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Posted: 14 years ago
Kaha tha na Rajveer shayad Naina ko le jayega...😳😆...but mujhe na bada gussa aa raha hai...😡end me gaana gaane ki kya padhi thi yaar?😆 Isliye do love birds ko aise hi khulla nahi chhorte...😆

Anyways coming to the part, Naina ne finally Raj ko mana hi liya to take her along, but dono ka ruthne manane ka session badhiya tha!! "garnier ka product"...🤣...pata hai mujhe aise hi uss tag line pe hassi ati hai...ab jab phirse wo dekhungi...😆😆...main to girr hi jaungi hasste hasste...🤣

Aur RN kya waha masti/romance karne gaye the?? Dono bas gussa kar rahe the aur muh fula rahe the...😆😆...not that I mind. Mera Rajveer fule hue muh me ghazab ka lagta hai...☺️...Naina ka pata nahi...I didnt notice.😆😆😆

In the meanwhile, I liked Aslam Nandini wala scene...😳 and bich me Video to bas tumne dekha...huh!! So wont talk abt that...😆

Now coming bak to my Raj..😆😆..."Waha tak jaa hi rahe ho to lift de do"...🤣...my smartie!! 😆😆 Red paint wala idea badhiya tha...after all idea tha kiska!!😉 (Raj ka & yeah...thoda bahut tumhara bhi😆😆) I liked it jab Naina ka muh khula reh gaya...😆😆

Waise ped ke niche wala romance bhi achha tha!!😉😉 Atma ki baat sunn leni chahiye...😳😳

And now at the go-down RN ko shyam kaka ka beta mil gaya...😊 Gud!! Naina ne usse fruit bhi diya...chalo itne tension me usse ye sab yaad rehti hai...gud girl.😆😳😉 "Main hu na"...🤣 and then "Hum hai na"...😆😆😳...that was nice.😃😃

Phir waha Vikram ko bail mili and wo idiot "Rajveer ka khoon" kehke bewkufo ki tarah hass raha tha...STUPID!!😆

Huh...so wat RN dikh gaye usse. And uski nazar Raj Aur Naina par hi tikki thi...huh!! Sabki nazar wahi hoti hai...wo log dekhne ke layak jo hai...😆😆

Waise this tym I cant scold u for stopping the part though iss baar pehle se bhi bure mukaam pe roka hai tumne... but kya kare...I guess as a writer it was perfect!! Par haan...as a reader mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai...sab thik hoga!! Isliye I fikr Not!!😆😆

Jaldi se continue karna. Mera Rajveer kab tak Naina ko bahon me leke khada rahega...😆😆


Aur haan, gud that u understand lil Bengali. 😆😆 Warna mujhe translate karna padhta. 😆 And yes, I have sent the parcel to ur electricity department. Dekhte hai Imported Thappad se kya hota hai?😆😆😆

Chalo ab aur nahi...continue soon. My Rajveer is w8ing!!😉

Luv,
Sumi.😳
Edited by Sumi_162710 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This was soon 😊😊 ... Adil ke aane ki khusi mein 😛😛😛
comig to the update 😊😊😊 it was good1 👏👏👏 so naina ne raj ko mana hi liya 😆😆😆 ... ziddi ladki 😆

Raj bhi kamal hai 😆😆... khud naina se naraz tha...par fir usse mana bhi raha tha 😆😆😆 confused boy 😆😆😆

& didn't i said ... Raj agar naina ko saath lejaye faida usi ka hai 😉😉😉 ... didn't he got a chance to kiss his wife 😛😛😛... & is baar sachi i closed my eyes 😆 ..maine kuch nahi dekha 😈

as 4 Raj naina ki tang khichna kabhi nahi bhulega 😆 ... teasing her at every possible time 😆😆😆...bada maza aata haina usse 😆😆😆...ab bechari phone beep se dar gayi ...toh kya hua 😆...

ek sawal ...wat u give naina to eat 😆😆😆... dimaag hain usme ... yeahh sab gayab ho gaya 😆...fasa diya na mere Raj ko 😔 ... gaana gane ki kya zarut thi 😆/...itni der mein ghar pahunch jate 😆😆😆... ab pahunch gaye na villians wahan par ...but i know Raj the ever smart he is ..woh sab kuch sambhal lega 😳😳 ...

