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(PS* court me...main kabhi gayi nahi...aaj tak itne achhe kaam karne ka mauka hi nahi mila ke main kabhi kisi court me jayun...😆!!! isiliye voh scene likhne me jyada taklif hoti... isiliye voh scene edit karte hue maine short-cut me khatam kiya hai...adjust kar lena...plz...😃)

EPISODE:-35 (Last part)

HIGH COURT...

kafi lambi behas hoti rahi...!!! public prosicuter aur Vikram ke lawer ke bich...!!! Vikram ka lawer janta tha ke sare evidence Vikram, Jigyasa aur Gaurav ke khilaf jate hain...aur voh unhe bacha nahi payega...!!! par voh yeh koshish karta raha ke kamm se kamm in teeno ko maut ki saza na ho...

sare evidence judge ke samne the...sare wittness ne apna bayan de diya...!!! voh video recording bhi judge ke samne aayi...aur ek docter ki help se Naina ke father ne apna bayan diya ke unhe marne ki koshish bhi Vikram ne ki thi...aur usi accident me un ke wife ki death ho gayi thi...

baht sare arguments ke baad...faishle ki bari aayi...

aur judge ne faishla sunaya...

Jigyasa ko umar kaid ki saza hui thi...

Gaurav ko bhi umar kaid ki saza hui thi...

par Vikram ko maut ki saza hui...

jab judge ne yeh faishla sunaya...toh Vikram ne halke se mushkuraya...!!! aur Rajveer ki nazar sirf aur sirf usi par tiki hui thi...uss ki hassi Rajveer ko taklif de rahi thi...!!! par voh phir bhi chup baitha hua tha...!!! uss akhiri scene ke liye...jiss ka voh pichle ek mahine se intezaar karr raha tha...

judge ke jane ke baad...court me halki hal chal rahi...!!! par police ne Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa ko cover kar ke le ja rahe the jail me...!!! turant vahan se media walon ko aur baki ke logon ko hataya gaya...!!! Arjun singh ke nigrani me voh sab jail me ja rahe the...

Rajveer ke paas se gujarte hue Vikram ne use dekha...phir mushkurate hue kaha:- "tumhe ab bhi lagta hai na ke tum jeet gaye aur main haar gaya...???"

Rajveer bass use dekh raha tha...uss ne koi jawab nahi diya...

Vikram ne phir kaha:-"pata hai tumhe Rajveer...tumhe baht jaldi galat-faihmi ho jati hai ke tum jeet gaye...!!! main Supreme Court bhi ja sakta hun...aur khud ko bachane ki puri koshish kar sakta hun...!!! lekin agar meri saza phir bhi nahi badli toh bhi mujhe koi faraq nahi padta...!!! sher pinjre me ja kar ghaash nahi khata...!!! main vahan se bhi apni hukumat chala sakta hun...aur mujhe yeh kehne ki jarurat nahi hai...kyoun ke tum yeh jante ho...!!! aur rahi baat meri saza ki...toh hamare India me yehi toh sab se badi kamzori hai...!!! maut ki saza toh mil jati hai...par maut nahi milti...!!! phanshi ki saza paane wala aadmi...apni puri zindagi jee kar marta hai...par hamara kanun itna soft hai ke...iss baat par koi faishla nahi mil pata...!!! kisi bhi jail me chale jayo...tumhe bat sare phansi ki saza kaatnewale log mil jayenge...!!! jinhe saza toh mil gayi...par phansi nahi mil payi hai aaj tak...!!! kitne sare terrorists bandh hai yahan par...par phir bhi aaj tak kisi ko bhi saza ke mutabik phanshi nahi mil payi...!!!"

Vikram ne apne chehre par vohi zaherili mushkurahat late hue kaha:-"tum mera kuch bhi nahi bigad paye Rajveer aur kuch bigad bhi nahi payoge...!!! par ek baat aur... main bhale hi jail me rahun...par mere aadmi toh jail ke bahar honge na...aur mere hukum ko maan ne ke liye voh kuch bhi kar sakte hain...!!! ab tumhri bari hai Rajveer aur sath hi tumhari pariveer aur doston ki bhi...

uss ne Nandini ki aur nafrat se dekhte hue kaha...

Nandini ne apna chehra hata liya vahan se...!!!

Rajveer:- ALL THE BEST...

Vikram ne Rajveer ki taraf dekha...!!! voh hass raha tha...ek baht hi simple si mushkaan thi uss ke chehre par...!!! jise samajhne ki koshish kaar raha tha Vikram... par kamiyab nahi ho pa raha tha...

Arjun singh ne apni custody me Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa ko court ke bahar le kar aaya...

un ke piche Rajveer, Naina, Nandini, Aditi, vishal, Aslam aur Gayatri devi bhi the...!!! Ankur un ke piche tha...kisi se fone par baat karr raha tha...

court ke bahr aate hi...Vikram ne suna...aam inshano ki awaz...!!! hazaro ke tadat me khade log gusse se chilla rahe the...

ek awaz padi Vikram ke kanon me..."yeh kanoon ka muzrim nahi...bal ke hamare muzrim hai...unhe hamare hawale kar do..."

ek aur awaz padi Vikram ke kanon me..."parivaar...bachhe...pati...hum ne khoya hai...isiliye inn ko saza dene ka haq hamara hai..."

phir ek aur awaz padi Vikram ke kaon me..."humain keede-makode samajh kar hamari jaan se khelnewale in haivanon ko hamare hawale karo..."

Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa ke chehre par pahli baar kafi darr dikh raha tha...!!! hazaron ki tadat me khade log jo unn ke khun ke pyase hain..aaj unhi logon ka gussa dekh kar Vikram pehli baar kafi dara hua tha...

kuch police walon ne rassi bandh kar...ek circle banaya hua tha aur logon ko Vikram se durr rakhne ke liye...aur unhe piche hata rahe the...rashta bana rahe the...Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa ke police van tak jane ke liye...

Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekha...Naina mushkurayi...Rajveer ne apna left hath badhaya...Naina ne thaama uss ka hath...phir Rajveer ne apne right me khade Aditi ko dhire se apne kareeb la kar seene se lagaya...

Aditi ne mushukra kar Naina ki taraf dekha...phir Vishal ko...sabhi ke chehre par mushkaan thi...sirf halki si anshun the Nandini ke ankhon me...!!! Rajveer ne aslam ki taraf dekha...kuch ishara kiya...!!! Aslam...Nandini ko le kar vahan se chala gaya...

court ke seedhiyon se utar kar Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa...Arjun ke sath police van tak ja rahe the...!!! vahan khade logon ka chillana badh raha tha...unhe kabu me karna police ke liye mushkil ho raha tha...

tabhi dhire se Arjun ne Ankur ki taraf dekha...jo ki ek police officer ke sath baat karr raha tha...

phir uss ne Rajveer ki taraf dekha...!!! Rajveer ne mushkura kar...dhire se apna sarr hila kar kuch ishara kiya...

Arjun ne Rajveer ke ishare ko samajhte hue...apne cap ko thoda sa upar utha kar apni razamandi di...

Arjun chalte chalte unn police walon ki taraf dekha...jo ke logon ki bheed ko kafi mushkil se sambhal rahe the...

un police walon me khade havaldaar Ghaseeta ko dekha kar Arjun singh ne kuch ishara kiya...

achanak havaldar Ghaseeta...apne paas khade ek aur havaldaar par ja kar gira...

aur uss ke hathon se voh rassi chuti jo vahan khade logon ko rokkne ke liye...police walon ne rassi ke sahare ek circle bana kar Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa ko guard karr rahe the... aur unhe police van ki taraf le ja rahe the...

gusse me vahan kahde log...bhaagte hue Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa ki aur badh rahe the...logon me auratain bhi samil the...

aur unn teeno ke ankhon me ek daar tha...ek khauff...

logon ki bheed...ne vahan khade police walon ko dhakka dete hue Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa ko gher liya tha...

Ankur bhaagta hua aa raha tha...

Arjun singh aur baki ke policewale...unn teeno ko uss bheed se bachane ki koshish karr rahe the...!!! par hazaron ki tadat me khade logon ke saamne sirf 20-30 policewale kamiyab nahi ho pa rahe the...

gussaye logon ki cheekh me...Vikram, Gaurav, aur Jigyasa ki awaz sunayi nahi de rahi thi...

durr khade Rajveer ke ankhon me aaj ek khushi thi...ek sukun tha...uss ne ashman ki taraf dekha...kahin na kahin aaj uss ke baba ko shanti mili hogi...

Ankur uss bheed ko sambhal nahi pa raha tha...uss ne Arjun singh ko khinch kar le jate hue kaha:-"Arjun singh...humain goli chalani padegi...

Arjun:-"par sir...yahan itne sare log khade hain...hum kaise goli chala sakte hain...!!!"

Ankur:-"pahle blank fire karo...phir dekhte hain kya karna hai...

Arjun ne blank fire kiya...par vahan khade logon ki chikh us blank fire ko daba rahi thi...

Arjun ne ankur ki taraf dekh kar kaha:- "sir koi faida nahi...

Ankur ne apni jeb me se gun nikal kar vahan khade ek aadmi ke pair par bullet chalai...voh aadmi chilla kara gira...

vahan khade log bhaagne lage...!!! Ankur...Arjun singh ko sath le kar unn teeno ki taraf bhaag kar gaya...

dur khade Rajveer ne dekha...Vikram ka chehra pehchana nahi ja raha tha...khun se bheega hua tha uss ka pura chehra...

Jigyasa aur Gaurav khun se lath-path pade hue the...!!! logon ne kafi buri tarah se mara tha unhe...!!!

sanshain sayad abhi bhi chal rahi thi un ki...

rajveer court ki seedhiyaan utar kar niche aaya...Vikram ke paas...

police force gher kar khadi thi unn teeno ko...!!! vahan khade log sabhi bhaag gaye the...

Ankur fone kar ke ambulance bula raha tha...

fone par baat karte hue Ankur ki nazar padi Rajveer par...

jo dhire dhire Vikram ke kareeb ja raha tha...

