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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka28

really a long update tu bore hui kya...???😆
and very very very nice sach sach bol...chahe toh padosh k GEETA aunty ki kasamm kha le...😆
really this time i mean V.E.R.Y . N.I.C.E. UPDATE thanqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq
YAAR ADI KE SATH KITNA BURA KIYA IN LOGO NE... i really hate now this gaurav .... hate it...
sachi vishal adi ko pasand kertaa hi ye mujhe pata tha per ab to saaf hai... ab kitne din tak yeh sab main apne drafts me chupa kar rakhti...kabhi na kbhi toh post karna hi tha na...😛
yaar sach mein kitna mushkil hoga ye sab .... khud jhelna asan hota hai apne ko marte dekhna ya taadpate dekhna namunkin haan...yaar yeh baat toh hai...
and it was hell to see her like that... i can understand now why raj feel so angry about them...unhone ek ladki ko milker fasa aur use torture kiya..,...pahle uske baba aur aur ab bhen ...achi baat ye hai vo aabhi khud mein aap nahi khoya... uski maa ki vjah se... naina bhi kafi samjhdar ho gayi hai... raj ne sab kuch dekha hai...!!! matlab apne father ko marte hue...Adi ko us halat me...aur apne maa ko dard sahte hue...!!! voh akela hi aisa inshan hai...jis ne sab kuch dekha bhi hai aur feel bhi kiya hai...!!! vohi dard...jab nasur ban gaya...toh voh gussa ban kar bahar aaya...

arjun singh was really cute raat ko jnab taiyar ho rahe hai... wah wah bhai wah...
"Naina:- "nahi...bal ki tum dono k jane ki baat sun kar voh khush hai...!!!"

Yasmin:- "yahi toh mushibat ki baat hai...!!!" Yasmin ne dhire se khud ko kaha...
very funny ha ha ha...😆
per in logo ne plan bhut mast bnaya tha... tin maine to socha tha sirf 2 hongi per ye to tin gadiya nikali..wao.. purane filmo se yeh rasham chalta aaya hai ki villans baht bewakuff hote hain...maine bhi is rasm ko aage badhaya...😆
hmm gud finally yamni arjun ji ko kuch to acha samjha ab arjun itna bhi bura nahi hai...😆
RAjveer vakehi kafi pain jhel chuka hai... uska dard ... aur naina ye feel bhi kerti hai... per achi baat ye hai she don't emphasis on him to talk to her about his pain.. thats good... like the way she came just, aur shower band kiya machine mein kamij dali aur bas chalo
i like it thanqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq😃

when will u update next madam ...pata nahi...😆 tum kaho...kab karun...???😆

Thanxxxxxxxxxxx Pinka...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka28

madam meri khudki comment ko 13 days ho gaye kab krengi update

sach me...??? mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

please update soon

its been over a month

sorryyyyyyyyyyy...actually Ud toh ready hai...par abhi tak maine EDIT hi nahi kiya hai...!!! main jaldi hi EDIT kar k post karungi...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
jldi ud kar nahin to itna peeetungi ki .........apne aap soch le😡😡😡
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

sach me...??? mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai...😃

ek baar samne aa ja phir pakka yakin ho jayega
one update in a month
kab kregi update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

jldi ud kar nahin to itna peeetungi ki .........apne aap soch le😡😡😡

he he he...mujhe pata hai ki tu mujhe nahi maar sakti...he he he...😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka28

