SaJan FF:The'Un'Friends[PART 13 PG 16]

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Sana Quraishi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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awwwwwwwwww itna doin baad ok we will wait but dear mera exams hi 10 march sa shuru ho raha hai final anyways i will do wait

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saaw

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Okay guys...Im back!!!! here is part 7..a bit rusty coz have not written for sooo long... sry bout the mistakes...just in too much of a hurry.. :)

PART 7 : THE "UN"FRIENDS

"Gunjan!! It's Samrat...!" As Annie called out from the living room, Gunjan sat up and squinted at her watch... 9 o clock?? Why did this guy have to call up at 9 in th morning? And especially on a girls night out..when they had slept at 5 in the morning.....

Rubbing her eyes, she yawned and walked out of her room, only to stop in her tracks... Sitting on th sofa was .... Mr. Samrat Shergill...!! Suddenly concious of her short-as-they-can-go shorts and a noodle strap top, she suddenly looked down... Feeling exposed under his gaze, which, for some reason never left her face... She had the sudden yrge to run back into her room and look in the mirror, at what was so intersting in her "i-am-half-asleep-so-dont-you-dare-disturb-me-and-get-the-hell-lost" face...

"Ahem.." Annie's concious cough suddenly brought them both back to reality, and Gunjan sat down on the sofa opposite him, pulling up a cushion to cover herself.. "Um..Yeah..So..." They both began at the same time, extremely akward.. Gunjan's eyes searched for Annie to salvage the situation, only to find that she had taken sanctuary in the kitchen, "helping Gunjan's dad" to make tea... She almost groaned in frustration..

"Um ya so here are your notes..Thanks..." Handing over her notes, he stood up, wanting to leave, but wanting to stay at the same time... She could not stand up, and couldnt tell him why she couldnt... She hoped and prayed that their usual "telepathic" connection woud work this once...just this once.... :)

"Um... Its okay, keep sitting...Ill cya in school... " She was just about to give him a grateful smile when she cought sight of that iriitating smirk lining the corners of his lips... And wanted to thwack the brat for making her life so difficult... Sighing, she muttered a "bye" and he walked out...

SOO.... guys how was it?? sorry if it wasnt up to the mark...will update in a while.. :)

Love ya all!

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jyotika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

awesomeeeeee ud..
luved it..
plzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

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Sana Quraishi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

awesome update yaar👏👏👏

after so long🥱

it was just wow hmm may i know when they will fall in love and woh is goen first fall in love plz plz plz yeh mujhe bol do kaun pehla kisse pyaar karta ok

and plz try to update it soon

n thanx for the pm

love

sana😊

Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago

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Ravz.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Ohhhhh your back ;)
great update ..
alittle short though? :(
do continue soon,
can't wait to find out the rest of the story
you knowww ... between gunjan and sammyyy :P

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ohh &+ p.s could you add me to your PM list?!
pleaseee & thank-yuuuu
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Edited by Ravie101 - 15 years ago

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saaw

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Posted: 15 years ago

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PART 8 :THE "UN"FRIENDS

"Please go out with me... Please please please Gunjan.." "Stop it Samrat! Are you insane?" She turned her head around, clearly annoyed, when a husky voice close to her ears sent delicious shivers down her spine.. " But I am serious, Gunjan..." A hand came out from nowhere and grabbed her shoulders, forcing her to look up at him.. As she stared into those chocolate orbs of his, her heart fluttered wildly, doing all sorts of acrobatics.,..Mentally trying to order it to shut up, she focused on him instead...

"Can't you do this for me Gunjan? Im serious, Ill die without you... I need you..." She thwacked him hard on his arm and in the process, sneaked a quick look around.. Forty pairs of eyes were staring back at them from the front and back of the bus.. Oblivious to all this, Samrat went on.."Why Gunjan? Please.. I beg you.." "Samrat! Stop it! We are creating a scene!!" she hissed.. He turned around, and saw everyone staring at them, transfixed as if it was some star studded movie premier they were attending... "Well then, sweetheart, lets give them the show they want... Should we??" Her reasonable mind screaming in protest, she found herself nodding...even when a little voice insde her head kept going " no Gunjan..!" but then, again, what could one do when those intense eyes looked at you like you were the only thing they saw.. the husky voice almost made you swoon..and that cute dimpled smile peeked out..only for you?

It was that day of her life..the day she had been waiting for..in her dreams and when she was awake..day and night..since..since she had fallen head over heels in love..yes she was in love..with her "best friend"..