Ankur hairan tha...aur thoda pareshan bhi...

Rajveer thodi der ke liye khada hua...Vikram ke kareeb...phir baitha uss ke paas...

Vikram ki body me halki si halchal ho rahi thi...abhi bhi voh zinda tha...

Rajveer ne kafi dhire se kaha:-"hum nahi jante Rai saheb...ki KAL hamare liye kya hai...!!! phir bhi hum apne AAJ ko agar behtar bana paye toh ek umeed si jagti hai ke sayad humare sath kal...sab kuch achha ho...!!! par aap ne hamesha apne AAJ me sab ko taklif di...phir bhi aap yeh soch rahe the ke aap ka KAL behetar hoga... kaise...???"

Rajveer ne apna chehra thoda kareeb laya...Vikram ke aur dhire se kaha:- "dard... taklifain...baht di hain tum ne...!!! main chahta toh...khud tumhe maar sakta tha...par...maine koi galat kaam kabhi nahi kiya...!!! aur aaj mujhe laga yeh kaam bhi mujhe dimag se karna chahiye...!!! tumhare hi wajah se polictics me aaya tha...aur mujhe bhi tumhe khatam dimag se hi karna hai...!!! vaada kiya tha maine apni choti maa se ke aap ko hazar logon ki maut dunga...aur aaj haqiqat tumhare samne hai Vikram...!!! sachhai ki jeet hui...der se hi sahi...

Rajveer utha vahan se jane ke liye...

par uss ne achanak apne hathon par kisi ke hathon ko mehsush kiya...!!! Rajveer ne dekha...voh hath Vikram ka tha...

Rajveer phir baitha Vikram ke kareeb...

khun se puri tarah bheege hue uss ke chehre par ek halki si mushkurahat thi...us ne Rajveer ko apne kareeb aane ka ishara kiya...

Rajveer uss ke kareeb gaya toh Vikram ne dhire se mushkura kar kaha:-" Vikram kabhi nahi hara...Rajveer...kisi se bhi nahi hara...!!! par aaj tum ne mujhe hara diya...!!! tum ne achhi chal chali thi Rajveer...!!! aur iss baar bhi main tumhare chaal me phansh gaya...

Rajveer ne dekha...Vikram ke chehre par abhi bhi ek mushkaan thi...par ankhen shant ho chuki thi...

kareeb hi ek ambulance aa kar ruki...ek doc aur hospital ke kuch staff tezi se aaye...!!! Vikram,Gaurav aur Jigyasa ko chk kiya...

Rajveer vahan se dur ja raha tha...apne car ki taraf...jahan Gayatri devi...Naina, Aditi...Vishal ke sath khade the...

Ankur...doc ke kareeb aaya...kuch baat ki...!!! Arjun bhi vohin khada tha...

Rajveer ne turn kar ke dekha...

Vikram,Gaurav aur Jigyasa ko ambulance me dal kar le jaya ja raha tha...!!! Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"thanxxx...akhir...yeh sab tumhare liye hi hua na...!!! Dimag jo lagaya tha tum ne...

Naina ne mushkura diya...

phir uss ne Gayatri devi ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"maine apna vaada pura kiya hai...choti maa...Vikram ko hazar inshano ki maut de kar...

ambulance ke jane ke baad...Ankur...Rajveer ke paas aaya...sath me Arjun singh bhi tha...

Ankur:-"hum unhe nahi bacha paye...!!! mujhe toh yakeen nahi ho raha hai ke achanak se yun...yeh sab...

Rajveer:-"bura hua...baht bura hua...!!! par kehte hain ne bure ke sath bura hi hota hai...!!! sayad aisi hi anth likha hua tha in ke naseeb me...

Rajveer chala gaya...

Arjun singh...wapas apne jeep ki taraf ja raha tha...Ankur ne piche se bulaya...

Ankur:-"Vikram ne apni akhiri lamhe me Rajveer se kuch kaha tha...!!! tum bhi toh vohi the na...??? tum ne bhi suna hoga...kya kaha tha...uss ne...???"

Arjun:- "jee sir...maine suna tha...last ke kuch sentence sune the maine...

Ankur:- "kya suna tha...??? kya kaha...Vikram ne apni akhiri saansh lene se pahle...???"

Arjun ne idhar udhar dekha...aise jaise...voh koi baht hi khaash chiz kehne wala ho... phir dhire se Ankur ke kaan ke paas apna chehra le jate hue kaha:- "sir Vikram ne marne se pahle Rajveer se kaha...'JAI MATA DI...'

Ankur...hairan ho kar Arjun ko dekh raha tha...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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EPILOGUE...

After one and half year...

Aslam & Nandini...

Nandini ne ashman me chand ko dekha...!!! maholle me shor sunayi de raha tha...' Eid Mubarakh'...

Nandini ne mushkurate hue turn kiya...toh dekha...Aslam aa raha tha...

Aslam ne apne bete ko Nandini ke hathon me dete hue...dono ko apne bahon me bhara aur kaha:-'Eid Mubarakh...

Nandini ne mushkura kar kaha:-"aap ko bhi...

