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@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: saanch_69
Hiiiii dear....hiii saanch

The prologue was really nice, it almost took me to the old days of LRL...thanks for liking it dear. this is really a big thing for me...thanks alot

Haye I wish they cud ever be back but 😭 😭 😭 ....me too wish that dear but 😭 😭 😭. that was a great journey

Anyways really looking forward to the next update .....i will update soon dear

Keep rocking😊 ...thanks dear

thanks 4 ur comments
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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

hi preet,the banner was really nice.it perfectly complements the title.plz ud soon.

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

just caught up wid ur fic.....

gr8 begining....luved d concept....

plzzz updt soon....

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: esha143
hi preet,the banner was really nice.it perfectly complements the title.plz ud soon.

thanks alot dear.......
m glad that u liked that banner
will try to update now
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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
just caught up wid ur fic.....

gr8 begining....luved d concept....

plzzz updt soon....

Firstly, welcome dear
thanks 4 reading the fic
thanks for loving it
will try to update now
luv preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

PART-1

Raj apne haathon me naina ki pic le kar ek chair par bheth jata hai aur kehta hai ki:- "nia, kitne ache the na wo pal, jab hum sab saath the- tum, mein aur naveen."

He starts remembering the old times.

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FLASHBACK:-

We see a big mansion having name as SHIKHAWAT MANSION which is having a big lawn and 2 ladies are sitting there and discussing something.

Lady 1:- "dekho prerna, bache saath me khelte hue kitne ache lagte hain na." she said pointing towards three children playing in the lawn.

Prerna (mother of raj):- "Haan veena, teeno bahut khush hain kyunki is waqt teeno saath me hain. Agar akele hote to in teeno me se koi bhi khush na hota."

Veena (mother of naina and naveen):- "Aur batao prerna, anurag kaisa hai? vese naveen ke papa aur anurag dono ko apne buisness se time hi kahan milta hai? jab dekho kaam, kaam aur bas kaam. Pata nahin kya hoga in dono ka."

Prerna:- "Haan Veena, sach kaha tumne. In dono ko kaam ke ilava kuch nahin dikhta. Ab to mene anurag ko bolna hi band kar diya hai kyunki mein janti hun, wo mujhe sunane wale to hain nahin."

They both started laughing. At the same time, a very cute 5 year girl came towards them and says:- "Aunty dekho na, veer mujhe tang kar raha hai."

Prerna take that girl in her lap and said:- "oh naina, don't worry. mein abhi raj ko bulati hun." she started calling for raj.

And a 7 year boy came towards them and says:- "kya hua mamma, aapne bulaya?"

Prerna:- "Raj, tum naina ko tang kyun kar rahe ho?"

Raj:- "Nahin mamma, mene nia ko kuch nahin kaha. ye to aise hi bol rahi hai."

Prerna:- "dekho raj.............................."

Tabhi peeche se naveen aa ke bolta hai:- "nahin aunty, raj ne kuch nahin kiya. Ye chuhiya jhooth bol rahi hai."

Naina:- "mujhe chuhiya mat bulao bhai."

Naveen:- "Ab chuhiya ko chuhiya nahin bulaunga to aur kya bulaunga."

Naina started crying and said:- "me chuhiya nahin hun."

Raj cant see naina crying and said:- "Nahin nia, please rona band karo. Tum janti ho na mein tumhari aankhon me aanso nahin dekh sakta. Please nia and naveen yaar, ab isse aur tang mat kar."

Naveen:- "Raj, tu bhi na bas pagal hai. Hamesha is chuhiya............."

Raj:- "Bas kar na naveen, me nia ko rote hue nahin dekh sakta. Nia, please chalo mere saath, ab hum tumhe tang nahin karenge."

Naina:- "mujhe nahin aana tumhare saath veer."

Raj:- "Nia, please chalo na. Dekho mein tumhare liye ek new doll laya tha, tumhe dena hi bhool gaya."

Naina gets excited over this and says:- "sach veer." And she hugs him. After that naveen, naina nad raj left leaving behind prerna and veena.

Prerna:- "kitna pyaar hai na naina aur raj mein."

veena:- "Haan Prerna, dono bahut pyaar karte hain ek dosare se, tabhi to jab naina naraz hoti hai to sirf raj hi usse mana sakta hai aur to aur in dono ne ek dosare ko aise naam diye hain jo koi aur nahin le sakta."

Prerna:- "Haan veena, raj ke liye naina uski nia hai aur nia ke liye raj uska veer. Aur un dono ke ilava kisi aur ko ye naam lene ka haq nahin hai."

Veena:- "mein to bas itna chahati hun ki dono ek saath hamesha khush rahe aur in dono ka saath hamesha aise hi bana rahe."

Prerna:- "zroor bana rahega."

FLASHBACK ends.
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Raj:- "Aisa nahin hua mamma, aaj veer aur nia saath nahin hain. aur is baar to nia apne veer ke manane par bhi nahin mani." And two drops of tears rolled down his cheek.

Naina:- "aisa nahin hua veer, aur iski vajah sirf tum ho." aur naina ki aankhon se bhi aanso behne lagte hain.

