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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
sneha... awesome

luved mac-sumi...

finally they will be gettin married..🤣
🤣🤣

lol n sumi.. look at her position, yet wanting her lamp-stand to whack yuvi... wowww

n yuvi naina wat an apt timing for romance..
🤣 wen our poor sumi is struggling here...

yuna one-shot loved it.. but wat a nightmare yuvi had.. jesus..

sneha.. luved the entire part.. u r an awesome writer..

i expect more humor from u.. as u did with mac-sumi....

👏 ⭐️

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@yami - thanks
sumi is just whacked up
its good thing she didnt go after yuvi's hair 😆
or maybe she was in no state to do it 😆
Edited by ilive2laugh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
oye no calling me whacked up...now i'll go after his head...ganja kardoon gi...will Naina marry him then :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey sneha thnx for the pm and ur two other one shot are just too BIG BANG..wowo, the first one THE player finaaly settles down was YUNAC wwid sumi.(A lil jeolous of sumi)...well it was just too kewl i thought first it was yuna but then later relaesd it it was mac n sumi n then yuna wow too good. And then other one Love means forgiving that just awesum blossom ...eheh serously u rock girl plz i m die hard yuna fan n pm me when u write any other ff okie doie............👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sups2222

Hey sneha thnx for the pm and ur two other one shot are just too BIG BANG..wowo, the first one THE player finaaly settles down was YUNAC wwid sumi.(A lil jeolous of sumi)...well it was just too kewl i thought first it was yuna but then later relaesd it it was mac n sumi n then yuna wow too good. And then other one Love means forgiving that just awesum blossom ...eheh serously u rock girl plz i m die hard yuna fan n pm me when u write any other ff okie doie............👍🏼

thanks for liking it sumi-mac one is my favorite 😆
sumi and i wrote another one shot today
i am sure sumi must have pmed you
if not let me know
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OH HEY Sneha! :D

Hehe..Just read your Sumi-Mac OS..OMG..what can i say! It was funny yet CUTEE! :D Heheeh.

LOVED it! LMAOO..Sumi Di is such a meanie! ;) hehe..Poor Mac!! hehehe But I'm going to read your other OS's soon!! :D hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaankideewani

OH HEY Sneha! :D

Hehe..Just read your Sumi-Mac OS..OMG..what can i say! It was funny yet CUTEE! :D Heheeh.

LOVED it! LMAOO..Sumi Di is such a meanie! ;) hehe..Poor Mac!! hehehe But I'm going to read your other OS's soon!! :D hehe

lol i know sumi is so mean
even when she was abt to give birth
she wanted to whack yuvi 😆
and as for mac...all i can say is
god help him. i really do feel bad
for that sweet guy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i never knew you had a collection of one shots also.......... i had read ur shots but not here....weired!!!

well as i havent commented i thought i should........they are awesome!!!

and do write more........and woman please let ne knw when u update ur collection!!!

luv u xXx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@safina...thanks
i havent updated in a long time
but will definitely tell you when i do next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi peeps...i am writing os after long time so please bear with me. i know its pretty crappy but sumi wanted me to write one so i did lol anyways here it goes...hope you enjoy it. comment/criticize
thank you sumi for editing and helping me with the ending😛
PYAAR FOREVER
They have known each other since forever but were they ever really friends?

Well according to her yes and according to him no. She made friends wherever she'd go while he never trust anyone...anyone but her but he'd be damn if he tell her that. For her life was her friends, for him life was her. He had fallen for her long time ago yet he never told her... afraid that he'd lose the only person who has always there for him...but what he didn't know was that she too was in love with him, in fact she fell for him the very day they met.

Kidnergarden

There she was being here usual self...annoying her friends, making them laugh and playing pranks

And there he was sitting next to her unaffected by the laugh or by their pranks.

To her he seemed like an adult in a child's body, who somehow was forced to grow up at a very young age. He was different from other kids their age. While everyone was busy playing or fighting over swings he would just sit in the corner in his own world of deep thoughts. She knew he was different from the rest of the kids. Though he seemed bit unfriendly and scary it just seemed to her that he was longing to make a friend, to be a kid again. There was something about him that attract her.

He had noticed the girl sitting all by herself in the corner. She seemed really quite and lonely...just someone he was looking for to sit next to. But little did he know that looks can be deceiving. The minute he sat next to her she started her chatter box! At first she annoyed the hell out of him with her curiosity but later on he realized that she was different from other kids. When everyone was afraid to talk to him because of his unfriendliness and reserved nature she would talk to him, try to get him talk, even though he would completely ignore her. She would share her lunch and her colors with him when no one wanted to. However he still ignored her

Elementary school

They have known each other for few years now but nothing had changed between them. She was still the same chatter box and he was still the loner. However their feeling for each other had changed a lot over the years.

