Together Forever& ever(sajan)-part-21,pg-61

hi everyone
ok after making vms i am trying my hands on sajan short story.plz bear with me as i am not that good at writing .do tell me if i should continue or not...................................
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basic charachters:
mayank and nupur

benji and diya:

uday:

gunjan:


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part-1

"oh god its too late.i am surely dead today".

oh sorry ...............hi i am gunjan.....gunjan bhusan.today i am completely late.diya is surely gonna kill me. her anger would also be justified as it her first bridal collections launch. and i promised her that i will be there on time.but what to do yesterday i had a recording in the evening and later had to attend reception of the music director's son. But my sister wont listen but that wont be a big problem as benji will save me for sure.

"gunjan where were u ?this is so not done .u promised me u would be on time ."(benji=)"oh god diya take a deap breath she was late because she was busy buying ur favourite orchids see......."

(diya=)"OMG !!!!!!!! I am soooo sorry honey these r beautiful .thnks. ok lets go"

(Benji-gunjan in whispers=)"thanks for saving me"

"anytime gunjan"

"but how did u arranged all this ?"

"actually i had called last night and got to know ur schedule from uday and so i arranged the orchids beforehand "

Well meet my sweet friend cum brother-in-law benji. benji and diya r married for past two years. Benji is complete sweet heart ,he is an expert in cheering up anybody. U must have come across couple fighting all the time due to ego clashes and other martial problem, now don't get the idea that benji and diya never fight ,they do fight but the fight is a must watch. Benji's teasing nature make everything damm funny .

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part 1 = page 1

part 2= page 1

part 3= page 1

part 4 =page 1
part 5= page 2
part 6= page 4
part 7= page 6
part 8 =page 9
part9 =page 15
part 10= page 17
part 11= page 20
part 12= page 24
part 13 =page 29
part 14a&b=page 32&34
part 15=page 37
part 16=page 42
part 17=page 45
part 18=page 48
part 19=page 53
part 20 = page 57
part 21= page 61

part-2

Diya 's collection is a big hit.

In nupur di's words "bhushan khandan ki ladkiyan koi kaam kare aur saara jahan taliyaan naa bajaye aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta".

oh sorry nupur di ke bare mein batana toh bhul hi gayi,bhale hi di actress nahi ban payi par haan she is one of the best choreographer in India and she is engaged to mayank who now is..............would u believe it .........

.....is a scientist..i am so happy for both my sisters.

(diya's friend=)"hi diya .lovely collection i must say. Hi gunjan ,suna hai tunhara naam is baar filmfare mein nominate hua hai .par sabko toh iss se yaada is baat mein interest hai ki sab ki chahiti singer gunjan bhushan kab apna single status change karegi ."

Nobody except diya and benji noticed my changed expression.i didn't even realize when my vision got blurred due to my upcoming tears.

i just excused myself and walked towards the balcony area.its getting hotter everyday and just like uday bahiya even i am waiting for the rains .

Mumbai rains......................they always had a special place in my heart. As it was the first time i saw him............

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"U still love him don't U."(=benji)

That was when my tear betrayed my orders and decided to travel down my face.and benji got his answer .

He knows that i can never forget my first love...........................

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...............................SAMRAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by sushups - 12 January 2010 at 3:35am

Hi everyone

thank you so much for ur lovely response .just wanna tell u that this story is a little bit of our mjht and little bit my input .hope u will like the story.

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part-3

Flash back

Everyone in morena had said "Beware of Mumbai Rains" as its too dangerous. Unka aisa sochna banta bhi hai kyunki news mein sabhi Mumbai ke streets ke bhare hue pani aur unme aadhe dubi hui cars hi dikhate hain.

(bui=)"nupur aur gunjan apna dhyaan rakhna barish main bilkul bahar mat nikalna"(nupur=)"bui abhi toh garmi ka mausam hai aur aap barish ki baat lekar baith gayi ho"(bui=)"tu chup kar .tujhe kya zyaada pata hai abi barish ka mausam nahi hai toh kya hua woh ayega toh zaroor naa.main toh bhaiya se keh rahi thi kya zarurat hai tum dono ko Mumbai le jaane ki.manti hoon wahan diya aur uday hai par woh bhi toh bache hain aur............"(nupur=)"bas bas bui mein samajh gayi jab bhi barish hogi toh mein ghar me baith jaongi thik hai.acha ab hum chalet hain"......................................................................

