had talked, flirted and called on for help for hours everyday, was present on the other end of the line..wanting to curl up and die...
And so the Diya-Samrat saga started.. Gunajn being made to feel, every moment, of how much of a hindrance she was to the "lovebirds"..If not for Benji, she would not have survived..She tried her best to walk away from their lives, to distance herself from Samrat, who in turn, was growing closer to her every passing day. Samrat's parents and sister seemed to love her to bits, and there were mny a evenings when Gunjan sat with aunty, gossiping over a cup of hot coffee.. Di , Samrat's sister, seemed to think that Gunjan was the only one who could fire Samrat, and may a times called her to just speak to her, to help her with her life..
It went on so, the reality of Diya and Samrat not quite hitting her really tillone day at her place.. It was just her, Diya and Samrat.. They were watching Harry Potter, and when she suddenly turned around to tell them something in between, she wished she never would have..
Samrat had his head on Diya's shoulder, and their hands were intertwined , with him stroking her hand.. Never had Gunjan had heard such an explosion inside her...Never had she felt so alone, so broken..
Quickly, she whipped her head back in front, and tried to forget about what she just saw..
That night, her dreams had Samrat turning into Diya and the Diya turning into Sid.. She didnt sleep a wink that night..
She had fnally accepted that she was over Sid, and into Samrat...So into him, infact, that there was no way out of there...try as she might..But Samrat kept making matters worse..If only he could stick to his girlfriend and be over with it for once, but no... Gunjan was "very important" in his life, and the first call, anytime, was always to her..
And then he went to Goa on a vacation.. She missed him terribly.. Mayank tried to be funny, adn really sweet about it... But she found herself wanting to see that broken toothed smile more and more with each passing day he was not there.. Till he called.. He was back from Goa, and said he had a surprise waiting fo rher the next day at school, he said..
Now beginning to dread his surprises, she tried hard to bunk school the next day, but in vain.. It seemed as if she was God's personal entertainment, she thought angrily!
As she sat in the bus the next day, a hand popped out in front of her.. holding a red bag with golden stars and hearts on it... She pinched herself to make sure if this was real, when "Open it...Go on.." , his husky vcoice somewhere close behind her ear made her turn...And she FINALLY SAW... that smile she had being dying to see...
"Go on", he said..urging her to open the bag...She did, and caught her breath..Inside was the most beautiful shell bracelet she had laid her eyes on... lying there in a red wrapping tissue...
so.... hows it? sorry for forcing on you sooo much of torture at once..but its kinda like an adaptation of a real happening...and i can write loads..but tellme if im gettin boring k?
Edited by saaw - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
awsome ff yr
i loved both parts
ples cont soon
n ples add me in your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
i rfeally love your part 1 ,2and 3 plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
omggggggggggggg fabulasssssssss update dear
awesome mindblowing fantasticcccccccccccccccc
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

PART 4 : THE "UN"FRIENDS

She stared at the bracelet, too scared to touch it.. Wondering if it was one of her dreams.. Almost as if he had read her mind, he said, "I got it for you, specially...Saw it in Goa and felt it would look great on you.." It was one of the greatest moments of her life, especially in the last year or so..As she took it in her hand, it shone..Placing it on her wrist, she marvelled at how right the size, shape and coloyr were...For her.. A small smile spread on her lips.."Thanks a ton ya.. It's beautiful"... "Um.. Do you want to keep it with you, or should I give it to at the end of the day, when you are going home?" Giving it back to him, she couldn't wait for the day to end...
"Gunjan! Gunjan! I need your help yaar...!" As he came running to her in break, she couldn't help but admire him from afar... Tall, trim and with his hair flopping on ti his forehead... "Um.. There's a problem yaar Gunjan...Um...That bracelet.. " "Yeah, it's beautiful Samrat..But what about it?" "Actually, I need your help.." "Yeah I got that part Samrat, go on.." she said, a tad sarcastically...
"I had got the same bracelet for Diya, too..Um but... Sir confiscated both of them and he lost one...Um.. so..... What do I do?" Cursing her luck, Gunjan, once again, to her utmost anger, found herself saying "It's okay Samrat.. GIve that one to Diya.. I'll be fine with no bracelet.." "But Gunjan.." "No buts..! She's your girlfriend after all...Isnt she?" Seeming to be satisfied with the reasoning, and woth a "Ur the best Gunjan!" , he ran off..leaving her behind with a turmmoil of emotions that, once again, threatened to spill out through her tears..
"Will you go out with me?" The question startled her, as did the voice.. Chacko! She hadnt seen that one coming... It was a Sunday, and they all were at Diya's house...lounging around... She was sitting on Diya's study table, and Chacko was kneeling at her feet, having asked this question after a heartfelt and LOUD rendition of "Teri Deewani"... Her laughter at the way he was singing stopped abruptly at this question..and she searched around the room till her eyes met those chocolate brown ones of a certain broken toothed person, who was grinning away to glory, giving her a a rare sighting of his dimples.. The day had suddenly turned into a claustrophobic nightmare for her.. Trying to laugh it out, she jumped off the table and started walking out of the room, when a hand suddenly held her wrist.. Thinking it was Chacko, she jerked it off and turned around, eyes blazing, only to meet the now-questioning gaze of Samrat, the grin wiped off his face... She shrugged her shoulders and shook her head, and giving him and accusatory glance, Gunjan walked out of the room, her mind trying to think clearly, while her heart and head buzzed with the realization that he had held her...looked into her eyes..and drat! now followed her out of the room, while Diya looked on speechlessly..
His arm around her shoulders and her voice a bit too close to her ear for comfort made her temper flare.. "Stop this rubbish Samrat! You know I hate all this..!" They were in the car, going home from Diya's - her, Samrat and Chacko, who Samrat had offered to drop home, much to her annoyance...Didnt he care even a bit about her?? As if offering Chacko a ride home wasn't bad ebough, now Samrat was putting an arm around her shoulder..And whispering nonsense to her... Looking smugly at Chacko and asking him "Aren't you jealous?" in between... Flinging his arm off her, she scooted away from him and looked out of the window, refusing to say even as much as a "Bye" to him, as he gout out of the car near his house..
"Please please please please go out with me..." It was thursday now, and she had had enough of this from Chacko since Sunday... Samrat wasn't much help either.. "Look Gunjan, the guy is suffering...Do some social service, go out with him, and end his misery.. That's about it...Simple.." was all Samrat said to her through all of this.. Losing her patience, she marched to Samrat and went menacingly close... "WHAT DO YOU EXPECT ME TO DO, YOUR HIGHNESS?" "Trust me and go out with him...", was all he said. She looked into his eyes then..asking if it was wrong, convinced that it was wrong... BUt she saw only support and assurance in them... "Okay Chacko... Ill go out with you.." Smiling at him slightly, she wondered why this seemed so bad, even though Smarat had told her to do it... He had her best intersts at heart after al.. Still not convinced, she went home in a thoughtful mood that day, refusing to participate in the idiotic party Samrat was giving everyone in the bus for the new "happiness" in Gujan's life..
okay guys, part 4 up!
part 5 coming up in 30 mins....
love ya all
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 3 n 4 were grr888888..
luved it..
do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
lol wonderfull update yaar
but chaco and gunjan not so happening
anyways awesome update dear
as usal
mindblowing
plzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
thanks for ur comments guys...
@sana : actually i wanted to get in a not so happening guy to continue d story further.. thats wat it is.. not so happening! :P

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