Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6)

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

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plzzzzzzzzzzz ab naraz mat hona...ki RN k romance par maine paani kyoun pher diya...!!! actually mujhe is romance scene ko kisi aur scene me likhna hai...toh isiliye...😃 😃 😃

aap sab samajh hi rahe honge...hai na...???

ab naraz mat hona...aur smile karte hue ud padhna...aur galiya dete waqt bhi smile karna...!!! kya hai na...smile karte hue galiyaan dene me bada maza aata hai...!!! try jarur karna...😃😆😛

love ya

Priya😃

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#472

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Priyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

update was awesome,fantastic n romantic dear
Raj n Naina 1st scene convo is so sweet n lovely
Raj is having tough tym but Naina is der for support n Naina handle him so beautifully
finally Adi aur Vishal confessed love for each other
Morning scene is so nice where Naina trying to cheer him up and Naina usse kehti hai ki woh usse water lily lakar de par Raj is so naughty paani main gaya toh wapas aane ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.....................poor Naina kitani darr gayi thi
song u selected is beautiful n suited d situation
last part is superb but hamesha ki tarah u ended at wrong point
eagerly w8ng for next part
plssssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#473

awesome update.............loved it, waiting to see what will naina do?.............continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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Purnima

@-purnima-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#474

................ firstly thanx 4 update............... laga diya na humlogon ko kaam par........... teeno fics ek sath update.....padhne pad rahe hai 😛😛😛.... 😃........& we are not minding it... 😃😃😃......
as i guessed i had to read the last part again.......... 😆...........
so this part was.........2 gud........... 👏................. mindblowing....... 👏👏👏..........
loved Rajveer-naina convo 😃😃😃............... & romance too 😳 😳 😳.............altough end moment mein scene ka band baja diya 😆😆😆............... u interrupted them............... but still jitna bhi tha........... it was superb 👍🏼.......keep them coming 😉...........

really happy there was not much emotional scenes............... as compared to previous two parts ......
naina really understood rajveer & loved how she understood & relaxed him.......... 😃😃😃....... really gonna be each other's support 😃😃
😳
morning scene was a mixture of everything emotion, funny, romance.......... sara ek mein hi ghusa diya 😆..........

lets see how naina handles the situation downstairs............. 😛........... can i expect a funny scene.............. 😆.........coz i'm sure naina gonna do something really unpredictable......... 😆😆😆.........afterall apke fic ki heroine jo hai 😆.........

so continue soon..... ASAP................. & soon means " jaldi...." 😆
hope u not slept after reading long comment 😛

😆

....... oh i guess i didn't commented on last part too 😆😆😆............ it was emotional 😭 😭😭😭.............. good u send naina to be with Rajveer 😃😃...........

& yes LRL jokes 🤣............... are 2 good 👏👏👏👏

Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#475

Hello Lioness jee....

Update was fabulous 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Starting main jo scene tha na Raj n Naina ka ....pata hain mujhe wo kita cute n sweet laga.....n that song sab kuch ....awesome blowsome dear..Raj naina ko kitna acche se samajtha haina...Naina ne kuch bhi nahin kaha ..fir bhi raj ko pata chalgaya ki Now naina know everything about his past

Adi is such a sweet sis...she is praying for everyones happiness ...Adi n Vishals scene is so beautiful....aur uska saara credit to tumhe jaata haina....u have written that scene so beautifully 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

TheRN scene near the pond is so nice ....naina to bahut yaad kar rahi thi Mallika ko 😆😆😆😆😆😆kinti jelaous haina wo mallika ko leke

saanson k saanson main ..its a lovely song ..one of my fav songs n that I Hate u n I luv scene is superb

Flash back main the holi scene is so emotional ...adi suffered a lot

Ye vikram aur uske gang ko koi aur kaam hi nahin hain kya?..jaha RN jaate hain wahi piche piche chale aate hain..bewakoofon ko itna bhi nahin pata ki undonon ka nayi nayi shaddi hui hain aur wo romance main busy honge ... unko disturb nahin karna chahiye

chalo dekhkethe hain Naina kasie handle karegi ye situation ko

Last main ek baat ..i am really sorry yaar for commenting late ..waiting for the next part