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(nupur=)"lo hum Mumbai pahunch gaye ab dekhna gunjan mujhe ab film star ban ne se koi nahi rok sakta"

I was paying least attention to what di was saying as I never thought Mumbai would be this crowded . I got scared,i simply hate crowd .

Once out of the station we saw that its raining.

I always loved rains but the crowd had made me so frozen and the rain were not helping either.but what really made my heart come out of my chest was when i realized nor nupur di nor bauji were near me. I cant tell u how exactly i felt that day

.ok in short lets say I WAS COMPLETELY HORRIFIED.I started crying ,and didn't know what to do. Was just praying to god to reunite me with my sister. At that moment I saw a car approaching towards me (I closed my eyes). It was about hit me but something pulled me from it.I slowly opened my eyes to get drowned in the most beautiful and pure eyes I had ever come across

.(guy=)"r u alright?"

I didn't know why heart beat rate increased .was due it to the to-be-accident or due to this guy.

i simply nodded my head.

(nupur=)"gunjan tu kahan chali gayi thi maine tujhe kitna dhunda.ab chal"

Di dragged me with her but I could'nt help myself looking back to that strange guy who had just saved my life.I couldn't even thank him properly.........................................................................

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thanks for the lovely replies .
anyways this is the last update for today.next will be.........................................sorry dont know,
have not written any thing yet.
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part 4

FLASHBACK (continues)

Dear Diary,

A week has passed by and i am little bit getting used to this place.uday bhaiya is completly a sweet heart. diya at first was not so friendly but now everything is fine between us.

My college will start in a few days as vacations r still on.

even today I cant forget that guy who saved my life.kash ek baar us se mil paaon taki usse acchi tarah se thanks bol saku.btw i have made a new friend over here and her name is Alisha. alisha is our neighbour.and.......

GUNJAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Alisha=)" gunjan chal mere saath "

(gunjan=)"kahan? alisha mujhe kaam hai"

(Alisha=)"kya khak kaam hai saaf saaf nahi bolti ki tujhe dar lagta hai.itna toh tujhe jaan hi gayi hoon.ab bahane aur apni diary band kar aur chal mere saat. waise bhi aaj Sunday ko ghar mein akele akele kya karegi"

Meet Alisha ...................

Alisha choudhary .our neighbour and full carbon copy of nupur di with style similar to diya.the only difference between the two is that nupur di is mad for sharukh khan and Alisha is mad for aamir khan.

(Gunjan=)"but why don't u take diya or nupur di"

(Alisha=)"meri pyaari gunjan apne kitabo ki duniya se bahar niklo aur jaanlo ki tumhari dono pyaari behne ghar par nahi hain.unlike u there off to see the great sharukh khans movie.so now get ready".............................

I never thought Alisha would bring me to an orphanage

(Alisha=)"don't look at me like that my mom is a trustee of this orphanage and i often come here.i thought u would feel good here.the kids in here r just great " i just smiled at her

I really enjoyed my stay at the orphanage.all the kids were so cute.my day passed by telling them short stories,playing with them and singing for them.as i finished my song i heard a faint sound from my back

Hey miss chashmish!!!

I turned and u wont believe i saw HIM once again.

(guy=)"Hi so we meet again.u really sing well chashmish"

He called me chashmish😲 .but...... why i am not angry 😡coz in my school days whenever i was called chashmish i used to get so angry.but today i am surprised that nothing as such happened😕😕

(guy=)"tumne mujhe pehchana nahi hum us din mille the......." and as i nodded it started raining heavily. We took the kids to nearby shed .

"thanks."

(guy=)"for what?"

"woh us din ke liye"

(guy=)"oh that don't thank me mein acchi ladkiyon ki madad ke liye hamesha tayar rehta hoon".

[my cheeks r burning ,no i am not blushing not in front of him.plzzz help maine aisi kyun hoon]

"btw maine apne aap ko introduce karana toh bhul hi gaya.hi iam sam......."

Sammy bhaiya,Sammy bhaiya(a small girl called him)apnko usha didi (caretaker of the orphanage)bula rahi hai.