Aslam ne apne bete ka matha chum kar kaha:- sahebzade...aap ko bhi Eid Mubarakh...

uss ne pata nahi kya samjha...bas hass diya...

Nandini ne dhire se kaha:-"aap se ek baat puchni thi...???"

Aslam:-"haan...pucho na...

Nandini ne dhire se kaha:-"maine...hamare bete ka naam Vikram...rakha...aap ne kuch nahi kaha...!!! kabhi pucha bhi nahi...!!! aap mujh se naraz toh nahi hai na...

Aslam ne mushkura kar kaha:-"Vikram naam rakhne se koi Vikram Rai toh nahi bann jata...!!! dekhna...hamara beta...ek aisa inshan banega...jise puri duniya...sarahegi...!!! jo hamara naam roshan karega...kuch aisa anokha aur achha kaam karega...jiss par humain fakr hoga...

Nandini ne mushkurate hue,,,Aslam ke seene par apna sar rakha...

(PS*:- inhone risk liya hai apne bete ka naam Vikram rakh kar...mujhe kuch nahi kehna...kyoun ke kahani toh khatam ho rahi hai na...HA HA HA😆)

Vishal & Aditi...

shadi hue...sirf do hi mahine hue hain...!!! lekin jabb se shadi hui hai...Vishal ne notice kiya hai ke jaan bujh kar Aditi uss se durr rehne ki koshish karti hai...!!! hamesha kuch na kuch bahana bana kar Vishal se apni duri banaye rakhti hai...

Vishal samajh nahi pa raha tha...Aditi ke dil ki baat...!!! dono ek dushre ko chahte the... pyar karte hain...phir unn dono ki razamandi se hi shaadi hui...par pata nahi kyoun Aditi jaan bujh karr uss se durr rahti hai...!!! kuch pucho toh taal deti hai...

Vishal ko aisa lagne laga tha ke...sayad Aditi uss ke sath khush nahi hai...!!! jiss ki khushi ke liye voh jeeta hai...uss ki khushi ke liye voh kuch bhi karr sakta hai...

Vishal ne kuch faishla kiya...!!! phir Aditi ke paas aaya toh dekha...voh T.V dekh rahi thi...!!! uss ki nazar toh T.V par thi...par soch kahin aur thi...!!! voh yeh samajh raha tha...

uss ne T.V bandh kiya...!!! Aditi ne uss ki taraf hairani se dekh kar kaha:-"kya hua... tum ne T.V kyoun bandh kiya...??? kitna achha prog aa raha tha...!!!"

Vishal uss ke kareeb baith te hue kaha:- "achha...batayo...kya prog chal raha tha...???"

Aditi:-"ek achhi movie chal rahi thi...aur kya...???"

Vishal ne kuch der dekh aditi ko...phir kaha:-"Adi...tum news channel khol kar baithi hui thi...

Aditi...chup rahi...kuch nahi kaha...

Vishal:-"main pahli baar tumhari khamoshi samajh nahi pa raha hun Adi...!!!"

Aditi...phir bhi chup rahi kuch nahi kaha...uss ki nazrain jhuki hui thi...

Vishal ne kuch der intezaar kiya...phir kaha:-"iss ka matlab main sahi hun...!!! tum mere sath khush nahi ho...!!! tum janti ho...main tumse kitna pyar karta hun...!!! tumhari khushi mere liye kya mayne rakhti hai...!!! tumhare chehre par ek mushkaan ko dekhne ke liye main kya kar sakta hun...!!! main tumhe iss tarah se ghutt te hue nahi dekh sakta...!!! sayad tumhare chehre par khushi tab aayegi...jab main tumhari zindagi se chala jayun...hai na...!!!"

itna keh kar utha...vahan se Vishal...!!! Aditi ne uss ka hath thaam kar roka...!!! Vishal baitha...phir se uss ke kareeb...par hairan hua...Aditi roye ja rahi thi...!!! kuch nahi keh pa rahi thi...bass roye ja rahi thi...!!!

Vishal:-"tum ro kyoun rahi ho...plz...rona bandh karo...pahle...

ussne Adi ke anshun pochte hue kaha...

Aditi ne dhire se kuch kaha...jo Vishal ke samajh me nahi aa raha tha...!!! uss ne hairani se Aditi ki ore dekhte hue kaha:-"main samjha nahi...tum ne kya kaha...???"

Aditi ne dhire se phir se kaha:-"mujhe thik se khana banana nahi aata...!!!"

Vishal ne uss ko ghurtte hue phir se kaha:-"main abhi bhi nahi samjha...tumhari baat...!!!"

Aditi ne chidhte hue kaha:-"uffo...Vishal...kuch toh samjha karo...!!! mujhe thik se khana banana nahi aata...!!! main tumhe kaise khush rakh payungi...??? mujhe laga tha ke khana banana kafi ashan kaam hoga...!!! par yeh baht mushkil kaam hai...!!! main roz khana banane ki koshish karti hun...par hamesha fail hoti hun...!!! mujhe kuch nahi aata...!!! aur isi wajah se main chah kar bhi tumhare kareeb nahi aa pati...mera dimag kitchen se bahar kahin aur jata hi nahi...

ab tak Vishal jo hairani se Aditi ki baat sunn raha tha...voh hassne laga zorr se...

