Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6)

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nihatri

@nihatri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

🤣arjun part was terrific🤣

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

awesome update.
loved it.
finally all r fine
Beautiful epilogue .
loved it.
will miss the ff.

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

heylooo priii !!!

Mind blowinnnggg update !!

waise bura toh bahooot lag raha hai ki TN khatam ho raha hai... but i knw ki ek naya fic ready hai aur woh bhi achche khaase parts ke saath...issliye...dil thoda halka hogaya hai...😛😉

Kya idea tha Naina ka ! Saap bhi mar jaaye aur laathi bhi na tute !

sahi anjaam mila Vikram , Gaurav aur jigyasa ko...

finally Rajveer ka badla pura hua and he can have peace for once...

Epilogue bhi zabardast tha !!

specially i loved Arjun and yasmin waala part !! totall dhamaal ! 😆

Adi aur vishal ka part bhi mast tha ! 😆 Adi bhi naa...😆

and so was nandini and Aslam's part...but i reallly hope ki unka beta uss Vikram jaisa na nikle...😕

and anth mein...hamare hero-heroine...woww pri ! just lovellly...that ruthna...manana...ek dusre ki harkat pehle se hi jaan lena...too good !

Naina is pregnant... RN are entering new phase of their life...😊

and HERE...our TERE NAINA ends on good and happy note !!!

I'll reallyyy realllyyy miss this fic...and Along with Raj and Naina...i'll also miss Adi, Vishal, Arjun,Nandini...everyone !!!

Aise hi dhassooo fics likhti rehna yaar...

luv ya...

mana 😃

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 14 years ago

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

😲...😲 ...The end ...although i am not too surprised 😆😆😆...as was expecting it 😆😆😆...but not itni jaldi 😆😆😆... i thot abhi 3-4 parts aur honge 😆😆😆...but anyways all good things come to end ... 😛😛 ...I have said it everytime...saying it again 😆😆😆 Tere naina my fav from all the Fics u have written 😳😳 ...

as 4 part ... since it was last toh ...like hindi films it had a happys ending 😆😆😆... end tak aate aate sab kuch theek ho jata hai 😃😃 ...
vikram , gaurav , jigasya ko unke kiye ki saza milgayi...as My rajveer wanted 😳😳 ...
aslam-nandini, vishal-aditi , alekh yasmin all well settled... ofcourse Raj naina too 😃...& new member coming in their family 😛😛 ... good 😛😛😛... do tells us baad mein munna tha ya munni 😆😆😆😆😆...
😃
so alls well that ends well 😃😃... overall FF loved it throughout 🤗 ...spclly to see Rajveer in a different avtar than an army officer 😍 ...

good to see LRL jokes back after long time 😆😆😆 ...

chalo now since Tere naina is complete ... & only ankahi is running ... will expect a new1 soon 😛😛 ...coz aadat pad gayi hai ... to have 2 FFs simaltaneously from u 😆😆😆 ...actually usse time ka pata nahi chalta ... jab tak ek padhkar comment karo ...dusri ki update mil jati hai 😈 😆😆😆 ...

so Bye bye to Rajveer here ...will miss him 😔 ...
so bring back a new Rajveer for us SOON 😳😳 ...

Edited by -purnima- - 14 years ago

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

LAST PART:-

haaiillaa tere naina ka end ho gaya😲😲😲 ye to pataa tha fic khatam hone waali hai lekin itni jaldi ho jaaegi ye nahi pataa tha😭😭😭 non army fiction me se sab se zaada achchiki list me se ye bhi ek lagti thi👏👏👏

lekin koi baat nahi kabhi na kabhi to khatam honi hi thi to thoda pehle hi ho gayi mujhe laga ki 2-3 parts aur honge magar kanjus ne 1 part me hi sab khatam kar diya😆😆😆 chalo koi baat nahi bahut gaaliyaan de din wo bhi pyaar se😉 ab aate hain update per😃😃

court scene achchaa tha kyonki jis tarah se vikram, gaurav, jigyasa ko sazaa milii aur unko public ne jis tarah punish kia aisa to hona hi tha unke saath aur vikram aisa hai ki itni sazaa milne ke baad bhi akal nahi aayi aur rajveer ko abhi bhi challenge kar raha tha😡😡😡 aur end me jab ankur ne arjun se puchha ki raj ne vikram se kya kaha to jis tarah se arjun ne bataaya aisa lagaa jaise pata nahi kya bataa diya usko😆😆😆 ...chalo ab short cut me bataati hun last part bahut hi achcha tha👏...are are kahaan neeche epi kae bhi comments hain main thodi na kanjusi karungi comments dene men😆😆😆