ek baar samne aa ja phir pakka yakin ho jayega

one update in a month
kab kregi update

tu bata...kab chahiye tujhe ud...??? phir main batati hun ki main kab ud karnewali hun...!!!😉 😉 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
kuch hi der me sayad karungi...!!! matlab agar sab kuch thik raha toh...!!! kya hai na...net ka baht prob rahta hai...😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
EPISODE:-28
Naina kareeb baithi Rajveer k...
us k chehre ko dhyaan se dekha...
murjhaya hua...peele gulab sa chehra...!!! Rajveer ki ankhen use hi dekh rahi thi...
Naina ne Rajveer k mathe ko halke se kiss kiya...aur kaha:- "haan...baht pareshan karte ho tum mujhe...??? aur jab bhi tum mujhe pareshan karte ho na...toh is baat ka ehsaash hota hai ki main kitna mayne rakhti hun tumhare zindagi me...!!! tum se aur bhi jyada pyar karne lagti hun...!!! pata hai Raj... sirf 'i love u' kahna...ajeeb hoga...!!! par sach toh yeh hai ki pata nahi kyoun...par main ab tumhe pahle se jyada chahne lagi hun...!!! har pal...har lamha...tumhe apne kareeb pana chahti hun...!!!"
background......
(Agar Mujh Se Mohabbat Hai
Mujhe Sab Apane Gam De Do
In Aankhon Kaa
Har Ik Aansuu
Mujhe Meri Kasam De Do ):-2
Rajveer ne kuch nahi kaha...aur thoda aage aa kar Naina ko kafi tightly hug kiya...!!!
Naina ko Rajveer k bahon me achha lag raha tha...par ek ajeeb si feeling bhi aa rahi thi...
Rajveer k bare aur wet body k sath lage rahne me use kuch alag si feeling ho rahi thi...
us ne khud hi Rajveer se alag kiya...aur use us k room me le kar aayi...
Naina ne cupboard se Raj k kapde nikale aur kaha:- "tum change kar lo...!!! main tumhare liye coffee le kar aati hun...!!!"
Rajveer ne roka Naina ko:- "nahi mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...!!! bass...tum mere paas raho...!!! mujhe akele bilkul achha nahi lag raha hai...ghutan si mehsush ho rahi hai Naina...??? sona chata hun...par ankhen bandh nahi kar pata... vohi khun...vohi sab chahre...
Naina ne Rajveer k cheeks ko apne hathon se dhire se touch karte hue kaha:- "tum change kar lo...phir aaram se so jana...!!! vaada karti hun...is baar tumhe neend aachi aayegi...
Tumhaare Gam Ko
Apanaa Gam....Banaa Luun
To Qaraar Aae
Tumhaaraa Dard
Seene Me Chhupaa Lun
To Qaraar Aae
Vo Har Shay Jo
Tumhen Dukh De
Mujhe Mere Sanam De Do
Agar Mujh Se ... mohabbat hai...
Rajveer ne Naina ki ankhon me dekha...toh khud k dard ko Naina k ankhon me paya...
Rajveer ne thoda sa smile kiya...hala ki us k us mushkurahat me bhi ek dard tha...
Rajveer:- "Vishal ne sab kuch bataya hai tumhe...tabhi tum yahan par aayi...???"
Naina:- "kaise jaan lete ho yeh sab...???"
Rajveer:- "tumhari ankhen padhna sikh chuka hun main...!!!"
Naina ne halke se smile karte hue kaha:- "tum change kar lo...main abhi aati hun...!!!"
Naina niche gayi...Aditi ko phone kar k sab kuch bataya...
aur wapas aayi...toh dekha...Rajveer khidki k bahar jhaank raha tha...
Naina us k kareeb khadi hui...
bahar....andhera tha...dur dur tak koi roshni nahi thi...charon taraf bass andhera aur khamoshi thi...
Naina ne Rajveer k kandhon par apna hath rakha...
Rajveer ne turn kar k Naina ki taraf dekha...
Naina:- "chalo...chal kar so jayo...!!! vaise bhi subah hone me jyada tym nahi bacha hai...!!!"
Rajveer:- "Naina...subah hogi na...???"
Naina:- "hmmm...subah jarur hogi...aur suraj bhi niklega...!!! lekin is baar suraj hamare liye niklega... hamari khushiyon k liye...Raj...!!!"
Rajveer k chehre par ek mushkurahat aayi...ankhon me halke se anshun bhi aaye...
voh Naina k hath thaame...bed k paas gaya...!!!
Naina ne lyt off kiya...Rajveer aur Naina kafi kareeb soye hue the...charon taraf halki si roshni thi...
achnak Rajveer ek jhatke se utha...Naina ne us ka hath thaama...:- "kya hua Raj...???"
Rajveer:- "mujhe nahi sona...!!!"
Rajveer ne apne ankhen band karta hua kaha...
Naina...samjhi...jarur vohi sare haadse us k ankhon k samne aaye honge...
Naina ne Rajveer ko apne taraf turn karwaya...us ka chehra apne dono hathon se thame...apne seene se lagaya...
Sharik-E-Zindagi Ko Kyoun
Sharik-E-Gam Nahi Karate
Dukhon Ko Baant Kar
Kyoun In Dukhon Ko Kam Nahi Karate
