MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 55

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi friends... I am so sorry for being away for a long while now...actually, I had made up my mind to update around 2 days back but then one news on IF just put my mood off...!!!---One of MJHT characters to die...this is just worst...!!!Still can't believe that this is gonna happen...😭
This update is all but a little like the theme of MJHT these days...sadness comes right after happiness...This has the song:"Zindagi Do Pal!!"---O!!I hate getting senti...😭
@blue+bold=song..
@blue+italics=feelings..
@black+bold=present...
@green+italics=past..
Part-14:
Late night at their own homes the four were so happy...it seemed that they had got all that could ask life for. Getting the true love...which was not always so easy!!
Sitting in his room, Mayank was so glad he had sorted out the matters and confessed his love to Nupur..he smiled lovingly as he thought of Nupur's "non-verbal" confession with that hug. With Nupur, lying silently on her bed, she was unimaginably happy. She had always loved surprises. Anyone would love it especially when they come when you least expect them. Her life had gifted her with Mayank whom she loved and who loved her. Her feelings were mixed with happiness plus fear---fear that she might lose him.
On the other hand, there was no more fear in Armaan's heart. Standing on the terrace, he was so sure that this time that Ridhimma was back to his life, she was back never to go back. And Ridz...her seraphic smile was back again...this time never to fade away...she hugged her teddy right beside her on her bed.
Mayank turned the radio on..
Nupur put her headphones on her ears ready to listen to her favourite song..
Ridz switched on the TV..
Armaan settled on the swing on his terrace, and played it on his phone..
And then started the song which so resembled their lives..
"Zindagi...do pal ki...
Zindagi...do pal ki..."
Armaan and Ridz thought of those 5 years they had lost..
"Intezaar kab tak hum kareinge bhala?
Tumhein pyaar kab tak na kareinge bhala?"
Ridz thought of how Armaan had consoled her and their hug..
"Dil mein tumhare chupa di hai maine to apni ye jaan
Ab tum hi isko sambhalo hume apna hosh kahan"
The words reminded Mayank of his first meeting with Nupur...how he had once fallen on her at her home...little did he known that he had actually fallen in love with her that day..
"Bekhudi do pal ki, zindagi do pal ki
Intezaar kab tak hum karenge balah
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge balah"
Nupur thought of that very moment when Mayank had confessed his love for her..and how he convinced her till she finally accepted her love and her hidden feelings came out. She cutely smiled at that moment..
The four were so happy in their lives that very night that words are quite less to describe it..for them their life was perfect...atleast they thought so!!!
There are some moments in life when you can just look at how good your life is and say:"I love life!!"Just was the same in Nupur's case...when she was about to ask her life how could it possibly be so perfect for her?Her life gave her a signal to tell her that it was not really so perfect afterall............
The next morning, the two sisters woke up when they heard the doorbell. They had slept quite late past night and so theirs was a late morning. They opened the door to find a postman in front of them. He handed over the letter to Ridhimma and then after taking her signature left. Nupur was right there and Ridhimma handed it to her for it was addressed to "Nupur Bhushan". She stood there while Nupur opened it. It turned out to be a court notice reminding Nupur that Pari was to become 5 years old in another 2 months and she had to deposit the required amount for her security. But the money part wasnot what was bothering Nupur at all. It was a promise she had given her little sister that was troublesome. How she wished Gunjan was there and never left her alone to face all this mess!!!Ridhimma looked at Nupur's worried face and asked:"Kia hoa?"
N:"Kuch nahi Di...court ka notice hai..In two months, Pari ki custody k liye paise..."
R:"Nupur...paise ki fikar mat kar.."
N:"Baat paiso ki nahi hai Di.."and then she became silent for a while..
R:"Toh phir baat kia hai?"
Nupur looked at Ridhimma and then told her about a past conversation with Gunjan------------
Gunjan had always known there were complications in her pregnancy and that she might not survive after giving birth to her baby. She had spoken about this to Nupur. She had called up Nupur and told her to come to her house urgently. She showed Nupur her reports. Nupur was in tears when she saw it and further broken when Gunjan explained her that it was either her or her child who was to live. Nupur tried all ways to convince Gunjan but she wouldnot listen.
G:"Di...please Di...mere bache ko dono gharo ko thodne mat dena...is bache ko toh toote rishter jodne hai...please Di..."
Gunjan said so much in those less words. Nupur was taken aback thinking when did her lil sis get so mature?!
Back to the painful present, the two elder sisters stood in front of Gunjan's photo hanging on the wall in her room...they had always thought Gunjan was their daughter. They had tears in their eyes thinking about all the pain Gunjan had gone through in the past..they could never even think of such a life for Gunjan in the worst of their nightmares and then Nupur wiped her tears as if promising Gunjan that Pari will make things fine. Her daughter will reunite the families..
Part ends..
Luv--Kiran=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks 4 the awesome update
loved it
i am glad all 4 of them r happy
hpope get more AR/MN scences
con soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi di
nice part!!
love the song selection =)
its my fav right now =P
and also loved how yu described every person's feelings
luv yu =D
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it
i am glad all 4 of them r happy
hope we get more AR/MN scences
con soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome pary dear...gunji's part with nupur was really heartbreaking....loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww such a sweet part!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy kiran
Nice update yaar
But wat is going to come in mayurs way??
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

wonderful update

thanks 4 pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved the update..

i was kinda missing your updates.. So it was pleasant to see you back..

the story is going awesome..

please update soon..

love,
Akansha

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