Said best friend took her hand in his, clearly not knowing what effect he had on her...or did he? That irritating patch of red was sreading...A dead give-away.. He did not seem to notice it, though, and continued.. "Ever since I laid my eyes on you.. You filled my thoughts..Haunted my dreams...Prevented me from thinking clearly.. You became the purpose of my life... I fought with you only to draw your attention towards me...I need you in my life.. As much much more than just my best friend..." "Gunjan, he is joking...Its an act...He is NOT serious... YOU, of all people should know that..." Listening to this voice of reason, Gunjan was about to snap back at Samrat, stopping just short of that when she remembered the people watching... "No Samrat.. " she said more firmly..and then a little gently, "Look, we are just not meant to be....okay?" She stroked his back, in an attempt to show the people she was consoling a poor heartbroken kid, when he suddenly shivered under her touch like she was electricity and jumped back... She saw tears in his eyes as he said.. "But ...please.." Come on Gunjan...the poor guy loves you..." "Say yes Gunjan...!" As these shouts filled the bus, she looked up bewildered, into his eyes..not knowing what to do...But she saw reassurance in them..and the familiar mischievious twinkle... Sighing in relief, but marvelling at what a great actor he was, she decided to get on with it.. "Um..if you all say so, then...well Samrat... Okay... Ill go out with you..." "Oky um..and since youve said yes to that...wil you marry me?" "Samrat!!!" As his laughter reverberated in he bus, she too joined along... "Guys, WE WERE JOKING!" he said.. "But..But...you guys...WHAT?" Aamir looked accusingly at them.. "BUT YOU GUYS SEEMED IN LOVE!!" And the entire bus, furious at first, gradually relaxed and laughed at how they had been completely taken in by the "honest" acting of these idiots..

Laughing along with a heavy heart, Gunjan steeled herself to accept the fact...The fact that Samrat would never ever ever fall for a girl like her.. "So Gunjan, aren't I a marvellous actor? It was on behalf of Benji, though..." He added with a grin.. "Well then Samrat, you can tell BENJI that him and me are like brother and sister, though I have a strong suspicion he knows that...SO out with it Samrat...Which of your future girlfriends were you practicing for on me huh?? " "How do you know??" "Well Samrat, because...you and me...NAH... never ever ever... Dont you think?" winking at him, she walked out of the bus... Unknown to her, a certain dimpled smile was wiped off a handsome face, and real tears filled two chocolate brown eyes.. "I wish you knew Gunjan...I wish...."

Well guys...part 8 up....part 9 comin gin an hour..how was it??tellme ....

love ya all

Edited by saaw - 15 years ago

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saaw

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

PART 9A : THE "UN"FRIENDS

"Okay Rana, Ill see you later then!" Smiling to herself, Gunjan sat in the car.. Life was going great... Samrat still tortured her life out of her with Mayank, but Rana was always there to help her ease her frustration about the two monkeys in her life who torured her no end! The practice for the dance competition in school was in full swing, and after a month of coming home wirth stiff muscles, she was finally convinced that their dance, which was two days away, would surely be the best... As her car pulled up into that all too familiar army cottage driveway, Samrat's smile from his porch caught her eye... She was in a very comfortabke position with him now, having finally gotten over her infatuation with him...She no longer was akward... nor did he flirt with her anymore...Their relationship was just a steady,companiable feeling of being there for each other...

She stepped out of the car, only to be greeted by his groan... "Oh god you nerd! Had to bring books to study here also...!" "Exams are a week away Smarat!! Come on...Im going to make suyre you come atleast in the top 10!" "So you mean we are going to study on a wonderful sunny day like this??" "So what else do you have in mind, Mr. Shergill?" "Um...Ms. Bhushan, I was thinking more on the lines of....football?" "Only if you religiously promise to study for the next hour...!"

After going through countless math sums, they stood up...Stretching her back, Gunjan caugt Samrat looking at her..."What?" "Um..Nothing..That top looks good... You know, you should wear red more often.." Flushing at his words, she walked outside into the sun...

"Okay Smarat that's enough... I'm tired..." "Okay then...But just see me jump over this hedge first...Look!" "Whats the big deal in that? I can do it too!" So saying, Gunjan jumped over a wide hedge separating Samrat's garden and his walway...He did it again...So did she...and Oww!!! Excruciating pain shot up through her ankle... Blinded with agony she felt hot tears slip down her cheeks.. Suddenly two strong palms cupped her face.. "Whats wrong?" There was concern in his voice as she looked up at him.."I gues...I think I sprained my ankle..." "Just a sprain..come on Gunjan I thought you were made of stronger stuff!" A mocking laugh followed...Wild with rage, she stood up ignoring the flash of pain that ran through her leg immediately..."Well,"she said straightening her face.. "You want to see what Im made of?Lets have a fball match baby..Then tell me.."

Twenty minutes later, she collapsed to the ground, crying with pain...Maybe the football wasnt such a good idea afterall...

"Gunjan! What' wrong? Are you OKay??You look white as a sheet..OH SHIT! Its your leg..Oh my god...Wait let me have look at it!" A slightly hysterical and overly concerned Samrat took off her shoe...And there it was..Her ankle, swollen to almost double its size... He cupped her face in his hands.."Hey..Im sorry..I...I..I dint know it was this serious...But you know what, you are the bravest girl Ive seen..MY bravest girl..." Saying so , he wiped her tears off, stroking her face in the process..She closed her eyes and let the warmth of his fingers spread, momentarily taking hr attention away from her ankle... Suddenly he picked her u pin his arms, bridal style, and started walking towards his porch, ignorng her strong protests...

OKAY GUYS...TO BE CONTINUED...

Edited by saaw - 15 years ago

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Ravz.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

awwww just great darling ;)
Sajan getting closer hopefully?!
oh pleaseee pleasseee pleasseee
LOL
aniiwayyyyy continue soon babe.
and please add me to your PM list?
best of luck with the rest of the story
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