(sam/Sammy=)"hey chashmish don't go anywhere I'll be right back in a moment".

I nodded( as he left my heart shouted cant u do anything better that just nodding ur head.)

It stopped raining

(Alisha=)"are gunjan i am so sorry woh mom se baat kar rahi thi bachon ke function ke bare mein is liye late ho gayi chal ghar chalte hai."

(gunjan=)"haan kyu nahi par...... thodi der aur nahi rahe sakte."

(Alisha,dramatically=)"gunjan darling mujhe bhi yahan rehne mein koi problem nahi hai lekin agar nupur ne tujhe ghar mein nahi dekha toh bechare uday ki shamat aa jayegi.ab chal"

"thik hai".kaash woh aa jaata.pata nahin kya sochega mere bare mein usne mujhe wait karne ko kaha aur mein bina wait kiye chali ja rahi hoon...

(Alisha=)"gunjan chalna kiska wait kar rahi hai"

(gunjan,scared=)"nahi toh mein kis ka wait karungi"

(Alisha=)"toh chal naa"

"haa chalo".............................................

awesomeeeeee ff dear..
luved it..
pllzzzz update d next part soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeeeee ff dear..
luved it..
pllzzzz update d next part soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika

thanks ya for being supportive😳

Hey nice one hon pls Pm me when u update 😊

lovely update dear.

Part 5

Present

Gunjan ......gunjan .........gunjan uttho

(lazily)"kya hai uday bahiya aapko pata hai naa ki kal concert ki wajah se mein soi nahi thi"

(uday=)"sorry gunjan woh ek emergency hai."

(gunjan still sleepy=)"kya baat hai bahiya aap kuch pareshaan lag rahe hai"

(uday=)"woh kya hai naa gunjan mmain....tumhe ek baat batana bhul gaya................(pause)...woh ........(now in super fast speed)woh aaj evening mein sabhi dinner pe aane wale hai"

(gunjan=)"what!!!!!!!"

(Uday=)"haan woh do din pehle naa mujhe dids ne kaha tha sab including nupur and mayank will be coming for dinner par mein batana bhul gaya"

(gunjan=)"bhaiya aap ye sab mujhe ab bata rahe hain..........ek minute nupur di aa rahi hai par di toh delhi mein hai naa????"

(uday=)"haan par aaj woh sab morning aake dids ke yahan ruki hai ."

"hey bhagwaan ab mein kya karun bahut saare preparations karni hongi ab kaisa sab itni jaldi karun"

(uday=)"plz gunjan tum tension mat lo khana banana mein main tumhari maddat karunga"

"aap khane mein madat kare wahi acha hoga.waise aap madat karna hi hai toh main aapko ek list deti hoon aap bas saara saaman market se le aayiye ."

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(uday=)"sorry gunjan meri wajah se tumhe itni problem hui"

(gunjan =)"nahi bhaiya aisa kuch nahi hai(doorbell rings)lagta hai woh log aa gaye"

It was good to have a get together after a years.its not that we never met in this time span but the duration was short.aisa lag raha tha jaise hum wapis apne college ke time mein wapis chale gaye hain.

Jab mein kitchen se sabke liye cold drinks lekar ayi toh dekha ki benji apne ghutno mein bethkar diya se kuch keh raha hai:

Mere Dil, Jiger, Kidney, Liver ho tum
waqt-bewaqt aaye vo fever ho tum
Doob kar jisme kho jaon vo River ho tum
Mere jeevan mein ab to forever ho tum

Everyone bursted into laughter while diya was faking an angry look.

(diya=)"benji kya milta tumhe ye sab karke , tum kabhi nahi sudharo ge naa ."

(benji laughing=)"madam agar main sudhar jaonga toh tumhari pyaare chehre par pyaari muskurahat kaise dekh paonga {diya blushed} hai main mar java"

(uday =) "par koi mujhe samjhaye ga ki dids ek saath kidney,liver.....aur river kaise ho sakti hai"

(diya=)"shut up dodo......."

Bechare uday bhaiya hamesha aise hi daant sunte hai diya se.par unki yahi harkate toh unhe sabse alag sabse cute banati hai.........................

bhale hi meri zindagi mein us din ke baad sab kuch badal gaya par shukra hai kuch cheeze ab bhi waisei hi hai