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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Awesome part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Loved raj n nainas pov..it so funny when raj thought pooja.... what pooja we r not having any pooja rajs mom is so sweet Eager to know what will happen next ...plz continue soon

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Suhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Hi Dear

Update was really gud..

Naina was thanking God for saving her mother's life..😊

But she cudn't help noticing Raj who was staring at her..then when the introduction was made he seemed least bothered..he is really strange..

Raj's mom definetely want him to fall in love with Naina n so she is inviting her family to the pooja..

Continue soon

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poojabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

to tum bhi update nehi karogi.congrats fics adhura chor ke watt lagane wali group ke members boht speed se bar rahe hain.tum bhi sayed us group ki member ban chuki ho.

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Pinka

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

pata nahi yaar update kyon nahi kerte

are ya to pura kero ya start mat kero

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Hey dear.....am very late I knw....was just stuck up a bit....but am glad u updated!! And yeah...the parts were very nice. Raj has this soft side in him which his mom desires to bring out....well we wud love to see that as well....but wat I loved the most was part 4....Raj n Naina's diff POV....that was a gr8 one....and yeah.....u didnt suck wid Raj's POV....that was equally nice....in fact I enjoyed that one more.....precisely!!

However....guess am w8ing for the next part now....I feel its all gonna be very interesting.....wid the Pooja and all....pls try to continue soon.

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Pinka

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

yaar tum ise bhi cntinue kerogi ya nahi????

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Pinka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

tume ise continue kerogi na

kkyonki ye maine lrlt pe raed ki thi

polz plz ise jrure ud kerna

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Star

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

For people like me who never read the first page 😛

I started of with a new fresh intro the story will continue on with this intro..because of my writers block 😛

Intro

She blushed scarlet as he came closer and tied the magalsutra. She looked up at him but he looked at everything and anything other than her. Why would he look at her he was forced into this marriage. For him it was a compromise. He only married her because of his parents.

The pandit told them to stand up for their pheres. The stood up and as they went around the holy fire Naina's eyes sparkled. She was getting married. She couldn't believe it. She had always dreamed of getting married to her prince charming and Rajveer was the perfect one.

She had met Rajveer only once. It was when he came to see her for marriage and she instantly liked him. He was what she was looking for. He was strong, tall, muscular and an angry young man. Just like a movie. Though she wondered why he wouldn't smile. Even when he accepted the tea from her mother, he never smiled. He said thank you but did not smile.

The pandit told them to sit. He completed the pooja and thats it they were married. Only in the world's eye though. One needs to accept and promise to fulfill the saat pheres. Here Naina lived in a fantasy world while Rajveer didn't even bother to listen to them...

Edited by starasdf - 14 years ago