Itna Main Chahu Tujhe (RP-SS) - Update Ch.1- Pg 4

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~Itna Main Chahu Tujhe~


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Author's Note:

Hey everyone!

I'm Rin, And this is my first EVER fic on I-F (that is if you don't count a short one shot I posted) and it's a SujalXSheena fic which I don't think has ever been made before... So I'm giving it a first try but PLEASE keep in mind that I didn't watch Kahin Tho Hoga and Bombay Talking back then....
Even if I have seen a few bits of the episodes it's pretty blurry in my mind and so I'm portraying these characters from what I have heard about them from my friends, Shai, Arwa and Sarah.

My best friend, Shai is the one who urged me into making this fic, She has helped me A LOT with this fic... Actually she could be like a co-owner or co-partner of this fic since without her I wouldn't even be able to make this fic' 😃 ⭐️ 😃 ⭐️ 😃

I hope that I will be able to keep your favorite character just the way they are and not change them much... And even if I do then please do tell me about it... I want all the characters to be as much as possible same to how they were on the show (Kahin Toh Hoga and Bombay Talking)

I hope and pray that you all will love this NEW pairing and my first ever fic on I-F!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

P.S: I would love it if someone gave me some constructive criticism so I can get more better at my writing and portrayal of the characters 😊
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Sujal Garewal (Rajeev Khandewal)

Arrogant, Handsome and Ruthless, Are the words that come to mind when one thinks of Sujal Garewal. The MD of the Raheja & Garewal group of companies, The company that was initially started by his father and his good friend but now is handled by their sons, Sujal Garewal and Piyush Raheja.

In front of the world, He is the dynamic, egoist, sharp and rich businessman who is very aggressive in business, ready to take any risks in business and life. Sujal isn't the type of person who would believe in anyone easily being the reserved and proud person that he is but he became the way he is now due to the treatment he received from his father. Because of his troubled childhood, Sujal has covered his heart in a strong shell. Usually keeping his emotions locked up behind his emotionless mask and sometimes not knowing how to express them.

However in reality, He has a very different side to his personality at his house. He is loving son to his mother, A caring brother for his younger brother and a very dear and true friend to his childhood friend, Piyush.

He has the looks and the money yet has no whatsoever interest in the glamorous world he lives in or the beautiful women who throw themselves all over him. The only things that matter for him is his family and business.

Up till now, Sujal Garewal thought there wasn't a person out there who could stand eye to eye with him. But the day he meets Sheena Khanna, A woman who not only had the nerve to stand in front of him and bluntly tell him what she thought of him but also could stand eye to eye with him.

The day he met Sheena Khanna, A new chapter began in his life.

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Sheena Khanna (Priyanka Bassi)

Beauty with brains is one way to describe Sheena Khanna yet it would still not be enough. Being one of the most popular Model and Actress in India, The words 'Can't' and 'Won't' isn't in this girl's dictionary, Sheena thinks that there is nothing in this world that she can't and won't be able to achieve.

Though a daughter of a rich businessman in the US, Sheena came back to India to fulfill her dream of making a mark in the glamorous world of modeling and showbiz. Confident, clever and fiercely independent, Sheena got through all the troubles and difficulties, never letting her dignity be ruled over. As quickly as Sheena entered the industry, She already knew how to mingle with all the right people and how easily she could charm her way into the good books of the important people of the tinsel town with her confident, straightforward and bold personality.

However, There is certain air of innocence to Sheena which is only shown to the people she is very dear and close to, Her best friend and her caring father. To her father, Amar Khanna, She is his affectionate and slightly spoiled daughter. To her dear friend, She is the mischievous, trustworthy best friend who is always there for her friend. And to this world, Sheena Khanna was nothing more a glamorous actress and model, known popularly for her bold, modern and confident style.

The day she met Sujal Garewal, Sheena had never thought there was a man out there who was as arrogant and rude as this man and she had met some pretty arrogant people in the world she lived in.

But the day her paths crossed Sujal Garewal's, Sheena hadn't thought that this arrogant man who irritated her to no end would open up a new chapter in her life.

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Piyush Raheja (Rohit Bakshi)

Sujal's childhood friend, Loving, charming, simple, very helpful and understanding, Piyush is the man that every girl would dream to have as an husband. Piyush is a practical businessman who takes life as it comes but at the same time is very loving and caring. A perfect son to his parents, A good and understanding friend to Sujal, a caring brother to his siblings and a polite and a charming gentleman to the world.

Just like their fathers, Piyush and Sujal have been good friends since childhood and are now MD of R&G group of companies.

Mauli Sinha (Ashlesha Sawant)

Modern, classy and intelligent business women in her office but outside the office she is a polite, friendly and caring girl. Mauli is Sheena's close and dearest friend, The only support Sheena had during her formerly days as a struggling model. The Sinha family was one of the business associates of Khanna family due to which Mauli had known Sheena since they were children but they had lost contact once Sheena had moved from India to USA after her mother's death. They met again once Sheena came back to India to become an actress.

She comes from rich and typical modern business family, Being the only daughter of her parents she was the apple of their eye. Mauli grew up to be a mature and sweet-natured girl who was always there lend a helping hand to her friends. She joined the business right after she had finished her studies.

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The Khanna Family

Amar Khanna (Neel Bhattacharya)

Sheena's cool and easy going father, Whose whole life is his little daughter. He played the role of a mother, father and friend in his daughter's life to keep her happy. His married life with his wife, Sandhya was a unhappy one even though he tried to keep his daughter hidden from the discontent in her parent's life, It didn't last long as Sheena quickly grew older and her relationship with her cold and distant mother started to turn even more sour than before but still Amar was always there supporting his daughter with anything she needed.

Amar is the heir of the Khanna families business, Groomed to become a successful businessman to take over the Khanna Family business but Amar had more interest in cooking than in business. He has only one passion in life which was cooking, If you ever came into his house, You would probably find him in the kitchen behind the stove cooking something delicious and you wouldn't be able to leave unless you have tasted his food.


Late Sandhya Khanna (Sujata Kumar)

A former actress and the mother of Sheena, Sandhya was the type of cold woman who cared for nothing but her own wishes. Her child's wishes, dreams and feelings held no whatsoever consideration to her. Her marriage to Amar was nothing more than a way for her to climb up the ladder of success and riches by marrying one of the wealthiest businessmen.

She will leave no stone unturned to push the career of her daughter, Sheena Khanna. But as Sheena grew older, Her relationship with her mother turned even more sour than before. Sheena had already held anger towards her mother for never being there for her, But when her mother started to pressure her that anger slowly started to turn into hatred making these two more and more apart. When Sheena was at the age of 15, Her mother had died in a car accident.

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The Garewal and Raheja Family


Chetan Garewal aka CG (Deepak Parashar)

The father of Sujal and Rishi, A very ambitious and shrewd businessman. Whose relationship with his son, Sujal gets worse day by day. Chetan Garewal is a man who has no time at all for his family, Business is the only thing that matters for him and nothing else.

He is the 50-50 partner and Chairman of R&G groups with his good friend Lalit Raheja.

Veena Garewal (Madhavi Gogate)

Homely, Kind and full of love, Veena is the mother of Sujal and Rishi Garewal. She is uncared for husband and because of this she leads a very unhappy married life She is very loved by the children of the house, Lalit gives her the utmost respect.

She has bought up all the kids together and love them all very much but she is very close to Sujal, her elder son. Sujal loves her very dearly, She is the only person in this world who is allowed to see him at his weakest and most vulnerable moments.

Lalit Raheja (Amit Singh Thakur)

Father of Piyush and Varun, he too is simple as his son Piyush. He is the chairman of the R&G along with Chetan Garewal, But yet very different from his friend cum business partner Chetan Garewal.

Vasundhara Raheja aka Vasu (Madhuri Bhatia)

Cunning, clever and manipulative, Vasu is the exact opposite of Veena. Mother of Piyush and Varun, She cares for nothing but the business and money which she one day hopes to have in her name.


Varun Raheja (Ejaz Khan)

The younger brother of Piyush who had just returned from abroad, He is sweet, courteous and pleasant. Varun is just like his father and his elder brother. He quite close to both his Piyush Bhaiya and Sujal Bhaiya and loves both of them equally. He and Rishi both are very competitive with each other, They both go to the same college.

Rishi Garewal (Shabbir Ahluwalia)

The younger brother of the Big B (Sujal Garewal) who is a complete spoilt brat and a total playboy. With an innocent smile on his face, He holds the wickedest intentions behind his innocent mask very intelligently.
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Shashank Sinha (Chetan Pandit) & Kavita Sinha (Kavita Kapoor)
Mauli's father and mother, Shashank Sinha is a successful businessman and also Sheena's father, Amar Khanna's good friend and business associate. Shashank and Kavita both love their daughter very dearly and only wish for the best for her future.
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She is a very sweet girl who goes to college with Varun and also is his friend but there seems to be something more going on.
Edited by Rin03 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wonderful concept!!!!!!

The banner is beautiful and suits the story perfectly!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The character sketch is fabulous!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sujal and Sheena are described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sheena is quite opposite of Sujal and a perfect match for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

They really are a dynamic pair!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally a fic with Sujal-Sheena pairing!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Great job Rin and congratulations for finally turning the SS pairing into reality!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Rin,
how r u?

character sketch is superb
really liked it
all the characters r good
plz continue soon

luv preet

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Hi Rin !!!
One more RP fic !!! I'm simply exhilerated !!!
And yes, a Bigggg Thanks to you and ofcourse Shaina and Arwa for this fic !
Nice character sketch !!
Waiting for more!!
Can u PM me when u'll UD next????
Update soon 😊
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Hey Rin gr8 work. Finally we got the Sujal Sheena pairing fic which we had only talked about since now.

The character sketch is gr8 and looking forward to this fic and wud enjoy it.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Rin great sketch i have sent you a buddy request...plz pm me thank you
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Hey Rin....
Its so nice to see a new RP fic....i really liked the name of the fic
Great Character sketch....... Really loved it
plz continue soon
thank u shaina for the pm
Rin ,can u please pm me when u update the next part
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Hi Rin (I don't know your name...sorry...)

Great character sketch.👏

Very beautiful, and one more RP fic and that too an unusual one- SUJAL & SHEENA. A pair which was till now in our imaginations has finally been turned into a reality and you are the person to do it. Great job Rin... keep it up. And can you please send me a pm when you update next? I am very much eager to read this fic.

Love
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice character sketches.
one more rp ff,great.
loved it.
update soon dear and pm me ,when u'll update next part.

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