Itna Main Chahu Tujhe (RP-SS) - Update Ch.1- Pg 4 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
I loved it! Simply fantastic, I love your attention to details, it's makes everything more real!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

fabulous......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I hvnt seen both KTH n BT...means...ek do episodes KTH k dekhe hain...par jyada nahi...!!!

par aap ne itne achhe se sare charachters ko describe kiya hai ki mujhe ab koi bhi confusion nahi hai...😃

Sheena n Sujal...yeh pairing new hai...aur interesting bhi...😃
plz cont soon.😃
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Hey Rin....

Fabulous part 👏 👏 👏 👏
U described every scene so beautifully .....I loved both sujal n sheenas entry ....sheenas costume is gorgeous...I liked the way how sheena answered back to that Riya...so sujal n sheena ki pehli mulakat hogayi ..sheena is about to fall n our dear sujal came there at time to rescue her
waiting eagerly to know what happens next
Plz this time jaldi update karna n thank u so much for the pm
take care
yogitha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Ah so they meet *jumping up and down excited* 😆 Ooh what a meeting, i could see the sparks from here in the comfort of my own room 😆😆😆 Mr Sujal Garewal is so attracted to Mrs. Sheena 😳😳 although i believe he's not gonna admit that, he is afterall a arragont rich brat 😆😆😆😆

*Sigh* so what's gonna happen now that sheena has fell ... ofcourse not in love, but literally on the floor 😆😆 she kinda dragged Sujal aswell 😆😆 i have a feeling that'll be their first official tu tu main main 😆😆😆😆
An amazing update Rin 👏👏👏👏
I know how studies can be, so Update is your own pace 😊
Yasmin
p.s that doesn't me your allowed to take centuries to update 😆😆😆 i'll have my tomotoes and eggs ready if i see a grey hair in my head waiting for your update 😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Update was superb.
You have a very unique style of writing. You have described everything so well that I could visualise each scene.
Both Sujal and Sheena's entry were rocking. Sheena ne abut aacha jawab diya Riya koh.
And finally Sujal and Sheena have met.
Waiting to know what happens next. Please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Fantastic update Rin 👏👏👏👏👏

u have correctly described Sujal...........his attitude, arrogance, feelings..........everything........I felt like I'm seeing Sujal after so much time........really Sujal without his attitude is not at all Sujal.............😆

Well of Sheena....I knw nothing.but u described her character pretty well that there's no place for any doubt........nice intro of those two...........and their first meeting was very good indeed........

waiting to see whats going to happen to this new couple-in-the-making!!!!!!!!!!!

continue soon..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thats a lovely start dear....I'm sorry as due to sum problems I cud not reply earlier....however I must praise the way u hav described everything....right from the surroundings to Sujal n Sheena's thoughts....from their characteristics....to their appearances....it was a way too lovely as everything was shaped up!! Brilliant start dear....I hope u can continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Hello everyone,

Before I apologize, I want to tell everyone that I'm kinda thinking of putting this story short hiatus or something like that because this definitely wasn't the best time for me to start a fic.

I'm sorry everyone that I have taken so long to update but a virus had infected my laptop for a while and my sister without asking or even mentioning to me about the virus, had gone on a deleting spree thinking that my files were the place where the virus was generated. *Sighs*
One of the files she deleted was the second chapter of this fic, So it took me a bit of time to remember what I had planned correctly for second chapter and write it again.

The second chapter isn't correctly edited yet, and I have done a bit of the third chapter too which I'm thinking I'll post with the second chapter if I ever get the time to do so.

But, I know, I know, How long does it take to re-write a chapter?! 😡... that must be what your thinking, I mean there are so many other writers here who post chapters so quickly, like in a day or two and I take so long! 😲

I'm sorry about that but on the other hand, truthfully, I got to put my education at the top of my list because as I have said before. I'm in my last year and I have way too much homework and studies. When I had posted the first chapter, I had a bit more free time but now I only get one or half an hour with the laptop once a week... Sometimes I don't even get it at all.
My sister hasn't been making it any easier for me by ONLY giving me the laptop when I either have to study or go to sleep.

I know, I know, Come on! You probably get atleast a little bit of free time for writing! It doesn't take THAT long! 😒
Is what you might be thinking but for me it does, I'm slow writer and even slow learner. I'm taking so many extra tuition classes right now that my days usually go like this 'Wake up, Study, Sleep'.

And yes, I know, I'm worrying and whining way too much, It definitely cannot be THAT hard! For lots and lots of people, yes it isn't but for me it's a HUGE deal that I pass with good marks. Many might think I'm making a huge thing out of something small and I might even agree a little with y'all but like I said before, Education right now is on the TOP most spot of my list.

But that DEFINITELY does not mean that this isn't on my list AT ALL, it's on the second place for now. I REALLY REALLY love writing this fic and I have so many ideas for Sujal and Sheena but right now I don't have enough time to peacefully sit down and write a good chapter and let my creativity flow into laptop screen (O_o)

I have an exam coming up in one month so, I might not be able to update anytime soon, I'll try but no promises.

I want to give you guys really well-written (and with lots and lots of spelling mistakes :-P) chapters to read, to do that it takes me a lil extra time to write. I'll try my best to give you a new chapter as soon as possible.

Thank you very much for putting up with me and I hope you will continue to read this fic.

P.S:
I just noticed how blunt and selfish I sounded in this post
I'm definitely going to get LOTS of stones and tomato's thrown at me *puts on her running shoes*
But before you start throwing things at me, Lemme just tell you that I wanted to totally honest with you guys butI came off as selfish, insenstively blunt and annoying. x_x
Maybe some of you might feel I'm being... I dunno what, Just giving my own point of view and not thinking about you guys who are giving me so support and continue reading and waiting for my fic chapters and I might agree with you too. I'm sorry for that and I'll try my best to give you the next chapter as soon as possible, I'm trying to make a schedule, seeing how close my exams are coming so but I just don't know how to make one and over that I can't stick to one correctly.

But anyway, I'm trying to write as much as I can with what free time I get but I'm sorry if I might take a lil longer for the next update.
Edited by Rin03 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hey pls cont.i just read it.its really interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
do continue when you feel the time is right!! Loved it loads!!!!

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