Tadap Is Dil
Kii Thodii Si
Mujhe mere Sanam De Do
Agar Mujh Se ...
Naina so rahi thi...Rajveer us k seene par sar rakh kar...so raha tha...
Naina ki ankhen khuli thi...Rajveer ki bandh ankhen Naina k dil ki dhadkan ko mehshush karr rahi thi...
Naina k hath Rajveer k balon ko sahla rahe the...
Rajveer ne apne hathon se Naina ko kafi tightly hug kiya hua tha...
back ground
Agar Mujh Se Mohabbat Hai
Mujhe Sab Apane Gam De Do
In Aankhon Ka
Har Ik Aansuu
Mujhe Meri Kasam De Do
Agar Mujh Se ... mohabbat hai...
cut to Aditi...
abhi abhi Naina se us ne baat ki...!!!
"bhai aur bhabi dono thik hain...!!! main janti hun...jab tak bhaiya-bhabi dono sath hain...dono hi ek dushre ko kuch hone nahi denge...!!! aaj sach me bhagwan se dua maangne ka dil karr raha hai... par kya maangu...??? khud k liye kuch nahi chahiye...!!! khud k liye na toh koi aas...hai aur na hi koi sapne...!!! haan...bhagwan ho sake toh meri maa...bhai...Naina bhabi... Vishal...Aslam...aur Nandini ko baht sara khushi dena...!!! jiss ki ki unhe jarurat hai...!!! mera kya hai...main unhe dekh kar khush ho jayungi...!!!"
Aditi ne khud se kaha...aur aashman ki taraf dekha...purab ki ore se subah ka sitara nikal raha tha...sayad subah hone hi wali thi...
use dekh kar us k chehre par ek khubshurat si smile aayi...
us ne turn kiya jane k liye...dekha toh pata nahi kab se Vishal vahan khada tha...diwar se satt kar use dekh raha tha...
Aditi:- "tum soye nahi...???"
Vishal:- "itna kuch ho gaya...ek hi raat me...neend kise aayegi...??? tum kaho... yahan kya karr rahi thi...???"
Aditi:- "kuch nahi...aise hi...aatit k kuch panno ko yaad karr rahi thi...
Vishal:- "kyoun khud ko itna dard deti ho...???"
Vishal us k kareeb aa kar baitha...
Aditi:- " nahi...ab mujhe dard nahi hota...Vishal...!!! kyoun ki mere dard ko share karmne k liye tum sab jo ho...!!! aur jab mere ghum hi baant gaye tum sab k sath toh...dard kyoun hoga...???"
Vishal ne hath thama Aditi k aur kaha:- "tum hassti hui achhi lagti ho...!!! jab bhi bhai jee k sath sharat karti ho na...aur bhi jyada achhi lagti ho...???"
Aditi:- "aur tum...??? kabhi socha hai ki...tum kaise lagte hoge...jab mushkurate hoge toh...??? Vishal...maine kabhi bhi tumhe na toh jyada mushkurate hue dekha hai aur na hi...hasste hue...??? kyoun khud ki zindagi ko khud k liye mahotaz banaya hua hai...??? kyoun nahi tum bhi jee lete...ek aam inshan ki zindagi...!!! ghum toh har kisi k zindagi me aata hai na...phir...??? jab mujhe samjha sakte ho toh khud ko kyoun nahi...???"
Vishal ne halke se smile kiya aur kaha:- "tumhare har ek smile k sath baht khuch juda hua hai...!!! bhai jee ki khushi...choti maa ki mushkurahat...!!! par mere charon taraf dekh lo...ronewala koi bhi nahi hai...!!!"
Aditi:- "aur meri mushkurahat k sath...tumhare kuch bhi jude hue nahi hain...???"
Aditi ne sidhe us k ankhon me dekh kar kaha...
Vishal ne ashman me dekha aur kaha:- "tumhari wajah se aaj main phir se ek aam zindagi jee raha hun Adi...!!! tumhari khushi...mushkurahat...anshun... sab kuch mayne rakhte hain mere liye...???"
Aditi:- "phir bhi tumhe lagta hai ki ...tum is duniya me akele ho...??? kabhi toh kisi k jazbaat padh liya karo...!!! kabhi toh yeh bhi soch liya karo ki tum bhi kisi k liye khaash ho sakte ho...??? kabhi toh....
Aditi ruki...kuch pal...
phir Vishal k ankhon me dekh kar kaha:- "kabhi toh yeh socho ki koi tum se pyar karti hai...be-panah...be-inteha...
Vishal kuch bhi samjhne aur sochne ki halat me tha hi nahi...voh bass...Aditi ko dekhe hi ja raha tha...
Aditi ne kuch pal tak aise hi us k ankhon me dekha...aur jane k liye vahna se uthi...
Vishal ne us ka hath thaam kar rokk liya aur kaha:- "thodi der aur baith jayo...!!! akele me ghutan si hoti hai...
Aditi baithi...us k kareeb...phir dekha us ki ankhon me...voh bhi us ki ankhon ki zuban padhne ki koshish karr raha tha...
Aditi aage aayi thoda sa...aur Vishal ko hug kiya us ne...Vishal khamosh baitha raha vohin par...
Aditi ki ankhen band thi us ne dhire se kaha:- "janti hun hamesha se ki tum mujh se pyar karte ho...??? kabb se intezaar karr rahi thi ki kabhi toh tum apne dil ki baat mujhe kahoge...!!! par tum ne kabhi nahi kaha...!!! kyoun...???"
