Itna Main Chahu Tujhe (RP-SS) - Update Ch.1- Pg 4 - Page 4

Hey guys!

I'm FINALLY here with the first chapter, I know I know that I'm VERY VERY late but before you throw your chappals, belens and whatever you have at hand at me, hear me out first. 😆 😆

First of all, I'm REALLY sorry but I'm VERY busy myself... I'm on my last year of school so I have a lot of studies and I just joined tutorials too.... I also have problems at my house and my sis takes the laptop ALL THE TIME so please do try to understand why I'm do late.

And second of all, I'm slightly slow writer, I think a hundred times before writing so it takes a bit of time. But I only do that so you guys get the best quality chapter.

Third, Well.... Just... I'm Sorry!

I'll put up the second chapter much sooner than the first chapter 😆 😆 😃

Anyway, Hope you guys like the first chapter!

PLEASE do give me constructive criticism since I want to become more and more better at my portrayal of Sujal and Sheena and also become a more better writer.

Again, Very very sorry....

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The opening lines are perfect and Mumbai was aptly described in them!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The night and the surroundings are described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Poor Sheena is tired and yet she went to the party!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sheena knows how to carry herself perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

She is looking beautiful and very stylish and her dress is gorgeous!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The party hall is described beautifully and in exquisite detail!!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Sheena has a certain style when she retorts!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved Sheena's thinking that someone could get diabetes from Riya's sugary sweetness!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I liked the way Sheena answered Riya back!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

The expression on Riya's face was classic!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sujal is looking very handsome!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is arrogant, smart, super rich, and successful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

He has an air of arrogance about him that makes him different from others!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

But that doesn't stop the women from ogling at him and sending him flirtatious glances!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😍 😍 😍 😍

Sujal wasn't in the mood to talk to anyone much and is still angry at Piyush for making him go to this party!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

The garden is described very well!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Sujal and Sheena came face to face in the balcony!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sujal caught Sheena checking him out and she was a little embarrassed!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

So Sujal found Sheena attractive!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

You described Sheena and her beauty very well and in detail from Sujal's point of view!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sheena also found Sujal handsome but assessed him correctly as an arrogant rich businessman!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sheena felt annoyed by Sujal's cold and superior gaze on her!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

As Sheena whirled around quickly to go, she slipped on the marble floor and was going to fall!!!!!

Out of pure reflex, she grabbed Sujal and saved herself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Then she realized that she was clinging onto Sujal and he was holding her by the waist!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure this will now result in Sujal and Sheena's first quarrel!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Wow Rin you were brrrrrrrrillllllllliant at this. I mean what r u doing wasting ur time here writing fics????????? you shud be out there girl writing a novel 👏

Seriously you've done a gr8 job at describing both Sheena and Sujal and i was able to imagine every bit. their emotions were depicted beautifully and i loved how u used the surroundings around to portray half of it.

What can i say i just fell in love with it already and now cant wait to read more and more.

Keep up the gr8 work and lets hear from u soon.

nice part

Wow Rin !!

awesoooooome.
superb...
fantabulous.......
excellent.
wonderful.......
lovely........
and thanx for the pm......

Hi Rin

nice part. lovely. too good.
loved it.
continue soon.