MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#241

amazing part Kiran......................."main jab chaun tumhe apna bana ke le jaa sakta hun................." that was wonderful............................

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#242

hey kiran..nice part..

Armaan had come back n Riddhima asked him to leave..but she didn't want him to..he came n hugged her..thats like Armaan!

Mayank came to pick her up..n he said he wouldn't run with her..hw cute..they kept staring..but had to break..

someone was flirtin with Mayank..n Nupur was totally jealous..she screamed at Mayank..n she herself admitted she was jealous..lol.

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#243

It was sweet for Mayur loved it

Mayu actually said wat he wanted

Nups jealous oye hoye

It was senti for Armaan n Ridz

Hop their probs get solved soon n they becum 1 jaldi hi

Liked whole update

I cu;s imagine Mayu copying Nups words😆😆

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aishar

@aishar

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#244

woahh luved d ar part!!!!! cont asap!!

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maizis

@maizis

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#245

awwww!!!!!!!!!!
mayur are sooooo cute
but such a small part!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#246

Hi kiran
nice update
it was short but lovely.
loved mayur as usual
good going
keep it up

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#247

loved mayur

wonder the mystrey between ar

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Kiran--Madiha

@kiran--madi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: coolvini4u
*Edited*
lol...i cant believe it !! M d first to comment ...yay!! 😊😆

Hey kiran,

It was a nice part yaa... bt very short... esp AR part was ... 😭 😭 ..bt newaz,i hope u make up for it next tym...😊

I wonder wats the mystery about AR.. m dying to know it .. n u keep on increasing my curiosity by every new part of urs... not fair ya.. 😆...Itna attayachaar toh mat karo mujh par... 😆 😆

Btw,it was very well written ... n Mayur are simply soo adorable esp Nupur... she's so full of lyf... 😳 😛

Thanx 4 d pm...n continue soon with a longggg part dis tym plz...

luv
vini 😳

Hi Vini...

😆😆---ur comments r always so vry sweet n ds one's jst da same...

awww...sry yaar...will try 2 make up a bigger update nxt tym...

haha...dnt wry..da nxt part ll strt opening up da mystery!!though in parts....😉

Thank u so much...

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Kiran--Madiha

@kiran--madi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Good.. u knew it was a short part.. aur mein tumhe thoda gyaan de wali thi ki lambi updates kaise likhte hain.. i totally loved it.. and the best line of the update was when Mayu tells Nupz ki Mr. Malhotra ko bolna .. that dialogue.. that was the best part of this whole update..

Hi Divya...

Yup!!I knew this was a shrt one...

haan yaar shayad longer updates k liye tumse tips leni pareingi...😆😆

hmhh...hamare mayur hain hi itne adorable...😳

thank u so much 4 da appreciation...

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Kiran--Madiha

@kiran--madi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: myownarea
kiran 🤗

that was such a cute update:)
Mayank's style..ufff:) kya baat hai LOL
they r indeed very cute :)
loved the update :)

Hey Divya....🤗

hw much i luv ur hugs gal...!!

Thanx a ton yaar...

n 4 Mayank---i strtd blushing wen i imagined ds scene btwn MayUr....😳