Vishal ne dhire se apne bahon me Aditi ko sameta aur dhire se kaha:- "har baar darr laga ki kahin tumhe kho na dun...!!! aur sach kahun Adi main tumhe kho kar zinda nahi rah sakta....!!!"
Vishal ne Aditi ko kafi tightly apne seene se samet te hue kaha...
cut to farm house
Naina ki ankh.... khuli toh us ki nazar sab se pahle Rajveer par padi...
us k seene se satt kar voh so raha tha...kafi gehri neend me tha sayad...
Naina k chehre par ek smile aayi...
us ne wall-clock par dekha...9 bajj rahe the...
Naina ne dhire se Rajveer ko khud se alag kiya...aur vahan se uth kar wash room k ander chali gayi...
thodi der baad jab Naina bahar aayi toh Rajveer bed par nahi tha...voh thoda hairan hui...phir us ki nazar khidki k bahar gayi toh us ne dekha...
pond k kinare Rajveer baitha hua tha...chote chote pathaar pani me phenk raha tha...sayad kuch soch raha tha...
Naina......Rajveer k paas gayi...thodi der us k piche hi khadi rahi...phir us k kareeb ja kar baithi...
Rajveer ne us ki taraf dekha...
ek halki si mushkurahat ubhri us k honthon par... hala ki chehra abhi bhi udaas tha us ka...
Naina khubshurat thi...aur us k kareeb voh jab bhi rahti thi...Raj ko achha lagta tha...
Naina achhi lag rahi thi...chehre par us k halke wet hairs bikhre hue the...
Rajveer ne dhire se apne hathon se Naina k bikhre hue balon ko sameta...
Naina halke se mushkurayi...
Naina:- "tumhe yaad hai...jab main yahan pahli baar aayi thi...
Rajveer:- "aur mere upar giri thi...
Rajveer ne us ki ore dekh kar halke se mushkurate hue kaha...
Naina:- "ahh...tum bhi na...!!! main yeh kahna chahti thi ki main jab yahan pahli baar aayi thi...aur tum se mili thi...hum dono me se kisi ko bhi toh yeh pata nahi tha ki hamari zindagi kya hai...kaisi hai...??? phir bhi...us pal mujhe laga tha ki main tumhe janti hun...!!! tumhe kya laga tha us tym me...???"
Rajveer:- "hmmmm...main soch raha tha ki kaash tumhare naak k niche voh patla sa moonch na hota toh tum kaisi lagti...
Rajveer hassne laga...
Naina:- "ha ha ha...very funny...tum mujhe bina moonch k bhi toh imagine kar sakte the na...!!!"
Rajveer:- "haan... kar sakta tha...!!! aur agar tumhari puri saqal shurat tabhi mere samne aa jati...toh main Holi tak ka intezaar karta hi nahi... tabhi tum se zabardasti shaadi kar leta...!!!"
Naina:- "ek baat puchun...???"
Rajveer:- "hmm...pucho...
Naina ne Rajveer ka hath thama...thoda aur kareeb aa kar baithi us k...aur kaha...
Naina:- "kya tab tumhe pata tha ki tumhare baba aur Adi k sath yeh sab kis ne kiya tha...???"
Rajveer ne Naina ki ankhon me dekha...
Rajveer ko ek bharosha dikha...ek vishwaas...jo yeh bata raha tha ki voh ab har ek dard me ...har ek taklif me ...Rajveer ka sath degi...
Rajveer ne pond k pani ki taraf dekha...
FLASHBACK......
us din Holi tha...
Rajveer ki ankh subah jaldi khuli...
us ne mirror me apna chehra dekha...
aaj use rang lagane Adi nahi thi...
voh bahar aaya toh dekha...Vishal chup chap baitha chai pee raha tha...
Rajveer sidha Adi k room me gaya...hathon me rangon ki thali liye...
Adi chup chap...apne study table par baithi thi...ankhon me anshun..kuch dard kuch taklif liye...
Rajveer us k paas khada hua...
Adi ki nazar padi...Rajveer par...us k hathon me thaame rango ki thaali par...
Adi ne mushkurane ki koshish karte hue Rajveer k kareeb aayi aur kai sare rang Rajveer k chehre par lagate hue kaha:- "happy Holi bhai...
Rajveer:- "meri bahn Holi par mujhe kuch aur kaha karti thi...
Adi:- "main nahi bhuli bhai...!!!"
us ne thoda aur rang liya aur rajveer k pure chehre par lagate hue kaha:- "Holi hai bhai Holi hai Bandronwali Holi hai"
voh mushkurayi bhi...par us mushkurahat me Rajveer ko baht sari taklif dikhi...
Rajveer:- "kya meri bahn mujhe phir se nahi mil sakti...???"
Adi:- "main vohi toh hun...!!!"
Rajveer:- "nahi tu voh nahi hai...!!! meri bahn baht achhi thi...khud hassti thi...sab ko hamesha hassati rahti thi...!!! meri voh bahn kahin kho gayi hai Adi...!!! plz...ek baar bata de ki tere sath yeh sab kis ne kiya tha...
