Together Forever& ever(sajan)-part-21,pg-61 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
😆

aweome!!! bechara uday!!! 🤣
and the dresses were lovely!!!!!!!!!
OMGG all of them would look beautiful in those dresses..awesome choice sush!!!!
and am sooo very eager for the party now!!!!!
do update soon!!!!!!! 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
The dresses are nice. Waiting for the party.
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 14b ws awesomeeeeeee...
luved it to d core..
do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW Amazing 👏1st of all have to say u are not only a great VM maker but also a FANTASTIC WRITTER 👏👏👏i really love ur VMs & now ur FF as well,i hv read the 5parts ll read the other soon really want to know wht happend to Samrat&also want to read his come back😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sooo sweet.. Hey Gunjan's Wardrobe was beautiful... Would suit her very well though I am not sure whether she will wear those....
Do post about Gunjan's sudden disturbed feeling in the next update without fail....................................... For a second I thought Samrat came 😭
Sorry for the late reply. I was held up with my exams so could not log on to my system.
Its always nice to read 2 r more updates together as they seems to be long.. but still it ended up so soon... 😭
Please post a long update na.. You write sooooo well and am so much attracted towards it...
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Posted: 15 years ago


thank u everyone .i will respond to each reply but before that .i just want to clear the party which is to happen is not a big party as shown in show.its just a small celebration party.

OK this time i have tried to update a long one.hope u will like it


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Part 15


I never imagined that suhani will organise everything so well

I am talking about the charity function for the orphanage

I am supposed to perform but at last as i am a performer come cheif guest (according to alisha)


Orphanage ke bache jo ab meri zindagi ka hissa ban gaye hai kitna pyaara perform kiya.uske baad ek ek celebrity ne bhi apni performance se function mein chaar chaand lagaye.


Pata nahi di abhi tak kyun nahi ayi..


Di ka phone ab itne shor mein kaise sunu,waha chali jaati hoon

Alisha-"are kahan jaa rahi hai"

Gunjan-"alisha bas ek minute"


Gunjan-"hello haan di aap kahan ho yahan function kab ka shuru ho gaya hai"

Nupur-"sorry gunjan thoda late hoga .actually traffic mein phas gaye hain."

Gunjan-"accha thik hai ."


Jaise hi mein hall mein loti toh iss gane ke dhun meri kano par pade.aise laga jaise yeh kuch mere zindagi kuch lamho ko bayaan kar rahe ho.bas apni kuch yaadien yaad aa gayi mujhe.............

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Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo?
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba


(gunjan=flash back shows samrat teasing his chashmish but chasmish sometimes getting angry and sometimes giving a cute smile,and seeing gunjans smile samrat faking a cute heart attack)

Jaate jaate koyi meri khushiyon ko le gaya
Suni suni akhiyon ko gham, koyi de gaya


(flashback=gunajn searching for samrat,but cries as she realises he is no where)


Aas jo lagaayi hai, aankh bhar aayi hai
Itna bhi koyi, sataaye na rabba

(flashback=gunjan crying with her back on the wall sliding down to the floor with clutching her diary nearer to her heart )


Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo?
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba


I just came out of my thoughts as the song ended

Till then di and others had arrived


Nupur-"kin khayalon mein kho gayi gunjan"

Gunjan-"kuch nahi bas yu hi......"
benji(dramatically but with horrible way)-"yaadon ki baarat nikali hai aa dil ke dwaare ,dil ke dwaare....... "


Now this dragged all our attention.everyone was carrying the expression-did he just sing??????


Suhaani-"BENJI................plzzzzzzz gana band karo .yakeen nahi ata koi itna besura bhi ga sakta hai, kyun mere kiye karaye pe paani pherna chate ho,ye ek charity musical function hai aur main nahi chahti ki yahan aaye hue saare log darr ke marre bhag jaye......."


Benji-"are suhani hum khandani gaayak hai bas aaj mera gala kharab hai "

Alisha-"haan pata chal raha hai"


Issi tarah fuction ka mazza lete hue aur inlogo ki aisi hasa dene wali baatein sunn sunn kar waqt kat-ta gaya.


Ab aakhir main meri baari thi.main baki bacho ke saath perform karne wali thi.aaj stage pe jaate waqt mujhe purani baatein yaad aa gayi jab main pehli baar samrat ki wajah se stage par gayi thi.


Samrat ki baat mankar ,main uski so called shishya ban gayi.guru samrat ka pehla rule tha ki agar apne darr par jitna hai toh us darr ko tum par havi hone se pehle hi apne easiness se hi darr ko darra do


Ab aap puchenge kaise


Iska simple tarika yeh hai-for example tab mujhe logo se darr lagta tha toh unhe kuch is tarah imagine karo ki tumhare pet main hasi se gud gudi hone lage ,ya phir dil se pyaara lage.


Yeh dono hi nuske mujh par kaam kargaye.