Aditi ne dhire se kaha:-"ab tum hass kyoun rahe ho...???"

Vishal ne use bade pyar se dekh kar kaha:-"pehle kaho...ke tum mujh se pyar karti ho ki nahi...aur tum mere sath rehna chahti ho ya nahi...???"

Aditi ne usi tarah se muh fulate hue...Vishal ke seene par apna chehra chupate hue kaha:-" love u...aur main hamesha hamesha tumhare sath rehna chahti hun...!!!"

Vishal:-"toh phir kitchen ki tension tum mat liya karo...!!! hamare ghar me khana banane wala hai na...!!! aur phir kya chahiye...???"

Aditi uss se alag hote hue kaha:-"nahi...mujhe tumhare liye khud khana pakana hai... tumhare fav dishes mujhe khud banane hain...!!!"

Vishal:-"thik hai...jo hukum raajkumari...!!! aaj se hum aap ko khana banana sikhayenge...!!! ab toh aap ko koi prob nahi hai na...!!! ab toh aap hamesha hamare kareeb rahengi na...!!!"

Aditi ne mushkurate hue 'haan' kaha...

Vishal ne use apni bahon me uthate hue kitchen ki ore le jate hue kaha:-"thik hai...bolo aaj tumhe kya sikhna hai...

Aditi ne apni bahain uss ke gale me daalte hue kaha:-"aaj nahi...kaal se sikhna hai...!!!"

Vishal:- "toh...aaj kya karni hai...???"

Aditi:-"aaj mujhe...tumhe fees deni hai...phir tum mujhe kal se khana banana sikhayoge...!!!"

Vishal:-"fees...???"

Aditi:-"hmm...fees...

Vishal ne mehshush kiya...uss ke honth bandh the...aditi ke honthon se...

(PS*...bachho...aage aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..jjise dekha jaye...chalo...apne apne ankhen bandh kar lo...😛)

Arjun & Yasmin...

Yasmin ek bade se jhule me baithi hui thi...!!! samne uss ke paan rakha hua tha...!!! jiss me voh chuna laga rahi thi...!!! ek paan toh uss ke muh me bhi tha...jise bade pyar se voh chaba rahi thi...aur kuch gun guna bhi rahi thi...

shadi ke baad Arjun singh ne paan khana puri tarah se chod diya tha...par chodne se pahle uss ne Yasmin ko paan khana sikha diya tha...

tabhi ander se bhagta hua...Arjun singh aaya..goad me uss ke ek pyara sa bachha tha...jo lagataar roye ja raha tha...

Arjun:-Yasu...plz...meri thodi si help kar do...!!! main vaada karta hun ke aage se tumhari sari baat manuga...!!! lekin mujh se ek sath yeh sare kaam nahi hote...!!! matlab kitchen bhi main hi sambhalun...bachha bhi main hi sambhalu...aur sabji lene bazar bhi main hi jayun...!!!"

Yasmin ne usi tarah paan chabate hue kaha:-"yeh toh aap ko pahle hi sochna chahiye tha...!!! lekin nahi...aap ko toh mard bann na tha...!!! toh bano mard...kar ke dikhayo sara kaam ghar ka...!!! kya kehte the aap...ke main ghar me baithe baithe mauj karti hun...aur aap office me kaam karte karte thak jate hain...!!! toh phir ek hi din me kaise sitti-pitty ghum ho gayi aap ki...huh...

Arjun ne apne bete ko Yasmin ke goad me bithaya...phir kaan pakad kar bola:-" kaan pakadta hun...aage se tumhe kuch nahi kahunga...jo tumhari marzi aaye voh karo...!!! par phil haal is media player ka muh bandh karwayo...!!! aisa lagta hai ke uparwale ne sirf PLAY ka button lagaya hai is ke muh me...MUTE ka button toh hai hi nahi...!!!"

Yasmin ne dekha apne bete ki taraf...phir kaha:-"thik hai...main iss ka rona bandh kar dungi...!!! lekin ek shart hai...

Arjun:-"tumhari sari shart manjur hain...!!!"

Yasmin:-"pahle sun toh lo...!!!"

Arjun:- "mujhe nahi sunn na...!!! main bina sune hi bol deta hun...main Ins Arjun singh aaj kassam khata hun ke...aaj se meri biwi jo kahegi...main vohi karunga...!!! uss ke alawa aur kuch nahi karunga...

Arjun singh ne apne kaan par hath rakh kar bola...kyoun ke uss ke bete ka rona... lagataar badhta ja raha tha...

Yasmin mushkurayi...!!! phir apne bete ko le kar ghar ke ander gayi...Arjun singh bhi uss ke piche piche gaya...

Yasmin ne drawer me se 100 rupaye nikale...aur uss bachhe ke hath me thama diya...!!! hairani ki baat thi...par sach yehi tha ke uss bachhe ka rona...turant bandh ho gaya...