Adi:- "pata hai bhai...mere sath jo bhi hua...main us baat se itni dukhi nahi hun...!!! mujhe dard hota hai...taklif hota hai...ki main baba ko aur kabhi nahi dekh payungi...mujhe toh yaad hi nahi hai ki last baar maine unhe kab dekha tha...!!!"
Rajveer ne Adi ko apne seene se lagaya...aur kaha:- "baba toh hamesha se hamare sath hai na bachha...!!! bass apni ankhen bandh kar k unhe yaad kar...voh tujhe apne kareeb hi milenge...!!!"
Rajveer k ankhon se do boond anshun nikle...aur Aditi k chehre par gire...
voh kabhi bhi apne bhai k chehre par anshun dekh hi nahi sakti thi...
Aditi:- "bhai...baba k murder k piche Vikram, Gaurav, Jigyasa aur Hari shankar ka hath hai...!!!"
Rajveer ne ek jhatke se Adi ko khud se alag kiya...kyoun ki un logon ne us waqt mask pahna hua tha...jis ki wajah se Rajveer ne un ki shaqal nahi dekhi thi...
Rajveer:- "tujhe kaise pata...???"
darwaze k paas...Vishal khada tha...Aditi ki nazar us par padi...Vishal ander aaya...
Aditi:- "kyoun ki Hari shankar ne mujhe khud un k hawale kiya tha...aur mujhe roz injection dene...Vikram...aata tha...kabhi kabhi Gaurav bhi hota tha...aur kabhi kabhi Jigyasa bhi...!!!"
Rajveer k hath tight hue...
Vishal:- "purani dushmani ka baht ghinone tarike se badla liya hai unhone ne...!!! par unhe is ka jawab dena padega...???"
Rajveer:- "aur jawab...unhe apne khun se dena padega...???"
Rajveer kafi gusse se bahar aa gaya...
Aditi:- Vishu...bhai ko roko...!!! yehi wajah thi ki maine aaj tak us se is bare me kuch bhi nahi kaha tha...!!!
Present...
Rajveer:- "main gaya toh tha vahan par Vikram aur Gaurav ka maarne...!!! phir yeh ehsaas hua ki mujhe unhe tadpana hai...!!! jab tum se Vikram ki shaadi ki baat suni...toh mujhe laga ki main Vikram aur Gaurav ki ghamand par laat maar sakta hun...!!! aur main tumhe vahan se utha laya...!!! sorry...
Naina ne Rajveer k kandhen par apna sar rakha...aur kaha:- "sorry kis liye...??? tum mujhe utha kar laye...tabhi toh hamari shaadi ho payi... phir maine tum se nafrat kari...aur us k baad...bahhhhhhhhhhht sara pyara...
Naina...ne Rajveer ka hath tightly thaame hue kaha...
Naina jan na chahti thi ki kya thi Rajveer k father aur Vikram ki dushmani ki wajah...par use laga ki is k liye yeh sahi mauka nahi hai...aur Rajveer jis halat me hai...us se abhi puchna sahi nahi hoga...kyoun na Nandini se pucha jaye...???
Us ne dil hi dil me sochte hue us pathaar par baithi rahi...jiss k ek hisse par Rajveer baitha hua tha...
(maine pahle bhi kaha hai ki JAYGARH ek chota sa seher hai...!!! aur Rajveer ka yeh farm house...koi mordern farm house ki tarah nahi hai...!!! vahan sab kuch NATURE se juda hua hai...!!!)
Naina:- "vaise 'voh kahan hai...??? subah se dikhi hi nahi...!!!"
Rajveer:- "kis ki baat karr rahi ho...???"
Naina:- "vohi tumhari MALLIKA...aur koun...!!!"
Rajveer mushkuraya...aur kaha:- "ohhh...voh toh sayad apne stable me hogi...kyoun...??? tumhe us ki ride karni hai...???"
Naina:- "bilkul nahi...main bass tumhare sath rahna chahti hun...aaj ka pura din...!!! koi humain disturbed na kare...bass tum aur main...
Rajveer:- "aur yeh 'tum aur main' din bhar yahan karenge kya...???"
Rajveer ne use apne bahon me samet te hue kaha....
Naina:- "hmmm...kuch nahi...bass ek dushre ek damm kareeb rahenge... aur dher sari baatain karenge...!!! main tumhe janti hun Raj...par main tumhe aur bhi jyada gehrai se jaan na chahti hun...!!!"
Rajveer:- "kya jaan na chahti ho...???'
Naina:- "yehi ki agar tumhe Mallika aur mujh me kisi ek ko chun ne ka mauka mile toh tum kise chunoge...???"
Rajveer"- "obviously MALLIKA ko...
Naina :- "kya...
voh ek jhatke se Rajveer se alag hui aur kaha:- "tum hum dono me se MALLIKA ko choose karoge...how mean... Raj
Naina ne apna muh fulate hue dushri taraf kiya...
Rajveer ne use apne kareeb khinchte hue kaha:- "vohi toh baat hai na jaan...tum MEAN hi nahi samajh rahi ho...!!! mera matlab yeh yeh ki main MALLIKA ko choose karunga...taki tumhe bhaga kar le jane me asani ho...!!! aur tumhe toh pata hi hai na...ki Mallika kitna achha daudti hai...!!!"
Naina ne Rajveer k chehre ko dekha...dono hi hass pade...
Naina ki nazar padi...pond k bichon bich...ek water lily khila hua tha...
Naina:- "Raj...mujhe voh chahiye...!!!"
Rajveer:- "arre us ka kya karogi...!!!"