Itne sab jatan ke baad jab final day aaya tab dil mein ajeeb si feeling thi,darr ki nahi par nervousness ki .darr toh main tab gayi thi jab main Galati se bathroom mein lock ho gayi thi.accha hua us waqt alisha wash room ke paas thi.par tab tak mera confidence thoda sa hil chukka tha.phir bhi main backstage ki taraf daudi ,jab wahan par pahunchi toh dekha ki samrat mere naa ane ki khabar announce karne wala tha,uske chehre pe mayusi dekh kar mujhe bahut bura laga.samrat ne meri itni maddat ki thi,tab uske mujpe kiye hue trust ne mera hausla phir badha diya.samrat ne audience se jaise hi sorry bola .maine gana shuru kar diya.samrat ke chehre par mujhe stage par dekh kar jo muskurahat thi us ke liye toh saari duniya kurbaan.samrat ne mera saath mere gana gane tak diya.logo ne meri bahut tareef ki .aur is tareef ka hak daar toh samrat hi tha


Samrat-"maine kaha tha naa chashmish tum best ho.aur best ke samne saare rest (samrat bowing)sar jhukate hain.

Par ek pal ke liye mujhe laga tha kit um nahi aaogi."


Gunjan-"kaise nahi aati,.....actually samrat asal baat yeh hai ki main washroom mein phas gayi thi...khair jaane doh ,good news yeh hai ki main sahi waqt mein pahunch gayi.."


Samrat(leaning suddenly in low tone)-"aur ek angel ki tarah mera reputation bacha liya."


Gunjan -'"tum toh meri line bol rahe ho .aggar tum na hote toh aaj yeh sab nahi hota.tum sahi main bahuut acche ho."


Samrat-"ab toh lagta hai ki tumhe baba samrat ko alvida kehna hoga aura b sirf samrat ko hii kehna hai."

(bringing out his hand )-friends!!!!!!(gunjan for a minute doesn't respond and only looks at him)haath mila lo chashmish main dost itna bura bhi nahi hoon.mere dost kehte hain ki main jab kisi se dosti karta hun toh uska saath kabhi nahi chodta hoon"


Gunjan(with a big smile shakes th hand)-"Friends"

Samrat-"together"

Gunjan-"forever"


Woh din kaise bhul sakti hun .us din mere aur samrat ke dosti ko ek mohar lag gayi.

maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki hum dono kabhi dost banenge...............

ON Stage


Music plays with it a smile too plays on gunjans lips


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dyauNfiMh7E[/YOUTUBE]



Gunjan-o re manva tu to baavra hai
tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai
tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai baavre
kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte

jo barse sapne boond boond{flashback=samrat and gunjans first meeting in rain}
naino ko moond moond
naino ko moond moond

jo barse sapne boond boond
naino ko moond moond
kaise main chaloon dekh na sakoon
anjaane raastein


goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara{flashback=samrat and gunjan on bike with gunjan explaining notes}
goonja sa hai koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara
dheeme bole koi iktara iktara
{flashback=gunjan samrat in beach together while gunjan has her eyes closed feeling the slow wind,samrat suddenly splashes water on gunjan completly shocking her.gunjan when comes back to herself runs away with fear of getting dretched }

dheeme bole koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara


(as music plays{flash back =

1.samrat and gunjan in samrats house studying

2.samrat and gunjan in coffee shop discussing about songs

3.samrat playing guitar in music room while gunjan sitting opposite to him and singing to his tunes

4.In Balcony-gunjans eyes closed samrat tells her to open her eyes and she sees a very small birthday cake,samrat puts a tiara on gunjans head,she cuts the cake ,they feed each other and at last samrat puts tha cream on her nose as gunjan gets shocked and hit him on shoulder. })


sun rahi hoon sudh budh khoke koi main kahani
poori kahani hai kya kise hai pata
main to kisiki hoke ye bhi na jaani
ruth hai ye do pal ki ya rehgi sada
(gunjan closes her eyes)


samrat(in the same dress as in talent parade hugging his guitar whispering to gunjan)-kise hai pata.... kise hai pata...kise hai pata(he moves away)


gunjan (opens her eyes with a smile)-jo barse sapne boond boond
nainon ko moond moond
nainon ko moond moond


jo barse sapne boond boond
nainon ko moond moond
kaise main chaloon dekh na sakoon
anjaane raastein


goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara

dheeme bole koi iktara iktara
dheeme bole koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara


(as music play-{flashback-1.samrat to feed gunjan icecream but at last moment eats it himself

2.samrat teaching gunjan how to dance}


Gunjan(as she sings the alaap everybody stands in the audience and start clapping)


As the song finishes gunjan hugs all the kids on stage.

Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part

loved it yr hope im the first one to commentthnx 4 the pm n cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
me ws waiting for it thnx 4 the pm ll write in dtail later😃
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amazing👏the part was toooooo good,whn i was reading the part was hearing the song iktara&imagining the flashbcks😍i jst lovethe beach scene most as we didnt get any sajan beach scene in the show,i really love the writtn style of urs&also the dialogues it seems im wtchin the show.keep it up👍🏼
Edited by -Liana- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi,
lovelyupdate.
the flash back part was very good.
and the song was so sweet .
nice update
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Posted: 15 years ago
Such a nice part and extremely mind blowing do contiue and thanks for the pm sush😊

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