Arjun singh bade hairani se dekh raha tha...phir bola:-"yeh kaise...

Yasmin:-"policewale ka beta hai...koi bhi kaam bina rishwat ke nahi karta... samjhe...!!!"

Arjun singh ka muh khula tha...!!! Yasmin ne apne bete ko Arjun singh ke goad me dete hue kaha:-"khana main bana deti hun...aap ise sambhalo...!!!"

par Arjun singh ke goad me jate hi voh bachha phir se rone laga...

Arjun:-"ab kyoun ro raha hai...???"

Yasmin:-"ek note aur thama do...yeh phir chup jayega...!!!"

Arjun ne vaisa hi kiya...bachha chup ho gaya...!!!

Yasmin:-"meri gaod se yeh aap ke goad me replace hua na...isiliye yeh uss chiz ka service tax tha...!!!"

Arjun bada khush ho kar bola:-"bhai vaah...bada kaamal ka beta hai mera...jarur bada ho kar lawer banega...ya phir policewala...bina fees liye jo kuch nahi karta...

(PS*...jyada typically lene ki jarurat nahi hai...yeh sirf ek fiction hai...😆)

Rajveer & Naina...

Naina ko neend nahi aa rahi thi...!!! pichle do hafton se Rajveer Delhi me hai...!!! aisa nahi hai ke voh uss se dur nahi jata...uss ka kaam hi aisa hai...!!! par kuch dino se voh use baht miss karr rahi thi...

kyoun ke...khair...

voh uthi apne bed se...wall clock par nazar dali...raat ke 11 bajj rahe the...!!! ghar me sabhi so chuke honge sayad...

Naina balcony me aayi...!!! ashman ki ore dekha...!!! ashman saaf tha...chand sitare... sabhi the...!!! par Naina akeli thi...!!! aaj use chand se jalan ho rahi thi...!!!

halke se anshun aaye uss ke ankhon me...uss ne apni ankhen bandh ki...voh anshun gire uss ke galon par...!!! Naina ne halke se mushkura diya...!!! aaj tak use yeh samajh me nahi aaya hai ke...jab bhi voh Rajveer ko miss karti thi toh uss ke ankhon me anshun kyoun aate the...!!! haan...pyar toh voh baht karti thi... par uss ki her ek harkat Rajveer se kyoun judi hui hoti thi...

car ke horn se uss ne apni ankhen kholi...toh dekha...!!! main gate se Rajveer ki car ghar ke ander aa rahi thi...!!! halki si mushkurahat aayi...uss ke chehre par...!!! apne anshun poche...aur balcony ka door bandh kar ke voh apne room me aayi...!!!

ek pal ke liye socha ke bahar jaye...Rajveer ke paas...!!! phir kuch sochte hue voh ruki...!!! darwaze ka lock khola...phir chup chap aa kar so gayi...!!!

kareeb 10 min ke baad...uss ke room me kisi ke aane ki aahat uss ne suni...!!! night lamp jall raha tha...!!! Naina ki ankhen bandh thi...!!! darwaze lock hone ki awaz uss ne suni...!!!

koi kareeb aaya uss ke...!!! haan voh...Rajveer hi tha...!!! Naina...bina ankhen khole hi uss ke aahat...uss ke khushbu se use pehchan leti hai...

Rajveer ne uss ke mathe par apna hath rakha...Naina jaan bujh kar nahi jagi...

Rajveer ne Naina ke honthon par halke se kiss kiya...aur dhire se kaha..."tumhare bare me roz sochna ashana tha...jo ki main roz kiya karta tha...par Missing you is the heartache...that never goes away...

kuch pal rukk ne ke baad Naina ne ankhen kholi toh dekha...Rajveer ne almari se apne kapde nikal raha tha...aur phir wash room me chala gaya...

Naina ne mushkura diya...

Naina:-"janab ko hamesha pata hota hai ek...mujhe kaise manana hai...!!! shikayat karne ka mauka bhi nahi dete...!!!"

Naina ne phir se sone ki acting ki...!!! thodi der baad Rajveer aaya...!!! uss ke paas... hi soya...aur dhire se dono ko upar achhe se blanket wrap karne ke baad Naina ko hug kiya...aur us ke kanon me dhire se kaha:-"toh aap jaag rahi hai...hai na...

Naina ne bina turn kiye...bina ankhen khole dhire se kaha:-"hate you...

Rajveer ne use apni taraf turn karwa ke kaha:-"aur iss nafrat ki wajah...

Naina ne uss ke gale me apni bahain dalte hue kaha:-"tumhe pata tha ke main jaag rahi thi na...tabhi voh kahin se churayi hui line boli tum ne hmm...???"

Rajveer ne mushkura kar kaha:-"sach bolun...toh jab main aaya tha toh mujhe laga tha ke tum so rahi ho...par jaise main wash room se bahar aaya...toh dekha...ke madam ke face par ek halki si...magar pyari si mushkaan thi...!!! toh main samajh gaya ke... hamari biwi jaag rahi hai...!!! aur sirf sone ka natak karr rahi thi...!!!"

Naina thodi si udaas dikhi...phir kaha:-"mujhe plz...itne dino ke liye chod kar mat jaya karo...!!! mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta...

Naina ke ankhon me rajveer ne halke se anshun dekhe...phir kaha:-"tumhe kya lagta hai...mera vahan mann lagta hai...tumhare bina...??? par kya karun...jana padta hai...mera kaam hi aisa hai...!!! aur tum yeh kyoun sochti ho ke...main tum se dur hun toh hamara pyar kamm hai...!!! duriyon me toh pyar badhta hai na...!!!"

Naina:- "haan...isiliye nahi chahti ke tum mujh se dur raho...!!! duriyon se pyar badhta hai...aur main tumhe baht miss karti hun...phir mujhe rona aata jata hai...!!!"

Rajveer ne naina ke ankhon me dekha...She looked as pure as an angel, and her lips looked tempting. Moving his face closer to hers...he whispered:- "main tum se kabhi dur nahi hota Naina...!!! jab tum akeli ho...tab ankhen bandh kar ke mujhe yaad karna...baht kareeb payogi tum mujhe...apne baht kareeb...

Naina ne rajveer ke ankhon me dekha...she saw something glitter...Naina ne apni ankhen bandh ki...mehshush kiya Rajveer ko...his lips pressed softly against her...

his moved it slowly taking in her bottom lip...caressing it with his own. Naina moaned into his mouth...opening it for Rajveer to jump in...as he tongued his own tongue with her own...they both fought for dominance and then went lost into immense pleasure. Naina pulled onto his hair bringing him closer...but not close enough. while Rajveer hugged his fingers around her perfect waist...pulled and tugging onto them...

next morning...

Naina ki jab ankh khuli toh...khud ko Rajveer ke bahon me hi paya...!!! raat ko kafi der tak dono ne baat ki thi...!!! par Naina kuch khaash kehna chahti thi Rajveer ko... jo keh nahi pa rahi thi...!!! use thoda ajeeb sa lag raha tha...

voh uthi dhire se...Rajveer ki bahon se khud ko alag kiya...!!! janewali thi ke... Rajveer ne use phir se apne kareeb khinch liya...

Naina:-"Raj...subah honewali hai...

Rajveer:-"toh...??? koun kambakhat kehta hai ke subah ho jaye toh pati apne biwi se pyar nahi kar sakta...!!!"

Naina ne mushkura kar kaha:-"koi nahi kehta...!!! par...

Rajveer ne dekha...Naina kuch kehte hue hichkicha rahi thi...Rajveer ko thoda ajeeb laga...!!! Naina aisa tabhi karti hai...jab voh baht uljhan me ho...

Rajveer:-"kya baat hai Naina...tum kuch pareshan ho ...???"

Naina:-"haan...nahi...!!! actually pareshan nahi hun...mujhe bass tum se baat karni thi...!!!"

Rajveer:-"haan...toh phir kaho na...!!!"

Naina phir se kuch pal ruki...gehri sansh li...phir dhire se kaha:- "i m pregnent...

Rajveer use yun dekh raha tha...jaise...voh samajh hi nahi pa raha ho...ke Naina kya keh rahi thi...!!! Naina ki nazrain jhuki hui thi...

Rajveer ne uss ka chehra apni taraf uthate hue kaha:-"meri taraf dekho...

Naina ne uss ki ankhon me dekha...phir hass diya...!!! Rajveer k chehre par ek khusi thi...ek ajeeb si khusi...

uss ne Naina ko apne gale se lagaya...baht tight...phir dhire se kaha... "Thank You...

Naina ka jawab vohi tha...jo hamesha hota hai..."LOVE YOU RAJ"...

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Finally khatam hua...Tere Naina...chalo...chalo...ab galiyan dena bandh karo...aur comments karna start karo...😃

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#815

LRL JOKE:-1

Rajveer sir class me padha rahe the...!!! Huda bore ho raha tha...kabhi kabhi ajeeb ajeeb se sawal puch kar Rajveer ko pareshan bhi karr raha tha...

bell baji...class khatam hui...!!! par Huda ne apni khunnas nikalne ke liye Rajveer sir ko sab ke samne thoda insult karne ke liye bola:- "sir jee...ek sawal ka jawab batayiye...!!!"

tab tak Rajveer sir Huda ki huda giri se puri tarah pakk gaye the...!!!unhone apna gussa ander chupate hue kaha:-"haan pucho Huda...

Huda:-"sir sabhi...hindi ya english me baat karte hai...koi mathematics me baat kyoun nahi karta...?"

Rajveer sir:-"main karta hun...mathematics me baat...!!! sunn na chahoge...???"

Huda:-"boliye na sir...

Rajveer sir ne uss k coller ko pakad kar apne samne late hue kaha:-"aaj ke baad mere class me jyada Teen-Paanch (3-5) na karna...aur abhi Nau-Do-Gayarah (9...2...11) ho le...!!! varna Char-Panch (4-5) de dunga toh tujhe Che ke Chattish (6 ke 36) dikhenge...samjha..."

