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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 15 years ago

#351

Appu...Awesome update..and this time it was long... so you are forgiven for updating late.... 😃

Plus I already blessed you with 100 years of life.... 😆

The update was great.... but what's this?... here also Kiss Ka Kissa.....???........😆 but this was damn cute... (not like the one in the show...)...... loved talli Mayank.... asking for her apology.... and then slowly opening up and telling her what he liked the most about her... the words that Nupur was waiting to hear.... so cute....

The whole update was a delight to read... Nupur cooking for him, Shilpa Aunty's teasing her... and Mayank's mind missing her in the party... everything was very nicely written.... loved it....🤗

The talli Mayanks in the FFs are best... better than the one in the show... where he kisses random girls and doesn't remember later.....😆

Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

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Posted: 15 years ago

#352

wow...appu,
this part was rocking,
tooooo cute,
loved this line of shilpa aunty-
"Chalo badhiya hai, ab mere saare kaam khatam! Subah isko impress karne ke liye Mayu khana banata hai, aur shaam ko yeh usko impress karne ke liye banati hai!" 🤣
the last part was chooooo chweet,
mayu is sooo adorable...😳
cant wait for the next part,
plzzzzz continue asap...😃

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#353

Rocker.. u dont know how big smile you have got on my face.... i m so indebted to u for that.. i was dying to read the update of this FF.. Srsly.. i m not kidding... i was terribly missing this FF.. thnx a zillion for this..

And about the update.. it ws as usual MIND BLOWING.. and the talli Mayank reminded me of the last years Holi episode and all the happenings that happened at Mayu's place... and also the merger episode scene... where Nupz holds Mayu and says that she will never let him fall... and Girl ... with such a HOTTTTTTTTTTT and handsome hunk standing b4 you, even I'll get hypnotised.. toh phir bechaari Nupsi kya karti... I actually tried imaging Mayu trying to Nupsi with his tongue between his lips and teeth.. Imagine.. he looked like Sharmaan Joshi while doing that..

And the coolest dialogue of the day was : wah Subah Mayank isse impress karne ke liye khana banata hai aur shaam ko yeh Mayank ko impress karne ke liye khana banati hai".. Super cool mom.. Shilpa Aunty!!

Rocking update!!!!!!!!🤗

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#354

amazing part yaar

Absolute delightful to read :)

Cont soon please as I can't wait too long =P

x x

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#355

Appu finally you updated.....I was eagerly waiting for this

The update was just Amazing so you are forgiven for the delay

Loved the talli Mayank he's so sweet......

the convo between them "kis ke liye.?"...it was really nice

do cont soon......Is baar no delay haan.........😆

Luv
Nidzy~

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affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#356

wow dear was a lovely update...

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#357

appu.......amazing update..ah! here i m hating drunk mayu kissing random gals in the show.& u make me fall in love with this cute drunk mayank of urs.who said all the things that nupur wanted to hear from him.............uff! the best part was when he said..that he liked it most that he come back home to her.where she is waiting for him........no wonder nupur had tears in her eyes.she wanted to hear it from him always na!!!!!!!

& thank god it happened, other wise when mayank left home without talking to nups , i thought it may lead to a misunderstanding between these two........& yeah! i love shilpa anty's convo with nupur too.she is such a sweetheart.she is helping her to understand mayank more deeply!!!!!!!!!

loved this part..plz update next part soon dear!!!!!!!!!!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#358

Hi appu
at first a big hug to u for ur wonderful update
it was just mind-blowing
loved each and every bi of it.
u r really an awesome writer.
i enjoyed the whole part.
mayurs embarrassing moment, then nups cooking, m.moms teasing everything u portrayed so beautifully.
and then lastly drunken maynk and nups convo was so sweet and nice.
i just loved it.
amazing part
keep it up
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tryyyyyyyyyyyy to update next part soon