MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 93

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Posted: 14 years ago
kiran very nice part
you have told few small things those are indeed have proceless meaning dear
I loved the part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran--madi

@MjhtFan_Mahima ---Thanks alot Mahi...mwaahhh :D :D

you always welcomeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 28-
so touching
and so enchanting
i so loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part thanks for pm dear 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey friends...
Thank you so much for all the love showered. This is the last part of my FF. Here it goes:
Part 29(last part):
Mayank pulled another pillow in an attempt to avoid the voice rather 'subah-subah-wali-noise' but this attempt was but ofcourse--UNSUCCESSFUL!! N:"Mayank..tum abhi nahi uthoge phir baad mein mujhe blame karoe k tumhari waja se late hogaya...phir tumhein samjhaane bethi toh frustrate hoge...Mayank, tum sun rahe ho na?"
Mayank knew getting peaceful moments early morning was MISSION IMPOSSIBLE so he reluctantly sat up on the bed and giving a mocking smile said:"Haan meri madona..tumhari nahi sunooga toh kaha jaaonga?"
N:"Kia kaha tumne?" M:"Ummm...nahi kuch nahi..kuch bhi toh nahi..meri itni majaal jo main tumhein kuch kahoon..." Nupur continued grumbling while roaming in the entire room cleaning it up. She went near the side-board just beside the bed and said:"Mayank..tumhein pata hai tumhari is subah subah wale sataane se mujhe bohat gussa aata hai...meri nahi sunni na tumhein?Toh theek hai...jao..jo karna hai karo.." Nupur turned when Mayank was quick to pull her and there she was right in his arms.. N:"Mayank tum kia kar rahe ho...Pari.."
Mayank put a finger on her lips and gestured with commanding eyes:"Ssshhh...chup...bilkul chup..."
It was this magic that didn't dissappear from their lives even after seven years of wedding. Mayank's eyes still had the power of making Nupur's heart skip a beat everytime he saw her.
Mayank had made up something and looking away said:"Hmhh..shayad yehi reason hoga...haan I guess its right..yehi theek hai.."
N:"Kia reason?kia theek hai?"
With this Mayank looked at her and went even closer to her saying:"Shayad issi ek baat se main ne tumhein apna dil de diya.."
Nupur whispered:"Kia?"
M:"Yehi...k waise toh kitna bolti ho tum par jahan main tumhare itna paas hota hoon tab kuch na bol k bhi tumhari aankhein hi sab keh jaati hain.."
Nupur smiled and then the two looked at each other till Nupur suddenly realized:"Mayank...ab jaldi utho...warna sach mein late ho jayega..mujhe Reyaansh ko bhi dekhna hai..."
With this, she hurriedly stood up leaving Mayank behind talkin to himself:"Ye Reyaansh ki waja se Reyaansh k dad ki value kam hogayi hai!!Chalye Mr.Sharma ab aap ki Nupur aap k paas nahi aayengi..Reyaansh k saath jo busy hain!!"
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She tiptoed silently into his room. He was in the deepest moments of his sleep. A look at the study table confirmed he was again up late night working. She smiled and silently moved towards the study table piling up the books and papers. She adjusted her glasses on her face...one habit that came to her from her mom, perhaps!! Finally, when all mess was cleared, she picked up her mom's photo frame and kept it properly on the table. Her mom smiled at her and she smiled too...how she wished her mom was here...Gunjan was here!! Pari then started talking to her mom whispering:"Dekha mamma...Papa phir der tak kaam kar rahe the...kabhi kabhi araam bhi toh karna chahye..."
"Kia baatein ho rahi hain maa-beti k beech...??"At this Pari turned to look behind at her dad who was awake..
Pari walked towards Samrat's bed and sitting beside him said:"Wo hum aapko nahi batayein ge...that's a top secret..!!"
S:"Oho...I see...toh phir itna bata do k aaj ka surprise kia hai?"
P:"Nahi...cheating nahi papa...main ne sab ko neechey hall mein bulaya hai...tabhi bataongi..aap bhi tayaar ho k neechey aajao..."
S:"Dekh rahi ho.."he shifted his look at Gunjan's frame while he continued:"Ab humein Pari k secrets bhi pata nahi chalte.."he looked at Pari again saying:"Jo hukum madam...main abhi aata hoon..."
This was their little world. Pari was told at the age of seven about her mom. That little girl had a sense of maturity that had always been surprising for all of them. Guess when something that unfortunate happens in one's life, God gives them the mind to deal with it. Pari had grown up at a very young age. She took care of her dad. The little things she could do like clearing up his room and if nothing else just talking to him..her voice was always enough to cheer up Samrat no matter how stressed he was. Things had been this way ever since Shashi Bhushan accepted Pari. Although a little strict even today, he was the world's best grandpa for Pari!!
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"Ayush...ready ho jao...we need to leave...Pari didi ne ghar bulaya hai na!!"Ridhimma said in the usual sweet tone.
Ayush-Ridhimma and Armaan's son. The little one who was just another Armaan, or so Ridhimma believed. He was just as caring and protective for Pari, although younger to her, as Armaan was for Gunjan.