Naina:- "mujhe nahi pata...bass mujhe chahiye...!!!"
Rajveer:- "par...
Naina:- "par...var kuch nahi Raj...plzzzzzzzzzzz...!!! dekho... shaadi k baad tumhari biwi pahli baar kuch maang rahi hai...aur tum itne nakhre karr rahe ho...!!!"
Rajveer:- "yehi toh baat hai na Naina...ki tum pahli baar kuch maang rahi ho...!!! aur agar tumhe voh asaani se mil gaya...toh yeh tumhari aadat bann jayegi...!!! phir socho...is bechare PATI naam k PRANI ka kya hoga...???"
Naina:- "mazak band karo na...Raj...!!! plz...la do na mere liye...
Rajveer:- "aur lane se mujhe kya milega...???"
Naina acchee se janti thi Rajveer kya kahna chahta tha...par voh apne mission me kamiyab ho rahi thi...rajveer ko us k dard se dur le jane ki koshish karr rahi thi...!!!
Naina:- "jo tum chaho...
Rajveer:- "pakka...
Naina:- "pakka...
Rajveer:- "ohkk...toh apni ankhen band karo...aur jab tak main na kahun...toh ankhen khola mat...!!!"
Naina:- "ohkkk..."
Naina ne ankhen bandh ki...use Rajveer k pani me jump karne ki awaz sunayi di...
voh wait karti rahi...kafi der ho gayi...lekin jab Rajveer nahi aaya toh Naina ne ankhen kholi...
aur darr kar chllai...Rajveer pani me dub raha tha...
voh apne hath..pair se koshish karr raha tha kinare tak aane ki...par kamiyab nahi ho pa raha tha...
Naina bhi pani me kudd gayi...
dekha...Rajveer pani me dub chuka tha...voh usi jagah par pahunchi...
Rajveer ka naam le kar chillayi...koi awaz nahi aa rahi thi...us ne search karnma suru kiya...pani ka ander us ne jhank ne ki koshish ki... kuch saaf dikhayi nahi de raha tha...
voh pani k ander se upar uthi...toh chaunki...samne Rajveer khada mushkura raha tha...
Naina jaan gayi ki Rajveer us k sath mazak kar raha tha...
use baht gussa aa gaya Rajveer par...!!! us ne use bina kuch kahe turn kiya jane k liye par Rajveer ne us k wrist ko pakad kar apne tarf khinch liya aur kaha:- "pani itna bhi gehra nahi tha ki main dub jata...!!!
Naina:- "mera hath chodo Raj...mujhe bahar jana hai...!!!
Rajveer ne use roka nahi...Naina bahar aa gayi...us k piche Rajveer bhi bahar aa gaya...
Naina ne kaha:- "mujhe aise mazak pasand nahi hai Raj...!!! aage se plz aise mazak mere sath mat karna...!!!"
Naina ne turn kiya jane k liye...Rajveer ne use rokk te hue kaha:- "tum se kuch kahna hai...!!!"
Naina ne bass use dekha koi jawab nahi diya...Rajveer janta tha ki us k is mazak se Naina hurt hui thi...
Rajveer:- "voh dekho...
Rajveer ne naina ko us water lily ki taraf ishara kiya...
Rajveer:- "dur se kitni khubshurat lag rahi hai na...!!! pani k bich me...us se judi hui...!!! do pyar karnewalon ko hum kaise alag kar sakte hai Naina...!!! voh phool is pani se pyar karta hai...us k ander use samaye rahna use pasand hai...!!! voh usi k ander janm leti hai...aur use me use murjhana bhi pasand hai...!!! tum use is pani se alag kar k kya karti...??? kuch der baad phenk hi deti na...!!! phir voh murjha hi jata...kyoun na voh vohin rahe jahan use rahna achha lagta hai...!!! tum kaho Naina...tum mujh se dur rah sakti ho...???"
Naina ki ankhon me halke se anshu the...us ne dhire se sar hila kar 'naa' kaha...
aur Rajveer k kareeb ja kar us k fore head ko kiss kiya...
Rajveer mushkuraya aur kaha:- "kya karr rahi ho Naina...??? humain koi dekh raha hai...???"
Naina ne chaunk kar idhar udhar dekha...kahin koi bhi nahi tha...
Naina ne fake anger look se Rajveer ko dekha...Rajveer ne use apne dono bahon me samet te hue apne kareeb la kar kaha:- "idhar udar kya dekh rahi ho...??? pani k ander dekho na...
Naina ne pani k ander dekha...ek duck ka bachha swim karr raha tha...
Rajveer:- "bhul gayi na ise...???"
Naina:- "kya...???"
Rajveer:- "aur nahi toh kya...!!! arre yaar...yeh toh vohi hai na...jab tum yahan last baar aayi thi...mujhe dhudhte hue aur tum is pani me girr gayi thi...tab tumhare sar k upar yehi toh baitha hua tha...!!!! kuch yaad aaya...???"
Naina bhuli nahi thi...kuch hi din pahle ki baat thi...jab Mallika koun hai jaan ne k liye voh aayi thi aur mallika k laat maarne se voh pani me giri thi...
Rajveer:- "haan...lagta hai ab yaad aa gay hai na...???"
Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...aur vahan se...apne chere ko fulate hue...room k ander...chali gayi
Rajveer bhi us k piche piche aaya...aur Naina se kaha:- "thand lag jayegi Naina...ja kar kapde badal lo...??? yeh lo...
Rajveer ne use kuch apne kapde diye...
Naina:- "mujhe nahi chahiye tumhare kapde...!!!"
Rajveer:- "chalo achha hai...!!! ziddi ladkiyaan na mujhe achhi lagti hai...!!! ab main tumhe zabardasti yeh kapde pahnayunga...!!! aur tumhe toh pata hi hai...mujhe apne mann ki karne ki kitna achha lagta hai...!!!"
Naina ne us k hath se voh kapde cheen liye aur washroom me chali gayi...
Rajveer ne khud se kaha:- "apni biwi ko achhi tarah se samajhne laga hai tu Rajveer...congrats...!!!"
kuch der baad Naina bahar aayi...kurta payjama pahn kar...
Rajveer ko hassi aayi...
Naina:- "hasso mat...??? tumhare kapde itne dhile dhale kyoun hain...!!! dekho meri tarah tarah kamm se kam do aur ghush sakte hain is me...!!!"
Rajveer Naina k kareeb aa kar bola:- "na...ek hi kafi hoga...!!! main ghush kar dikhayun...???"
Naina ne Rajveer ko halke se dhakka dete hue kaha:- "dur raho...mujh se...!!! subah se mere naak me damm kar k rakha hai...!!! yeh bhi nahi sujhta tumhare dimag me ki...biwi hai...sayad use bhuk bhi lagi hogi...kuch khane ka intezaam karun...'....!!! par nahi...tumhe mujhe pareshan karne me phurshat mile tab toh na tum mere bare me sochoge...!!!"
Rajveer:- "phewwww...kitna bak-bak karti ho tum Naina...??? saaf nahi kah sakti ki tumhe bhuk lagi hai...!!!"
Naina:- "haan...main kahti aur tum achhe bachhe ki tarah maan jate...nahi...??? tumhe achhe se janti hun main...!!! jab maine tumhe I LOVE YOU kaha tha...tab tum bhi mujh se pyar karte the...!!! phir bhi tum ne voh 3 words kahne k liye kitna tadpaya tha mujhe...!!! I HATE YOU raj...!!!"
Naina ki batain khatam hone se pahle hi Rajveer ne use ek jhatke me apne kareeb khinch liya...
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badhne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum.... Hum-Tum
Tum... Hum-Tum
Aankhon Mein Humko Utarne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum-Tum
Tum... Hum-Tum
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara
Raj thoda kareeb gaya us k...use apne bahon me sameta...dhire se apne kareeb khincha...Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...aur na hi Raj se dur gayi...apne bahon se us ne Rajveer k neck ko cover kiya...aur us k ankhon me dekhne lagi... ek halki si mushkurahat bhi thi us k honthon par...
Rajveer:- "phir se kaho...
Naina:- " I HATE YOU...
Rajveer ne use thoda aur kareeb khincha......
Rajveer:- "phir se kaho...
Naina:- "HATE YOU...
Rajveer ne us k honthon ko apne hontho se halke se touch kiya...Naina ne apne ankhen bandh kiye...is baar Rajveer ko koi aur sawal puchne ki jarurat hi nahi padi...
Naina ne khud hi kah diya:- "LOVE YOU....
Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jalne Do Zara
Sharmo-haya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum-Tum
Tum... Hum-Tum
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara
Naina janti thi...voh kahan hai...!!! Rajveer janta tha ki...use bhi khush rahne ka haq hai...apne dil ki sunn ne ka haq hai...Naina se pyar karne ka haq hai...
Naina Rajveer ko apne baht kareeb mehshush karr rahi thi... Rajveer us k har ek khushbu me khud ko duba hua mehshush karr raha tha...
Rajveer jab Naina se alag hua...us ki ankhen tab bhi bandh thi...
Rajveer Naina k chehre ko apne hathon me samet ta hua...kuch pal tak yun hi dekhta raha...
us ne Naina ko dhire se turn karwaya...us k gile aur bikhre hue balon ko sameta...
dhire se use apne bahon me utha kar bed par le gaya...
Naina ki ankhen band thi...abhi bhi...jaise voh janti thi...ki...use ab koi darr nahi...koi ghum nahi...voh khush hai...Rajveer k sath...zindagi ki har ek khushi ko jeeti hui Naina...k chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...
jab Rajveer ne Naina k ear rings nikale...naina ko ek ajeeb si kamp-kampi mehshush hui apne ander...
Rajveer ne us k ear-lobs ko kiss kiya toh us k chehre par ek haya thi...ek mushkurahat thi...
Rajveer k hath...us k neck ko chuu rahe the...Naina ne apne neck par ek sarsara hat mehshush kiya...