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#826

⭐️⭐️⭐️epilogue⭐️⭐️⭐️

now its time for the epilogue😃😃

i thot you'll be giving epi of after 5 years or something like that but the epilogue is also fast never mind this if this type of end will be given to the fics👏👏👏

firstly i'm happy for aslam and nandini as they were happy with their son vikram😃😃😃 nandini ke puchchne se pehle maine socha tha ki vikram naam to rakh diya lekin agar apne maamu jaise nikla to bechaara sab ka kya hoga😆😆😆

inke baad aate hain vishal aur aditi pehle padhte padhte to sahi me aisa laga ki zaruur kuchc problem hui hai tabhi aise behave kar rahi hai aur sahi me khush nai hai lekin aage jab padhaa ki use khaana banaana nahi aata😆tab hass hass ke paagal ho rahi thi ki aditi sahi me isi cheez ke baare me soch rahi thi aur hum sab pataa nahi kya samaj rahe the

uske baad arjun singh aur yasmin wo to sahi me bahut hi comical part tha bechara arjun singh pura ghar kaam kiya uske baad apne bete ko bhi sambhaala😆😆😆 lekin uske bete ne ro ro kar uske naak me dum aur kaano ki band baaa di🤣 lekin beta to wo arjun singh ka hi hai na rishwat lekar hi chup hua wo aur bechaara arjun singh muh khole khadaa raha🤣

aur ab aate hain apne raj aur naina pe...naina sahi me raj ko bahut miss kar rahi thi tabhi to bina baat ke ro rahi thi raj ko yaad kar ke😭 lekin jab raj aaya to turant room me jaake sone ka naatak karne lagi🥱lekin apnaa raj hai na usko manaane ke liye aur usne naina ko manaa bhi liya sweet cute lines sunaa kar😳 uske baad bhi naina ne usko hate you kaha idiot gadhi, bewakuf(ye taareef naina ke liye thi aur kisi ke liye nahi😆😆😉) lekin tab bhi raj ne usko manaa hi liya na👏 aur end welcome to the new member of the family😃😃😃

ab thoda short me bhi keh deti hun epilogue bahut achcha tha 👏👏👏

⭐️

priya madam ye to bataaiyega ki ladka hua ya ladki😉

so this was my first huge comment to the fic i hope you dont get bored with it aur agar hui ho to mujhe bataana aur zaada koshish karungi tumko pakaane ke lie😆

now

bbbyyyeee

takecare

shreya😃😃😃

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#827

arey arey arey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

abhi kahaan bhaag rahii ho,abhi toh aapki khichdi pakana baaki hai huzoor😆😆😆

ab aagey badte hue niche aate hai jahaan LRL jokes bhi hai😊

jo ki 3-4 update key baad padhe isliye woh mujhe aur mere brother Shashank ko bade acche lagey aur ek secret aur wo tumhaare saare fics ke saare update bhi padhtaa hai sirf tumhare hi nahi mahak di aur manali ke bhi saare fics padh chuka hai aur padh bhi raha hai😃😃😃,,waise mere bhai ko tumharey sarey updates bade acche lagte hain aur kha hai ki uske taraf se main tumko appreciation doon,,

waise main har update mein deti hi hoon 😉 fir bhi uski taraf sey,,,, you are too gud and awesome👏

coming to jokes sabse zyaada achha Maj. Bhargav ka😆😆😆

jo original LRL mein cadets nahin keh paye woh tumharee fic mein kah kar apni tamanna puree ki😆😆😆

AB TOH SAHI MEIN KEH RAHIN HOON😊

TA TA, BYE BYE, TAKE CARE, AND SEE YOU SOON IN ANKAHI😉😉😉

AND ONCE AGAIN BEST OF LUCK😊😊(ye shashank ki tarf se tha😉)

shreya and (ofcourse) shashank

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#828

Hi Priya

I knew that u were abt to complete this fiction..and see I was so right.😃

anyways every gud thing comes to an end and same goes with this fiction too.

initially when u started it there were so many confusions and mysteries but all that made this a very special fiction..👏👏👏

It was one of my very favourites and u must have known this after seeing the length of my replies..maine kitna pakaya hai tumko😆😆

brilliant ending👏👏👏👏 U dont need to explain the whole court proceedings..Now coming to this part as expected Vikram,Jigyasa and Gaurav were punished for all their sins by the court.but it was not enough punishment for these scoundrels..watever they had done to Raj and his family this punishment was so meaningless. But Raj and Naina had some other plans..

Vikram was so happy..he knew that Raj wud not b able to harm him in the jail and he cud easily get bail from some higher court.he was so blind in his happiness that he cudn't see wat God has planned for him.

all the people who were waiting outside for the final verdict were not so happy with this decision.They have lost so much because of them..police was having a tough time taking to jail..

Arjun Singh was already prepared as per the plan , he acted accordingly and broke the plice chain that was protecting Vikram,Jigyasa and Gaurav..this way all the people who were so angry with Vikram,Jigyasa and Gaurav were able to reach them and beat them to death..this was the end of their terror.