He no longer found her annoying, in fact he loved listening her talk, her stupid jokes, her lies, her curiosity. He had started to trust her, he knew that she was not like others who would leave him or betray him. He somehow knew that she was special and that somehow they would always be friends no matter what. They did not need words to communicate...just being there for each other was a form of their communication

She was the most popular girl of the class. Everyone was her friend and yet she was still interested in him, to get to know more about him. afterall she'd know him for while but they hardly talk. however he was more relaxed around her than before. somehow she thought it was his way of opening up to her and accepting her.

Middle school

Things were starting to change; he was being friendly with her which confused her. At first she was happy that he was no longer ignoring her but it made her confused.

She knew she no longer saw him as just a friend. Her feeling for him had change. Was this love? But she was too young to fall in love or... was she. Finally he had started to open up to her, started talking to her but her heart....her heart it was just being weird. Every time he smiled or said hi to her she would just go in la la land. He had the most amazing smile she had ever seen. It would make her heart flutter

He had finally opened up to her. He found her even more curious than ever before. Somehow seeing her smile made him open to her...however to the world he was still a loner but he was different in front of her. He actually smiled and laugh...he had slowly started to enjoy life thanks to her!

High school

Their life changed completely. They went from being strangers to friends to back to strangers

He was no longer the same quite person he once was. He started to open up and make friends Mac and Raj ' his two best friends. They had all became very close over the time. Together thye did all sort crazy things together, they tried smoking, drinking, bike racking, dating, ect. it finally seemed like he had found his place in the life. However there was something missing in his life. Her. She was no longer part of his life and somehow he missed that, he missed her, her curiosity, her smile, and her talks.

She somehow had changed a lot over their high school days. She was no longer a chatter box but instead a book-worm. She would spend her time either in the library or tutoring others. They no longer crossed paths anymore. And that somehow bugged him. She had always been there for him, even when he didn't need her and somehow he had gotten used to her presence. Not seeing her everyday or talking to her made his life seem incomplete. He tried talking to her, being there for her just like she was but she always ignored him and he didn't know how to get to her so he just gave up.

She had seen the changes in him. At first she was happy that he was making friends but then she realized how much he had changed. He was no longer a reserved person...in fact he was popular among girls. He started flirting with them and even dated few. Somehow that pained her. The fact was she was in love with him and yet he never glanced at her twice. It seemed like he no longer need her now that Mac and Raj were in his life. Maybe it was time for her to move on too. But it was not that easy.

She had changed a lot...she knew that and she also knew that he knew that. He would always come and try talking to her but she ignored him...it was hard to do but it was better to let it go now then get herself even more tangled up. He no longer needed her and so she diverted all of her attention to the books and school. She wasn't the smartest egg out there...she had to study her butt off to get 90s unlike him who was very gifted when it came to studies.

College

He knew he loved her...she knew she loved him...but confessing that to each other was something that they didn't really think about until...he saw no other way

Even though they had drifted apart in high school he still kept a tab on her. He knew she applied to med school ...without realizing what he was doing...he applied to the same college...and was glad that they both got accepted there...

She wasn't sure how she should react when she saw him walking toward her with that usual smirk on his face. She was both sad and happy to see him in the same college as her. But she knew that it was time she made things clear with him once and for all...she couldn't go on hurting...

"What are you doing here...I though you would go where Mac and Raj would go, didn't know you were into med school"

It was now or never...

"I came here because of you"

"Excuse me?"

"Why are you so shock Naina...it is that hard to believe that I am attracted to you...that I love you?"

"What? You...you love me....don't kid around Yuvi, you are good at flirting but never love! You don't even know what love mean! You don't know how it feels when you have heartbreak because the person you loved your whole life didn't even care about you or even think of you in that sense." Said Naina almost in tears

"I know I am an idiot for being so clueless but I know I have always loved you...it just took be long time to figure it out. You have always been there for me so I took you for granted. I know that was stupid of me but I promise you from now on I will never make you wait. I will always be there with you and for you...always and forever"

"Promise?"

"Promise!"

Life is a journey...but they both believed that love is a journey of its own...their love had transformed over the years...to become so strong and vital that all they need to do was be there for each other! They were in love...and nothing...not their lifestyles or their nature could ever change that...

Edited by ilive2laugh - 15 years ago

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