PH SS :: Tujhe Bhula Diya I :: Nov 13 - Page 26

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART

Loved the update.

aww..prem is so cute.😊

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Update soon....

Thanks for the PM.

okay..me back to reading! and now tht i've reserved...i'll def. be back with a comment :D

**edited**

oh my! i am like super hyper ventilating right now! yahan bohaut zyaada garmi ho gayi hai! 😉

okay so....first of all...yes tht was a pretty long part......but as always, it wasn't long enough! i mean seriously....kahan chod diya! okay so i am pretty sure tht two years later into the present, they're married.....or living in.....or whatever it is tht's equivalent to sheer bliss 😳 😆 hmmmm....okay so i don't think i'll be able to comment as detailed on all the previous parts.....i mean i remember wht they were about....but i don't think i exactly remembered what i loved..and all that stuff.....so i'm really sorry about that!

so from parts 1 -3:

i loveed the way they met! hum tum is one of my faves too! such a cute movie!! tho i really didn't think saif and rani needed tht "romantic" number together! i thot it was a family movie....and by family i mean like an extended family of 35 ppl...phir ek gaana...and uff...it turned out to be one of the most embarassing moments of my life! but anyway.....ms. mussibat was such a cute name! i wonder tht's what prem will call her when they meet again?!?! and then how she held on to his hand.......how cute was that!?!? a truly simple yet meaningful moment! hmhmh......aur kya tha??? oh.....those jerks staring at her! lmao....i loved that part.....esp. the way prem made his entry! it was soo like "straight-up" ....okay i sounded like an idiot there...but it was just so damn hot! yeaa....i think tht explains it better! 😛 😆 hhmmmmmm.....ohhh....heer getting in the way of the taxi....i mean...how she stopped premm from going in the taxi......(lol..i made it sound like she came in front of the taxi inviting her death!) that was sooooooo sweet of her! (okay i'm sorry if i sound redundant.....cuz lemme tell u....i will.....i love writing and all.....par when it comes to commenting...i'm always at a loss of words! like literally!...its seriously soo pathetic!) okay....i think tht's all the major stuff tht i can think of..overall....i LOVED those parts! you described every single thing so well!

moving on to this part:

oh my goodness!!! so tht was my first guess.....when i reserved this comment in the weirdeset manner ever! i usually reserve before reading the part....no matter how much i want to comment while im reading! but this time....when i read tht part....three things came to my mind: a) chalte chalte, b) prem's gonna get the coin, and c) I HAVE TO COMMENT RIGHT NOW! and so i did 😳 okay...i'll get to tht part after...but it was suchh an honest and "heer-like" gesture on heer's part to comfort him and hear his story about his parents.....and like...she knew exactly what to say! you know what.....these dialogues speak a lot about u....and tht a lot is a whole lotta good things! i mean if heer knows exactly what to say, when to say it, and how to say it...then i'm sure tht my kali di is very well capable of doing the same! 👏👏👏

as for the coin part! uff!!! as jaz api says it " i was grinning like a fool!" and i seriously was! i mean i read tht part.....and uff......first i couldn't help but comment right away....and then i was like woahh man!!!! tht was just the most amazing scene ever! the fact tht prem went in there meant nothing.......because it's prem...of course he'll do tht for his heer......so tht wasn't a big deal for me cuz whether in kis desh, or in any other ff......prem is known for being a hero (btw....notice how i compared ur "os" or "ss" to an ff....LOL...hint hint darling.....this better last for a tonne more parts!!) but the way you described that scene......that's what got to me! that description, of his face, the random lady's comments, heer's worry, prem's determination...the fact tht he took his wallet out and put it on the ground (i could soo imagine that! ufff.....tht little detail was like the icing on the cake for me!)...all that stuff and everything else that you wrote in that scene just gave it the "zing" ....the...the....(wait...i'm thinking...i'm confident that i'll have a word to describe ur descriptions.....hopefully soon 😆)....theee..............bam! (okay eww.....what is this...a cooking show!? hmph!) .......the........okay so basically.....the scene itself was just "yea yea whatever"...but the way you put that scene into words......that was simply astounding.....(okay that sounds sooo out of place)...how about i go with amazing for now cuz i really don't wanna bore u....but trust me...amazing is def. not enough! i swear i had the word....and now i just went blank.....and tht's cuz i started imagining the scene once again...and then i remembered their dialogues..and how they were about to kiss.......and well yea...all that adds up to a brain freeze 😳 😆😆

okay....so their dialogues! the way heer jumped at him.....and prem's surprise! i was like....AAWWWWWWW!!!!!!! can i get a hugg?!!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗 (or four hugs for that matter....😆) and oh my goodness!!! prem hugged her even tighter once he felt her warm tears.......(okay i am such a stalker.......i like...KNOW the dialgues by heart! 😉 😆) once again that was just soooo damn cute! i mean it's like the smallest thing...and the simplest gesture.....but it just means soo much! and then of course...heer had to spazz at him.....otherwise the scene wouldn't have been complete! 😳😳😳

and the kiss.........hmmmm.........samra is busy at dreamland right now, and is not available.....please leave a msg after the tone.....bbbbeeeeeepppppppppppp 😃

i am actually so glad that prem stopped! i mean.......first i was like he should've just kissed her....only then he'd be able to see (or i guess feel...LOL) heer's reaction and determine whether she likes him or not.....then he could've easily apologized, she would've blushed, he would've loved tht..and we would've had a typical, sweet happily ever after! but tht's cuz i didn't realize how much that whole trust factor meant to heer.....clearly....A LOT! LOL! so now i'm actually really happy that prem stopped going any further....which is a surprise...cuz i usually kill ff writers who deprive me/us readers of a premeer kiss.....consider urself really lucky di 😛 😆

okay so finally getting to their departure! it was once again really well written! described everything soo perfectly! i really liked prem's dialogue....i think i forgot to mention but i like how he responded to heer when she spazzed at him for jumping in the water....that was soo awwww-ish.....lol...his dialogues about w/e his dadi told him were soo cute.....it's like really prem....u'r saying that....aren't u supposed to be a big flirt or something! prem's flirty character was very well described.....the way he matured.....or well....i'd say he was always mature.....he just didn't think the immature ppl...or more likely the immature girls deserved his respect and so he always gave them a taste of their own medicine 😊 (and i should be getting a degree in philosophy...what say?? 😉)

alrighty darling....this is it from me.....i have to finish civics project...still needa spam yaadein and then pm a bunch of ppl! can't wait to know about idli sambhar!

until then....thankss soo much for the pm..and for constantly keeping me posted!

please keep up with that....cuz i always have that one day in the week when i don't go on I-F..and then i miss out on like 150 activities and more! ugghgh! LOL!

take care

loooveeeee

ur Samra Ji 🤗

lake part was awesome

they will meet after 2 yrs to be thogether for lifetime 🤗