They desrved this ..they have destoyed the lives of so many people ..😡

Raj's mission was accomplished..he was able to take revenge without getting his hands dirty with their murder..😃

Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#829

Now coming to the epilogue:It was just brilliant⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Aslam and Nandini r so happy together..they love each other so very much..par poori duniya mein apne bete ke liye Vikram naan hi bacha tha😆😆😲..par ab kahani khatam ho rahi hai to kya kar sakte hain😃😆. Vishal was really worried coz Aditi was always maintaining cetain distance between them..he thought she is not happy with him but when he got to know the real reason he was so shocked just like me..yeh bhi koi reason hua door rehne ka??😲😆😆😆😆 well Aditi ki to cooking classes start ho gayi..she gave the fees too😉😳😆😆 Arjun Singh ka beta bilkul uspe hi gaya hai..Yasmin ne bahut acche se sambhal liya hai un dono ko..she knows them so well.😆😆 Uske bete ki aadatein bhi usi par gayi hain. pise lekar sab kaam karta hai..😆 Naina was missing Raj so much and he came back..she tried to pretend as if she is sleeping but when Raj kissed her all her anger melted away..😊
So Naina is pregnant..Raj has no words to express his joy..😃😃😃

Perfect ending👏👏👏

LRL jokes were as usual funny and I'll miss them from now on..😃

I hope u start a new RN fiction soon but dont forget Zindagi teri meri kahani..Its one of my favourites..kaafi lamba break le liya tumne usse..ab pls continue karo.😊

Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#830

wow i just cant believe it this fictions is in the end too!!!

but last update he kun na sahi update was just so Comely,Dulcet and rocking!!!👏👏👏the best part was RN were Conflate!!!! and the villains were out of the story!!!the court scene was SOOO good...

"Nandini ne apna chehra hata liya vahan se...!!!

Rajveer:- ALL THE BEST..."...🤣🤣🤣...this was too much priya!!!!

Vikram, Gaurav, aur Jigyasa ko saza hui buhat he accha hua...but looks like vikram doesn't care!!!!!...buhut wishwas hai usse aapne power pe,apne paise pe...raj ke ek plan ne uske saara wishwas tod diya

arjun un sab ko apne custody main bahar le aaya taake raj ke plan ko poora kar saake...smart!!!

woh kehte haina jaisa karoo waisa bharo...vikram and the other to deserve this!!!! vikram to time pe he ludak gaya😆😆😆 jigyasa aur gaurav bach gaye...danged!!!!😳😳😳

Rajveer ne kafi dhire se kaha:-"hum nahi jante Rai saheb...ki KAL hamare liye kya hai...!!! phir bhi hum apne AAJ ko agar behtar bana paye toh ek umeed si jagti hai ke sayad humare sath kal...sab kuch achha ho...!!! par aap ne hamesha apne AAJ me sab ko taklif di...phir bhi aap yeh soch rahe the ke aap ka KAL behetar hoga... kaise...???"

this was my favorite line❤️...awesome, you have done a awesome job priya!!!!👏👏👏

"sir Vikram ne marne se pahle Rajveer se kaha...'JAI MATA DI...'🤣🤣...you are just too much priya...itneee funny line...you just make an perfect happy and funny ending!!!!👍🏼

about Epilogue

the epilogue was really good nandani aur aslam ka sceen to buhut he accha tha specially the eid mubarak one and there sweet cute baby!!!

adi and vishaal ka sceen bhi buhut accha tha...adi was not talking to vishal...and the reason was she don't know how to cook!!!😆😆😆 they both are so sweet!!!!!

you know the most funny one was arjun and yasmeen!!!!👏👏👏

hahaha kya baat hai arjun ke paan khane ke aadat gai to yasmeen ko lag gai!!!!😆😆😆 awww unke choota che cuteeey che bete bhi hai!!!❤️

wow jaisa baap waise bete...rishwat leeke chup hui kya he baat hai!!!!
but i don't think ke abhi tak arjun ne rishwat le hai...par paata kaise chale ke wo arjun ke he bete hai!!!!😆😆😆

and now last but not the least...my fav sceen in the last update about RN!!!

naina ko raj ke yaad aa rahee hai aur raj aa bhi jaata hai!!!!

naina naatak kar rahee hai sone ka aur raj pe buhut gussa bhi hai but when raj kissed her she forgot her anger about raj!!!!

naina prgnanat hai...and when raj herd that he is like in the 9th cloud!!!

wow now thats called an perfect ending with the looong update thank you sooo much priya for sharing such an awesome fiction!!!!!

you know tere naina is one of my favorite fiction and it will always be!!!

so i will see you soon with new fiction...just kidding i know u r already so confused main tumhe aur confused nahi karna chahte so it depends on you if you want to start a new fiction or not wid no pressure at all!!!!😊😊😊

loveee u

esha!!!😊😊😊

Edited by nainaahsingh - 14 years ago

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