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Song in the background:-

dard mein bhi ye lab muskura jate hain beete lamhe humhe jab bhi yaad aate hain (raj smiles remembering his old time with nia and tears rolled down his cheeks.)

dard mein bhi ye lab muskura jate hain beete lamhe humhe jab bhi yaad aate hain (naina ki aankhon me se bhi aanso beh rahe hain.)

Chand lamhaat ke waaste hi sahi muskurakar mili thi mujhe zindagi (raj remembers the scene when he was playing happily with his nia.)

Teri aagosh me din the mere kate teri baahon mein meri thi ye raatein kati (naina remembers the scene when she hugs raj being so happy.)

Dil se saare ghamo ko bhula jaate hain (both smiles with teary eyes.)

Both of them sleeps weeping all night.

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Subah6:30 baje naina ki aankh khulti hai aur wo time dekh ke jaldi se taiyaar hone chali jati hai. She knows she has over-slept. So she doesn't want to waste time now. At 7 a.m. she was ready when there is knock on her door. She opened the door and found an orderly standing there.

Naina:- "yes?"

Orderly:- "mam, aapko brig. Chandok ne apne cabin me bulaya hai?"

Naina:- "ok....tum jao me unse mil lungi."

Orderly left from there and naina thought:- "uncle ne itni subah subah mujhe kyun bulaya hai?" and she lock her room and goes to meet her uncle.

Naina:- "may I come in sir?"

Brig:- "yes...............come in."

Naina:- "lt.doc. naina singh reporting sir."

Brig:- "at ease lt. and please take ur seat. "

Naina:- "thank you sir."

Brig:- "naina, i want to tell u something. Abhi abhi major general arjun Sharma ka phone aaya tha aur unhone bataya hai ki yahan par ek new faculty member ki posting ho rahi hai aur that faculty member is MAJOR RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT."

Naina:- "what?" she said standing from her seat.

Brig:- "yes naina....he is coming here."

Naina:- "kab aa rahe hain veer?"

Brig:- "one week later."

Naina:- "ok...sir."

Brig:- "r u alrite naina?"

Naina:- "yes uncle...m fine. I will take ur leave now."

Naina leaves form there and enters her room. She locked the door and sits on a chair:- "Veer yahan aa raha hai. Ab tak to mein usse neglect karti rahi, par ab mein kya karungi jab wo yahan ahr pal mere samne rahega. kaise sambhalungi me aapne aapko. par chahe kuch bhi ho jaye, mujhe khud ko sambhalna hoga. Ek baat to sach hai ki agar bhai ko nirdosh sabit karne me meri koi help kar sakta hai to wo sirf aur sirf veer hi hai. Mere aur Veer ke beech me chahe kuch bhi ho jaye par mein janti hun ki Veer hamensha mera saath dega."

She was just lost in her thoughts when there is another knock on the door. she opened the door and saw an orderly who gave her a letter which is from CAPTAIN NAIR ( I just love this guys 😆 😆 😆) saying this:-

"Lt. Doc. Naina Singh, as Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan is not in the academy, so u will be assisting me in the morning drill held at 900 hours.
Captain nair"

After reading the letter, naina said:- "Hey bhagwan, ab subah subah is muchhad ko jhenla padega. Pata nahin bhai aur veer ne isse as a teacher kaise saha hoga jab ki ye to apne colleagues ki bhi zindagi narak banane mein laga rehta hai. I just hope that veer ke yahan aane ke baad is mucchad se chutkara mil jaye."

(Naina jitni bhi koshish kar le chupane ki par wo yeh khud bhi janti hai ki wo apne veer se nafrat nahin kar sakti. Uske har pal mein agar koi shamil hai to wo sirf aur sirf uska veer hai. jo ki uske jeevan ka atoot hisa hai. Naina jab bhi kisi mushkil mein padhti hai, wo sochti hai ki agar veer yahan hota to wo kaise is mushkil se apne aap ko bachata aur bas naina bhi wohi karti hai, ye to wo bhi janti hai ki uske saath har waqt, har pal, hr saans agar koi jhuda hai to wo sirf aur sirf uska veer hi hai.)

On thought of raj, she just remembered something and ran towards the lake, where one person is waiting for her but his face is not shown.
Naina:- "Mein tumhe kuch batana chahti hun."

Person:- "Haan bolo."

Naina:- "Veer yahan aa raha hai."

Person:- "Kya?"

Naina:- "Haan, aaj subah hi uncle ne bataya mujhe."

Person:-"Par kyun?"

Naina:- "He has been posted here. Ab tumhe apne aap ko sambhalna hoga. Me janti hun tum raj se bahut pyaar karti ho."

Person:- "karti thi....ho aur thi me bahut pharak hai."

Naina:- "Chahe jo kuch bhi ho, tumhe apne aap ko sambhalna hoga."

Person:- "Sambhalna to aapko bhi hoga na."

Naina:- "Me 3 saalon me bahut baar veer ka samna kar chuki hun par tum ek baar bhi veer ke samne nahin gayi ho. Kahin usko dekh kar tum kamzoor mat padh jana."