LRL JOKE:-2

maj Bharghav:-"tum sabhi abhi abhi mentorship camp se jungle se laute ho...!!! batayo...aisi koun si chiz tum sab ne vahan dekhi...jise tum sab dekh toh paye par tod nahi paye...

Alekh:-"aap ka muh...

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#816

okkk...ab mera LAST SPEECH dene ka time hai...😆

kahani khatam...paisa hazam...😆

vaise bhi yeh saal kafi achha hai...kyoun ke maine pahle EHSAAS khatam kiya...aur uss ke baad Tere Naina ko...😃

jiss jiss ko bhi yeh fiction bakwaas lagi...voh apna hath vohin par uthaye...!!! mere upar na uthaye...kyoun ke mujhe itni durr se kahan laggne wali hai...ha ha ha 😆

aur jiss jiss ko bhi yeh fiction baht achhi lagi...unn ke liye kya kahun...!!! bass itna ki... "dosti nibhana koi aap se sikhe...!!! mere her bure herkat par sath dete rehte ho...!!! uparwala aisa dost kisi ko bhi na de...sirf aur sirf mujhe de...!!!" 😆

mere her fiction ki tarah is fiction ne bhi mujhe kaiii sare frnds diye...!!! aur sabhi baht achhe hain...mujh se baht pyar karte hain...!!! jo ki mere her ghatia se ghatia ud par bhi mujhe encouraging comments karna kabhi nahi bhulte...aur jinhe mujh par gussa aata tha ya phir meri fiction bakwaas lagti thi...voh "reserved' ka board laga kar mahino tak darshan nahi dete the...ya phir kabhi wapas hi nahi aate...!!! phir bhi chalta hai...iss se yeh pata chal jata tha ke... mere is frnd ko yeh ud pasand nahi aaya...!!!😆

baki mere sare frnds toh regular hai hi...!!! par kuch aise frnds bhi the jo mere 'emotional atayachar' se hamesha ke liye bhaag gaye...aur phir kabhi wapas nahi aaye...ha ha ha 😆

chalo baht ho gayi bak...bak...!!! ab aap sab par rehem karti hun...aur yeh fiction yehi par THE END karti hun...😃😆

love you...for all your support...and love...

Priya😃

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
are update hote hote 1ghantaa ho gayaa jet speed se bail gaadi speed(bullock cart) ho gayi shaayad tabhi to update aaya hi nahi abhi tak thread me 😆

main kya karti yaar...sahi waqt par ELEC walon ne lyt kaat di thi😭...par ab last part with Epilouge post kar diya hai...😃 ab bhugto...😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Damn...finally u ended the fic na...huh!!

Mujhe tumhe nahi daantna...mujhe to pata hi tha ki ye khatam hone wala hai...phir bhi bura laging...kya karu? Huh!! Huh!! Huh!!

Abhi coming to the last part...

It was just one scene...but iss fic me jitna bhi dard mila saare characters ko...uske badle ek ajeeb si sukoon mili...bas iss ek akhri scene me!! Maine kaha na...Rajveer ki khamoshi hi bahut kuch kehti hai...jis tarah wo chupchap sunta hai...aur waqt ane pe...sahi action ke sath apni baat karta hai...its a beautiful essence actually!! 😊

The way u wrote the scene...was just perfect!! Rajveer ka Vikram Rai ko finally wo sab baatein keh dena...and apni aakhon se uska wo hashr dekhna...am sure...it was a gud feeling for him. 😊 Nice plan it was!! It all just turned out to be gud at the end...coz jo sahi hai...wohi jeet hamesha uski hogi..😊

Meanwhile Ankur and Arjun wala scene badhiya tha...😆😆

Epilogue

Vishal n Aditi...darra diya tha mujhe Aditi ne...ye kar kya rahi thi pagal...😆😆...but mast scene tha phir bhi!!

Arjun n Yasmin...🤣...police ka beta hai...bina rishwat ke koi kaam nahi karega...😆😆😆😆...just fultoo awesum yaar!!😆😆😆

And next Rajveer & Naina...again a sweet subtle romantic scene...just the way I like it...😳😳...loved every bit of it...Rajveer ka aana...Naina ka ruthne ka natak karna...Raj ka bas aise hi mana lena...and then the end...it was all very very nice!!😃😳

LRL JOKES

1. My super smart Rajveer...jo bachpan se smart hai...wo bada ho kar aur bhi smart hoga na...😉😆...Math ki kya awesum language skill hai uski...😆😆...loved it.🤣

2. Aalekh related jokes are always short and funny...perfect!! 😆😆😆

Abhi page 122 pe main apni kuch dil ki baat kehti hu..regarding this fic..😳...see ya there..😆😆

Sumi.😳

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ria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#819

the up is really good

the first is nice vikram gaurav and jigasa got arrested

rajveer aur naina ko sataya jo tha

anyways the part it is really beautiful

so everyone is happy settled in their life

rajveer is as usuall away from naina due to his work

but naina she is missing him

rajveer ko dekh akr naina fels nice but she is angry with him she didnt greet him but raj usse pata chal he gaya that naina is acting he reaaly loves her

the morning scene is too sweet

plz cotn soon with another fic like and pm me