us ka mangal shutra us ki neck se alag ho raha tha...
Rajveer k honthon ko voh apne neck k paas mehshush kar rahi thi...
Rajveer ki is tarah se us k kareeb hona us se pyar karne se...Naina mehshush karr rahi thi Rajveer k pyar ki gehrayi ko...!!!
voh janti thi ki Rajveer jis daur se gujar raha hai...use hamesha kisi na kisi ka sath chahiye...taki voh khud k liye bhi jee sake...
Naina...Rajveer k sath puri tarah se jeena chahti thi...
Naina k balon ko Rajveer apne hathon se ched raha tha...
jab Rajveer k hath Naina k kurte k button k paas pahunche... Naina k ander ek huk si uthi...ek pal k liye use laga jaise us ki sansh bandh ho jayegi...
Choolun Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho
Hum Hai Re Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum.. Hum-Tum
Tum... Hum-Tum
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dahlne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum.. Hum-Tum ... -5
achanak Rajveer ruka aur uth kar baitha...
Naina ne hairani se ankhen khole aur kaha:- "kya hua Raj...??? kuch paresha ho...???"
Rajveer:- "hamare ghar k bahr kuch gadiyaan aa kar ruki hain...
Naina:- "sayad Adi....
Rajveer:- "nahi...!!!
Rajveer ne apne shirt pahna aur kaha:- "sayad Vikram... Gaurav...aur Jigyasa aayi hongi...police le kar...!!!"
Rajveer k chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...voh kafi relaxed feel karr raha tha...!!!
Naina:- "kambakhton ko abhi tapakna tha...!!! pati-patni ko toh thoda sa tym de dete...romance karne k liye...!!!"
Rajveer:- "ab bichare Vikram ki ankhen tum par thi...voh toh kamiyab ho hi nahi paya...toh isiliye...kabab me haddi bann hi jata hai...!!!"
Naina aage aayi...Rajveer k shirt k buttons...open kiye aur kaha:- "tum ne kal raat actual me un k sath kiya kya tha...???"
Rajveer:- "pahle tum yeh kaho...ki tum mere shirt k buttons kyoun khol rahi ho...??? "
Naina:- "jyada nahi bass...upar se 3 buttons khol rahi hun...???"
Rajveer:- "puch sakta hun kyoun...???"
Naina:- "nahi...pahle mere sawal ka jawab do ki kal raat tum ne in sab k sath kya kiya tha...???"
Rajveer ne bataya...
tabhi darwaze par dashtak hui...
Naina ne dorr khola...
Aditi khadi thi...
Adi ne Naina ko sar se paaon tak ek nazar dali aur kaha:- "vaah...bhai vaah...apni nayi naveli dulhan ko khud ka kapda pahna diya hai...!!! toh phir tu apne kapde kyoun pahne hue hain...??? bhabi k kapde try kar k dekh na...fit aate hain ki nahi...???"
Rajveer:- " chedna band karr...!!! aur bata...bahar ka SAMACHAR kya hai...???"
Aditi:- "NAMASHKAAR...!!! aaj k mukhya samacharon me...police adhikari Ankur jee ne subah subah Rajveer jee k ghar par apne sathiyon k sath pahunche hain...!!! kyoun ki Ravaan... Supanrekha... aur Kumbh-karan...ne Rajveer jee k khilaf likhit abhiyog kiya hai ki kal raat unhe Rajveer jee ne maarne ki koshish ki thi...!!!!"
Rajveer:- "aur abhi voh sab mujhe pakadne aaye hain...ryt...???"
Aditi:- "jee haan...!!! niche baithe hain...!!! maine un se kaha ki aap dono kal se hi yahan par ho...!!! shadi k baad...aap dono ghar se yahn par aa gaye the...!!! ab batayo...baki kya karna hai...???"
Rajveer ne apne piche se suna...
"is situation ko main handel karun...???"
Rajveer aur aditi ne dekha...
Naina piche se mushkura rahi thi...
end of d epi...
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Huda kafi dukhi lag raha tha...!!! Alekh us k paas aaya...!!!
Alekh:- "kya hua...tu is tarah se udaas kyoun baitha hua hai...???"
Huda:- "yaar...mere padosh me ek khubshurat si ladki rahne aayi hai...!!! par use ENGLISH nahi aati...!!!"
Alekh:- "tujhe kaise pata ki use ENGLISH nahi aati...???"
Huda:- "kal maine us se kaha ki 'baby...give me a kiss'...par us ne mujhe thappad de diya...!!!"
😆😆😆😆😆😆LRL JOKE:-2😆😆😆😆😆😆
Huda ka 6-7 saal ka tha...!!! us ki mummy jee use sulane ki koshish karr rahi thi...
Huda k mummy jee:- "so ja Huda so ja...Gabbar aa jayega...!!!"
Huda ne mushkura kar kaha:- "pahle aap mujhe 2 chochlates do...
Huda k mummy jee:- "kyoun...???"
Huda:- "varna main daddy jee ko bata dunga ki mere sone k baad Gabbar aata hai...!!!"

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