Person:- "Me kamzoor nahin padungi. Ab isse pehle koi yahan hum dono ko dekh le, mein chalti hun."

Naina:- "Take care."

Person:- "I will and u 2."

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Now the scene shifts to a big mansion named SHIKHAWAT MANSION and we see an old lady (almost in her fifties) and she is non-other than Prerna Shikhawat (hamare Raj ki mamma yaar 😉 😉). She moves to a room and saw her son sleeping on a chair holding a photograph of his wife.

She thinks:- "Mein Raj ko kab tak aise dekhti rahoon. Naina ke door jjane se apni zindagi bhool chuka hai Raj. Naina ko raj ki zindagi me vaapis aana hi hoga kyunki agar raj naina ke bina adhora hai to naina bhi raj ke bina adhori hai."

Then she walks upto chair and place her hand on his face which wakes up raj.

Raj:- "mamma, aap yahan? Itni subah subah."

Prerna:- "kyun, mein apne bete ke room mein nahin aa sakti kya?"

Raj:- "Aa sakti hain na, me to aise hi pooch raha tha."

Prerna:- "Raj kab tak karte rahoge aisa apne saath."

Raj:- "kya hua mamma? Aap kis bare me baat kar rahi hain?"

Prerna:- "tum ache se jante ho raj ki mein kis bare me baat kar rahi hun, please band karo apne saath ye sab karna. Jo kuch bhi hua, us mein tumhari galti nahin thi."

Raj:- "please mamma, mujhe us bare me koi baat nahin karni."

Prerna:- "theek hai, teri marjhi. Acha wo arjun ki ka phone aaya tha, unhone tujhe apne ghar bulaya hai."

Raj:- "Theek hai mamma, me chala jaunga."

Prerna:- "Chal ab jaldi se ready ho ja. Me breakfast lagati hun, phir tujhe jana bhi hai."

Raj:- "ok mamma."

Then raj took his breakfastand leaves for major general arjun sharma's home.
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so here is the first part of the ff.
hope u all like that.
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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is sitting with Naina's pic in his hand and is remembering the old times!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Prerna and Veena are sitting in the lawn and discussing about the kids and their husbands who are always busy in their work!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

So Naina, Raj and Navin were childhood friends!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko Navin aur Raj milke tang kar rahe thhe!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Navin Naina ko chuhiya bulata hai which Naina doesn't like at all but Raj always takes her side!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Even as a child Raj could not see Naina cry and always wanted her to be happy!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj Naina ko kehta hai he has a new doll for her and she gets excited and hugs him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj really cared for Naina and he used to call her Nia and she called him Veer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳So cute!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both their parents wished that they would always be together for the rest of their lives!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

And their blessings did come true because Naina and Raj did get married!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was so emotional when Raj said ke isbaar toh Nia apne Veer ke manane par bhi nahi maani!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina ne kaha ke aisa nahi huya iski wajah sirf Raj hai!!!!

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

On hearing ke Raj KMA mein aa raha hai, Naina is thinking ke ab woh apne aap ko kaise sambhalegi!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

But she knows that if there is anyone who can help her in proving Navin innocent, woh sirf aur sirf uska Veer hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina is hoping ke Veer yahan aane ke baad usse ush mucchad se bachayega!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Unke beech jo bhi huya tha uske baad bhi Naina still misses her Veer and thinks of him all the time!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Whenever she is in any difficulty woh Raj ko yaad karti hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Although she would never confess to Raj but she still loves him like anything!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Who was the girl who Naina was talking to??😕 😕 😕 😕

Woh ladki Raj se pyaar karti thi aur 3 saalon mein ek baar bhi Raj ke saamne nahi gayi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I think the girl is Sanjana and she is probably Raj's sister!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Prerna is really worried about Raj kyunki Naina se door jaake apni zindagi bhool chuka hai Raj!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

She said Naina ko Raj ki zindagi mein wapas aana hi hoga kyunki agar Naina Raj ke bina adhoora hai toh Naina bhi Raj ke bina adhoori hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Major General Arjun ne Raj ko bulaya hai and I think it is to inform him about his posting in KMA!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

fantastic part.....
So Raj n naina both love each other soo much..but then what happened betwn them? why naina hates(or pretends to hate raj) raj now?... so one more unknown person who is working with naina...n who loves raj...!!!ohh...might be his sis...
poor raj.... naina ke bagair bura haal hai uska...
waiting for raj naina's meeting...
pls continue soon....😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Wonderful Update Preet....👏

Even as a child raj could not see naina cry and always wanted her to be happy. Both their parents wished that they would always be together for the rest of their lives.Naina and Raj are now married, but not together...

i felt like crying when raj said in the present part is baar nia apne veer ke mannane par bhi nahi maani....😭

Whatever happened between,but naina still misses him and thinks of him all the time. Although she would never confess to Raj, but she still loves him like anything.

For Raj his entire world is Naina. He can't live without her.

And this person, who will find it difficult to stay with him and loves him too...I guess it's his sister...

Now Raj is coming back to KMA...

Waiting for Veer- Nia meet....

Update soon....

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago