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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi kiran nice part
i love maynk's word that was true and lovely too
soon update the next one

hey adi...thank u so much!!--glad u lyked it=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi everyone!!!🤗 Thank u so vry much 4 all da appreciation n encouragement...now that there were some positive signs from Mayank's side and a little progress in MayUr story, I thought this was the best time to bring Armaan in... Here comes-- Part-7: Ridhimma stood silently...she didnt know how to react. There was anger and frustration within her for she had never thought Armaan would break the promise given to her. How could he come back?But then, her heart asked her:"Am I really angry?"
She didnt realize when Armaan had entered her cabin and called her name:"Ridhimma!!"
Her name sounded so different to her when Armaan called it. She melted. For a while, she had forgotten all the pain....the past...but then she came back to present when she turned around to face him..
Armaan smiled:"Kaisi h.."
Ridhimma cut her off:"Tum wapis kyun aaye Armaan?"
Armaan:"Ridhimma...tum.."
Ridhimma interrupted again:"You promised me..didnt you?Mujhe laga tha k tum mere promise ko kabhi nahi todo ge...but no!!I was wrong...jab tumne mujhe hi tod dia toh phir tumhare liye yeh promise kaun si bari baat hai..hai na?"
Armaan tried to explain:"Ridhimma, meri baat toh suno!"
Ridhimma:"Kia?Kuch nahi sunna....jao Armaan and just leave me alone!"
And she turned her back to him...her heart cried:"Mat jao Armaan...please..!!Please!!"
As if Armaan had heard it, he pulled Ridhimma by her arm and she faced him...her face down...her eyes filled with tears...she looked helpless...a tear rolled down his cheek when he saw Ridhimma in this condition....he didnt say anything and just hugged her!!Hugged her tightly....and Ridhimma....as if this was all she had wanted...she hid herself in his arms...it was her Armaan!!!In those few moments, her heart refused to agree that he could ever hurt her. He loved her and she knew it. Armaan hugged her so tight...as if he would never let go off her....
But then those moments of past haunted Ridhimma and when she came back to reality she pushed Armaan away and ran out of the cabin....
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The high pitch of the horn had awaken everyone up...including Nupur....she, in her typical-Nupurish style kept on grumbling while collecting her files and rushing downstairs....
Nupur screamed:"Arey baba aa rahi hoon!!"
But the horn was too loud for her voice to be heard...
Only when Nupur Bhushan opened the door of the car and sat inside did Mayank Sharma stopped all those horns and said:"Uff Mayank....kisi chote bache se kam nahi ho tum!!Tumhein pata hai...ek toh waise hi yaha k saare neighbours mere aur tumhare baare mein baatein karte hain..."
Mayank said in a confused tone:"Kia?Kyun?I mean..."
Nupur:"Matlab tum mujhe raat ko drop karne aate ho aur subah pick karne aur woh Malhotra Uncle toh keh rahe the k kisi din tum mujhe bhaga kar le jaoge.."
Mayank:"O...I see!!"he then went closer to Nupur and staring directly into her eyes said:"Toh phir Malhotra Uncle se kaho k mujhe tumhein bhaga kar le jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi...agar main chahoon toh tumhein apna bana kar in sab ki nazroon k saamne se le jaonga....aur ye log dekhte reh jaayeinge..."
Nupur looked at him in surprise and awe.....she looked at him amused and the two stared at each other for a little while...
It was Nupur who moved her gaze first and looked aside...she felt uncomfortable and Mayank loved to see her that way...
Nupur:"Umm....chalein?"
Mayank smiled and started the car..
The two had reached the construction site where they were supposed to meet their client...some Miss.Neetu...after about an hour of professional talk, she had started flirting with Mayank...and to his amazement Nupur didnt like it even a bit...
When she had left, Nupur took out all her anger on Mayank...she started:"Had hogayi....koi stranger ladki tumse tumhari personal life k baare mein itna poochti hai....aur tum?Tum usse 'mind your own business' kehne k bajaye us k sawaloon ka hans k jawaab de rahe ho....Mayank aaj kal....."
Mayank cut her off and completed her statement imitating her:"Aaj kal ki ladkiyon ka koi bharosa nahi...woh toh main tumhare saath thi warna ye ladki tumhein akela paa kar..."
And he started laughing....Nupur:"Tumhein ye funny laga?"
Mayank:"Meri chodo..TUMHEIN bura laga?"
Nupur looked up to him:"What rubbish?Main kyun jealous hoongi?"
Mayank:"Oo...!!Guilty concious!!!main ne jealous kab kaha?"
And Nupur smiled and blushed....
awww...how much Mayank adored her...!!
She was all he could ask for....
Part ends...
Waiting for comments...😳
I know its quite a short one....but have to go now...will update supersoon....😉
Cheers--Kiran=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
*Edited*
lol...i cant believe it !! M d first to comment ...yay!! 😊😆

Hey kiran,

It was a nice part yaa... bt very short... esp AR part was ... 😭 😭 ..bt newaz,i hope u make up for it next tym...😊

I wonder wats the mystery about AR.. m dying to know it .. n u keep on increasing my curiosity by every new part of urs... not fair ya.. 😆...Itna attayachaar toh mat karo mujh par... 😆 😆

Btw,it was very well written ... n Mayur are simply soo adorable esp Nupur... she's so full of lyf... 😳 😛

Thanx 4 d pm...n continue soon with a longggg part dis tym plz...

luv
vini 😳
Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Good.. u knew it was a short part.. aur mein tumhe thoda gyaan de wali thi ki lambi updates kaise likhte hain.. i totally loved it.. and the best line of the update was when Mayu tells Nupz ki Mr. Malhotra ko bolna .. that dialogue.. that was the best part of this whole update..

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
kiran 🤗

that was such a cute update:)
Mayank's style..ufff:) kya baat hai LOL
they r indeed very cute :)
loved the update :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow like to see jaealosy nupur
maja aaya
aur it was short MAYUR ne to jyada no k jhok bhi nai kari
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey kiran

finally u updted after a longg time

anyway my goshh mayur are soo cutee!!
just love them

and it was short par maaf kiya because it was sweet/ fun

do updt soon

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
so dear kiran i read the update
but why itna chota kyo yaar
jaldi update karo
or plz ar ke mistry ke thoda sa hint to do
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
lovely ff
plzz pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kiran di!
loved the part!
im glad that armaan didnt leave and hugged her..
really nice of him..
and the mayur scenes were nice too... nupz getting jealous =P
too sweet.. lol
do cont soon
HiNaL

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