MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 27

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aishar

woahh luved d ar part!!!!! cont asap!!

Thank u so much Aishar....will surely continue soon=)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maizis

awwww!!!!!!!!!!
mayur are sooooo cute
but such a small part!!

Hey...thank u so vry much...so vry glad dt it was likeable...😳
aww...will make up a longer part nxt tym...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi kiran
nice update
it was short but lovely.
loved mayur as usual
good going
keep it up

Hi Fariaa... thanks alot 4 all da compliments....
They rly mean alot 2 me....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

loved mayur

wonder the mystrey between ar

Hey...
thank u so much...
4 da mystery part---will strt opening it up nxt part onwards...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy4u

great part
continue soon

hey...thank u so much sammy=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi all....
I knw this is pretty soon but just thought of updating again....
This part onwards the truth is gonna come out....it is basically related to Nupur and Ridhimma but has affected AR relationship and unfortunately will also creat problems in MayUr relationship....
Here's the update...
Part-8:
Nupur sat on her bed thinking about the entire day and infact about the past few days of her life...
Mayank Sharma...it was him and only him who had occupied her thoughts these past few days. Not till that night had she realized that this guy whom she had hated more than anything in the world had become a part of her life. But why was she thinking about him?--was a question unanswered!!!
Nupur opened the drawer nearby and took out her diary of year--2005!!----5 years back!!The year reminded her of her terrible past...and even further of the fact that what she was thinking of was IMPOSSIBLE!!
Nupur had not opened up her diary ever since those days until today. Why she didn't open it was only to keep aways from those new dreams her eyes were sighting...Her diary reminded her of those days of her life which had taught her that dreams never came true because responsibilities come their way. Nupur's mind kept on moving between past and present. A race between her mind and heart where heart said:"Nahi Nupur...dekh shayad wahi woh ladka hai jo tere sapno ka rajkumar hai?!" BUT mind said:"O ya right!!Nupur...aise sapne sirf fairytales mein hote hain real life mein nahi.."
She opened her diary reluctantly to remind herself of her past and responsibility and further to take her thoughts away from Mayank for she knew there would be no future of any such relationship/friendship....she quickly flipped through the pages for she didn't want to read all of it but when she came to the last page she had filled five years back the last three words further confirmed that hers was a life reserved with alot already with no more place for anyone else..those words read:"Meri beti..Pari.."
Yes!!Her daughter!!She had to do it for her!!A month and things would be fine...Pari would be back to her mom!!She tore the last page in frustration and then kept it inside her drawer again..swearing never to open it again...
That very night, Mayank, at his home---
Mayank was waiting to get to know from his client if this project was a success...The reason why THIS project specifically mattered so much was because it had tireless hours of hardwork of Nupur Bhushan. That night he went to think about their first meeting and the coincident, planned and friendly meetings afterwards. As a matter of fact, Nupur really mattered to him. "Why?"He asked himself. Was it that sparkle in her eyes?Her innocence?Honesty?Simplicity?Possessiveness?Attitude?He laughed at himself when he thought he seemed to have fallen in love with her qualities OR......his smile faded away when a serious expression came up...HAD HE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH HER?He thought and thought over it again but didnt seem to get an answer. Just then his cell rang and he got to know the expected result of the project. Yes!The client was indeed very much impressed by their designs. He decided to go to meet up Nupur personally the next day to give her the news.
The very next day:
Ridhimma hurriedly picked up her files from the table and went to open the entrance door to leave for the hospital. Just as she opened the door, Mayank was outside, about to knock at it.
Ridhimma smiled at him and said:"Perfect timing?"
Mayank nodded:"Indeed yes..Kaisi ho?"
Ridhimma:"Achi hoon...aur tum?"
Mayank:"Me too...good enough!!"
Ridhimma said mischieviously:"Hmhh...itni subah subah..?"
Mayank said in a flirtious tone:"Haan socha tumhara chehra dekh loon toh din acha jaaye ga.."
Ridhimma smile faded away as her mind drifted to her past. Someone before had made a similar statement..Armaan..
Ridhimma looked at her watch. She knew she was late to reach to the hospital. She knew Armaan would be waiting for her. Once she was there, she met all her colleagues except Armaan..where was he?she kept on wondering. She started searching for him to find him in one of the rooms examining a patient. He had seen her too but avoided her on purpose to show his anger and she adored it loads!!!When the patient left, Ridhimma and Armaan were all alone in the room and Ridhimma walked close to him and said:"Sorry.."
Armaan gave a quick look to her seraphic face..he could never be angry on her..yet for fun he said:"Kia sorry Ridhimma...tumhein pata hai naa k aate hi mujhe tumhara chehra dekhna parta hai.."
Ridhimma pretending to be unfamiliar:"Oho!!Toh Dr.Malik ko aate hi mera chehra dekhna parta hai...kyun bhala?"
She laughed out and Armaan smiled back and then pulling her towards him said:"Kyunki tumhein dekhe bina mera din bohat adhoora hai..."
She stared at him and stared back...
She came back to reality when Mayank said:"Hello?"
Ridhimma:"O...sorry!!please come in!!"
Mayank then told Ridz why he had come here and after taking her permission went straight to Nupur's room. Nupur was possibly in the washroom and so Mayank started looking around in her room seeing her pictures and then finally coming across a drawer next to her bed partly open..open enough for Mayank to see her diary in it..he took it out and what he first saw was the page torn....
He kept the diary aside and read that very page..it read:
"Mujhe yeh karna hoga. Pari ko apni zindagi mein wapis laana hoga. Agle paanch saal tak mein Pari se sirf maheene mein ek baar mil sakti hoon but after that woh mere paas aa jaye gi. Paanch saal baad mujhe court mein security k liye kuch paise dene honge after which my daughter will be back to me...meri beti...Pari..."
Part ends...
Hope this one's long..
Waiting for comments...
Cheers--Kiran=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi kiran di!!
yess.. im first to comment =)
lol..
anyways..
nice part//
but OMG... pari??
im so confused now...
ab toh aapko jald hi cont karna padega =P so do try.. lol
luv,
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
okk, that was a great part.. but nupur has a baby! ok, look forward to the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey kirann

grtttttt part hunii

loved it

alittle confused but still good!!
i'm hoping next part clears up the confusion

con't soonn

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
baap re itna bada sach mayu ko aaj pata chalega
oh ab kya hoga?
please mayur ko alag mat karna na plzzzzzzzz

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