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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

lol purple font is pretty? *raises her eyebrow AYM style :P* kidding!!

loved it!! It was so good! there are few stories that do not require dialouges....and this didn't! you've descriped their feelings really beautifully!!!

aww...she changed from a chatter box to a book worm...and him from a reserved person to flirt..idiot! :P

lol woman don't thank me...you always edit my stuff and help me with the endings!! seriously loved it!! and thanks for writing it cus I asked you to :P

Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

snehaaaaaaaaaa😡😡😡😡....what is this.....you did not even PM me....if I would not have come here I would have never known about this shot......*whacks sneha and also throws her into the pool with Piggy*😛😆😆

coming to your shot now......its superb!!!! its so beautiful.....their journey together from their childhood to adulthood has been so perfectly described....their emotions and feelings are depicted amazingly......both were in love but could not confess and both of them changed over the course of time....he got into bad company and she devoted herself to studies......and also lost contact with each other...but he realized and got himself into the same college...how cute...and love found its way back....and finally they confessed and lived happily ever after.....its great....me loves it !!!! do write more and don't you dare forget to PM me !!!

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Why u didnt PM me yaaar........*runs behind snehu wid sumthing hehe i dunt remmeber wid wat to beat u*.BUT then reads the OS n then dances pigeon dance {credit:sana}n also YUNA dnace........
Wat a lovely OS yaar their tranbsformartion from starnger to frndship to love.....JUST AMN+ZING...........its so yunalicious...its the perfect description of imagination od idea IF YUNA MET IN KG...........JUst mesmersing..........yuvi changed naina chnaged.........but still love was there..at least daffor realsed wat he was doing.n then confession😳:$]:$]:$]:$]:$]:$]:$]:$]:$]...wowowoyyyyyyyyy
NEXT TYME PLZ DO PMEEEEEEEEe

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

i'ts great....

muaah...

lovely...

yunalicious... with a cherry on the top!

and do check yuvraj-naina bachpan ka pyaar...

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1354244&TPN=9�

we're trying make a similar lovestory out of it!

Edited by PreeyaKSharma - 15 years ago

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

snehu...............this was amazing!!!

practically the whole os.....with no dialougues but just description of theri feelings was awesome 👏 👏 👏

i loveeeeeeeeeed it!!! you have to write more os............. this one was so well described..........i loved the transition between different stages of their life from kg to med college!!!

ur a fab writer..... stupid yuvi dated other girls 😡

keep up the good work

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...anshu...

@...anshu...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

sneha....it was gr8

i just loved seeing them through ages together still apart then finally coming together. lol i didnt noe u wrote i wud hav read ur one-shots ages ago bt better late than never i will do it now😆

anshu

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

HOW DARE YOU NOT PM ME WOMAN??!!

how could you do that to me????
anyways, great shot...........journey to love...............

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

HOW DARE YOU NOT PM ME WOMAN??!!

how could you do that to me????
anyways, great shot...........journey to love....and YuNa were sooooo nicely described......

you better pm me next time or else *runs after snehu with something that sumi hands to me*...........