Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6)

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#831

On the whole of TN

This was my first fic of you...😳...I read the first part after watching the film 'Raaz--the mystery continues'...😆😆😆...after watching the film...atmosphere mere liye kaafi weird ho gaya tha...so I just came and read this fic...phir diamg se film put ho gayi...and ye fic ghus gayi...😆...it has always been a very intriguing fic...and I hav always w8ed for its UD most impatiently!! My one of the most fav fics...😳

Coming to my darling Rajveer...😳😳...u portrayed his character from a very diff angle in this fic...it was sumthing I never read...never imagined...😳...and u made me read such a wonderful characterization...😃😃...so love you for that!!

And even Naina...generally heroines mujhe irritate karti hai...but she was not like that here...😆😆...she was very very supportive...and just the perfect match to this character of Rajveer!!

Baaki ke charcs...be it Aslam, Vishal, Adi, Nandini...everyone was gud...and always there wid Rajveer!! Arjun was a brilliant character...and loved having him in this fic. He was helpful...as well as the fun element!!😃

So over all...this was one beautiful fic gifted by you...and let me tell you am very fond of gifts...in fact we all are!! Isliye jaldi se apna next gift wrap karke hamein present karna...😉...will be w8ing for ur next venture!!😃

Till then take care...and will you my Rajveer...😳😳
Sumi.😳

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#832

Update or rather the last part and the Epilogue were rocking.

Court finds Vikram, Jigyasa and Gaurav guilty and punishes them. But this does not make any difference to Vikram. In fact Vikram is happy to have been sent to jail because he knows that Raj will not be able to touch him there and he will be able to continue with his dirty work from inside.

But this time Raj and naina were not going to let him gave things his way, they has other plans for him.

All the public who had suffered in someway or the other because of Vikram were not satisfies with the verdict of the court. They wanted to punish him themselves and so despite of all the security, police was not able to save him from their anger.

Arjun has been most helpful in making Raj's plan work. He broke the police security chain so that all those people could reach the culprits and lead them to their death

Bina lathi uthaye Raj ne apna badala le liya zur kisi ko uss par shaqk bhi nahi hua.

Coming to the epilogue…it was funny and perfect

Aslam and Nandini understand each other very well. Aslam does not object Nandini named their son Vikram,

Vishal and Aditi are a treat. Vishal is worried about Aditi's strange behaviour. It was soo funny that Aditi's only worry was that she cannot cook well.

Arjun sing ke bte ka kya kehna..baap sher to beta sava-sher.

Naina and Raj cannot stay away from each other too long. Raj had thought that he would surprise Naina but she gives him the biggest surprise that she is pregnant.

I wish that you would have continued even further. But then again every story deserves a perfect ending.

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It has drama, suspense, politics, love trust and a lot more…I could keep writing.

All I have to say is a big THANK YOU.

Take care

Nisha

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#833

Sorry to belated yaar extremely sorry.
I am replying here for previous update.
Naina and Raj were clever and smart and i liked them.😉 😉 😉 I mean i misunderstood them initially but finally they proved that all these things they were doing intentionally. 👏 👏 👏
Raj aur Naina ko blackmail karne ki soch rahe the Rai Sahab, gaurav aur Jigyasa bhool gaye the ki vo Raj hai.😉 😉 😉 Aur apni tareef karne k chakkar me apne saare gunaah bhi confess kar liya na.😆 😆 😆
😆 Ab becharon ko pata hi kahan tha ki charon taraf police ka jaal pehle hi bich chuka hai. 😆 😆 😆
😆Sauda kar rahi thi jeep ki keys ka Raj k saath aur Raj ne mana bhi un ki baat aur safely sab jungle se bahar bhi aa gaye.😛 😛 😛
😛Mujhe to lag bhi raha tha ki Rai Sahab to maarne ka plan kar k baithe hi hai fir bhi sab itne aasani se ho raha hai ye baat Rai Sahab ne bhi kaise nahi sochi? 😆 😆 😆
Finally Arjun Singh ka bhi settelment ho gaya aur Raj Naina ne acche saare saboton k saath in saare criminals ko andar karwa diya jis se vahan aaram karein ab. 😆 😆 😆
Mujhe lagta hai acche se saja hone chahiye in ko ab. 😛 😛 😛

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#834

So the last part

This was brilliant. 👏 👏 👏

I mean Naina's idea to trap Vikram, Gaurav and Jigyasa. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Shayad agar ye teeno jail gaye hote aur in ka case supreme court me gaya hota to tareekh pe tareekh milte rehti aur ye theeno jail k andar maze se jeete. 😡 😡 😡

Jaisa Vikram ne kaha ki vo Raj aur Naina ki zindagi ko fir se barbaad karne ki poori tarah se koshish karta aur agar kahin bahar aa jaata tab to pata nahi kya ho jaata?

Great idea by Naina, Raj k saath rehte rehte itna to dimag chalne ki laga hai na us ka. Raj jaise shaant tha fir ye sab hua mujhe kaafi accha laga. 😉 😉 😉

Pehli baar Vikram ne dar ko mehsoos kiya aur isi dar ne us ka khatma kar diya. 😃 😃 😃
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Humare desh me law and order ka jo loop hole hai vo tum ne bahut acche se express kiya hai Vikram k confidence me. 👏 👏 👏

Arjun Singh ne ek baar fir Raj ka bahut accha saath diya hai aur ab finally Raj ne apne saare vaade bhi poore kar liya. 😊 😊 😊

Great ending 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#835

Finally a review to the whole fic.

I just have one word to describe it and it is

"Awesome Work" 👏 👏 👏

It was a great memory and i loved your work.

Kuch jagah pe mai satisfy nahi thi but fir at last tum ne sab sahi kar diya.

"Cool one" 😊 😊 😊

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#836

Great fic, 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 and i like specially the ending by which Rai sahab and rest of the people get killed. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Great idea.😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#837

Perfect ending for such a fabulous fic

The main thing that got me hooked to this fic is the suspense n mystery element , n the way how u unfolded the mystery,not only that u have written the emotional parts so beautifully the romance n comedy everything is wonderful

Thanku for sharing such a fantabulous story with us

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710
Damn...finally u ended the fic na...huh!! ha ha ha... ab END toh hona hi tha na...tumhe kya iss ke 5000 ud padhne the...!!! phir toh iss ka naam Tere Naina se 'Kee...Tere Naina'...rakhna padta mujhe...😆

Mujhe tumhe nahi daantna...mujhe to pata hi tha ki ye khatam hone wala hai...phir bhi bura laging...kya karu? Huh!! Huh!! Huh!! nahi daantna bol ke...muh fula rahi ho..Raj ko bheju...tumhare Muh ka size apne aap kamm ho jayega...😆

Abhi coming to the last part... aayo jee maharaj...padharo...😛

It was just one scene...but iss fic me jitna bhi dard mila saare characters ko...uske badle ek ajeeb si sukoon mili...bas iss ek akhri scene me!! sach kahun...toh mujhe yumhe kabhi kuch samjhana hi nahi padta...tum khud hi samajh jati ho...!!! sach me ek dimagless ka dimag ek aur dimagless hi samajh sakta hai...😆

Maine kaha na...Rajveer ki khamoshi hi bahut kuch kehti hai...jis tarah wo chupchap sunta hai...aur waqt ane pe...sahi action ke sath apni baat karta hai...its a beautiful essence actually!! 😊 apne rajveer ki taraf se baht bada Thank you hai jee...😃

The way u wrote the scene...was just perfect!!Thank you...😃Rajveer ka Vikram Rai ko finally wo sab baatein keh dena...and apni aakhon se uska wo hashr dekhna...am sure...it was a gud feeling for him. 😊 Nice plan it was!! It all just turned out to be gud at the end...coz jo sahi hai...wohi jeet hamesha uski hogi..😊 sahi kaha...!!! in fact baat jab raj ki ho na...toh tum hamesha sahi samajh jati ho...😛

Meanwhile Ankur and Arjun wala scene badhiya tha...😆😆 he he he Thanks...😆😆

Epilogue

Vishal n Aditi...darra diya tha mujhe Aditi ne...ye kar kya rahi thi pagal...😆😆...but mast scene tha phir bhi!! he he he...uss ka dimag bhi apne bhai ki tarah ek dam brilliant hai...!!! isi liye yeh sab karr rahi thi...😆

Arjun n Yasmin...🤣...police ka beta hai...bina rishwat ke koi kaam nahi karega...😆😆😆😆...just fultoo awesum yaar!!😆😆😆 he he he...baap pe gaye hain janab...😆

And next Rajveer & Naina...again a sweet subtle romantic scene...just the way I like it...😳😳...loved every bit of it...Rajveer ka aana...Naina ka ruthne ka natak karna...Raj ka bas aise hi mana lena...and then the end...it was all very very nice!!😃😳 thank youuu...😃

LRL JOKES

1. My super smart Rajveer...jo bachpan se smart hai...wo bada ho kar aur bhi smart hoga na...😉😆...Math ki kya awesum language skill hai uski...😆😆...loved it.🤣 wo toh hai...tabhi toh LRL me fav teacher the...😆

2. Aalekh related jokes are always short and funny...perfect!! 😆😆😆 thanks...

Abhi page 122 pe main apni kuch dil ki baat kehti hu..regarding this fic..😳...see ya there..😆😆 padh toh baht pehle liya tha...par tumhari tippani (comments) par apni tippani dene abhi aayi hun...😆

Sumi.😳

Thanksss Sumi...😃

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
hi
the up is really good

the first is nice vikram gaurav and jigasa got arrested

rajveer aur naina ko sataya jo tha

anyways the part it is really beautiful

so everyone is happy settled in their life

rajveer is as usuall away from naina due to his work

but naina she is missing him

rajveer ko dekh akr naina fels nice but she is angry with him she didnt greet him but raj usse pata chal he gaya that naina is acting he reaaly loves her

the morning scene is too sweet

plz cotn soon with another fic like and pm me