Ayush:"Mummy...hum itni subah subah Pari didi k ghar kyun jaa rahe hain?"
R:"Dunno beta...kuch kaam hoga tabhi toh jaa rahe hain na.."
A:"Mummy kal hospital mein late hoa tha na?!"
Ridhimma was busy putting important files in her purse while she said:"Hmhhh.."
A:"Aap k patient ki report kaisi thi?"
R:"Achi nahi thi..."
A:"Report achi nahi thi?Toh patient ki mummy ko bolo usko naya toy nahi dilaane ko.."
At this Ridhimma stopped and turned to face him. She questioned:"Kia?Kia toy?"
A:"Wo last time jab Reyaansh ki report achi nahi thi toh Nupur maasi ne bola tha na k..."he stopped and stood up at the chair on which he was sitting all this while and started memicking his Nupur maasi:"Teher jaa Reyaansh...is baar tujhe koi naya toy nahi dilaaongi...bal k aaj toh teri khabar loongi.."
At this Ridhimma laughed out. Armaan who was silenty listening to all this entered the room. He too was laughing. He said:"Champ!Reyaansh ki school ki report ki baat ho rahi thi...us patient ki health report ki baat ho rahi hai.."
Ayush kept his hand on his head and said:"Uff...ab samjha..papa pehle batate na..."
At this, Armaan and Ridhimma laughed and looked at each other.
Ayush hurriedly came down the chair and said:"Ab main bhi ready ho hi jaata hoon.." and then left the room singing:"Dhinka jeeka..😆"
Armaan and Ridhimma looked at Ayush and Armaan said:"Ye bhi na...poora pagal hai.."
R:"Tum pe gaya hai..."
Armaan tried to get closer to Ridhimma but she was quick in saying:"Armaan...mujhe breakfast banana hai tum please Ayush ki help karo..."
Ridhimma was just about to leave when Armaan said:"Arey Ridhimma ek baat kehna bhool gaya tha.."
R:"Kia?"
Armaan walked towards Ridhimma and gave a kiss on her forehead:"Thank you...mujhe Ayush dene k liye.."
He then went to help Ayush and Ridhimma was left behind with a smiling face.
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When everyone was there in the hall, Pari started:"Hmhh..toh bataye aaj din kia hai?"
At this, Armaan whispered to Samrat and Mayank:"Abay yar..ab kaun sa din hai?Anniversary?"
S:"Yar ye junior Gunjan class lene mein master hai..sharafat se yaad karo warna aaj toh gaye. Mayank, tumhari awaaz kyun band hai..."
M:"Kyunki dates k maamle mein itna darr mujhe school mein history se bhi nahi laga tha jitna shaadi k baad lagta hai...ITEHAAZ GAWAAH HAI..bohat bura hota hai.."
P:"Kia kar rahe hain aap log?"
M:"Dekho Pari beta...aise mini heart-attacks dena band karo kyunki agar tumhari Nupur maasi ko galati se bhi koi aisa waisa din yaad aagaya na toh beta ye aaj ka din main zindagi bhar nahi bhool paonga.."
N:"Mayank tum.."
P:"Uff...ab aap dono phir shuru mat ho jana..aaj..mummy-papa ki first meeting anniversary hai..."
Samrat was taken aback. How could he possibly forget?But how did Pari know?
P:"Kia hoa, Papa?bhool gaye?"
S:"haan...haan...main...I am sorry...pata nahi...kaise?!"
Ridhimma who also had the same question asked:"Lekin Pari, how did you know?"
P:"Bhool gayi Ridhimma maasi..?Mummy ki diary se..."
Samrat smiled and Pari looked at him asking:"Ab kia??Mummy ka gift?"
S:"Haan dadi maa...ab jab aap ko itna yaad tha toh ye bhi bata hi do k aap ki mom ka gift kia hai?"
P:"Aaye mere saath.."
All of them accompanied Pari to her room. It was full of paintings. On one such painting, there was a cloth and they all guessed this was the gift. Pari:"1...2...3..."
What all of them saw when the cloth was moved was just unbelievable. Nupur had tears in her eyes. Samrat moved towards the painting and touched it and then looked at Pari in curiosity:"Kaise Pari?Kaise banaya?"
P:"Ye saare pal dil mein toh hamesha se hi the...yun samjh lijiye...ek khayaal ko canvas pe utaar dia.."
It was the best gift ever!It was a painting of Gunjan making Pari's hair while Samrat was sitting beside and the family was sharing a light moment.
Samrat cupped Pari's face and said:"Thank you..."
P:"No..thank you Papa...mujhe itne pyaare rishte dene k liye...aap ki aur mamma ki waja se mujhe itne ache rishte mil gaye...undefined, yet eternal relationships..."
Part ends..
FF ends...
Friends, this FF conveys a message...its not always necessary for relationships to have a name. Its the love we can give to someone that makes it an eternal bond.
*sigh*...ye thoda zyada ho gaya...!!Anyways, thank you so so much for all the comments/likes/suggestions/requests...if it was not for your motivation, I don't think I would have ever written so much...Thank you so much for reading this FF..🤗🤗
Best wishes...Kiran :)
@red:love Reyaansh from D3😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG.. Kiran... That was such an emotional update.. Gunjan making Pari's hair with Samrat besides her... And this FF, you have written very nicely and the emotions were also heart-wrenching.. especially when Nupz shouts in front of her Dad and later feels bad for that..
Hoping to read your New FF soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved da ending
beautiful
going u miss da ff
thanks 4 all ur hard work
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
such an emotional ending...loved it sooo much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome dear
loved it a lot
great ending
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
loved the ending
will miss this ff
thanks 4 da pm
muahhh
xxx

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