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#476

hi 😊

priya

the up is really awesum 😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😃😃😃😃😃

rajveer becchara so he nahin paa raha haai par naina haai na uske pass naina is really nice she supports him so nicely 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😳😳😳😳😳

the morning situation is very nice 😊😛😛😛😛😛😛

naina aur rajveer pond ke pass jaake baithte haai😊 naina rajveer se zidd karte haai ke usse water lilly laakar depar rajveer he is really naughty usne paani mein jo khudda toh paani se bhaar aane ka naam he nahin lee raha tha 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆bacchare naina ko darra diya 😆

i loved it 😊

plz cont soon aur haan 4 ke up ek saath kar de wah wah super priya express 😊

thik haai baki kaa comment bhi kar dete hu

bye

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#477

amazing, awesome update. loved it.
continue soon.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#478

Wow....jab main tumhara shot padh rahi thi....tabhi ye PM aya tha....tab to main busy thi to notice nahi kiya....phir jab dekha to chaaro PMs ek saath dikhayi dii....and I thought....aaj suraj pashchim se nikla hoga....(obviously main utni subah nahi uthti na....dhyan nahi diya hoga😆)....but seriously yaar....tumhe pata hai na mujhe TN kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaa pasand hai....iska PM dekh kar dil garden garden ho gaya....😉😳

Now coming to the part....Raj was having a hard tym for sure....but Naina was there.....with him!! She handled Raj beautifully.....I loved that song (song hi tha na?😆).....going along that scene......lyrics was beautiful and perfectly meaningful.....mujhe bahut achha lag raha tha!!

Then Adi n Vishal ka scene.....that was beautiful as well....bechari Adi ko khud hi kehna padha....and when the line said...."Vishal uski aankhon ki bhasha padhne ki koshish kar raha tha"....I was like....abhi bhi koshish??? Tab to ye zindagi bhar koshish hi karta rahega!!😆 Jokes apart.....I loved that scene as well....in fact RN scene ke bich wo scene aya....usse bhi mujhe zara bhi problem nahi hui....😉😆

And then in the morning.....Raj at the pond side.....and Naina trying her best to cheer him up....and that was working as well....dono ki wo pehli mulakat ki baat....and then wo water-lily wali baat jo Raj ne Naina se kaha.....it was all very beautiful!!😃 Mujhe bahut cute laga wo....and amidst all the funny parts like choosing Mallika to run away wid Naina....and Naina ka gussa hona and Raj ka dhamki se usse apne kapde change karne par majboor karna....😆😆...very sweet scenes!!

Phir bhookh ki baat....confession wali baat....and that short and sweet romantic encounter.....alllllll very lovely....AWESUM!!!

But uss bich iss tarah se kabab me ek hadda ayega.....I just didnt expect yaar!!😆😆 Waise main iss wajah se tum par barasne wali to thi....par phir tumhara note padha....u intend to include it later na.....then ok....I hav no problem.....and now the problem that has arrived.....I think Naina usse bakhubi se handle karegi....I can recall sum scenes from before....😉....and button wali baat....it makes me all the more eager!!!

Pls jaldi continue karna yaar....main to waise bhi TN k liye utavli rehti hu.....and yaha to itna achha scene hone jaa raha hai.....so pls continue soon.😛

And yeah LRL jokes.....mast the....Huda bhi na.....😆😆....I wonder tumhe itne awesum ideas kahan se ate hai yaar....marvellous!!😛👏

Luv,

Sumi.😊

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#479

Mujhe bahuuuuuut gussa aa raha hai....jab maine mssg post kiya to error aya....they said ur mssg was not posted....to maine phir se sab kuch type kiya tha....and now I see posting thrice!!!!😲😡😲😡😲😡😡😡😡.......Aarrrrrrrrrrggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!😡😡😡

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago