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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh me again with another update😆 Wow didn't knew that you all will like this FF, thank you all soooo much. Love each and everyone, mwah. Ok just a question, was it that obvious?😆I mean that Arti is Nupur's daughter? I thought that is gonna be a suspence thingy😆guess it didn't work. But dekhna I will get you all someday😆. Ok ok I am gonna stop talking now, but before I start I would like to say thank you a lot Sam for pming everyone last time. You are the best, luvv ya. And after my thanks lets start lol........

Part 3
She goes up to him.
Nupur- Hi Mayank, and ummmm.....
Benji- Benji.
Mayank- App yahan?
Nupur- Woh actually woh-
Benji- Sorry guyz, I have to go now, my girlfriend just called me.
Mayank- Ok bye Benji.
Nupur just smiles, and he goes.
Mayank- Please sit down.
Nupur- Nahi Mayank mein kuch batana chahati hoon tumko.
Mayank- Sure bataye na.
She looks around the place, a lot of people there.
Nupur- Mayank tum mere saath kahin chalo ge kya?
Mayank- Ummm sure.
They go to the hotel Nupur is staying in.
Nupur- Mayank please sit down na.
He sits down on the sofa.
She comes out with a tray of snacks and drinks and sits down too.
It get quite, and to Mayank's surprise she starts talking first.
Nupur- Mayank, Benji tumhara dost hai kya?
Nupur thinking- Samjh nahi aa raha hai ke kaise start karoon.
Mayank- Ummmm, haan kyun?
Nupur-Umm just wondering, so how do you know each other?
Mayank- Woh actually hum saath mein school gaye................
He continues talking and talking.
Nupur thinking-Nupur agar tu ne agar abhi nahi bola toh phir pata nahi kab bolle gi.
Mayank- ........aur hum saath mein phir collage.........
Nupur- Mayank tum mere saath kal Goa chalo ge?
Mayank- What?
Nupur- Please Mayank.
Mayank- Par kyun?
Nupur- Kyun ke- Kyun ke-
She gets up and looks out the window. It is raining.
Nupur- Mein chchati hoon ke tum mere husbend ban ke wahan cholo.
Mayank is confused, and he doesn't say anything.
Nupur- Mayank tumse meine jhoot kahan, Arti meri friend ki beti nahi hai.
Mayank- Toh kisski hai?
Nupur- *Looking at him* Meri.
Mayank has no idea what is going on.
Nupur- Mayank, mein Goa mein baari hui hoon, aur wahan mein ek ladke se pyar karti thi, RV se. Hum dono, karte teh, school se. Woh kabhi meri family se nahi mila. Unnko toh usska naam tak nahi pata hai. Mein unnse baat karne wali thi usske bare mein, par mujhe pata chala ke unnhone meri shaadi already kisse ke saath fix kar di. Meine dad ko bohat plead kara, par woh nahi maane, woh aapni zaban de chuke teh. Tabhi meri maagni wali raat se phele mein aur RV ghar se bhag gaye. Aur yahan Mumbia mein aa gaye. Hum saath reh ne laage yahan . Everything was like a dreamland.....Do I even need to explain more?😆
She looks at him, then again continue looking out the window.
Nupur- Aur phir mujhe pata chale ke I was having a baby, and I was even more happier. I never told RV that. Meine ussko kaha ke agar hum wapis chal ke shaadi karle, par usske liye carrer bohat important tha. And one day I woke up and didn't find him. Mein yahan Mumbia mein reh ne laagi, kyun ke mujhe aapni family ke pass nahi jaana that, bohat aajeeb laagta, woh sab mere baare mein pata nahi kya soche ge, specially dad. Meine unnse humesha kaha ke meri shaadi hogayi hai RV se, but never told them his name. And I lied to them ke hum yahan saath saath hai, Meine kabhi plan nahi kiya wahan pe wapis jaane ka, par Gunjan, meri choti behen ki maagni aur shaadi hone wali hai, tabhi mein.....wahan.....
She looks at him to see if he is listening.
He gets everything now.
Nupur- *Changing the subject* Mein bhi na, bol ti jaa rahi hoon, bolti jaa rahi hoon.
He looks at her and smiles with his cute dimples, and she simle back.
Nupur- Nahi Mayank agar tum mere saath nahi jaana chahate toh its absoluty ok with me.
He stands up, walking up to her.
Mayank- No Nupur, I'll come.
Nupur- Really?
She gets excited and hugs him. Then she realizes she is hugging him and breaks the hug, embarressed.
Nupur- Ummm, thank you, thank you sooo much, Mayank.
Mayank- No problem toh kal jaana hai na?
Nupur- Haan, kal hi.
Mayank- Nupur ek baat poochoon?
Nupur- Haan poocho na.
Mayank- Nupur tumne mujhe yeh sab kyun bataya?
Nupur don't know how to anwser him.
Nupur- Kyun ke-
Mayank- Kyun ke kya?
Nupur- Kyun ke tum bohat ache ladke ho Mayank, and I knew it that you will help me.
Mayank- *Smiles* Thanks tum bhi.
Nupur- Mein bhi kya?
Mayank- Bohat achi ho.
Nupur- Thanks.
Mayank looks at the time.
Mayank- Oh god, mein late hogaya hoon, I should leave now.
Nupur- Oh-
Mayank- Nupur toh hum kal miley kahan?
Nupur- Ummm, tum mujhe aapna phone number de do, in case koi problem ho jae.
He gives her his cell number.
Mayank- Acha bye.
Nupur- Bye
Nupur thinking- I hope Mayank baadmein maana nahi karre, par I am sure he wont.
Mayank thinking- I hope mujhe chutti mil jae.
He goes to the the person who owns the orphanage, and ask if he could have a break, and she says "Sure" and that night he packs his stuff.
It is 10:03am, and Mayank is still sleeping dreaming about Nupur.😍
His phone starts rining, and still half asleep he picks it up.
Mayank- Hello?
Nupur- Hello Mayank? Tum kahan ho?
Mayank- mmhMmmm?
Nupur- Mayank tumhe yaad hai na ke aaj hum Goa jaa rahe hai? Meri family se milne, aur wahan rehe ge, until Gunjan's mariage.
Mayank- mmhMmmm.
Nupur- Tum kya kar rahe ho?
Mayank- mmhMmmmmmm.
Nupur- Mayank mein Nupur! NUPUR! 😆
Mayank- Nupur?
He sits up.
Mayank- Nupur!
Nupur- Thank god tumhe yaad aagaya.
Mayank- Abb woh...Nupur bas mein aata hoon.
Nupur- Ok par hurry, trai 25 minutes mein aati hogi.
Mayank- Ok.
Nupur- Ok, I'll call you later.
Mayank- *Smiles* bye
Nupur- Bye
Mayank- Bye Nupur.
Nupur- Mayank meine bye already bol diya hai.😆
Mayank- Oh--ok.
He looks at the time, already 2 minutes passed. It is 10:05am, the train is going to come at 10:30.
Mayank- Oh god, have to hurry.
Gosh I know such a long part, 😆 I know I know it is very boring, but still I hope you like it. And do see this wonderful siggy Liana made for me for this FF, I really really love it.😳Thansk a lot Liana again. Love ya all.
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

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read the part even be4 u pmed me
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itna acha tha!!👏
such a wow siggie!!!
it's so nice
going back to the part
i knew aisa kuch hone wala hain
now i'm too excited
plzz update fast
and khabardar jo socha ke boring tha😆
1st to comment
partytime!!!
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Edited by mjht_fan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Linu 🤗
he he..we r all very smart people, see we found out ArTi is nupur;s kid and also that nupur is going to ask maynk to go with her !! *yay*
nice nice :) update soon :))
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey linz
nice update
cont soon
thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
u r so funny n so was the part😆
mainly when maynak goes on saying mmhmmm..
n when nupur said it was her he sat up 🤣
im not gonna say u thanks for pm becozzzzzzzzzz...........
hare yaar dosti main bhi kyasi formality? right?
so do pm me when u post the next part...😉
n seems like u r too bg these days.. mera msg ka reply ab tak nahi kiya 😔


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey janu its not long 🤣but i loved it jaldi post karna next part aur lamba sa ok 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww......
just awww...
toh tum yaha thi
tum kaha chali gayi
jab hum baat kar rehe the,
mina aur pratts ke saath?
Bolo na! 😆
Phir...
maine dekha,
ki Jassi phele thi!
Ab main sad hoon
But one day...
one day...
I will be first!
LOL
I sound like an evil person now
More like a devil
but I'm still an angel
okay,
I'm making this pretty long
so this is why
I'm not shutting up
and getting to the point
okay fine
I will now
I loved the part
but an amazing part
comes from an amazing writer
the part was nice
I'm glad Nupur told Mayank
leken yeh RV yaha kyun hain?
I hate him
I'm excited for Goa
seems fun
continue soon Lina!
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Posted: 15 years ago
also, it was short make it LONGER!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
gud 1 sweethrt!!........👏
uuumm the 1 i like d most was dat phone scene.....🤣
pm me when u update next part....bbye...🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update. very nice part.loved mayur and their conversation.
wow,I loved it when mayanks says muhhmmmmm
Oh god, It's too funny.
now continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.

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