all the best 👍🏼 ...&
"Take care Raj" 😛😛😛 ... i really mean it 😆

continue soon 😊


Edited by -purnima- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yyyaaayyy update ho gaya update ho gaya 👏👏
kya karen jab holidays chal rahe hon aur ghar baithe baithe bor ho rahe hon aur koi update ho jaae to aise hi dance karne ka mann karta hai😃😃😆 aur jab holidays me kahin aur jaana pade aur waha per ghar baithe hue kuch na karne ko mile to isse bhi achchaa waala dance hota hai yyyaaayyy😉😉
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
itne exciting pt. par break laga diya...update soon...
vidushi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy priya😃😃😃
itne dino se try karte karte aakhir update ho hi gaya...hai na😉😉😉
waise maine update padhne k lie jaldi theek ho jaao kaha to tha magar 30% up padhne k lie kaha tha aur baaki ka bachaa to sach me kaha tha jaldi theek hona😃
ab update per aate hain ok😊😊😊 bahut ho gaya ab explainations🥱🥱🥱 update bahut achcchaaa waala tha kyonki vikram aur gaurav to gaye jail me na aur bechaari jigyasa phansi hai unki bail ke liye😃😃😃 lekin naina raj k saath jaana chahti hai to jaane do na yaar kyon uske upar gussa kar raha hai jab wo keh rahi koi problem create nai karegi... jab to raj uspar nazar rakhega tab tak😉😉😉
lekin baad me jab raj ko uss haveli ke baare me pataa chal gaya tha aur wo successful bhi ho gaya tha saara saaman gayab karne me vikram , gaurav aur jigyasa ka to ye unke bail per chhud waane waala locha kyon daal diya 😡😡😡 aur unlogon ko pataa bhi chal gayaa ki raj aur naina jungle me hain aur wahaan pahunch bhi gaye unlogon ko pakadne
aur last me naina kya zarurat thi gaana gaane ki time waste karne ki gaana gaa kar end me teeno saamne se gher kar khade ho gaye unko😡😡😡
ab jaldi se update karna no more time wastin haan😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome updt...👏👏

luved naina in this updt and also njoyed d way raj was handling her😊

and also d sweet few cute moments in the updt and also d song was really nice...😳😳

lets see aage kya hota hai...

gr8 updt indeed👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Priya...

Bahut hi mast update tha...socha ki sirf like button press karke chod dun aur aaram se exams ke baad comment karun...par like button kaam hi nahi kar raha tha... isliye tujhe ye batane ke liye ki maine padha hai... comment kar rahi hun...😛

Planning to Rajveer ki achhi hi thi... infact bahut achhi... par mujhe sach me tujh par aur Naina par bahut gussa aa raha hai... Tujh par isliye kyunki tune iss point par story ko roka... aur Naina par isliye kyunki usne gaana gakar time waste kiya...

Par fir bhi I have hope ki tu Raj aur Naina ko Gaurav aur Vikram ke changul me fasne nahi degi... unko bachane ki zimmedari teri hai...aur agar nahi bachaya to... tu to gai...

Ab exams chal rahe hain to itna hi comment kar sakti hun...baki ke comments next part ke liye hain...

Update soon...

Luv
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Priya hiii Suhana...

Update was really gud 👏👏👏Thanqqq but as usual u love to shock your readers in the end..😲😲 aadat nahi chutt ti...😆
Raj was not at all happy that Naina was coming with him and after reading the last part I think he was totally right..😆😆 he he he...😆
Nandini and Aslam were able to enter haveli without much diificulty.they managed to fool Vikram's men and got the video too..In sabhi logon ka concentration apne task par 100 time RN se zyada tha😆😆 haan...voh toh hai...
Wat is there in that video that every1 is so shocked..pls reveal it soon. next part me hoga...
Naina was as usual busy in throwing tantrums but Raj as usual was able to keep her quite in his own way😉😆😆😆 ab kisi na kisi ko toh dimag chalana hi tha na...
Raj is indeed genious.he made a brilliant plan to reach Vikram's godown.but now everything is in vein just becuase od this silly Naina.. he he he...hum is mamle ke bare me CHUP rahenge...😆
This is the first time when I am saying that the song was not at all fit for the situation..😆😆😆 sayad next part padh kar tumhe lage ke yeh song bilkul suit karta tha...ha ha ha...kyoun ke tumhe pata hai...main kab kya karti hun...mujhe khud kudh pata nahi hota...😆Naina ko yahi time mila tha gaana gane ka aur Raj bhi uske gaane mein aa gaya..he is much more sensible than her..how cud he sing at such a time?? Pyaar such mein logon ko andha bana deta hai..and where was that boy who was with them?? atleast he shud have reminded them abt the danger that was lurking there..ab Vikram and co.wahan aa hi gayi hai..lets see wat happens coz i know Raj will never let Vikram win now. main philhaal kuch nahi kahungi...bal ke sirf hassungi...aur yehi umeed karungi ke next part me tumhe apne sare sawalon ke jawab mil jaye...aur RN ne duet kyoun gaya...iss ka bhi jawab mil jaye...aur voh ladka inn kea gana sunn kar kahin behosh ho gaya ya phir kahin bhaag gaya...yeh bhi pata chal jayega tumhe...!!! pyar andha hota hai ya MENTOS ki tarah dimag ki batti jalata hai yeh bhi pata chal jayega tumhe...!!! puri baat yeh hai madam ke bharosha rakho...SHERNI RN ke sath bura hone nahi degi...aur yeh pakka vaada hai...😆
Pls continue soon
Bye

Thanxxx Suhana...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi hiii

the up is good thanqqq
raj is n dileemma whether to take naina or not as in the jungle there is many danger
par naina ne jo kaha she is right koi bhi nahin haai raj ka saath dnee ke liye toh atleast agar naina hote toh she can help him aur dekh lo...uss ne apna vaada nibhaya...baht help kari Raj ki...😆
naina ke baat maan kar gaye dono deweene jungle mein
aur wah waha raj jo kiya wah he kissed ab naina uss se naraz jo thi...toh use bhi toh manana tha na use...
anyways finaaly they reach to that vikaram's godown
ab dekhte hai aage kya moor leete hai kahani aage jo bhi hoga Vikram ke liye achha hoga...
plz cont soon and pm me

Thanxxx Ria...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon.

Thanxxx Rakhi...😃

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